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NIBIR-OS
"A RAY OF HOPE "
A boy of 26 was seating on shore of beach with a support of big stone. His eyes were red, swollen and tears were continuously slipping from his eyes
Boy(in cracked loud voice)-you know what Nisha you broke your promise first time you broke your promise in life, I tried to hate you but whenever I try your brightest smile come in front of my eyes (a sad smile came on his face when he remember her smile) and stop me to hate you tum jab ish promise ko poora nhi kar sakti thi toh promise kiya hi kyu tod diya na tumne 2years pehle, aur vo kya kha tumne jane seh pehle kuch silly sa tha ha "A RAY OF HOPE" tum karti thi ish par vishvas par mai ab bilkul bhi ish ray of hope par vishvas nhi krta pehle krta tha 2years pehle par ab mai ish par bilkul vishvas nhi krta aur vishvas bhi ishine mera toda hai bohot kiya tha maine intezar ish ray of hope ka par nhi dikhi mujeh koi aisi ray jisme koi hope ho nhi dikhi
FLASHBACK 2YEARS AGO
A girl of 24 was on stretcher.Her family members and her hubby were running with stretcher.
GH(girl's hubby)-Nishu Nishu ankhe khol Nishu mai tujeh kuch nhi hon dunga bas Nishu tu ankhe khol de Nishuuu!!!
GF(girl's father)-Nishu beta ankhe khol tu mera bahadur bacha haina ankhe khol mere bache!!!
stretcher enter into ICU and doctor stopped her family members
Doctor-ap log yhi rukhiye aur chinta mat kariye hum poori khoshis karenge ki hum unhe bcha ske
GH(tears continuously flowing from his eyes begging to doctor)-Doctor please meri Nisha ko bcha lijiye voh meri jaan hai mai ushke bina nhi reh skta please doctor useh bcha lijiyeh please doctor
Doctor-Mr.Kumar hum apni taraf seh poori khoshis karenge bas app petitions rakhiye
while saying this doctor leave for operation, GH was about to loose his balance but at right time her cousins and GF hold him and make him sit on one of the bench.GH was sitting emotionless while tears were continuously flowing from his eyes. GF sit near him and keep his hand on his shoulder assuring him that nothing will happen to her.
AFTER 2HOURS
Doctor came out of ICU with a disappointing look GH came towards him. His eyes were full of hopes he hold both the shoulders of doctor and asked him about Nisha his voice was full of hopes.Doctor can't keep an eye contact with him as he know now there is no use of giving them hope that she can be alright
Doctor-sorry Mr.Kumar ab hum apki wife ko nhi bcha skte kyunki ab unki halath bohot critical hai aur ab unke pass bohot kam samay hai ap jakr unseh mil leh
Doctor left while saying this, GH shattered on floor emotionless tears stop flowing from his eyes and he was totally looking like a statue. Everybody starting crying while GF move towards GH hugged him and order him through his eyes that he go near Nisha as she was shifted to another room GH nodded and move towards her.
AT ROOM
GH enter in room smiling sadly. Nisha smiled when she looked towards him but when she notice tear marks on his face tear started beaming in her eyes. He came near her and sit on nearby stool
GH(with frowned face)-tod diya nah tune apna promise ab mai tujhseh baat nhi karunga
Nisha-Kabir please ek akhri mujhseh baat kr le
Kabir-nhi mai nhi janta tu apna promise tod rhi haina ab mai bhi apna promise todunga
Nisha-Kabir tu aisa kuch nhi karega tujeh meri kasam
Kabir-toh kya karunga mai tere bina Nisha tu meri life hai aur agar tu hi nhi rahegi toh mera yha koi matlab nhi hai
Nisha-kishne kha ki mai ja rhi hu mai toh yhi hu
Kabir(innocently)-par doctor ne toh bola tha
Nisha-Kabir tu itna nadan kabseh hone lga mai toh yhi hu tere dil mai, mai khi nhi ja rhi hu Kabir tujeh mujeh dekhna hoga toh apni ankhe band krna , apne dil par hath rkhna aur mujeh yad krna mai tujeh jaroor dikhai doongi aur agar nhi dikhai di toh kisi na kisi roop mai, mai apni presence ka tujeh ahshas kravungi
A small smile came on their lips
Kabir-aur mere jeene ki wajah
Nisha-tere jeene ki wajah woh hai (she said pointing towards a ray of light coming from somewhere)
Kabir-yeh A ray of light
Nisha-nhi A ray of hope
Kabir-ab bhala voh kaiseh meri jeene ki wajah bangai
Nisha-voh aise ki tere zindagi mai koi aisa ayega jo teri yeh bin vajah ki zindagi koh ek vajah dega
Kabir-aur kab ayegi yeh A RAY OF HOPE
Nisha-umm kabhi bhi kisi bhi vakt aur dhyan rkhna kbhi har mat manna ho skta hai ki ish RAY OF HOPE ko ane mai time lge par tum kabhi himat nhi harna
Kabir smiled and nodded on her while she smiled brightly. Time started slipping from there hand.
