NiBir ff - dil mil gaaye(updated part 6 pg 27) - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

The title it self made me nostalgic, DMG is my favourite show..

Read all in one go it waa amazing cont soon and thanks for the PM😊

thanks niya di😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update👍🏼

Rashi n pradeep😡

Nishu ko FASA diya unhone...but y so fear wen kabira is here..😉
WO nishu ko innocent prove kr k hi rahega😊
Feeling bad for nishu...😔
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Superb update👍🏼

Rashi n pradeep😡

Nishu ko FASA diya unhone...but y so fear wen kabira is here..😉
WO nishu ko innocent prove kr k hi rahega😊
Feeling bad for nishu...😔

thanks nimi😃
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Congo pooja for becoming senior member [:D/] 🥳
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thanks sujay😆 and dont confuse i am ur same old frnd i just changed my username😃
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Awesome story
Continue soon

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Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

thanks sujay😆 and dont confuse i am ur same old frnd i just changed my username😃


Ok now all is cleared ab no confusion 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey...nice story...jst read all parts...
what attracted me d most was d title...
Hayyy DMG wale din yaad aa gaye...
m glad to read stories on NAUC...😊
update soon...
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hola!! i am back i hope it is not boring and do like and comment
Soundharya

PART 6
sa-socho kuch socho..
suk-mil gaya..
d- wow!! idea mil gaya
suk- nahi nahi .. mujhe mera pen mil gaya jo koh gaya tha
ki- suketu maharaj apni bakwas bandh karo
n-hame kuch aisa karna chahiye ki woh kudh apni lagthi accept kare
sa- ya phir uski video kichthe hai
d- matlab ?
sa- matlab ki woh sach bolthe huye video kichthe hai
suk- dono idea bure nahi hai
ka- mil gaya
ki- tune kya ghumadiya ?
ka- arre woh nahi idea mil gaya
d- jaldi batha
k- hum dono karenge
ni- matlab ?
k- hum uss se sach bhi bulvayege aur video bhi kichege
sa- par kaise ?
kabir - suno ...
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at school
rashi was coming towards them
ki- all the best guys
dolly intentionally hit rashi
r- idiot !! lag gaya mujhe
d- sorry extremely sorry
sauro comes to dolly
sa- dollu !! dollu !! tujhe patha hai nisha ne kal exam nahi likha
d- kya ? per kaise
he tells the whole thing
sa- woh supervisor ne samaj liya ki usne cheating ki
d- oh ! bechari nisha
rashi was hearing all this
ra- (in sorry tone)oh bechari nisha mujhe uske paas janab chahiye
( monologue ) hey bhagwan agar kabir ne nisha ko batha diya toh
d- hain sure usse acha lagega
rashi went off c nisha

dolly saurav gave hi fi

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Nisha's home

kabir and gang were ready near nisha's room

r- nisha kal hi mei tumse baat karna chahthi thi per... tumhara mood thik nahi tha isliye nahi mil payi

ni-it's ok

kabir near the window murmers

ka- guys yeh hamare plan ka main part hai ..be ready !!

all- we can and we will..

kabir enters the room

ka- nishu.. dear ... arre rashi tum (angry)

ra-(nervous look)yea ..er.. hi kabir

ni-kabir kya hua ithna gussa kyu

ka- nisha tu such nahi jaan thi teri is...

rashi- arre kabir chod na abhi kya baat karna nishu ko thik ho jaane de

ka- oye!!! Mauke ka faayda mat uta nishu is ne hi tere bench mei paper throw kiya

ni- kya??(shocked)

rashi- nahi nahi nisha u are my best buddy how can i...

ka- enough rashi enough

ra- just shut up

ni-ek minit.. chup ho jaayo agar rashi tu ne kuch nahi kiya toh tujhe kyu tension ho raha hai?

Kabir smiled he had a inner feeling of success

r-er...

ni-bol...bol na aisi Gandhi harkat toh tujhe hi karna aatha hai

sukku started to click video

r- oye!! Kya bol rahi hai tu .. teek hai maana maine hi kiya woh be jaanbuchke teek hai

ka- very good rashi hamesha sach hi bolna chahiye sach ke seeva aur kuch nahi bolna chahiye (smiles)

r-kabir.. chup kar pehle toh mujhe iske saath scores equal karne the ab toh tub hi aagaya list mein

sukku stopped the video

ni- ab se thune agar mere dost aur mere saath kuch karne ka socha toh dekh

r- jyaada mat bol kamini kahiki

ni-kamini hogi tu dusro ko tang karne wali

r- dekh loongi tum logon ko nisha kabir

rashi fumed and left

ka- nishu.. happy

ni- thanks kabire very much happy(hugged him tightly)

others to joined

ki-nisha and kabir tum dono sach mei beautiful frnds ho

nisha and kabir smiled seeing each other in same posture and it turned into a eyelock

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Next day at school

Teacher-nisha maine suna ki tumne exam nahi likha because u had bit paper

Ni- no mam actually it was rashi's job

Teacher-what?

r- wat are u telling nisha

ni- i am saying the truth mam

te- what is the proof?

r-er.. yea what is the proof?

Ka- here is the proof

Kabir shows the video

Rashi was shocked

Te-rashi wat the hell is tjis

r- mam i am sorry

started her drama using fake tears

te-enough rahi know the princi will decied wat to do

r-mam...

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The gang was standing in there usual place

Sa- sach mein rashi ka muh dekne layak tha

d- she deserved it

ki- nishu are u happy?

Ni- sach bolu i am very happy i got such great frnds

All smile

Sukku comes running

Ka-kya hua?

Suk-(phanting)woh rashi..

Kab-bol

Suk-rashi ko 15 days ke liye suspend kar diya hai

All- kya?

Suk-sach mein

All start dancing

kabir and nisha hug each other suddenly nisha feels an urge to kiss him and

nisha- thanks kabire !! I JUST.. I JUST LOVE YOU SOO MUCH and kisses him

all stop dancing looks at nisha but nisha and kabir are lost in their own dream world ...

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END OF PART 6

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Edited by Soundharya_01 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Update next part soon
Thanks for pm jo aayega 😆

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