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I know am supposed to update to my stories but instead I have wrote this. It didn't come to very good, but I used up so much time in writing, so posted anyways.

Nibir OS - Last Moments

Three years have passed by Nisha and Kabir's wedding. Nisha had a tiresome day in the academy and along with that Kanisha (Nibir's five months daughter) was troubling her alot, so she fell asleep as soon as she reached home as Kanisha was already asleep. In the middle of the night Nisha heard some noises, she opened her eyes and saw that Kanisha wasn't near her, she quickly got up from the bed and saw a shadow near the bed room door, she was about to scream, but think against it, she picked up a vase and followed close. She saw a man wearing black holding her baby, she at once was about to bang the vase on his head to injure him, when she got a glimpse of his face, but she wasn't to sure of what she saw, so decided to follow. The man walked straight and turned left entering a narrow lane entering a house. He opened the door forgetting to close it as Kanisha began crying, that gave Nisha the perfect opportunity to enter, she went to the room on the left as Kanisha and the man were in the room to the right. The room was neatly arranged, but there was an air of sadness that she could feel, ignoring that she looked about for anything that would clear her doubts, but there was nothing such lying in the open, so she searched through the cupboard and draws, finally finding a file, she opened it finally finding his name "Kabir Kumar" on it. She was about to keep it back when curiosity gripped her heart and she opened the file to read it. As she went about the details she realized all her doubts had always been true, tears streamed down her eyes.

Flashback 1
Kabir: Nisha tang mat karo, I have work.
Nisha: Kabir kya hogaya hai tujhe.
Kabir: What do you mean kya hua hai mujhe.
Nisha: tu ne kabhi aise bath nahi ki
Kabir: Iss liye tu humesha mujhe irritate karti hai
Nisha: bahut hogaya tera k pana, ab tu mujhe hurt kar raha hai.

Flashback 2
Nisha (monologue): Aaj mein Kabir ko yeh good news dungi kitna khush hoga. Janti hoon kuch dino se mood kharab hai thik ho jayega
Nisha is about to enter in the room and sees Kabir talking on the phone.
Kabir: haan jaan anything for you, sure sweet heart as you say
Nisha (monologue): Kabir kiss se, yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke wo bas yuhi flirt kar raha ho, Lekin wo sirf meri ankhon ke sapna flirt karte hai that mein jealous ho jao, phir aaj, zarur usse yeh pata hoga ke mein ayi hoon, k kahinka, ab andar jati hoon aur kuch react nahi karungi.
Nisha: Aaj jaldi agaye academy se.
Kabir: ek din work load kam hai tujhe is mein problem hai kya.
Nisha: Main toh bas
Kabir:fikar mat kar wapas ja raha hun
Nisha (monologue): kya hua hai usse, usse yaad bhi hai ke do din baad humari second wedding anniversary hai, yaad hoga aur surprise plan kar raha hoga, issiliye yeh sab. Magar wo janta nahi mera surprise sab se bara hai, chera dekhne liyak hoga jab mein bataungi usse ke mein pregnant hoon.

Flashback 3
Rupan: Nisha ajj tere aur Kabir ki wedding anniversary ki party hai, tu yahan hai Lekin wo nazar nahi araha hai, party khatam hone ko hai, kuch log bhi wapas chale gaye, aur itni raat hogayi hai, mujhe lagta hai ke hum sab ko bhi jana chaiye
Nisha: kuch kaam mein busy hogaya hoga jaise ghar ayega mein inform karungi, aap log jaiye .
Just than Kabir entered, tripping after walking two steps into the house only to be caught by Viraj.
Viraj: Kabir aap drunk hai.
Kabir: Meeting thi hotel mein toh un logon ne force kiya.
Rupan: Anniversary ke din meeting rakhi
Kabir: Anniversary, kisski tu ne bataya nahi Nisha
Vasundara: jojo bahut hogaya mazak ajj apki aur Nisha ki Anniversary hai ajj.
Kabir: Oh kaunsi wali, chandu ko bachate hua humare plan ka hissa wali shaadi, ya teen mahine contract wali shaadi.
Nisha (in tears): Kabir tu
Kabir: rona tera favourite pass time ban chuka hai
Sukku: Kabir tu aise bat nahi kar sakta Nisha se.
Flashbacks end

