RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09* - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome tzr
cont soon


thanx anu :)
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Chap I- Dilemma


Kabir was packing bags which contained all money.Just den Saurav arrived.

Within 5-6 hours Kabir had managed to collect the sum of 50 crore cash& was getting ready to leave for bringing his brother Virat back.

Saurav asked-

Tu janta h na k tu kya karne ja raha h.
are u sure ?

Kabir-

Yes I'm sure. me janta hun me kya karne ja raha hoon.

Kabir was leaving for dat place all alone not even bringing his cell along with him.so that none will track him down by his GPS location.
But Saurav was lil worried as he was unsure to allow kabir to go like dis or not.

S-
phir ek baar sochle.kahin unlogon ne apna irada badal liya toh ...how I will contact u?!

K-
Don't worry .I'll handle .or tujhe ya kisi or ko call karne ki zarurat ni h me call kar k inform kardunga.mujje bs Virat ki safety se mtlb h.
while zipping his last bag of money...

-Or han galti se b police ko inform karne ki koshish ki toh mujhe se bura koi ni hoga Saurav.

And he left for dat place described by kidnapers.
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Nisha's PoV-
inside DAT hut I saw Bunty tied on chair by rope.
before I called his name.Bunty woke up.May b he might have felt my presence der & on seeing me He smiled cheerfully.which immediately turned into a shock..just den A sharp pain felt In my head ...All things suddenly went into a black hole...so dark that I can't see anything...
after which I could not remembered anything...

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While driving... on his way
KABIR'S PoV-

I have to bring virat back by any means & as soon as possible.
I can't leave him like dis.
even Kidnapper r nt aware with whom they r taking enmity.(furious)
They all hv to pay for it as well.
but before dat I hv to save Virat .I'll take care of him first after sending him to safe place I'll take my revenge.

Virat ki safety is more important to me den anything as of now.

while thinking all dis Kabir was driving furiously on Western express Highway.
Going towards place where kidnappers had called him.

He almost trashed a car in his inflamed- ness.

Thinking to self...

Kya kar raha h Kabir.
Driving pe dhiyan de...revenge is not so important. Bringing Virat back safe is crucial... not taking dat so called revenge now.

Bringing Virat home safely should b my only priority.
(He calmed himself down...
His anger was still der bt now on himself.)

How could I do dis. ...How ?!
mene Virat pe time to time check rakhna chahiye tha.tab aisa ni hota.
If I had taken proper care of Virat dis thing had not happened...


*******

Now he was about to reach dat place.
Bt in middle of road he found someone lying unconscious.

He stopped his car & went towards dat person.

He learned dat, dat person was a lady.
He turned her & took her on his laps,her face was covered with shiny pearl black hairs, he tucked them behind her ears to be
mesmerized by her beautiful face.
He tapped her cheeks but der was no response.
But she was breathing.
He was sumhow feeling attracted towards her.Her fragrance her charm..everything belonging to her was attracting him
...
Some kind of loud unusual sound Kabir was hearing...He was totally unaware of , from where it was coming& what it is exactly...
To his surprise it was...
it was his violently beating heart.which was long ago dead ...came to life...returned to show its existence...

Kabir to his pounding heart - dil sambhal Ja Zara...
phir mohabbat karne chala h tu...
Dil yahin ruk Ka Zara...
phir mohabbat karne chala h tu...

avoiding his feelings for her...

Kabir took her in his arms & lifted her till his car& drove her to nearest medical centre. To his surprise A good hospital was few miles away from dat place he thought...

[Meharban hua Rab...Rab Ka shukrana...BG songs]

'finally I can see those mysterious eyes beyond dat sophisticated close eye lashes.'

He had seen so many beautiful faces in his life bt dis was something exceptional...

He almost forgot abt his brother till He sent dat lady to emergency ward.

He den ran to call Saurav.
Saurav informed dat Kidnappers had changed the place & time to meet him.now, they wanted Kabir to come at a different place next day.

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Out side dat lady's ward he stood for a while den went to receptionist she handed over her belongings.
It was a cell ,a purse with an identity card which states her Name- Nisha Ramesh Gangwal.

Kabir took her name& sighed - Nisha!!


To b continued...


Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👍🏼
Nisha ka jaadu har baar kabir pe chal jata hai or kabir sab kuch bhul jata hai 🤣
Continue soon...!!!
Posted: 9 years ago
superb
kabir to his heart
dil sambhalja Zara phir mohabat karne chala h tu 😳
loved it!!
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yipeee Maine padh lia ... I was so sad that I'll not b able to read coz of exams bt u updated it so early ...🤗 thanks for updating the chapter soo soonest 😊 now the chapter was superb ... Kabir agreed all the demands and also thinking of taking revenge later on ... Kabir ka heart kitna badmash h 🤣 amazing update ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
The meeting of kabir and nisha.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally finally finally..
kabir met nisha
frst story in wich nibir met after wat 16 updates..
bt it was amzng..
wnderfully written..
nw jst waiting 4 d nxt part..
plz pm me wenevr u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
loved it


thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

superb
kabir to his heart
dil sambhalja Zara phir mohabat karne chala h tu 😳
loved it!!
continue soon


thanx 😊hihihih
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome update👍🏼

Nisha ka jaadu har baar kabir pe chal jata hai or kabir sab kuch bhul jata hai🤣
Continue soon...!!!


again first anni sisso...how do u manage??
thanx yeah...ye hai ashique :)

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