Sinful Darkness|| Nibir OS|| - Page 5

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

WOW WOW WOW and WOW!!!

This is beyond beautiful! ❤️

So what if it's dark and depressing? Darkness has it's own beauty and touches your heart in such a way that light can't! What I mean is comedy, romance and all the feel good stories can make you happy leaving behind a smile on your face, but stories having a melancholic feel to it, stirs those deep emotions in our hearts leaving us speechless for sometime. (strictly my opinion though 😆)

This is the best of all your stories so far Annie!

You keep improving so much with each and every story!

Coming back to the story, Kabir's POV was so wonderfully penned! Your description of his pain, regret, guilt, shame, everything was PERFECT!

The start where he consumes the pills but throws it out on remembering her words and the subsequent breakdown! Beautifully written!

The next scene where he starts recollecting all those painfull memories and your potrayal of each and every emotion he felt when he regained his senses was.. I don't know I really can't express how wonderfull that was! ❤️

Everything after this, from his discovery of her being pregnant to the point where he is shattered after realising that he was the reason for the loss of their child was SHEER BRILLIANCE! ❤️

And that last part where he finds hope of a better tomorrow gave the story a different feel, a feeling of warmth!

To describe in short your story was a platter filled with overwhelming emotions served with flawless writing!! ❤️

Keep giving us more of such beautiful stories and thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

baba I really don't know what to say 😭
m speechless
painful yet beautiful
from the begging till the end everything was beyond perfect 👏
their pain was so beautifully expressed baba 👏
ONE OF THE BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ 👏

Originally posted by: mishrialways

annie this was just marvellous👏👏👏

i never expect someone to write something like this on nibir but u wrote it so beautifully and flawlessly that i cant even be angry on u for this 👏👏👏

it was just awesome from the very start to the end just awesome👏

the way kabir throws the slepping feels the way u described his pain, guilt, regret did not let me hate him in this one👏👏

and the last part nisha asking him to stay that was wonderful conveyed a lot of emotions at a time👏👏

till date i guess this is your best👏👏😳

keep writing annie and shocking us👏

Originally posted by: Hey_Bhaggu

Thank you for experimenting 👏👏👏

Its turned out brilliant. Awesome. Beautifully penned down writer sahiba.

In awe of your creativity ❤️