Nibir my possiveness is not my weakness

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Hii guys miss my possiveness wali story yaad hai nahi yaad tho abhi tho yaad hogi na soo guys yeh hai full of possive kabir nd ek baat phele bol deti hoon mujhe pata nahi ki main yeh story ff hai ya ss ya ts jo bhi hai all abt r possive kabir nd poor nisha
Kabir was now a big choreographer he told dadji that i want to become choreographer in London nd dolly nd sumit where divorced bcz sumit treats dolly like a pet family separate them nd ask saurav to marry dolly nd they both got married nd vasu is very nyc mil (mother in law ) she accepted nisha as her daughter in law nd she do up down dubai to jaipur ...tomorrow kabir vl get best choreographer award soo there was preparation for party after all its nd big deal soo there was morning nd kabir was going to brush his teeth when he heard some ringtone of nishas ph nisha was buzy in cooking break fast kabir pic up ph frm table nd see caller id it was VIRAJ SIR (BB) kabir was lyk aagaya kabbab main haddi wala look but a thing strok his mind what means BB nisha cum to call kabir for breakfast nd saw he was with her ph
Nisha :kabir wo maine breakfast banaliya hai tho tu ...
She saw the caller id she quickly snatch ph frm kabir nd pick up nd go to next room kabir was shocked that nisha soo he followed her secretly

Nisha on ph
Ji haan main aap samjhne ki koshish tho kar saktain hain haan apne itne maheno tak intzaar kiya hai thoda aur sahi...hmm...hmmm ji haan main kal hi kabir ko wo suchaai bata dongi ...thank u viraj sir ..opps sorry bb bye

Kabir listed whole convo nd run into dinng table as if he dont know anything kabir in his mind

Kabir monologue :nisha viraj say itne aache say baat kyu kar rahi thi ...khain mere 3 months meri ger mojud gi main viraj ne nisha ko pehle hi propose tho nahi kiya ...aur nisha ne haan tho nahi kardi ...nahi isa thodi na hota hai haan hum log yeh shaadi as bestie mann te hain par ...khaain nisha mujh

Kabir in his dream world

It was beautifully decorated velvet lounge no1 was there accept kabir nd viraj nisha
Nisha was ready with knee length weith dress (same jo viraj ne aarti ko diya tha )

Viraj : miss nisha hum ap say bhout pyaar kartain hain hum jante hai ki aap bhi mujh say utna hi pyaar karte hain par miss nisha ap wo shaadi ko shaadi naho keh sakti wo ek samjhota hai jo bhout dino tak nahi chalega par hum apke sath puri zindgi betana chahtain hai (holding her hand ) miss nisha kya aap humari patni banegi (showing ring )

Nisha smile nd said yes nd viraj put ring on ring finger nd they both kiss each other with pure love

A/n(plzzz guys yeh sirf dream hai yaar mujhe samjh ne ki koshish karna ki it is alll about possessive kabir )

Kabir :nahiii (kabir screemed ) the worst dream broke

Kabir was swaeting badly he was seating on chair nisha cum runnig frm kichen

Nisha :kabir tujhe kya hua r u ok ...yeh le pani pee (giving him water )

Kabir hug nisha with full if force just like a smalll kid with teddy nisha was shocked kabir suddenly action

Nisha :kabir kya tujhe

Kabir cum to controll
Broke hug

Kabir : i m sorry wo main ...nisha ek bat puchon

Nisha :hmm puch na kabir

Kabir : tujhe mujhe say kuch kehna hai
Nisha without looking at him
Nisha : nahi tho kyun
Kabir understand something is fishy
Kabir :hmm
He left without eaating anything hia mind was repeating same questions ha can counsuntrate on hi work also so he take a off
7:36pm
When ge cum bck home to talk with nisha spend some quality time with her nisha was busy in gangwal shop kabir was taied soo he slept on sofa

