||The Uninvited Guests||: A KNAUC TS. Chap 3(b) pg:14, 24/2. Complete - Page 2

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb start vishru 👏
Pehle silent thriller thi and now you are a writer thriller 🤣
Now coming to your story it is awesome
The genre you have taken is very difficult to write. So hats off to you starting a new story with this genre.
I simply loved it the way all characters established.
Nisha monologue is too good 😆
Saurav the khumbkaran 🤣
Vaz villa the name is awesome i liked it
Dolly's English 😆
I think this will be a three short
Specially i loved the way you write nibir moments because i thought there will be no nibir moments in this story but the way you wrote i loved it.
I will give you a suggestion that please add kabir's monologue also because it will add fun to your story by his funny monologue. Please don't feel bad i am just giving a suggestion. 😃
Please update soon
Thanks for pm
I hope my comment is not boring 😆
Congo for your first story 🥳
Please update soon because you can ask any writer of this forum i used to irritated them for their updates with this ts welcome to that list 😈 🤣

thanks for the comment Sujay 😊. But, as i have mentioned in bold at the start of the story, it's entirely Nisha's POV. Which means the story is read by the reader through Nisha's eyes. So, giving Kabir's monologue is not possible sorry 😊. But, thanks for the suggestion. Will keep it in mind when I write my next story. About update, il be able to update only when I am able to give a proper shape in the form of words to my crude ideas. And thats possible only when I'm free and have a clear mind. And I'm pretty sure thats the reason for the writers giving a late update. So, wait for it 😉 as they say 'intezaar ka phal meeta hota hai' 😆.

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Vishu!! Amazing dear ..

Vaz villa ? Suitable name for a

Horror... story...!!

thank you soundharya😊

Originally posted by: Aha121

Horror
Nice start
Finally you wrote
Continue soon

thanks sana 😊

Originally posted by: sam_premc

res!

waiting for it to unres! 😳

Hi vishru. . . . . . . . . . .I m shnz my real name is sachi. ...such ka hoon tho I m can't watch horror films ...but in real life the situation comes I love too find out abt it ...but h know bhoot kuch nahi hota but we can't be sure abt it ...It will be my 3 horror story I will read and I loved it

Vish wat a start. 👏 The Vas villa is it for real 😲 😲 .
Even I HV a secret fantasy fr horror/spooky things 😆 I soo luv reading dese kind of stories 😉
Ur description of scenes or emotions or reactions just perfect. 👏
Soo luving it 😉
Waiting waiting fr d spooky ride to begin 😉 😉
Update soon 😉

Res
Unres

Vish kya supercul surprise diya h yaar
U wrote story WO bhi horror...😉 I love horror stories
Now coming to ur TS😊
Firstly thanx for writing KNAUC TS...kyuki yha mostly kitni bhi stories h WO sari nibir ki hi h😊
Dolly living in Bangalore ...cousins saurav n kabir came to meet him😊
Every scene their masti their craziness was written superbly👍🏼
Saurav aalsi🤣 kabir darpok🤣
Nisha kal jayegi villa lagta h
Waiting impatiently for horror scenes
I must say ur word selection was superb n u have excellent command over the language😊
Do update soon😊

vishru... 🤗
kya likha hai yaar👍🏼
update soon😃

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Hi vishru. . . . . . . . . . .I m shnz my real name is sachi. ...such ka hoon tho I m can't watch horror films ...but in real life the situation comes I love too find out abt it ...but h know bhoot kuch nahi hota but we can't be sure abt it ...It will be my 3 horror story I will read and I loved it

thank you dear 😊

Originally posted by: Shats

Vish wat a start. 👏 The Vas villa is it for real 😲 😲 .
Even I HV a secret fantasy fr horror/spooky things 😆 I soo luv reading dese kind of stories 😉
Ur description of scenes or emotions or reactions just perfect. 👏
Soo luving it 😉
Waiting waiting fr d spooky ride to begin 😉 😉
Update soon 😉

thanks Shats 😃 and yes Vaz Villa is for real