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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kabir Varma: 24 years old hot & handsome guy...girls are mad about him but he is not interested in anyone as he is in search of someone who is true at heart...so he is still single...lives in Delhi with his Mom & sister...love them alot.

Alia Varma: 20 years old cute & sweet girl...very friendly...lives with his brother & mom...she is like the princess of Varma house...has a great bond with her brother...loves him alot...can do anything for him...waiting for her bhabhi

Uma Varma: 45 years old successful business women...her son & daughter are her life...she is a cool mom...she is best friend of her children...she can't tolerate even a single drop of tear in her children's eyes.


Nisha Gangwal: 23 years old beautiful & smart girl...she is still single because she has not find the perfect guy for her life...loves her mamma-papa alot...whenever her mother starts the topic of her marriage she takes the help of her father to resque...because she believes in destiny nd true love... And fully against arrange marriage..

Nikhil Gangwal: A successful business man...but due to his behavior no one can say that he is 50 years old...he behaves like he is 25 years old...very cool & friendly...he lives in Mumbai with his wife & daughter who are the most beautiful women in the world for him...loves them the most...because of some business issues he is going to shift to Delhi from Mumbai with his sweet little family.

Anchal Gangwal: 45 years old simple housewife...her family is her life...she lives with her husband & daughter...her day starts with them & ends with them...she is very tensed about her daughter's future...she wants the bestest boy in the world for her daughter.

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PART ~ 1 {A}

Spreading sunrise,pinkish glow,clouds tinted ,colours spread across the sky announcing the new day ,oranges and reds painted across the clouds just like a potrait ..

It was the month of may ,nd we all know the summer of Delhi but still it was a pleasant morning nd the daily routine of everyone started,it was a usual day for all but the god of love have planned some unusual thing for two pure hearted souls.

It was 7am , a taxi stopped in front of a bunglow , it was built in old style nd architecture crafted on walls were darkened due to the dirt as it was closed from past 2 years ...a girl of mid 20s dressed up in crop top nd jeans with hair tied up in a messy bun stepped out of the car along with a lady which looked like a punjabi nd a man in casuals.

The girl was checking out the bunglow along with opening up her hair nd letting them fall freely on her shoulders with some confusing looks when the lady called her "Nisha beta ki kar rhi h, ethe aa or madad kar bags nikalne mei "..."are kyu meri beti ko pareshan kar rhi ho mai hun na ,mai nikalta hun bags ", the man intrupted.."han han aapka bas chale toh koi kaam na karne do apni ladli ko , are jab shaadi hogi tab..".."maa fir shaadi plz yaaar give me a break"...nisha said irritated "are par kabi na kabi toh shaadi hogi na "..said the lady "are are bas karo ab , anchal hum baad mei bi iss dicussion ko kar sakte hai na "..said he while the other two nodded

"vaise dad yeh bunglow kuch zada hi purana nhi hai i mean i hope iski halat andar se theek ho kyuki bahar se toh it is looking ..i dnt knw wat to say" said nisha helping her parents with the bags "han nisha beta hai toh yeh thoda purana but dont worry we will manage "..her father asssured her "pta ni apki company wale kaise hai har 5 saal mei kahi na kahi uthakar fek dete h pehle kolkata fir mumbai ab yeh delhi ..."said her mother irritated with all these shiftings

"han jaan par tum chinta mat karo ab yeh permanent hai"..."apne pehle bi yahi kaha tha dad pta h kitna mushkil hota hai friends bnana"..said nisha paying the taxi driver nd the taxi went...

.." chale andar"...said nisha ..as soon as they were going to open the door they heard a honk nd a tampoo stopped "lo aagya baki ka samaan"..said the mother openeing the lock .."maa aap andar chalo mai yahi dad ke saath hun"..said nisha while her mother nodded nd went inside
"nisha beta mai yeh samaan andar rakhwake ata hun tab tak tum dekho ki yeh log samaan sahi se utare"said her father nd went inside ..nisha smiled nd started cheking out when she noticed a guy coming running or you can say jogging.

