NIBIR FF - Ek Main Aur Ek Tu (chp 17 up pg 146)*7/6* - Page 87

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome superb update
loved it soo much


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

very well written dear
thanks for the pm


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333


Shukriya mat bolo yaar 😃
Update toh karna hi tha on demand tha ye 😉😛
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No no shukriya to bnta h..
After all miss.busy bee updated my fav story after Wat seemed like ages to me

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333


Awww Thanks tani 😳😳
@bold you never know 😉😆
But on serious note I'll first complete Valentine's week then any other update... So in one I m determine to complete Valentine's week only and other stories are on hold 😊

I kno I was thinking about dat only..
U hav soo mny stories to update..But koi ni complete dat first..
But I'll b always waiting 4 dis 1 to b updated
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful!
ab next chapter jaldi jaldi update karnA!
I really appreciate your work yaar! forum me jab koi nhi hain tab bhi you kept on writing and giving us nibir feels! hats off to your work! keep writing!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tani_0209


Miss. Busy bee ke exams they 4 Jan tak... Ab miss free bee hun.. Tabhi sab fatafat update kar rahi 😆😆😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tani_0209

I kno I was thinking about dat only..
U hav soo mny stories to update..But koi ni complete dat first..
But I'll b always waiting 4 dis 1 to b updated


Yeah...only 2 short stories which will complete soon...
Filhal ye story 3 or 4 weeks me update Karungi 😉 don't be sad I'll try OK 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

beautiful!

ab next chapter jaldi jaldi update karnA!
I really appreciate your work yaar! forum me jab koi nhi hain tab bhi you kept on writing and giving us nibir feels! hats off to your work! keep writing!


Thank u annie 😳😳
Haan koi bhi nhi aata 😭
Your words really touched me thank u so much 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago


Chapter 15



What's up to you kabir ??" Asked by Saurav as kabir was pouring coffee in cup, he didn't realize that cup was full then also he continuously pour the coffee. Seeing that Saurav scream and asked what's the matter as he was being lost from last week.

Huh ?? Ohh sorry Saurav " kabir replied as Saurav word make him realize what he had done " wait I'm clearing it " kabir said looking at puddle of coffee and went to bring ditch cloth from kitchen.

Kabir was cleaning the tee table again being lost. Saurav come to him and asked the reason for his weird behavior.

Ahaa...nothing serious buddy... Don't you worry " kabir said with a smile

No yaar kabir...there is something which is bothering you tell me " Saurav demanded

No yaar it's nothing like that but by the way where are going ??" Kabir try to change the topic

Ohh me ??" Saurav asked

No that wall..!! Idiot !!" Kabir said sarcastically

Actually I was going for a movie with dolly, wanna join us ??" Saurav asked

No no you guys go... Waise bhi main uss nakchadi bandariya ke sath kahi nhi jana chahta hun " said kabir making face

Kabir yaar... aise mat bola kar or waise bhi nisha nhi aa rahi humare sath..." Said saurav. From past week Saurav, kabir and Nisha, dolly become good friends off course NiBir hadn't show any affection for each other infront of DoSa but always somehow a nibir moment escape from DoSa. As they continue their drama infront of DoSa to which DoSa always become peacemaker between them. Equation of kabir and dolly too changed they were friends now.

Kya vo chipkali sahi me tere sath nhi ja rahi ???" Asked kabir, though he was happy but didn't showing it.

Yes, so many time me and dolly requested her but she didn't convinced " Saurav expressed his disappointment.

Ohh... "

Tu bhi chalna kabir tera mood bhi theek ho jayega "

Nhi bhai tu abhi jaa "

Are you sure ??"

200% now go " said kabir with that saurav bid bye and went to his movie date which is according to him only.

After 15 minutes, making sure DoSa left kabir ran to nisha's house where she was waiting for him only as door of the house was opened.

What the hell nisha why door is open ??" Kabir screamed seeing door open

Arey was waiting for you only that's why " she replied from kitchen

How many times I told you, when you're alone you'll never left door open " said kabir placing his hands on waist angrily

I know you're about to come that's..." Started nisha but he cut off

I can press doorbell...but you don't need to left door open, do you get that?? " he said strictly

Fine..." She said coming out from kitchen with two plates leaving kabir behind

Hey I'm saying this for your safety jaan " said kabir coming behind her

I know kabir " she said place plates on tee table and went to switch on TV

So kabir shall I put it on CD ??" Showing him a horror movie CD while kabir had adjusted himself comfortably on couch

Why horror nisha can't we see romantic one??"

No I love horror !"