Nisha: janti thi tumhare actions ke peche koi wajha rahi hogi, kash tumhare uss dikhave ke peche ka saach mein smajh patii. Lekin aaj yeh sachai tere mun se sunonge.
She walked into the other room and saw the two reasons of her living. She called out to him sternly, his head turned towards her. He called out her name, she was hearing her name from his mouth after an entire year. Seeing his face after so long, not just a picture but him infront of her. She moved forward and ran her hand through his face.
Nisha: Kanisha ko kyun le aye.
Kabir: Wo meri beti bhi hai, I can take her anywhere I want.
Nisha:not without my permission.
Kabir: why not I am her father.
Nisha: you didn't remember that for all these months.
Kabir: well because no one informed me I had a child.
Nisha: I would have if you just didn't walk out leaving our entire family a year ago.
Kabir: I still had the right to know.
Nisha: toh kya apne darling sweetheart ko chod kar humare saath adjust karte.
Kabir: Payal ko mein kabhi nahi chodta, because I love her.
Nisha: Acha phir abhi tak shaadi kyun nahi ki.
Kabir: wo wo
Nisha: ussne manna kiya
Kabir: humara divorce hona baki hai
Nisha: tumhe koi acha lawyer nahi mila, mein Viraj bhai se bath kar lun.
Kabir: koi zarurat nahi hai, mein sab kuch manage kar lunga.
Nisha: kitna natak karoge, ab bas bhi karo.
Kabir: mein koi...