Her trance was broken due to a loud thud ...she looked at the source .."are bhaiya yeh kaise rakh rahe ho samaan dhyaan se rakho "..screamed nisha "madam aram se hi kar rhe hai hum jaante hai apna kaam"..said the worker rudely "agar jaante hote na toh iss tarah se samaan ko fekte nhi , kuch toot gya toh kon zimmedar hoga"she said with same rudeness..."madam aap zada chik chik na karo hume apne kaam karne do"nd he again started working...nw it was the limit "dekho zada batdmeezee mat karo samjhe !! varna "...
the worker left the work nd looked at her angrily nd started coming towards her saying "varna kya madam varna kya .."..."dekho apn..apni limits mei raho "..she said fumbling pointing towards him ..he was just going to near her when he felt a strong punch on his face "ladkiyon se baat karne ki tameez nhi hai kya tumme"..said the guy angrily ...

nisha was shocked at these sudden change of situation ..she was not able to see the face of the guy as his back was facing her but she can recognise that he is the same guy whom she saw some few minutes ago.. the worker looked up nd was going to punch back when the guy holded his hands "agar ladai karni hai toh iam ready but yaad rakhna ladai mei tumhari halt kya hogi yeh mai nhi jaanta but iske baad tum jail zaroor jaoge" said the guy while the face of the worker changes into feared one ..."nhi nhi sahab aisa mat kahiya, or madam haath jodke maafi mangta hun plz police mat bulayegaa mai ab kaam theek se karunga"..said the worker nd resumed his job while nisha just nodded

"excuse me."..nisha called the guy politely ...as soon as the guy turned nisha started looking at him from bottom to top ,he was wearing a black cotton shirt with trousers which were landing on his knees , his well built body nd muscles was easily noticable in those clothes , sweat was all over his body which was making him look more hot in this hot summer it looked like he had come from jogging or excercise ,...then her gaze shifted to his face which was plastered with a small smirk ,his dark brown orbs nd messy hair would make any girl week on her knees...her checking out session got over with his voice

"yes do u want to say something , if u want to say thanku then its okay becoz i cant tolerate such people who dont respect girls "...the guy said with a smile which made nisha too smile "oh but still the way u managed the situation uske liye thanku" ..."no problem , by the way iam kabir "..he said forwading his hand ...nisha shook hands with him looking in his eyes " hi iam nisha".. nisha could feel his hardwork for this muscular body through his hard hands...

"nisha , hmm nice name ,it looks like u r my new neighbour" nisha looked at him confused nd he understood " ya i live in that house "..he said pointing towards a white bunglow which looked lavish...nisha was mesmerised she was so engrossed in her house that she didnt noticed the surroundings ..." Its beautiful!!"..nisha smiled ..."soo need any help in shifting "..he asked " no no , we will manage ab apne itni achi tarah se workers ko samjha diya hai i dnt think ki ab koi help ki zarooraat padegi"she said while he chuckled...

"are nisha beta vo..."her father came but stopped in midway seeing a guy with her.."ji dad"..."beta yeh kon hai"..he asked nisha in a friendly way .."are papa vo yeh kabir h hmara neighbour "..."oh".."namaste uncle "..nd kabir touched his feet"are beta kya kar rhe ho mai itna bi old nhi hu"...he said holding his shoulders nd laughed..kabir smiled "ji uncle jab aap bahr muje lga aap nisha ke bhai ho"..nd all three giggled..

