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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
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Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
WOW WOW WOW and WOW!!!
This is beyond beautiful! ❀️
So what if it's dark and depressing? Darkness has it's own beauty and touches your heart in such a way that light can't! What I mean is comedy, romance and all the feel good stories can make you happy leaving behind a smile on your face, but stories having a melancholic feel to it, stirs those deep emotions in our hearts leaving us speechless for sometime. (strictly my opinion though πŸ˜†)
This is the best of all your stories so far Annie!
You keep improving so much with each and every story!
Coming back to the story, Kabir's POV was so wonderfully penned! Your description of his pain, regret, guilt, shame, everything was PERFECT!
The start where he consumes the pills but throws it out on remembering her words and the subsequent breakdown! Beautifully written!
The next scene where he starts recollecting all those painfull memories and your potrayal of each and every emotion he felt when he regained his senses was.. I don't know I really can't express how wonderfull that was! ❀️
Everything after this, from his discovery of her being pregnant to the point where he is shattered after realising that he was the reason for the loss of their child was SHEER BRILLIANCE! ❀️
And that last part where he finds hope of a better tomorrow gave the story a different feel, a feeling of warmth!
To describe in short your story was a platter filled with overwhelming emotions served with flawless writing!! ❀️
Keep giving us more of such beautiful stories and thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
baba I really don't know what to say 😭
m speechless
painful yet beautiful
from the begging till the end everything was beyond perfect πŸ‘
their pain was so beautifully expressed baba πŸ‘
ONE OF THE BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ πŸ‘
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
annie this was just marvellousπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
i never expect someone to write something like this on nibir but u wrote it so beautifully and flawlessly that i cant even be angry on u for this πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
it was just awesome from the very start to the end just awesomeπŸ‘
the way kabir throws the slepping feels the way u described his pain, guilt, regret did not let me hate him in this oneπŸ‘πŸ‘
and the last part nisha asking him to stay that was wonderful conveyed a lot of emotions at a timeπŸ‘πŸ‘

till date i guess this is your bestπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜³

keep writing annie and shocking usπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Thank you for experimenting πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Its turned out brilliant. Awesome. Beautifully penned down writer sahiba.
In awe of your creativity ❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

WOW WOW WOW and WOW!!!

This is beyond beautiful! ❀️
So what if it's dark and depressing? Darkness has it's own beauty and touches your heart in such a way that light can't! What I mean is comedy, romance and all the feel good stories can make you happy leaving behind a smile on your face, but stories having a melancholic feel to it, stirs those deep emotions in our hearts leaving us speechless for sometime. (strictly my opinion though πŸ˜†)
This is the best of all your stories so far Annie!
You keep improving so much with each and every story!
Coming back to the story, Kabir's POV was so wonderfully penned! Your description of his pain, regret, guilt, shame, everything was PERFECT!
The start where he consumes the pills but throws it out on remembering her words and the subsequent breakdown! Beautifully written!
The next scene where he starts recollecting all those painfull memories and your potrayal of each and every emotion he felt when he regained his senses was.. I don't know I really can't express how wonderfull that was! ❀️
Everything after this, from his discovery of her being pregnant to the point where he is shattered after realising that he was the reason for the loss of their child was SHEER BRILLIANCE! ❀️
And that last part where he finds hope of a better tomorrow gave the story a different feel, a feeling of warmth!
To describe in short your story was a platter filled with overwhelming emotions served with flawless writing!! ❀️
Keep giving us more of such beautiful stories and thanks for pm 😊

i am blaasshingg!☺️☺️☺️
i always love your comments! 😳
thank you so much vish for this!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

baba I really don't know what to say 😭
m speechless
painful yet beautiful
from the begging till the end everything was beyond perfect πŸ‘
their pain was so beautifully expressed baba πŸ‘
ONE OF THE BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ πŸ‘


aawww...thankoo so much vaish!😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: mishrialways

annie this was just marvellousπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

i never expect someone to write something like this on nibir but u wrote it so beautifully and flawlessly that i cant even be angry on u for this πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
it was just awesome from the very start to the end just awesomeπŸ‘
the way kabir throws the slepping feels the way u described his pain, guilt, regret did not let me hate him in this oneπŸ‘πŸ‘
and the last part nisha asking him to stay that was wonderful conveyed a lot of emotions at a timeπŸ‘πŸ‘

till date i guess this is your bestπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜³

keep writing annie and shocking usπŸ‘


thankooo so much rituu!!πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Hey_Bhaggu

Thank you for experimenting πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Its turned out brilliant. Awesome. Beautifully penned down writer sahiba.
In awe of your creativity ❀️


thank you soo muchh tannu!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
I don't have words to describe it...
It is just... Amazing...
Luved it to the core...

And thanks for di pm...

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