Nisha-Kabir ab mujeh jana hoga par bhoolna mat ki mai yhi hu
Kabir(tear again started beaming in there eyes)-Nisha mat jana
Nisha-Kabir phir wahi baat acha chal ab idher mere pass aa
Kabir obey her and bend down she kissed his cheek and took her last breath.Kabir feel that she had taken her last breath a lone tear escaped from his eyes
Kabir-Nishaaa!!!!
FLASHBACK END
Tears started flowing more and more from his eyes. He took out his guitar from bag and playing it remembering there sweet movements
Oh, love of mine
With a song and a whine
You're harsh and divine
Like truths and a lie
He started remembering their sweet and cute fights and a smile on his face
But the tale ends not here
I have nothing to fear
For my love is yell of giving and hold on
And the bright emptiness
In a room full of it
Is a cruel mistress
Whoa oh!
but a cruel truth of his life came in front of his
I feel the sunrise
That nest all hollowness
For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold.
And I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness
And I'm so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!
tears started flowing making his visibility blur
Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!
Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera
Aashiq tera
Bhid me khoya rehta hai,
Jaane jahaan
Poocho to itna kehta hai
he closed his eyes to feel and her bright smiled face came in front of but tears started to flow more
That I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness
And I'm so lonely yeah
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!
he end song while his eyes were uncontrollably flowing tears.At that a lady of 50 tap his shoulder with lots of love
Lady(with so sweet yet soothing voice)-Kabir
Kabir look towards that lady and after so much of time he smiled so brightly and hugged that lady and whispered in his low voice "I GOT A RAY OF HOPE"
"A RAY OF HOPE "
A boy of 26 was seating on shore of beach with a support of big stone. His eyes were red, swollen and tears were continuously slipping from his eyes
Boy(in cracked loud voice)-you know what Nisha you broke your promise first time you broke your promise in life, I tried to hate you but whenever I try your brightest smile come in front of my eyes (a sad smile came on his face when he remember her smile) and stop me to hate you tum jab ish promise ko poora nhi kar sakti thi toh promise kiya hi kyu tod diya na tumne 2years pehle, aur vo kya kha tumne jane seh pehle kuch silly sa tha ha "A RAY OF HOPE" tum karti thi ish par vishvas par mai ab bilkul bhi ish ray of hope par vishvas nhi krta pehle krta tha 2years pehle par ab mai ish par bilkul vishvas nhi krta aur vishvas bhi ishine mera toda hai bohot kiya tha maine intezar ish ray of hope ka par nhi dikhi mujeh koi aisi ray jisme koi hope ho nhi dikhi
FLASHBACK 2YEARS AGO
A girl of 24 was on stretcher.Her family members and her hubby were running with stretcher.
GH(girl's hubby)-Nishu Nishu ankhe khol Nishu mai tujeh kuch nhi hon dunga bas Nishu tu ankhe khol de Nishuuu!!!
GF(girl's father)-Nishu beta ankhe khol tu mera bahadur bacha haina ankhe khol mere bache!!!
stretcher enter into ICU and doctor stopped her family members
Doctor-ap log yhi rukhiye aur chinta mat kariye hum poori khoshis karenge ki hum unhe bcha ske
GH(tears continuously flowing from his eyes begging to doctor)-Doctor please meri Nisha ko bcha lijiye voh meri jaan hai mai ushke bina nhi reh skta please doctor useh bcha lijiyeh please doctor
Doctor-Mr.Kumar hum apni taraf seh poori khoshis karenge bas app petitions rakhiye
while saying this doctor leave for operation, GH was about to loose his balance but at right time her cousins and GF hold him and make him sit on one of the bench.GH was sitting emotionless while tears were continuously flowing from his eyes. GF sit near him and keep his hand on his shoulder assuring him that nothing will happen to her.
