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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update .sometimes its actually difficult to say something's which we actually feel but you portrayed the inner thoughts of nibir so smoothly
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Thanku soo much all
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But ur comments are overwhelming
Im glad that u all r liking the story

Keep in touch with the story
Wil update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome update
beautifully written
loved it


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Awesome update 👏
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Finally... Was waiting for this ..thank you😃
Beautifully written
Nibir balcony scene😳
Kabir's sister teasing kabir😆
On the whole really nice 😉

Pls pls update soon
Can't wait now for the next part😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART - 2 {A}

Nisha was trying hard to sleep , changing position in every 2mins
First she thought that it is the result of the coffee she drank some hrs ago in the balcony but when she closed her eyes all she could see was his perfectly built body nd their eyelock, she shocked opened her eyes

Their kabirs condition was the same , sleep was far away from him,all that came to his blank mind was Nisha . .
Like this they both disturbed god for almost whole night asking "what is happening" untill sleep took over them at 4 in the morning when their brains got tired thinking!

Next day at 7 in the morning
nishas mom woke her up nd asked to get ready as she have joined some ladies for yoga nd as today is her first day she wants her to accomapany her
Nisha denied a lot, she didnt slept for whole night thinking abt the stupid thing , but her mom was not ready to listen. .
Nisha got ready in a sports bra nd leggings with her hair tied up in a bun
Her mother insisted her to change the clothes but nisha said that she will too do some excercise wid her

In the yoga centre
The ladies were at their position ready for yoga when nisha nd her mother reached. She took her position while nisha made herself comfortable on the nearby seat observing them first before joining.
A guy came their nd greeted them, nisha couldnt see him due to the aunties nd so went near them to see him , nd his view shocked her to hell while the guy's condition was no different as
It was none other than kabir

Raaton ke jaage subah mile hai

As soon as they saw each other their was a 6 second eyelock wid flashback of yesterdays night running in their mind

Their was lil awkardness between them but still they managed to say a "hi". .nisha got the reason why her mother brought her here but what can she do now. .
She turned back to go " nisha beta kahan jaa rahi hai , tune bi toh mere saath yoga karna tha", nisha stopped she didnt knew wat to answer nd cursed herself for saying so..
"Maa mai vo.. " are thodi der toh karle"nisha had no other option but to agree
Kabir first started teaching some basics as their were many who were new

Resham ke dhaage yeh silsile hai

Nisha was observing his each nd every move clearly , nd was lost in her own thoughts when kabir noticed her . .he went to her nd asked in a husky tone "any help?" While she absent mindedly nodded

Laazmi si lagne lagi hai do dilo ki ab nazdeekiyan

Kabir holded her waist , sending sparks in her blood , breaking her trance,her heart raced at a high speed while kabir signalled through his eyes to bend down nd she did

Dikhti nahi hai par ho rhi hai mehsoos nazdeekiya

Kabir's heartbeat danced whenever his fingers got in touch with her creamy skin , while nisha 's eyes didnt shifted from his face for a single second, her mind just obeyed his instructions but her heart was busy somewhere else

Hmm Do dil hi jaane lagti hai kitni mehfooz nazdeekiyan

Kabir helped her in every simple basic step , he was amazed at the flexibilty of her body, her body fitted in the most difficult posture too, while nisha being a gud athelete too didnt objected his closeness or help

Their yoga session continued with both feeling something different for the first time , nishas mom adored the two while the other ladies got jealous as they consider kabir as the best guy for their daughter

The ladies coughed intentionally to break their trance nd it worked.
Kabir nd nisha both looked at them nd he immediately withraws his hand from her waist due to which nisha got misbalanced nd was abt to fall when he holded her at the right time protectively in his arms

Zariya hain ye aankhein zariya
Chhalakta hai jinse ek armaano ka dariya

Nisha opened her eyes which were closed due to fear of falling she observed his face features so closely for the first time, his eyebrows raised a centimetre or two, lined with something between worry and concern and his eyes, they were like melted chocolate, warm and oh so addictive.

