THE GROTESQUE PHANTOM ||PART (C) - PAGE 10 - Page 11

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Loved it

Originally posted by: mika17

Amazing update

wonderful!!!!!
description was so nicely done of each scene dat i was feeling as if watching a horror movie...
plz do write more horror stories
u beautifully depict d scenes..

Babaji...

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

wonderful!!!!!
description was so nicely done of each scene dat i was feeling as if watching a horror movie...
plz do write more horror stories
u beautifully depict d scenes..

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Babaji...

Mei tho bohot darr gayi...

Woh be Maine raat KO pada tha neend mei be Nisha ka bhoot aa raha tha...loved it ...update soon

Pm me too...

How did you sleep after writing this update

Originally posted by: sam_premc

this was the last part soundharya...it ends here!😆😆😆

and thankyou so much for the comment!😳

will defintely try to write more of the genre!😊

oh ...but it seemed to be continuing...

Awesome updates babaji ap sabhi ko dra rhe ho ;)
intresting + horrifying + amazing = update
jaldi seh ddosra part update kro humseh wait nhi ho rha

Originally posted by: mishrialways

How did you sleep after writing this update

God Annie you scared me to hell yaar

amazing writer you r

and best horror story writer

I really liked the back story of reyaan and riya

nisha fighting against spirit to protect kabir

nisha was the one who use to harm him

poor nibir

stuck in horrible situation

Waiting for next update

thanks for pm