nibir ts judaiii part 3 pg-5 4/8/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Amazing story

So beautifully written every thing .
Do write more ..loving it so much.

thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkjr

till next Wednesday will try post it's next part

thanku😃sooo much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb os 👏
Totally loved it



P.s- If you can write second part so please do write 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys as someone requested me for its second part, so here it is i hope you will like it

The sun rises with a new hope that this newly found love could find what they want. Kabir comes out of the washroom only in trousers and towel hang at his neck. He was drying his hair when his eyes fall on the most beautiful lady in this world for him sleeping peacefully hugging the pillow, he went to her and sat beside her and admires her with love, hair strands were blocking her view so he put them behind her ear, and stroke her hair slowly so that she didn't wake up, he suddenly remember something and tears start brimming in his eyes, he started crying and head down with holding her hand. Nisha woke up with a sound of sobbing. She opened her eyes and saw Kabir who was crying continuously she got worried and got up, Kabir too fell that she woke up and wiped his tears and put a fake smile on his face, but he didn't know that he could not hide anything from Nisha.

Kabir: are Nisha tum uth gayi main to bas soch hi raha tha ki tumhe utha du

But she didn't reply and looked at him with pain, hurt and love.

Kabir: kya hua aisa kay dekh rahi hai tabiyat theek to hai na teri

Nisha: why are you crying Kabir

Kabir: nahi to main bhala kyu royunga

Nisha: kabirr

Kabir holded her both hands and take a sigh before he could tell what is in his heart

Kabir: Nisha jab pehli baar mujhe pata chala ki we r married, I use to hate you because I don't believe in the fact that we r married, then when you started caring for me, mera itna khyal rakha, mujhe itna pyaar diya to mujhe khudse nafrat hone lagi ki na chahte hue bhi anjane mein main tumhe kitni chot pahuncha raha hu, you must be expecting a lot from me, ki main bhi tumhara utna hi khyal rakhu, main bhi tumhe utna hi pyaar du, meri aankhon mein bhi tumhare liye pyaar dikhe, par main chahkar bhi who nahi kar sakta, I am sorry for hearting you so much.

Nisha(holding Kabir face): nhi Kabir aisa anhi hai, your not hurting me, job hi hua usme tumhari galti nahi hai its ok

Kabir broke down totally he wrapped his arms around her waist and put his head in her lap and cried and Nisha only stroke his hair as she kew he want stop and let him do what he want

Kabir: I am sorry Nisha I am sorry for everything, maine jo kuch kiya use sahi to nahi kar sakta par abh ek nai zindagi ki shuruyat zaroor kar sakta hu, main chahta hu ki main who har pal, who har yaadein jo main bhool chukka hu use phir se jiyu, kyat u meri madad karegi, main tere saath apni zindagi ki nayi shuruyat karna chahta hu nayi yaadon ke saath. I love you nisha

She nodded in yes with a smile and hugged him tightly

Nisha: offcourse Kabir main hamesha tere saath hu, aur tere liye kuch bhi, I love you too kabir

He too hugged her back, and nuzzled his nose at crook of her neck. They remain in same position for sometime then broke apart unwillingly. They both look at each other still Nisha's hands around his neck and kabir's hand around her waist. Kabir leaned towards her lookins in her eyes without breaking eye lock, Nisha in turn moved backwards still her hands in same position, she lied on bed with Kabir on top of her with his one hand on her waist and another on the bed beside her for support, he moved towards her neck and kissed there, Nisha felt a spark in her body and automatically her hands travelle, today was the day for which she was waiting from 5 months, then he moved towards her cheek and kissed her right cheek, and then he was about ti kiss her on her lips when the door bell rang disturbing their lovely moment, Kabir made a irritated face while Nisha giggled she got up and said to Kabir to open the door till she will freshened up, he made a cute puppy face and Nisha could not control and pulled his cheeks and went to washroom to freshen up. Kabir also wear his t-shirt and went to open the door. He opened the door and saw her mother(vasundhara) with doctor who was doing his treatment. He can now identify her mom as Nisha had told him about his family members

Kabir: mom aap yahan woh bhi doc ke saath sab theek hai na

Vasundhara: baki sab to theek hai par aap theek nahi hai

Kabir: matlab

Vasundhara: matlab yeh ki yaha hi khada rakhoge ya andar bhi bulaoge

Kabir: oh sorry plz aaiye na

They settled themselves on couch.