Aadatein hain inki puraani
Ankahi si keh de kahaani

Kabir's hazel eyes looked into hers black orbs as if searching something deep into her soul. .their were some un said emotions but what were they, there was still a question mark

Now kabirs gaze shifted on to her lips which were pale pink just like a rose bud, her parted lips were giving him an urge to seal them nd nisha's constant eyes on his lips was making him more impatient, forgetting abt the place his one hand moved towards the back of her neck while nishas eyes got closed in reflex , he was just going to move her face towards his but their moment got broken when they heard the door being opened wid a thrash

Kabir nd nisha both looked at the source , alia was standing their looking at them shocked. Nibir looked at each other , realised their postition nd stood straight , both were embaressed like hell nd were not able to make any eye contact so were looking here nd there. .alia realised their awkardness so to break the silence she started fighting wid kabir

"Bhai wat is dis, aap hamesha bhool jate ho. .aaj apne muje extra classes ke liye chodne jana tha or aapne yoga classes lene mei hi time laga diya.. This is not done". .. Nd she crossed her arms against her chest pouting her face.. .nisha wasnt able to stand before them anymore so she just passed a smile to alia nd went from their

As soon as she went kabir looked at alia shocked " oye konsi extra classes?tune kab muje btaya ? "..

Alia showed her tongue , smiled nd ran to hug him , but kabir stopped her in the middle
"Kya baat hai? "He asked raising his eyebrows
" oho bhai, iam sooo happy. .finally "nd she clapped her hands
" kya finally? ".. He asked confused.
" finally apne mere liye bhabhi dhoond li . .nd i love her so much"
"What? Oh hello kon bhabhi ? Kiski bhabhi? "
"Arey nisha bhabhi bhai. ."

As soon as he heard this his cheeks turned red
"omg bhai you are blushing"she said touching his cheeks
"Chup kar! Kuch bi bolti hai, tu jo soch rahi hai vaisa kuch nhi h okay! Choti h choti bankar reh.. Kya bhabhi bhabhi karti rehti h . .Focuss on ur studies" he said removing her hand nd went from their while alia made a hawww expression

She followed his speed nd started walking wid him to the house
"Acha agr kuch ni hai toh vo kya ho rha tha mere ane se pehle" she asked in teasing tone wid a wink
The flashback came in front of his eyes nd his lips formed a curve.. But to avoid her ques he said
"K. .. K. .kuch bi ni . .bas vo misbalance hogy thi toh i saved her from falling nd then u came bas" he shrugged his shoulders nd increased his speed
While alia just looked at him almost running from her or maybe from his feelings

Scroll down for part b

Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Part - 2 {b}

Its been one week to that yoga incident and both Nisha & Kabir were trying their best to avoid each other...though they were trying to avoid each other but they were not able to avoid their feelings...their were some alien feelings raising in their hearts n they were hell confused about them.
It was a Saturday evening...Kabir was sitting in the living room busy with his lappy...n his mom was reading some busniess magazine.
When Alia came with her economics book n sat beside her bro.

"Bhai"...she called her bhai with a tensed face.

"Alu...what happened?? Y r u looking tensed??"...asked a confused Kabir.

"Bhai...kaisa idiotic sawal hai...log tensed kab lagte hai?? Jab vo tensed hote hai na?? N bhai how many times I have to tell u that don't call me Alu."...Alia said with a cute pout.

"Awww my Alu is so cute."...Kabir said pulling her cheeks.

"Bhaiii...Mom see na."...Alia cried in annoyance.

"Kabir...stop teasing her. N Alia beta y r u tensed??"...Kabir's mom asked in concern.

"Mom ye economics mujhe pagal kar dega...Bhai help me na...aap roz mujhe padaya karo na please."...Alia requested with a cute face.


"Alu baby...u know na main kitna bzy rehta hu...subha yoga classes...then office...main kaise tujhe padaunga??"...Kabir tried to make his sissy understand.


"Bhai bas thodi der k lie aap mujhe pada bhi nahi sakte??"...Alia asked, n her eyes were getting teary.