Nisha placed a hand on his mouth and showed him the file.
Nisha: sab kuch pata hai, itna pyaar karte ho, but I hate you. I hate you so much, kyun nahi bataya tumhe cancer hai.
Kabir: jab mujhe pata chala it was very late, I had only a year and a half left and there was no treatment, I didn't want you to suffer along with, I was going to die soon, I didn't have it in me to die every moment seeing you helpless because of my sickness. I became selfish, I am sorry.
Nisha: And you didn't think, how much I died each moment without you. Didn't I still cry all this while, ha tell me.
Kabir: I thought
Nisha: You thought what, you thought that I would forget you and move on, is that what you thought, that my love was this weak
Kabir: no tumhare pyaar par mujhe kabhi doubt nahi tha.
Nisha: Lekin tha kamzoor mera pyaar, trust nahi kar paayi tujhe, tere jhoot ke peche ka saach dekh nahi payi
Kabir: shh, kitna bolti ho, ek baar dil se pucho kya tum ne shak kiya kabhi bhi, nahi Nisha tum ne bas wo kiya Jo mein ne tum se karvaya.
Nisha: phir bhi Kabir
Kabir: Nahi Nisha sorry toh mujhe khena chaiye na chate hue tujhe kitni takleef di hai
Nisha: nahi Kabir tu ne yeh sab sirf mere liye kiya
Kanisha started crying
Kabir: lo shuru hogayi choti miss j
Nisha: Kabir
Kabir: Bilkul apni tarhe bana diya meri rajkumari ko.
Nisha: I am sorry...
Kabir: Teri galti nahi meri galti thi kaha na tujhe
Nisha: Lekin phir bhi mujhe tujhe apni pregnancy ke bare mein inform kar dena chaiye, shayad tu wapas ajata, ya phir jata hi nahi.
Kabir: Tab bhi jata, sirf dur jana aur mushkil ho jata. Jaise yeh panch mahine
Nisha: like these five months, meaning.
Kabir: Teri delivery ke waqt mein ussi hospital mein tha.
Nisha: matlab mein sahi thi, kaha maa ko mein ne ke tu aas pass tha. Kyun mujh se mila nahi, kyun
Kabir: meri sari galtiyon ke liye maaf karde
Nisha: phir se sorry ka silsila shuru ho gaya.
Kabir: I love you Nisha.
Nisha: love you too
They hear some noise and see Kanisha giggling and go near her.
Kabir: Apni mama ko khush dekh kar bahut khush ho, aaj tak sirf assu dekhe honge, itni rotlu jo hai teri maa, but please tu mat ban is ki tarha.
Nisha: Kabir chal, ghar chal hum sab ko call karke sari sachai batate hai.
Kabir: Nahi Nisha yahi ruk ja, Kabir looked at the watch, happy third wedding anniversary meri jaan.
Nisha: Aaj humari...
Kabir: haww tu bhol gayi.
Nisha: nahi wo itna kuch, ke mein
Kabir: keemat toh jukani paregi.
Nisha: Kya chaiye
Kabir: ek vaada
Nisha: vaada?
Kabir: Jo sachai tujhe pata chali hai, usse kissi aur ko mat bata please.
Nisha: Ek shart hai meri, jab Kanisha bari ho jayegi usse nahi chipaungi. Nahi chati wo tum se nafrat kare baki sab ki tarhe.
Kabir: Na kissi aur ne na tu ne mujh se narfrat ki, sab sirf gussa hai. Farak hai.
Nisha: Lekin aaj ke din sirf hum dono.
Kabir: (taking Kanisha in his arms) hum teeno.
Nisha: message kar dungi Umesh bhaiya ko I won't bhi at home for a day and Kanisha is with me.
Kabir: Lekin agar koi sawal kare
Nisha: Aaj humari anniversary hai wo yahi samjhnge ke tujhe bahut yaad kar rahi thi Issiliye ghar mein nahi hoon.
Kabir: Mere saath reh kar smart hogayi hai
Nisha: Kabir, chal
Kabir: kahan
Nisha: kitna sawal puchta hai, chal mere saath

Nisha takes Kabir and Kanisha to the other room.
Kabir: yahan kyun le aye mujhe.
Nisha: ta ke iss kamre mein Jo udasi chayi hai usse dur kar sakon.
Kabir: Nisha tu yeh
Nisha: Mein kaise janti hun ke iss kamre ki har deevar ne sirf asu dekhe hai. (Nisha sees tears rolling down Kabir's cheeks) but not today (wiping his tears).
Kabir: Kaise samjhti ho mujhe itna
Nisha: kya kare pare karti hun.

Days passed by it was almost a month since Kabir, Nisha and Kanisha were meeting. Nisha was feeling weak since few days and found she was a week pregnant, she gave Kabir the news and happiness new no bounds for them, but it is said that with happiness there is a share of sorrows. One month of the happiness and death came knocking. Everyone got to know of Nisha's pregnancy and deathKabir's death though they were informed that it was an accident.
Time flew by, everyone was still angry at Kabir when the saw Nisha lost and depressed, but when they used to see her smile and be happy around Kanisha and kanish (Nibir second child), they couldn't deny the fact that Kabir gave her the two most beautiful gifts. As promised Nisha never told anyone the truth except for their kids when they became of age. Nisha lived her life for her kids with the help of the last moments she spent with Kabir.

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Very emotional OS... 😭
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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lovly and emotional os janu
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Lovely os 👏
Very emotional one 😭
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awsm os janu😊...

kabir ko cancer... 😭

though it was sad...but it was written beautifully
nibir ka wo pain...

kanisha kanish...

u made me cry n right now n crying so cant write more ... 😭
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Awesome par bohot emotional hai yaar...
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Jaanu..such an emotional os..😭
Loved it
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Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

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Very emotional OS... 😭


Thanks
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Lovely os 👏
Very emotional one 😭


Thanks sujay
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