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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

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lovely update...
saurav nibir ka mutual frnd..
I love nibir fights...
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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

CHAPTER-4b

S-ok ok ab bta breckfast kha rkha hai ??
N-oven mai rkha hai gram kr ke khale
she said thiss while adjusting her self on one of the dining chair
S-pehle yeh toh bta breckfast mai akhir hai kya ??
N(monolougue)-agar bkre bta diya toh bkra bhag jayega
N-bkre i mean bhai khud dekhle aur ha mujhe hedache ho rha hai toh mere liye coffee bna aur khood ke liye aur kabir ke liye bhi bnade
S-woh sab toh theek hai par tujhe hedache kyu ho rha hai ??
N-kabir bta de is gadhe ko
K-ok *to saurav* toh sun gadhe teri is one and only girl bestie ne kal drink kiya tha
saurav while interupting kabir
S*in hipper* -nishu tune kal drink kiya tha,par pehle toh tune kbhi drink nhi kiya,aunty ne kya kha,tune wine piya tha ya bear
kabir closed his mouth by keeping his hand
K-chup reh saurav ek dum chup reh itna bura react toh koi tv serial ki women bhi nhi krti hogi jitna bura tu react kr rha hai
nisha while interupting kabir
N-tu tv serial ke sas bahu wale serial dekhta hai
saurav giggled on what nisha had said
K-ahh mai tv serial nhi dekhta
saurav and nisha started laughing very badly and now kabir was iritated
N*while controling her laughter*-sorry sorry agar tu nhi dekhta toh tujhe kaise pta ki tv serial ki women kaise react krti hai
kabir was about to answer when saurav again interupted
S-ha bolna tujhe kaise pta
K-wo
S-ha ha bol hum sun rhe hai haina nishu bol kabir bol answer de
K-ha wo meri
S-ha age bol wo teri kaun
this time kabir was iritated
K-saurav chup kar mai tbse answer dene ki koshis kar rha hu aur tu hai ki bar bar interupt kiye ja rha hai ab interupt kiya toh samajh ja mai tera kya karunga
S-sorry ab bolega bhi ya hum samajh le ki tu...
kabir gave him a deadly glare and he kept finger on his lips
N-are use kya ghoor rha hai woh toh gdha hai tu bol
K-wo acttualy jab bhi shruti ghar ati thi toh woh dekh ti thi aur mujhe bhi uske sath majboori mai dekhna padta tha
this time nisha and saurav laughed out loud firstly kabir glare at both of them but after some 1to 2 seconds he also join them

after a great laughter season
N-kabir chal ab ise bta bhi de ki kal hua kya tha
S-ha btana kabir kya hua tha kal
kabir was about to say when again started his interupting sasion
S-ab bol bhi kya hua tha
K-saurav ab tune mujhe interupt kiya na toh mai tera sir phod doonga wobhi nariyal ki trah
S-ok sorry tu ab mai kuch nhi bolunga
K-great toh ab sun *he told him the whole incident of yesterday*
S*while laughing*-wow yaar what a co-insidense
N-bas ab bahut ho gya saurav ja jakr breckfast gram kr ke khale
S-ha ha ja rha hoon
K-ha ha ja na
S-kabir ja tere sath share nhi karoonga
he said his name and move towards oven and heat the breckfast
when saurav take out breckfast and remove the lid of box he souted very loudly for which nibir closed their ears
N-kyu chila rha hai
K-saurav aisa kya dekh liya ki tune itni tez chilaya ek minute khi tune breckfast toh nhi jla diya
N-saurav agr tune breckfast jla diya na toh tujhe whi jla hua breckfast khilaungi
S-nhi nhi maine breckfast nhi jlaya
nibir*in unision*-toh
S-kabir tu khud akr dekhle
kabir move towards saurav and saw the breckfast an started laughing
K*in mid of his laughter*-saurav beta tu toh gya aur ha mujhe koi intrest bhi nhi hai tere sath breckfast share krne ka
S-tu kya buttisi dikha rha hai mai nhi khaunga
N-tu bhi khayega aur tera yeh buttisi dikhane wala dost bhi khyega

ok guyz so here is part 4b an this time i want more comments and likes