1-Alvida 2-Alive 3- Shayrana Nibir Os updated on page 2....

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guyz daro mat tum logo ka peecha itni jaldi nhi chodne wali just tried to write something just tell me how's it...

ALVIDA...

"anger apart love you a lot I want to be your tears I want to be your smile just don't say me a good bye..."
mujhe mere guse seh bhi jyada tumseh pyaar hai mujeh mere dard seh bhi jyada tumseh khushi hai tumhare asu mere hai aur tumhari khushi meri hai bas kehna na mujhko in labo seh alvida alvida...

"you are my love you are my life, you are my love you are my life just don't say me goodbye..."
tum hi ho mera pyaar tumhi ho meri zindagi,tum hi ho mera pyaar tum hi ho meri zindagi bas kehna na mujhe alvida alvida...
ALIVE...

"if you are alive then i am alive ,if you are alive then i am alive if you are dead then what's the meaning of my life"
agar tum zinda ho toh mai zinda hu, agar tum zida ho toh mai zinda hu agar tum na ho toh meri kya yeh zindagi...

TO be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks not bhaiyu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NIBIR OS
PART-A
SHYRANA


A girl in her mid 20's was in deep thoughts when someone tap on her shoulder to break her trance "kya hogya meri jaan ish samay seh kafa ho ya kafa ho humare contact seh eh mohtarma yeh isq kuch nhi dekhta sari duniya ke contacts hi tod deta hai" he said and side hugged her...
"Yeh dil na samay seh kafa hai na contact seh yeh kafa hai sirf khud seh" she thought in her mind when he again shake her up "kha kho gyi janab khi humse kabhakt ishq toh na kr baithi" he said and giggled...
"yeh kabhakt ishq hoti hi aisi bla hai na krna chaho phir bhi ho jati hai" she thought and smiled slightly...
"aeh nisha mujeh tere symptoms kuch theek nhi lag rhe khi tujhe mujhseh hogya hai" he said doubtfully "kya" she asked "ishq" he said seriously "ishq aur tum seh janab ishq insano ki jati hai tum jaise buddhu seh nhi" she said and chuckled lightly "kash tumeh hota mujhseh ishq" he thought...
"kha khogya kabir khi tujeh toh nhi hogya mujhseh ishq" she said and laughed out loudly but her heart knows that her laugh fake...
"Mai aur pyaar vo bhi tujhseh jock krhi hai kya'' he said fake giggling while his heart was crying...
''toh phir mujeh side hug kr ke kyu rkha hai'' she said innocently controlling her tears in her eyes...
''v..v..voh kya koi apni best friend ko hug nhi kr skta kya aise bol rhi hai jaiseh tujeh kiss kr liya ho'' he said and chuckled "tu kiss bhi kr leta tab bhi mai tujeh nhi keh ti'' she thought...
''Acha chal bohot bate hogai mai sone ja rha hu kal tujeh gangwal house chodunga aur phir seedha mere sapno kai pass jha na tu hogi na teri mar hogi na teri galiyaan hogi sirf mai aur mera sapna'' he said and get up yawning...
"apne sapno seh hi shadi kyu nhi kr leta" she said mockingly and move towards her room...
"ishko kya ho gya par jo bhi teri yado ke liye kafi hai'' he thought and move towards their room...
He enter in and saw her sleeping and in our language she is acting...
He smile sadly and sit beside her...
''i know koi jag rha hai toh ushke liye ek massage hai ki mai jarha hu ushki sautan ke pass par miss aur pyaar mai apni pehli wife seh hi krta hu'' he said an smile sadly while she look at him all confused ''what maine bas ek mistake krdi pehli biwi ki jagah sautan bolna tha'' he said and lay down while she turn around ...
He turn of the lamp and face her back...
Silent tears started to roll down from their eyes...
And while crying they fall down in deep sleep...

AT 5:30am
Alarm ringed up loudly disturbing his sleep... He get up and move towards her side...He sit on his knees and start admiring her last night tears which were not present in her eyes but yes their marks were present... He smiled sadly and kissed her forehead with all his love...
Last night tears again started to flow from his eyes uncontrollably... He get up from there and run towards washroom...
He close the door and slide down on floor...
He cried his heart out and cursed himself for not telling her that how much he love her...
Here nisha get up and look beside her and find no one their ''ajj toh thoda late uth teh ajj toh tujeh jee bahr kr dekh lene dete kya pta kl seh hum mile na mile" she thought and smile sadly... tears again started to flow from her eyes when a sound striked of opening door of washroom...
She wipped up her tears and look towards him...
He came out from washroom and start combing his hairs while she was admiring him... He look her at mirror admiring him and a single tear flow from his eye... She look that tear anxiously while he wipped it up and ask her to get ready...She nodded and left...

Naina Lagiya Barisha
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pij gaye
Naina Lagiya Barisha
Rove palka de Kone vich nind merii
Naina Lagiya Barisha
Hanju digde ne chot lage dil tey
Naina Lagiya Barisha
Rut birha de badlan di cha gayii


She come out and they have their breakfast and after half hour some chit chatting and checking their luggage they come out from their apartment...

