NiBir ff - dil mil gaaye(updated part 6 pg 27) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mkjr

nice story loved it

waiting for next update

thanks 😃
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#72

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Kabir&co. Nisha&co. 🤣
NiBir friendship 😳
Rashi ke hosh udd Gaye 😆
Very excited 😉

thanks krishu 😃
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#73

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

awsum
nibir has bcome frnds.
but here i cant curse rashi as
my sweet little cousin name is also rashi...n. she is so cutee.

shruthi I never told u to curse rashi yaar I didn't want to compare her with any actress so I told to think of the person u hate😃 sorry if I hurted u 😭
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Hola peeps !!!!! the comments are increasing on each update plsz continue the same and i see many silent readers ,guys whatever u feel do share because ur comments encourage me to lead the story further , talks apart now read the update

Soundharya

Part 3

Class hours are going

Miss murthy- good mrng students

All- gud mrng mam

Mm - toh kal humne kya pada tha ... kaun bathaye ga ?

Saurav- kabir tujhe yaad he ?

(Before kabir replies)

Mm - kabir tum bathao

Kabir - mein ... er... hain hamne kal lesson ka introduction pada tha

Mm - kis lesson ka?

Kabir - mam woh toh aapne bathaya hi nahi

(all laugh)

Mm - kabir seede seede bolo tumhe yaad nahi

Kabir- hain mam algebra pada tha

Mm - science mein algebra kaise

Kabir-er ... toh mam invent kardigiye

(laughs continue)

Mm- kabir tu class ka joker hain

Kabir- (smiles scratching his head)mam...

After class ends.

Dolly- kabir kithna sweet hai na

Kirti-of course bohot acha ladka hai

Nisha- aaj subah hi hamari frndship hui

Dolly-acha hum be uske bohot close hai par...

Kirti -class mein time nahi miltha toh baat nahi ho pati

Dolly- hain

(and they start gossiping)

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6 months later

One fine day

Mm -students kal se semester shuru ho raha hai revise karo and get good marks . all the best!

All- thank u mam

At the canteen

Kabir ,sukku,saurav,dolly,kirti and nisha are sitting together in a table

Nisha- aabhi lag raha tha ki school join kiya par 6 mahine ho gaaye

Kirti- haa abhi lag raha tha ki new session shuru huaa

Kabir- wo sab chodo exam ke bare mein socho

Saurav - thu boltha hai nahi pada .. nahi pada per aache mark score kar letha hai

Dolly - correct bola saurav(gives hi-fi)

Sukku-bhai mein bi hu yaahan pe

(all laugh)

Nisha- ek idea hai group study kare what say guys?

Kabir - idea bura nahi hai

Saurav- par kahaan

Dolly- school ke baad mere ghar ke garden mein?

Sukku- pehli baar kuch acha bola dolly ne(dolly gives cold look)

(rashi comes to the canteen)

Saurav- kabir(shakes him)dekh rashi

Rashi- hey nisha! @ ms genius kya plan bana rahi ho can i join

Nisha - rashi no need waise be tumhare company mein mujhe koi dilchaspi nahi

(Rashi gets angry)

Rashi - arey kabir(starts flirting)tell her no may i also join

Kabir- er... rashi...

Nisha - oye tera natak na mere best frnd ke saamne nahi chalega

Rashi- oh miss nisha for ur kind info tera best frnd mujshe pyaar karta hain 1 saal se tum new ho isliye tumhe nahi pata

(all froze jo nisha se 6 mahine hide kiya tha isne use bata diya)

Nisha-(unable to believe)oye kya bol rahi hai tu aise kaam karti hai na isliye tujhe mere dost pe shak ho raha hai

Rashi - pooch lo dolly se ya kirti se mein sach bol rahi hoon

Nisha-(stares at dolly and kirti)dolly aur kirti bolo na yeh jhoot bol rahi hai .. chup kyun.. ho?

Dooly - nisha chod na kyu tu serious ho rahi hai

Nisha- serious ho nahi rahi hoon poonch rahi hoon bata mujhe sach kya hai

Kirti- nishu... wo sahi bol rahi hai

Nisha- kya?(shocked)

Saurav - nishu .. yehi sach hai

Sukku - sorry tujse chupane ke liye

Nisha - kabir.. mein tum pe bohot vishvas karti thi tum ne yeh kyun kiya(leaves crying)

Dolly- kush.. tu kush hai na rashi aag lagakar pata nahi tujse logo ko pyaar kaise ho jata hai(looks at kabir)

(Saurav and sukku make helpless faces)

Kirti- sharm kar kabir aaj teri is galti ke vajah se teri best frnd naraz ho gayi

(Tears drop frop kabir's eye )

Dolly- anyways .. mein nishu ko convince karne ki koshish karti hoon aur tum log as planed 3 baje milthe hain@ my garden

(Saurav and sukku nodded there head whereas kabir was all stunned)(dolly and kirti left for nisha)

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(Nisha was sitting with face all wet )(a hand approached)

Kirti- nishu..

Nisha- yaar thoda akela chod do mujhe i am very sad

Dolly- nisha chod usse ,mai manthi hoo kabir at once rashi se bohot pyaar karta tha par ab uske maan mei koi feelings nahi hai uske liye

Kirti- han nishu kal se semesters shuru ho rahe hai tu pade gi nahi to kaise chalega

Nisha- chalega main fail ho jaogi

Dolly- pagal !chup !frndship ka bhi limit hota hai aur tu ithna feel kyu kar rahi hai kahi...(dolly paused)

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Edited by itssound - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Kahi...?the update was fabulous loved it soundharya..no one can say ds was ur 1st attempt to write ff..kya twist diya hai story mei..loved it..and thank u for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awesome update 👏
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Great Update 👏
Loved it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Great update 👏
Superb story 👏
Loved it
Bechari nisha 😭
That richa 😡
But very interesting twist 😆
Enjoying it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Lovely update!
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Fantastic update 👍🏼
Loved ❤️ it
Update soon

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