Vasundhara: kya Kabir beta hume nahi pata tha aap itne laparvah ho jayenge 3 din se aap check up ke liye nahi gaye hume lagta hai Nisha ko bhi yeh nahi pata varna ab tak aap hospital mein hote

Kabir: no mom plzz Nisha ko mat batana

' kya nahi batana' they all look towards Nisha who was standing with a confused look, she went towards them and stood beside Kabir

Nisha: kya hua mom sab theek hai an

Kabir nodded in a no towards his mom indicating not to tell her,

Vasundhara: haa beta sab theek hai who bas aise hi yeh thoda emotional ho gaya that oh keh raha tha ki tumhe na batao ki yeh phir se ro raha hai

She got satisfied and indicate the doc to come inside the room, she nodded. Kabir and vasundhara got busy in talking so Nisha and doc went inside the room.

Nisha: doc kya hua I know bahar kuch baat ho rahi thi

Doc: Nisha ab tumse kya chipaon, actually Kabir bahut carelees hota jaa raha hai, who 3 din se checkup ke liye nahi aaya

Nisha: what aisa kaisa ho sakta hai woh roz mujhe bolke jata tha.

Doc: I don't know tumhe use baat karni chahiye, and one more thing Kabir ki yadash lane ka sirf ek raasta hai. Us din accident ke waqt jo jo hua use dobara dohrayo

Nisha: doc yeh aap kya keh rahi hai you know na main ek baaar Kabir ko khone ka dar seh chuki hun dubara nahi kar sakti

Doc: main tumhara dard samajh sakti hu par iske sivaye aur koi raasta nahi hai, you have to do this aur maine tumari mother in law se baat kar li she too agreed, plz at least for him you have to do this

She left and Nisha got lost in her thoughts that what to do now. After sometime Kabir entered the room and saw Nisha lost somewhere he went to her and kneeled down in front of her, he took her hands and kissed the knuckles, bringing Nisha back from her thoughts

Kabir: kya hua Nisha kaha kho gayi thi

Nisha: Kabir tune mujhse jhoot kyu bola, tu 3 din se doc ke paas nahi gaya kyu Kabir

Kabir: Nisha tujhe kaise...zaroor doc ne bataya hoga,

Nisha: woh important nahi hai Kabir important yeh hai kit u agar doc ke paas nahi tha to kaha tha

He sat on bed beside her and slept in her lap

Kabir: I am sorry Nisha, woh actually mujhe wahan jake acha nahi lagta tha, sirf ek cheez yaad aati thi ki mujhe kuch yaad nahi, and I am not wel, isliye main checkup ke bahane bahar rehta tha taki in sab se door rahu par ab yahan se door jane ka man nahi karta, isliye aaj se hi main tere saath rehana chahta hu, he got up and hold her by shoulder

Kabir: Nisha meri ek help karegi(Nisha nodded in yes)kya aaj tu mujhe who har jagah le jayegi jahan humne saath mein waqt bitaya hai, un har yaadon dobara taza karegi

She got happy and hugged him tight

Monologue: Kabir shayad yahi sahi mauka teri yadash waapis lane ka I promise aaj mein sab sahi kar dungi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
nibir😳
hope nisha is successful n kabir gets back his memory
Beautifully written...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Awesome update
nibir😳
hope nisha is successful n kabir gets back his memory
Beautifully written...

thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
First of all thank u yashika for converting this into ts 😊
Now coming to update it was awesome 😊
Nibir starting new life with new memory
And eagerly waiting for next part continue soon..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story read both parts together... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Iska ek aur part mil sakta hai kya i mean happy wala please 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing yaar👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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