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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: gymty
Annie u made me cry.🤗Omg . kabir love for nisha is out of the world.

thankoo tanuja 😳 😳

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shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

it was amazing!!!
loved it t totally...

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
it was amazing!!!
loved it t totally...

Thankoo shruti 😳

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oh nakhrewaali

@oh_nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

This is one of your best works mumma👏👏

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Annie!!! That was one amazing OS!!

Your every os surpasses the previous one!

Just when I think it can't get better than this, u spellbind me by writing something totally out of the box and that too so wonderfully!!

How do you do it girl?!!! From where do you get such fantastic concepts?!!

Back to the story, you know i feel 'pain' as an emotion is really your forte!

You express it so beautifully that it actually leaves the reader teary eyed!

Right from Kabir's intro till the begining of change in Nisha's behaviour everything was so well described!

Now, coming to the crux of the story, Nisha's behavioural changes, BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN!! Every small detail was so well penned!

Kabir's feelings throughout this!! And the point where he finally breaks down, to an extent of having a second thoughts about her is so heartbreakingly beautiful! 💔 ❤️Yes! i dont even know if that's an expression, but i really have no idea how else to express myself!

Her past, phobia, the treatment process, the unfortunate miscarriage! Too many feels yar annie! 😭

After making your readers tear up you give that heartwarming all good ending!! 😆

This is my second fav story of yours, after sinfull darkness!

Do write more please and thanks for pm 😊

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...
This is one of your best works mumma👏👏

Thankooo betu 😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.
Annie!!! That was one amazing OS!!
Your every os surpasses the previous one!
Just when I think it can't get better than this, u spellbind me by writing something totally out of the box and that too so wonderfully!!
How do you do it girl?!!! From where do you get such fantastic concepts?!!
Back to the story, you know i feel 'pain' as an emotion is really your forte!
You express it so beautifully that it actually leaves the reader teary eyed!
Right from Kabir's intro till the begining of change in Nisha's behaviour everything was so well described!
Now, coming to the crux of the story, Nisha's behavioural changes, BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN!! Every small detail was so well penned!
Kabir's feelings throughout this!! And the point where he finally breaks down, to an extent of having a second thoughts about her is so heartbreakingly beautiful! 💔❤️Yes! i dont even know if that's an expression, but i really have no idea how else to express myself!
Her past, phobia, the treatment process, the unfortunate miscarriage! Too many feels yar annie!😭
After making your readers tear up you give that heartwarming all good ending!!😆
This is my second fav story of yours, after sinfull darkness!
Do write more please and thanks for pm😊