"Alu its not like that yaar...office se ane k baad main thak jata hu n ghar ake bhi next day k meetings k preparation n all karna padta hai...main concentrate nhi kar paunga...thats y I'm saying."


"Ok...main samajh gai...aapke paas har ek cheez k lie time hai sivaye mere...bas 1 ghanta bhi nhi de sakte aap mujhe?? Ok then fine. Mujhe bhi aapki help ki koi zarooraat nhi hai."...Alia said while sobbing badly n ran upstairs to her room n closed the door with a loud thud.


"Alu..." Kabir was just about to go behind her when his mom stopped him,
"Kabir vo abhi bohot gusse main hai...usse thodi der akele rehne do."

"But mom..." Before he could continue the door bell rang.

"Main dekhta hu."...he sighed n went to open the door.
"Arrey aunty aap yaha?? Andaar aaiye." Kabir smiled seeing Nisha's mumma...his fav Aanchal aunty there standing with a bowl in her hands.

She came inside n took a sit beside Kabir's mom.
Kabir also joined them but his sissy's teary face was again n again coming in front of his eyes.


"Vo main Kabir aur Alia k lie gajar ka halwa lai thi, spclly Alia k lie...she luvs na thats y...kaha hai vo??"...asked Nisha's mom.

But she noticed that both Kabir n his mom Uma's face became dull.

"Kya hua?? Alia ki tabiyaat toh theek hai na??"

"Ha anchal vo thik hai...vo actually..." n she narrated to her that what happened sometime ago.

"Aunty vo bohot ro rahi hogi. But aunty office k kaam ko leke main itna bzy rehta hu k Alu k studies pe main dhyaan nhi de paunga...varna aap hi boliye main usse mana q karta?? "


"Kabir beta vo bachi hai na...bura lag gaya hoga...vaise umm...Uma ek baat kahu??" asked Nisha's mom hesitantly.

"Ha Anchal bolo na."

"Nishu na economics main bohot zaida achi thi. Agar tum chaho Nisha Alia ki help kar sakti hai studies main."

"Arrey nahi nahi...Nisha q..." Uma could not continue as Anchal silenced her.

"Arrey Alia Nishu ki bhi behen jaisi hai...so q nhi bhala?"

Umma did not knew what to answer as she considered nisha as her daughter nd nisha's love for Alia was no less.
She looked at kabir who also gave her a confused look
Aanchal noticed this

" Arrey kya ek doosre ko dekh rhe ho , mai apse pooch ni rahi hu , apko bta rhi hu, kal se Nisha Alia ko padhaygi bas"

"Kya Nisha di mujhe padhaygi?? " they all turned and saw Alia standing their with a big smile, her eyes were red due to constant crying but still that smile made Kabir and Uma to nod while Anchal clapped her hands

"Yeh hui na baat".

Alia ran to anchal nd side hugged her tightly
" Thankyou soo much aunty, u really solved my problem but Nishu di ko toh koi problem ni hogi na i mean unhe bi toh kaam . ."
Aanchal cuts her off " Arrey use kya problem hogi balki vo toh khush hogi tumhe padha kar nd uska training campaign shaam tak khatam ho jata hai or uske baad free hi hoti h or tum bi tab tak college se aa jaogi . .toh no tension ok " nd she pulled her cheeks while alia nodded wid a smile. ..

"Acha ab mai chalti hu or alia yeh lo gajar ka halwa khaas tumhare or kabir ke liye bnaya hai. "She handed over the bowl

"Mai chalti hu nd timmings nisha tumhe msg kar degi" with this she left. .. While Uma nd Kabir smiled seeing Alia so happy.

"Chalo problem solve...ab tum dono bhai-behen ladna hai toh lado, jo karna hai karo, mujhe ek imp call karna hai...main apne room ja rahi hu." saying this Uma left.

Kabir looked at Alia with a puppy face as he thought that Alia would be angry with him but their was no angriness visible on her face...infact there was a naughty smirk on her face.

"Bhai sach sach batao...Nishu Di mujhe padane ai gi yaha pe...ye sochke aapke maan main laddu phut rahe hai na??" Alia asked n winked her eyes at Kabir.