Kali kali khaali raato se
Hone lagi hai dostii
khoya khoya in raho me,
Ab mera kuch b nahii
Har pal har lamha, me kese sehta hu
Har pal har lamha me khud se ye kehta rehta hu

They started to walk silently while he started to admire her in his last movements...


Tujhe bhulaa diya oh,-3
Phir kyun terii yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diyaa.. oh-2

Teri yaado me likhte jo lafz dete hai sunaii
bitey lamhe puchte hai kyu hue aise judaa... khuda,
Khuda mila jo yeh faasla hai
Khuda tera hi yeh faisla hai
Khuda hona tha wo ho gaya
Jo tune tha likhaa...

Tujhe bhula diya ohhh


When she feel his eyes on her she look towards him [eyelock] ''meri khushi seh badhkr hai tera dukh mere dukh seh badi hai teri khushi chahu mai tujhko jitna uska jikr na kr sku kya tu mujeh chahta hai ishka anuman mai lga sku'' she thought and smiled slightly breaking eyelock...


Naina Laggeyan Baarishan...

Dol pal tujhh se juda tha,
Aise fir rasta muda tha,
Tujh se me khone laga,
Juda jese hone laga,
Mujh se kuch meraa..

''Tuhi hai meri ashiqui tu hi hai meri duniya tujeh yaad kr liya hai ayat ki tarah bas ajj yeh himmat javab nade aur ajj mai keh sku ki mujeh tumseh pyaar hai mujeh tumseh pyaar hai'' he thought and collect all his strength to propose her...


Tu hi mera liye ab kr duaa,
Tu hi is dard se kar de judaa,
Tera hoke tera jo me na ra,
Main ye khud se kehta hu,

Tujhe bhula diya, oh-3
Phir kyu teri yaado ne,
Mujhe rula diyaa"


They reached at her house and he started to look at her with all his love ''nisha mujeh tumseh kuch kehna hai'' he said and hold her both hands ''kya bolna hai kabir'' she asked hesitating his touch on her send a jolt of happiness but she controlled herself thinking that at last he is upto something but what she don't know...

''I am sorry'' he said ''par kyu'' she asked ''voh maine ek rule break krdiya'' he said innocently ''kyu'' she asked while he look at her widely ''i m sorry kounsa'' she asked ''vhi ki hume ek dusre seh pyaar nhi krna hai'' he said looking towards her reaction... Tears started to beam in eyes ''I don't know kab kha kaise kis vakt kis samay kis jagah par tumseh pyaar huva par ha pyaar huva hai aur voh mai nhi bola ha mai janta hu ki mai yha kuch aur krne aya tha par kuch aur krdiya par really i love you'' he said and look towards her shocked face his heart broke into peaces when look at her shocked face... He thought that she wont love him so he take his lugage and start walking like a dead soul and alive body...

Here nisha was standing all shocked ''he proposed me'' she thought and look towards his recreating figure... She run towards him with all her might and back hugged him tightly with all her love ''I love you i love you i love you so much'' she whispered in his ear clossing her eyes and he turn around looking at her... ''What'' she asked ''Ab pyaar nhi krte'' she added ''nhi'' he answered while she look down '' ab mai tumseh bohot bohot bohot pyaar krta hu'' He said and hugged her tightly

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Guyz tell me hows it 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mast! Do write more. Loving ur work 👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ansh superb superb superb superb superb superb yaar
Loved them all
Sorry for late comment
My lappy :(:(
Will read all ur updates and comment soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a ton guyz you over whelmed me by your beautiful comments next parts will be update soon...😳😳😳
Posted: 9 years ago
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ye to sharayi h na?! OS kahan h?? 😲
lovely shayaris by d way ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

ye to sharayi h na?! OS kahan h?? 😲
lovely shayaris by d way ❤️


Thanks dear...😊
Os updated on page 2 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TASYAM


Thanks dear...😊
Os updated on page 2 😊



ohhh
to likhna chiye tha na 😆

aise baad me batane ka kya faida?
Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS dear
Loved the way u described both nisha n kabir's feeling!! ❤️
The song is my fav one yar 😳
Tujhe bhula diya...phir kyu yaado ne mujhe rula diya 😭 cute jokes were there which nibir were saying hiding there feelings...
It was going in emotional way but something made me laugh...

''Tuhi hai meri ashiqui tu hi hai meri duniya tujeh yaad kr liya hai ayat ki tarah bas ajj yeh himmat javab nade aur ajj mai keh sku ki mujeh tumseh pyaar hai mujeh tumseh pyaar hai'' he thought

ye line padhke mujhe hasi isliye ayi coz two things ka combo laga 😆
bajirao movie ka dialogue
Tujhe yaad karliya h ayat ki tarah... and next was song... "Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyaar hai" ❤️
LOL dono ka mixture 😆
awesome story 😳
Loved it

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