|| Behind The Veil Of Lies: A NiBir SS || chap 7: pg 42, 30/7

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Vishu yaar I love the command you have over the language it gives a true professional feeling.
Coming to the update as usual intriguing and engaging. Liked the small nibir part true nibir nok jhok. Dr Shyam he gives me a creepy feeling.
Cont soon 😊

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tanisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

So track chnged

Nibir scn was cute.

Bt dis new entry Shyam Nt liking him at all..

M waiting 4 d nxt n nxt tym update thoda long ho to better hoga. plz

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Vishu yaar I love the command you have over the language it gives a true professional feeling.
Coming to the update as usual intriguing and engaging. Liked the small nibir part true nibir nok jhok. Dr Shyam he gives me a creepy feeling.
Cont soon 😊

thank you ritika 😃

Dr.Shyam is quite chilled out though, isn't he? 😉

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: tani_0209
So track chnged
Nibir scn was cute.
Bt dis new entry Shyam Nt liking him at all..
M waiting 4 d nxt n nxt tym update thoda long ho to better hoga. plz

track change? Nah... The core track has just started 😉

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Want to slap this Shyam already🥱

Next time NiBir romance thoda detail main batana please😳

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Want to slap this Shyam already🥱
Next time NiBir romance thoda detail main batana please😳

😆 I'm very bad at writing romance niyu 😆

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

I am loving how the story is taking its shape but somewhere I am suspicious about shyam! Hope to see some Nibir romance soon!

Waiting for the next part eagerly!

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Superb update 👏

As usual intriguing...

I don't like shaym at all 🤢

Nibir part was good 😳

Waiting more nibir part... Continue soon..!!!

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poornima_15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Awesome part ... waiting to read nibir romance from u ... and I know it will be too good 😳 update was as usual superb ... kirti and umesh are so cool😊 ... but this shyam is some what suspicious😕... I am not liking him 😔

Update soon 😊