"Alu ki bachi ruk tu..." n with that both the bro-sis started running all over the house.

Nisha was standing outside Kabir's house nd she was a little bit nervous also.
"Nishu u idiot...nervous kyu feel kar rahi hai jaise pehli baar yaha aa rahi ho...chup chap bell press kar...Alia ko pada...n ghar vapis, ha perfect." With this Nisha sighed n rang the bell.

"Arrey Nishu beta...aao andar." Uma welcomed Nisha.

"Good evening Aunty...kya kar rahe ho??" Nisha asked with a smile.

"Vo aaj sunday hai na...toh tum sabke lie Paneer rolls bana rahi hu...tumhe pasand toh hai na??"


"Ha aunty...but ye sab karne ki kya zarooraat thi?? "


"Arrey beta its ok...Kabir k lie bana rahi hu spclly...usse bohot pasand hai. Acha beta tum upar jao, Alia tumhara wait kar rahi hai. Upar jaake left main uska room hai." Uma said n left.


"Toh paneer roll Kabir ka fav hai." Nisha thought while smiling.
"Uurgghh...y the hell I'm thinking about that. I have gone mad."
Nisha went upstairs n was just going to knock the door when a naughty thought came in her mind.

"Lets have some fun Alia...usdin achanak mere room main ake mujhe daraya tha na...ab dekh." with that Nisha opened the door without knocking n was just going to scream with the intension of scaring Alia...but what she saw made her week on her knees
There Kabir was doing push ups...in his sleeveless shirt...he was sweating badly...the sight itself turned on Nisha...she was lost in her thoughts when Kabir noticed her. At first he was shocked to see her there but when he saw that she was checking him out he smirked. He got up n went towards her.
Nisha was still in her own thoughts when he waved his hands in front of her n called her in his oh so husky voice...
"Nisha..."

"Hmm..." Nisha mumbled.

"If u have completed checking me out then Alu k room main jao...vo tumhara wait kar rahi hogi..." Kabir said huskily.


This made Nisha come out of her trance. She was so embarrased at that moment. She was caught by Kabir when she was shamelessly checking him out. She saw Kabir smirking.
"Umm...vo...so.. sorry...vo aunty ne bola k upar jake le.. left main Alia ka room hai...toh mujhe laga..." Nisha was fumbling badly.


"Its ok...no need to say sorry...if I'm not wrong tum pehli bar upstairs ai ho ryt??" Kabir asked while Nisha nodded.
"Next room Alu ka hai..." Kabir said smiling at her.


"Oh god...koi eksath itna hot & cute kaise ho sakta hai" Nisha thought but then mentally slapped herself & smiled awkwardly at Kabir & left the room.

"Cute k sath sath bohot zaida innocent bhi hai ...my cutie pie... one sec...MY cutie pie...uuurrgghhh...this girl is driving me crazy. " Kabir thought & smiled remembering her cute face.

Then Nisha went to Alia's room & till around 6:30 the study continued.
"Hush Nishu di...bas aaj k lie itna kafi hai...varna mujhe raat ko na economics k sapne ayenge." Alia said n giggled.

"Ok then main chalti hu..." Nisha said getting up.
But Alia immideately pulled her down.
"Oh hello...miss teacher...main chalti hu ka kya matlaab...chup chap betho yaha...aaj aap dinner karke jaoge...samjhe??" Alia ordered in her bossy tone.

"Arrey ha main toh bhul hi gai thi...aunty ne kaha tha mujhse k vo paneer rolls banayengi."


"Aapko pata hai Nishu di...paneer rolls na bhai ko bohot pasand hai." Alia said while as soon as Nisha heard about Kabir...she smiled dreamingly. N obviously Alia noticed that.

"Hmmm...matlab Nishu di k maan main kuch kuch toh pakka hai mere bhai k lie...aur ho bhi q na mere bhai itneee handsome jo hai..." Alia thought proudly.

"Nishu di...kiske khayalo main kho gaye??" Alia asked naughtily.