At 9:55 pm

Kabir woke up nd see to the clock it was allmost 10pm nd nisha was not bck still he got worried about it he go to room to see her if she is there or not she was not there he go to balcony nd see down that a black car was stop near apartment nd a girl cum out of car it was nisha kabir was shocked but now he was super angry + shocked when he see viraj cum out of car nd nisha give a smil nd thanked him for lift
Nisha was cuming up kabirb go towards sofa nd his one lig was on his lap (boss style ) nd folded arms his mind was burning like microwave nd heart was like burner
Nisha opened door with extra keys
Nisha see kabirs angry face
Nisha : hi kabir kya hua itna gusse main kyun hai
Kabir:aree aap aagai madam oo ap tho thak gai hongi zara sherbaatLaoon are main kya puch raha hoon aap thodi na thakti hain jab aap kush hoti hain aur aap tho sirf kush unlogo say hoti hain jinsay aap pyaar karti hain

Nisha was like kya hogaya ise
Nisha : kabir tu yeh sab kya bol raha hain
Kabir tujhe kya hogaya

Kabir : Kabir kumar jisko kal award milne wala hai best student ka wo jisko log itni izzat detain hain uski biwi kisi aur ke sath deer raat ko ghum ti hai (his eyes was full of anger love nd tears)

Nisha was shocked
Nisha : dhek kabir tu ...tujhe galatfaami hui hai
ALMOST with tears

Kabir :galatfaami tho mujhe aaj tak hui thi ki tu wo kya naam hai wo directive pice ka haan yaad aaya viraj sing rathod apke pujh niye sir aur pwhla pyaar

Nisha : kabir dont cross ur limits ok dhek hum baithkaar bhi baat kar saktain hain

Kabir : ooo uske baare main kuch bola tho itna bora lag gaya maadam ko kyun kya lagta hai tumhara

Niaha : v r just friends
Kabir :aur hum dono
Nisha was having no answer she wanted to say that she always love kabir but dis tym was not ryt
Kabir : kyun koi jwaab nahi hai bol nisha humara rishta tho koi pati patni wala nahi hai tho phir
Nisha burst out crying nd started running but she was abt fall but kabir hold her in her arms
Nibir eye lock

Nisha see kabirs bleeding hand bcz he brok vase

Nisha :kabir tu pagal hai tujhe samjh main nahi aata kya itna gussa mat kiya kar *she started panicking
She brought 1st aid kit nd remove cotton
Kabir :nisha chode mera haat aur jo dard tu mujhe diya hai na uske smane yeh tho khrooch bhi nahi hai
Nisha requst him but kabir don't listen
Nisha take vase near her nd broke it nd stamp her hand on that prices kabir was like what the hell her
Kabir:tu pagal hai kya kyn itna dard sehn kar rahi hai de apna haat
Nisha nod no
Kabir : chup chap de
Nisha : nahi tu pehle mujhe apne haat pe bandage karne dega
Kabir have no choice he give his hand nisha started dressing
Nisha :kitna dard kar raha hoga na tu kisi ko sunta khaan hai jo mann main aaya wo bol diya gussa tho tere naakpe nachta hai (crying)
Kabir : aacha tho tune abhi jo kiya wo kyn apna haat ko thi dhek kitni bori tarah dard kar raha hoga par nahi thujhe tho zidd karni hai (tears)khaandan ka khoon hi zidddi hai
Nisha almost done dressing nd got up nd move in to badroom

Kabir :nisha yeh cheating hai tune bola tha ki tu bhi dressing karegi tho phir

Nisha turn bck nd
Nisha :kich zakaam bina dwaa ke hi aache hoteain kabir tu kabhi nahi samjhe ga
Nd move to bedroom
Kabir alone in hall
Kabir monologue : nisha ke uppar maine shak kiya wo tho sabsay zyaada mujhe pe vishwaas karti hain aur maine hi uske sath ...mujhe usse baat karni hogi use sorry bolna hoga yeh sab wo mental health viraj ke karan ho raha hai maine meri nishu pe shak kiya jaa kabire sorry bol de varna tandav hoga aur bichari ne apna haat ko chote puhchaai teri vajh say
Kabir got up nd move in the bed room nisha was sleeping like a broken heart
Kibir feel like 1000 knife scrabble in his heart he started dressing her hand
Kabir to himself
Kabir :kitna dard hora hoga main bhi na use bolne ka muka hi nahi diya na tu bhiut bada k tho tha hi ab tho selfish bhi ban gaya na i hate my self ...(crying) nisha main tujhe kal sab kuch bata donga yaar i love u soo much darr lagta hain ki tujhe khoona nahi chahta yaar i love u (kissing her forhead like rose petal softly bcz he dont want to disturb her sleep )
Nibir sleep holding each others hand

