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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi all .. i am back with another FF do read and comment it is too small i know .. but prologue tho chota ho hona chahiye naa?😃

sorry for errors

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Prologue

February 2016
constable- Sir...u are always the same from past 10 years aapko promotion hi nahi mila ...!
Inspector- what to do if i had a strong case then ...
c- sir...headman of our village Ramesh gangwal
whispers him the matter ...
p- yea...!its a great case to open
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At Ramesh's home
Laxmi gives him tea
ra- thanks for it
la(smiles)-my pleasure
A knock at door ..
laxmi opens..
la- Ramesh...! come here
ra- what is it ?
sees the police officer
ra- yes sir!!! what i can do for you ?
p- sir ..., actually we want to speak to you about your daughter nisha..
both of them froze hearing her name they both had mixed emotions anger, frustation,sorrow...
ra- er...ni..nisha .. but why ?
c- we will tell you.
p- we have got to know that 3 years before she eloped with kabir mehta ?
is it true?
ramesh did'nt know what to tell he has forgotten her as his daughter...
he disowned her...after a long pause
ra- yes..
p-if u order us then we would help u catch them...
laxmi cried remembering nisha
ra- ok ..
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-END OF PROLOGUE -
do like and share your views
eagerly waiting ..
love
soundharya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start šŸ‘
But aage ka part ka mujhe toh pata hai na šŸ˜‰
Uss forum pe bhi update kar stories ko šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome start šŸ‘
But aage ka part ka mujhe toh pata hai na šŸ˜‰
Uss forum pe bhi update kar stories ko šŸ˜†

karti hoon yaar ..by this weekend ..2 more days baad mei only IF ..ab school chalu hai
Feltonate thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks yaar 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start šŸ‘šŸ¼
Last me nisha hona tha swara ki jhagha 😃
Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice😃😃
waiting for next update😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haaawww ranesh ne nisha ki disown kardiyašŸ˜”
Nishu kabir ek saath hain to its ok😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsome story dear
loved it
read on other couple ... plz cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb strt..
really interesting story
waiting 4 d story 2 strt nw
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
hi dear ..
nice prologue
do continue

love
xyz

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