So you don't love me ??"

Always emotional blackmail, God kabir !! We never watch horror movies..."

Nishu darling next time please "

Okk say which movie ?? " she asked

Wait...main yahan kuch or kaam ke liye aaya tha...you always distract me " said kabir

What ??" She replied making faces

Come here I want to talk to you and we will not watch any movie, come here " he said pointing to the space beside him

What happened kabir anything serious ??" Nisha said as she sat beside him

Yes very serious...!!!" He said

What kabir please say it fast ?? " nisha requested him

Yeah I'm saying that only "

Fast please..."

I am ready nisha...!!" Kabir breathed

For what ??" asked by a confused nisha

For live in idiot " kabir said laughingly

Ohh...acha !!" nisha exclaimed

But you know, how many difficulty we're going to have ??"

Yeah I know, let it be kabir nhi karte hai "

Shut up nisha !! jab tum mujhse puchi thi main turant haan bolne wala tha but then I started wondering about the complications we are going to face "

So tell how many they are ??"

Dolly, Saurav, your family, my family, house..."

Stop...!! Oh god... Nhi karna mujhe live in kabir let it be, ek baar hum apne family se chupa bhi lenge par dolly or Saurav se nhi "

Yeah that's why I think hard for one week "

Means ??"

Means I have solution for all problems " to which nisha shoot him go ahead look

Okk first we need to talk to our parents "

Vo nhi manege kabir "

Agar mere parents ko pata chale ke Gangwals ki beti akele ghar le rahi toh vo mujhe bhi ghar dilwa denge " kabir said and wink at nisha who looked him with amused face

Phir se ??"

Yeah phir se "

After a while...



Hello dad, kabir here " said kabir in low tone

Kya baat hai kabir why you sounds so low? " asked Arjun

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Kya karun Papa aaj vo kabir..." Start nisha but hearing kabir's name ramesh interrupted

Kya kiya usne beta, tu theek toh hai na, kya bola usne ??" Asked ramesh in one go

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Kya bolegi vo mujhe bas apne baap ke paison ka roub de rahi thi, ye jata rahi thi vo jayda paise wale hai " said kabir in sad tone

Kya kiya use Gangwals ne ?" Asked Arjun angrily

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Kuch nhi Papa bas Mumbai me ghar kharid liya or vo akele rahega, style marega ki uske pass apna ghar or mujhe bola tu toh bas sapna dekh khud ke ghar ka " said nisha imaginary story

Aisa bola vo ?? Beta tu abhi ek bada SA ghar dekh Mumbai me " said ramesh angrily

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Dad bade ghar kya karunga akele rehna hai ek flat dekh leta hun na " said kabir

Par..." Started Arjun

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Par war kuch nhi Papa, yaar apko pata hi kaise kaise log hai yahan par toh akele bade ghar me kaise rahungi main?? Or vaise bhi vo chor flat hi liya hai" said nisha

Haan theek hai jaisa tera Mann kare waisa hi flat le par aaj hi dekh samjhi ??" Asked ramesh

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Theek hai dad main dekhta hun...aapse raat ko baat karunga chalo bye " said kabir and cut the call

Haan Papa main dhyan rakhungi...chalo raat ko sab se baat karti hun " said nisha and hanged the call


Nisha waited for kabir who was talking to his dad from outside of her house and she talked to her dad from her room so their fathers can't hear nibir's voice.

So ??" Nisha as soon as her eyes made contact with his manly figure who come inside the room

He said yes and your's ??" kabir replied casually

Papa ne bola aaj hi ghar dundo " said nisha

Ohh great...issi khusi me I deserve a kiss " he said and jumped on her

No kabir...not now " nisha said pushing him

Please na nishu " kabir said with a pout to which nisha can't resist and peck him for nano second

Ho gaya kiss now next stage of our problem dolly and Saurav " nisha said and pushed him

Yaar ye kiss nhi tha jaan, ye cheating hai "

Acha ek lamba wala kiss dungi jab dolly or Saurav ka problem nipat jayega tab okkk??"

This is cheating... You're so bad nisha "

I know... Now go dolly aati hi hogi " nisha almost throw him out of her house

Jaan sirf ek kiss " he requested again

No means no... Now go please " nisha said and closed the door


Second hurdle was DoSa...