"acha dad apko koi kaam tha ".."are han mai toh bhool hi gya , vo tumhari maa bula rhi hai andar kitchen ke kaam mei help karwane ke liye "..." oh no not again "nisha sighed..but got startled when she heard her voice "kya not again han"..her mother came there with a cloth in her hand ..."kuch nhi maa mai toh bas.".."rehne de rehne de sab samjhti hu mai tu toh bas .."she stopped seeing kabir their nd started seeing him with a wide smile ...kabir felt awkard so he said "namaste aunty "nd touched her feet "khush raho beta "..."apka naam"..."kabir aunty".."wah bda acha naam hai,rehte kahan ho"..."aunty yahi samne wale ghar mei "..she looked at the house "bda sona ghar hai ".."thanku aunty"..."acha beta tum karte kya ho i mean koi job shob hai ya apna business".."aunty mom ka business hai toh usi mei unki help karta hun "..he said nd started feeling more awkard at these continous questns.."wow bdi modern family hai babhi ji businesss sambhalti hai kya baat hai..or beta vo.."...nisha was shocked at this questn ans round nd her father holded his head nd whispered "teri maa nhi sudhregi..bechara kabir "..nisha recovered from this shock nd started feeling embaress as she could sense from kabirs face hw was he feeling so she intrupted "are maa apko mujse kaam tha na aap chalo mai aati hu "..."han anchal tum mere saath andar chalo nisha bi aati hai"he said pushing her inside .."are par muje usse baat toh karne do "she said stopping in midway .."are ab saamne wale ghar mei hi toh hai baad mei pooch lena tum chalo"..nd he dragged her inside with gr8 difficulty
nisha and kabir both sighed seeing her going

"iam soo sorry for my mom's behaviour vo thodi typical mummys ki tarah hai ,unhe bas koi ladka dikh jae unka bas chale toh vhi rishta pakka karde mera"...nd felt embaressed.."are koi baat ni u dnt have to feel sorry at all,..aisa hota hai meri mom bi meri shaadi ko leke aise hi behave karti hai"..."aise hi sachi?"..she said as she knew he is lying..."umm..u caught me ..isse thoda kam ...but karti hai ...ab muje pta chala unn ladkiyon ko kaisa feel hota hoga as first time maine aisi situation face ki hai"cutely he replied...nisha laughed at this statement while kabir took a notice of her beauty for the first time from the time he have met...his trance was broken by a weird sound...

nisha stoppped laughing "yeh kaisi awaz hai".."pta ni"..kabir replied looking here nd there.."yeh tumse aa rhi hai"nisha replies.."mujhse?"..he checked his pocket nd saw that his phnes alarm was ringing.."wah tumhare phne ka yeh weird alarm hai or tumhe hi nhi pta".."yeh zaroor alia ki shararat hogi humesha mere mobile ke saath kuch na kuch karti rehti hai".."alia?"nisha asked .."oh alia meri behen hai ..oh no aaj use college chodne jana tha mai kaise bhool sakta hun time bi bht hogya hai"..kabir said holding his head "oh shaayad isliye usne yeh alarm lagaya hoga"nisha replied controlling her laughter "ok bbye han nice to meet u ".."ya okay see ya nd thanks again".."no problem nd ya do tell if u need something ".."okay"..with this he left nd nisha resumed her work of seeing the workers working effeciently ..

Part 1{b}

Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Wow wow wow Tanu...superb collages👏👏

I'm damn excited for the update😉
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome cs 😊
And superb update 👏👏
Loved it...
Nibir first meeting 😳
Mummyji's questions 😆
Do update soon!!
Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome character sketch ...
Superb collages Tanya !
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww.. such a cute family collage..
pic of mishkat u choose z sooo adorable.. rest r also looking nyc
n yh really waitung 4 u strt it nw..
jldi plzzz
#tanisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou all!!
I will update the first part today only!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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just read the character sketch and just could not stop from commenting
tanya kabir ka title "varma" 😉
uski mamma ka naam "uma"😉

i guess i will be imagining MishRi here rather than NiBir

loved the edits of both families

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Superb update👍🏼

Toh NIBIR neighbours hai😉

Nishu's mom-dad r too cute😳

Haaayeee Kabiraa ne kya entry mari😉...my hotty Kabiraa☺️

The best part was Nishu's mom playing KBC with Kabiraa🤣

I'm very eager to read the next part...update asap😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

just read the character sketch and just could not stop from commenting

tanya kabir ka title "varma"😉
uski mamma ka naam "uma"😉

i guess i will be imagining MishRi here rather than NiBir

loved the edits of both families


I noticed the same thing😆...Tanu iraada kya hai tera??😉

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