"Umm...vo ku...kuch nhi..." Nisha mumbled.

"Acha suno, dinner main toh bohot time hai...tab tak hum kya karunge...chalo na movie dekhte hai." Alia said excitedly.
"Umm...ok no prob." Nisha replied.

"Ok then aap ruko main bhai ko bula lati hu...sunday ko bhi laptop aur files k beech bethe honge...aap ruko main ha..." Alia said n left the room.

"Kabir k sath movie...first time itna zaida time spend karne ko milega uske sath." For some unknown reasons Nisha was feeling excited that she was going to spend time with Kabir. But it confused her also that y was she excited. Kabir's voice broke her trance.
"Alu yaar mujhe nhi dekhni movie...mujhe kuch aur files..." Alia didnot allowed him to continue.

"Bhai ek aur bar file file kia na aapne toh dekhna mujhse bura koi nhi hoga...kal maine easily appko maaf kardia but appne abhi mere sath movie nhi dekhi na toh...toh...toh dekh lena main appse baat hi nhi karungi...n vo mere college ka vo frnd hai na Parth...main usse bolungi k vo mujhe roz ghar se pick karne aye college k lie." Alia threatened Kabir in her own style.


"What?? No way...ek kya do, teen jitne movie dekhne hai tujhe bol main dekhta hu tere sath...but...umm...uss Parth se dur reh samjhi??" Kabir told her firmly.

There was pin drop silence. After some 10-15 secs Nisha started laughing madly, n Alia too joined her. Kabir was confused that y where they laughing.
"Oh god Alia...just look at his face...kya tum hamesha aise Kabir ko blackmail karti ho??" Nisha asked in between her laughing session.
"Arrey Nishu di...bhai ka face na dekhne layak hota hai jab bhi main Parrh ka naam leti hu." Alia said n looked at Kabir who was glaring at her, n then she again started laughing.


"Acha bas bas bohot hua...tum dono ko sirf hasna hi hai ya movie dekhne ka koi iraada hai??" Kabir asked annoyingly.

"Awww my sweet bro...aap bethiye toh sahi main abhi movie chalati hu."
Then Alia played a rom-com english movie.
Nisha,Kabir & Alia...they were sitting on Alia's bed nd Alia was sitting in between Nibir.
They were enjoying the movie while both Nibir were stealing glances from each other.

After sometime suddenly Alia said...aise movie dekhne main maza thode hi ata hai...aap log betho main popcorn leke ai." Alia said while getting up.

"Arrey Alu movie pause toh karke ja." said Kabir.

"Maine ye movie dekhi hui hai...pause karne ki zarooraat nhi hai...aap dono dekho main abhi ai." Alia said in one go n went from there.
Nibir looked at each other n smiled. Then they again concentrated on the movie. But suddenly a hot passionate kissing scene between the lead pair of the movie started.
Both nibir were feeling uncomfortable.
They were looking at everything else except the tv screen n except each other.
Nisha was breathing heavily nd was also blushing while Kabir was feeling some unknown desires in his heart.
Finally the kissing scene ended & at the same time Alia entered with popcorn. She looked at the movie screen nd then at Nibir. She very well knew what had happened.
To break the awkwardness Alia said, " I'm back. Ye lo popcorn."
Nibir looked at each other n then took the popcorn from Alia.
They enjoyed the rest of the movie & after the movie ended Nisha had her dinner with all of them. She really had a great time. Then after eating ice-cream she left wishing them good night.

Nisha & Kabir, both were not able to sleep as they were lost in each-others thoughts. But both the duffers were not able to recognise their feelings. But they were sure that this was not just an attraction, it was something else.

Part 3{a}
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Awww it was such a cute update😳

NIBIR

The song seq was written so beautifully❤️

Alia😆...I luv her😆

Update next part soon😉
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Nibir ☺️
Too cute update😳😳
Loved it sooo much🤗
Alia's entry n teasing kabir😆🤣
Very beautifully written everythng😊
Continue soon 😃

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Awww lovely and blushing update...😳
Waiting for next part do continue soon...!!!

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