*next morning*
Kabir woke up nd see nisha was not on bed it was small pice of paper near lamp

Dear,
k hubby
Accha mujhe pata tha tu aaj bhi late uthega aaj apke hi success party hai abhi ja fresh hoja aur tere kapde maine nikal ke rakhe hain aur tera bread butter jam rakha hai table pe kha lena aur main venue pe kuch kaam tha isliye whaan gai hoon aur phir ghar jaungi kyn ki mujhe bhi ready hona hai hain na akhir the gr8 choreographer kabir kumar ki wife hoon ...see u in evening
Your J nisha


Kabir smile on her innocent
Kabir : nishu bhi na ek kaam karta hoon jaldi say ready hokar venue pe jata hoon
Chal kabir jaldi kar kabir got ready nd take his car keys nd move to venue
At venue it was big 7 star hotel helf decorated nd helf is left he asked manger abt nisha
Maneger:sir wo mam tho pehle hi nikal gai sara kaam samjha kar
Kabir : ok thank u

Kabir in the car

Kabir monologue :aree nisha pehle hi nikal gai chalo koi baat nahi mujhe bhi uske liye kuch gift lena chaiyey hmm let's start with flowers hmm it vl be best whaa kabir tu tho gr8 hai

He stop car near flower shop nd he saw a big flowers booke it was decorated with some lily nd soo many colours of rice nd some chocolate it was perfect taste of nisha kabir was happy that nisha vl love it

Kabir :excuse me mujhe yeh wala booke chaiyey

Shop keepar : ok sir it's off 1300

Kabir give money nd leave for his work

7:05



Gangwal house
Nisha was buzy that what to ware for party 1st tym she was thinking about ppl nd girlie stuff
Nisha was buzy to choose what to wear nd dolly enter
Dolly : nisha kua kar rahi hai ...kya hua

Nisha :dhekho na dolly di kuch nahi samjh raha kya pehno bolo na

Dolly was irritated nd then kirti enter nd she was looking like diva just like some celebrity

Dolly nd nisha mouth was open like O kirti confused now

Kirti :kya isa kya dhek rahe ho i know i m the best but phir bhi *attitude

Sukku nd umesh enter in room nd they have some reaction as nisha nd dolly have O mouth

sukku started lol

Sukku :kirti tu itna ready hokar khaan ja rahi hai

Kirti :how bhla i mean mere bil ki party hai nd whaan pe kitne sare big celebrity honge i have to look best na I mean hum bhi gangwal hain aur u know main kisi bhi celebrity ko you um tak kar de sakti hoon

Bunty : kirti dI app tho ise lag rahe ho jaise stage par apko kabir jiju ke sath jana hai award lene

Dolly : kuch bhi mat bol yaar bunty
Nisha : aree kabir sirf ...
Cousins together : tere sath Jane wala hai pata haI

All started lol



Hii guys phele baar kuch itna possiveness likh rahi hoon plz forget mistake heheheheheh ok guys plz koi ek dam possiveness nd suiteble for dis state nd full of love matlab nisha aur kabir ka dance je liye song ...ok plz jaldi bolna aaj raat ko update de dongi ...like .comment .like



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res 😊
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Nice concept 😊
Loved Kabir's possessive nature 😳
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
Edited by Black_Maniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow new story 😃
Possessive + Angry Kabiraa 😲
Very interesting concept. Plzzz continue soon. N thanx for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm update shanaya.soo intense and totally diff and supr interesting story.nibir in pain 😭 loved it to d core 😛 😛 update next jaldii 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start...waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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a very nice start.continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shats

Awsm update shanaya.soo intense and totally diff and supr interesting story.nibir in pain 😭 loved it to d core 😛 😛 update next jaldii 😃

Song tho suggestions de nd thank u soo much yaar rula yegi kya 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shanaya awesome one
aaj tak j kabir dekha tha aaj iss possessive kabir ko dekh ke bhi accha laga
u potraited the emotions beautifully
cont soon
riteku
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shanaya use could use that song from blood money i think yehi film ka naam tha
and the song was ki tera waqt pe teri rooh pe bas haq hai ek mera
srry ganne ka naam yaad nhi aa raha

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