U knw I thought I only had two stories of yours which was I was left to comment on and then suddenly somebody commented on this one and I realized that this one was also left😆😆Pata nahin kab tumhari stories mein mere saare comments unres honge😆
I m waiting for that day🤣
Chalo idhar udhar ki baatein bahut ho gayi, time to talk about your story😆
God I have to think so much before I even say something about ur stories Mansi😆
Bahut mehnat karni padti hai😆 I m always at a loss of words😳
Warning:Maine beautiful word bahut baar use kiya hai apne comment mein so sorry if u get bored😆
Also post limit ke kaaran kaafi cheezin quote nahin kar paayi hoon😆
Outstanding yaar👏👏👏
Such a heart rendering story❤️😳
Hayee So romantic and inspiring at the same time😳😳😳
Would like to applaud you on your writing style here cz I love the way the story begins😃😃 U do leave some hints here and there for the reader to take notice and ponder about and then u give the backstory😉 Brilliant technique👏👏👏
Loved how diligently Kabira takes care of Nishu😳
And then when Nisha asks about the Nibir waala promise, the tears in his eyes convey that he is hiding so much behind that smile😳
The way he went into panic mode seeing her not open the door and the relief on his face when he sees her fine, was beautifully portrayed👏 The way she reassures him and the moments after that were beautiful yaar😳
Love how cutely Nisha says that she will make coffee for him and she learnt how to make it by watching him make coffee for her😳
That entire part where they make the coffee together, drink it in the hammock, go for a drive, or spend time in the park was just so beautiful and adorable😳 Lovely indeed😃
And those last few lines where he wants to kiss her but restrains himself which convey his longing for her were indeed beautiful😳
then the flashback parts where Nibir are romancing were lovely and adorable😆 Nisha teasing Kabir😆😆 their makeout session☺️
loved d phone convo afterwards😳 It was cute and adorable😳
love how protective Kabir is of her 😳 he wants her to be on call the entire time she is driving😆such a caring husband
"no one is imp than u jaan.." - my fav line❤️
" m going to meeting... but m still here on call... ok... i will be listening to u" he said. "awww hubby i just wanna kiss u right now" she was overwhelmed. " control ur wild desires j wali wifey... will meet u soon... love" he chuckled.- How I love this part Nisha kya even I want to kiss him reading this😳😆
"kyu na karu... u r the most precious asset i have samjhi..." he said lovingly.- hayee😳 soo romantic
again his pain is described so well when he comes to knw about Nisha's accident and amnesia👏
his heart was saying that she wasn't his jaan.- so deep is their connection that he could sense it😳
She felt peace... an unknown glow inside her. She wasnt afraid of him but cannot recognise him either. " suno...mera haath chhod do" she managed. He looked up to see her looking at him with question. He quickly wiped his tears and left her hand- love this part😳 love how even though she doesnt knw him, she feels comfortable and nice in his presence😳
Absolutely love how Kabir decides to wait for Nisha to regain her memory and decides to not move on in his life ❤️ His love is sooo pure and deep na It takes a lot of courage indeed to take such a step😳
Also like how Ramesh decides to ask Kabir to move on in his life. Not all parents can do that and just shows how much Ramesh cares for Kabir😊
Every night she will come and sleep on her side while he will wait for her to go in a deep slumber. He would then take her in his arms and will sleep like that. Nisha never complained why he did that nor she felt it wrong. He had a hard time convincing her how her friend kabir is doing a job while she is still studying. But her faith in him was stronger than the logic and she would accept easily whatever he say. He can see her falling for him. Her actions her behaviour was all indicating towards her attraction to him. He was happy that finally she is not feeling like a foreigner with him but he still wanted his jaan... his nisha back. He was craving for her sweet threatens she used to give him. Living with her and still not with his wifey was an unbearable torchure for him but he was happy... happy to see her all healthy and good. - This part❤️ Love how she is so trusting and comfortable with him😳 and Kabir's patience and understanding and faith in their relationship just sooo mind-boggling yaar
Love how cutely Nisha asks him why he calls her jaan and how she is satisfied with his answer😳
He came out searching for her frantically calling out her name screaming on top of his voice. Here she was lost... lost in the crowd of people. She felt a tug at her heart and shouted his name searching for him. He saw her standing at a corner nad ran to her. She saw him standing in front of her and hugged him. She cried her her heart out clinging on his t-shirt while he held her close letting his tears fall.- Loved this part too😳painful yet beautiful😳 they are each other's lifeline ❤️
She slided her hand in his. "i luv dancing... only with u" she whispered making him froze.
"nishaa" he whispered. only she say that... is she back... is His jaan back...- Loved how ended d chapter in a cliffhanger😆 Interesting and nice technique👏😉
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