AFTER 2HOURS
Doctor came out of ICU with a disappointing look GH came towards him. His eyes were full of hopes he hold both the shoulders of doctor and asked him about Nisha his voice was full of hopes.Doctor can't keep an eye contact with him as he know now there is no use of giving them hope that she can be alright
Doctor-sorry Mr.Kumar ab hum apki wife ko nhi bcha skte kyunki ab unki halath bohot critical hai aur ab unke pass bohot kam samay hai ap jakr unseh mil leh
Doctor left while saying this, GH shattered on floor emotionless tears stop flowing from his eyes and he was totally looking like a statue. Everybody starting crying while GF move towards GH hugged him and order him through his eyes that he go near Nisha as she was shifted to another room GH nodded and move towards her.
AT ROOM
GH enter in room smiling sadly. Nisha smiled when she looked towards him but when she notice tear marks on his face tear started beaming in her eyes. He came near her and sit on nearby stool
GH(with frowned face)-tod diya nah tune apna promise ab mai tujhseh baat nhi karunga
Nisha-Kabir please ek akhri mujhseh baat kr le
Kabir-nhi mai nhi janta tu apna promise tod rhi haina ab mai bhi apna promise todunga
Nisha-Kabir tu aisa kuch nhi karega tujeh meri kasam
Kabir-toh kya karunga mai tere bina Nisha tu meri life hai aur agar tu hi nhi rahegi toh mera yha koi matlab nhi hai
Nisha-kishne kha ki mai ja rhi hu mai toh yhi hu
Kabir(innocently)-par doctor ne toh bola tha
Nisha-Kabir tu itna nadan kabseh hone lga mai toh yhi hu tere dil mai, mai khi nhi ja rhi hu Kabir tujeh mujeh dekhna hoga toh apni ankhe band krna , apne dil par hath rkhna aur mujeh yad krna mai tujeh jaroor dikhai doongi aur agar nhi dikhai di toh kisi na kisi roop mai, mai apni presence ka tujeh ahshas kravungi
A small smile came on their lips
Kabir-aur mere jeene ki wajah
Nisha-tere jeene ki wajah woh hai (she said pointing towards a ray of light coming from somewhere)
Kabir-yeh A ray of light
Nisha-nhi A ray of hope
Kabir-ab bhala voh kaiseh meri jeene ki wajah bangai
Nisha-voh aise ki tere zindagi mai koi aisa ayega jo teri yeh bin vajah ki zindagi koh ek vajah dega
Kabir-aur kab ayegi yeh A RAY OF HOPE
Nisha-umm kabhi bhi kisi bhi vakt aur dhyan rkhna kbhi har mat manna ho skta hai ki ish RAY OF HOPE ko ane mai time lge par tum kabhi himat nhi harna
Kabir smiled and nodded on her while she smiled brightly. Time started slipping from there hand.
Nisha-Kabir ab mujeh jana hoga par bhoolna mat ki mai yhi hu
Kabir(tear again started beaming in there eyes)-Nisha mat jana
Nisha-Kabir phir wahi baat acha chal ab idher mere pass aa
Kabir obey her and bend down she kissed his cheek and took her last breath.Kabir feel that she had taken her last breath a lone tear escaped from his eyes
Kabir-Nishaaa!!!!
FLASHBACK END
Tears started flowing more and more from his eyes. He took out his guitar from bag and playing it remembering there sweet movements
Oh, love of mine
With a song and a whine
You're harsh and divine
Like truths and a lie
He started remembering their sweet and cute fights and a smile on his face
But the tale ends not here
I have nothing to fear
For my love is yell of giving and hold on
And the bright emptiness
In a room full of it
Is a cruel mistress
Whoa oh!
but a cruel truth of his life came in front of his
I feel the sunrise
That nest all hollowness
For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold.
And I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness
And I'm so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!
tears started flowing making his visibility blur
Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!
Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera
Aashiq tera
Bhid me khoya rehta hai,
Jaane jahaan
Poocho to itna kehta hai
he closed his eyes to feel and her bright smiled face came in front of but tears started to flow more
That I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness
And I'm so lonely yeah
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!
he end song while his eyes were uncontrollably flowing tears.At that a lady of 50 tap his shoulder with lots of love
Lady(with so sweet yet soothing voice)-Kabir
Kabir look towards that lady and after so much of time he smiled so brightly and hugged that lady and whispered in his low voice "I GOT A RAY OF HOPE"
END
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