At night nisha's room

Dolly yaar kuch batana tha..." Said nisha with hesitation

Kya bolna nisha..." Said dolly giving her all attention to nisha
Main na..." Nisha hesitate and blush together

Bolna na nishu natak mat kar " said a hell annoyed dolly

I am going for live in... " said nisha and blushed hard

Wait what ??" Said dolly after registering nisha's words

Or haan tu kisi ko kuch nhi bolegi tere muh kahi chala toh mera hath chalega mere phone pe or tere Papa ko main uss raat ke photo bejh dungi samjhi ??" Said nisha

You're blackmailing me ??" Asked dolly with frown

Yes cause I know you better "

Okk I won't tell anyone promise, so tell me when I'm going to meet my jiju ?" Asked dolly teasingly

Actually he don't want to meet anyone "

Why ??"

Because of his nature, he is very shy guy that's why "

Ohhkk matalb ab meri friend mujhe bilkul nhi milegi "

Arey aisa bilkul nhi hai dolly I am just sifting, not breaking our friendship "

But nisha tujhe ajeeb nhi lag raha I mean live in relationship is a big thing you know "

Yes I feel different dolly but we are not able to give each other time, vo apne job me busy main idhar apne job me, that's why we are shifting together"

But..."

Arey dolly aaj hi Sara questions puch legi kya ?? Chal na sote hai " said nisha pretend like she fall asleep

On the other hand kabir too talk to Saurav but his story was different.

Bhai Saurav... So gaya kya?" Kabir called

Nhi yaar come na..." Saurav said

Yaar ek punga ho gaya re..."

Kya hua uss Ritesh ne phir kuch kaha kya ?? Nisha ka tappad bhul gaya kya ??"

Arey nhi yaar vo kabhi apne life me nisha ka slap nhi bhul sakta office ki girls ne kya girl power dikhai na " said kabir remembering tha incident

Haan yaar...us din jab nisha sab kuch sun li thi, phir next day hi pure canteen ke samne jake thappad mara or sari girls ko bataya kya kiya tha Ritesh ne phir sab ne dhoya use " said Saurav and laughed, kabir too join him

Arey ye baat nhi hai " said kabir after a while controlling his laugh

Toh kya hua ??"

Arey meri ek relative shift ho rahi hai Mumbai, apne babies ko padhane vo akele yahan rahengi toh mom and dad bol rahe ke main unke pass chala jaun... Unki safety bhi ho jayegi or agar mujhe kuch hua toh vo rahengi mere family ko batane ke liye "

Ye sab vo Jo Ritesh or tera fight hua tha uska natiza hai na ??"

Shayd " kabir said looking at him

So main tere ghar nhi aa sakta par tu ana ye tera hi ghar "

Arey Saurav tu bhi na hum milte hi rahenge re main job thodi chod raha "

Haan yaar...toh kab shift kar raha "

Dekhta hun iss week ke andar "

Chal theek hai bhai koi bhi help chahiye toh bolna "

Of course mera sara packing tujhe hi toh karna hai "

Hain ?? Sach me ??" Asked saurav being shocked

Or nhi toh kya ?" Said kabir seriously

Alsi kahi ka sab kaam mujhse karata hai..." Saurav blabbered

Yeah thanks but kal se kaam chalu kar dena " said kabir and went out of Saurav's room


At mid night whole world in deep slumber. Everybody is tired. Giving a well needed time to their body, relaxing their body and making ready for next day work but their was two long lost souls fighting with each other.

Nisha dare you open the door right now or else I'm going to knock it " kabir's msg flashed on nisha's phone as kabir was standing outside of her house and texted her.

Why you want to come, why the hell you're not let me sleep..??" Asked nisha opening the door as she was fed up with him cause he was eating her brain from past 2 hours as kabir had come to nisha's house at 12 now it's 2 when nisha finally give up

Cause you promised me something " he said huskily and went straight to nisha's room

What did I said to you ??" Asked nisha to kabir but he already in her room. She made a annoyed face then closed the main door.

What did you want ??" Asked nisha irritatedly as soon as she lock the door of her room.

I want this..." Kabir said and pull her into a kiss.

Nisha try to push him but he completely grab her in his arm protectively. Kabir slowly lick her lips then started nibbling off her lower lips passionately nisha too reciprocate nibbling his upper lips. Then sucks each other lips hungrily as their lips move in perfect sync. Nisha too had grabbed him as she felt weak infront of his passion. She pulled his hair when he put a war of love between them. Their tongues fight for dominance till their lungs had given up.

Ha gaya tera lamba kiss ab ja or sone de mujhe " said nisha breathing heavily

Ye toh sirf ek baar hi hua " kabir replied mischievously

Sirf ek baar hua matlab?? " nisha asked horror sticken face

He smiled evilly and again trap her in his arm and played with her lips for a while.


To be continued...

Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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