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Shats

@Shats

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

1stly lemme dance [:D/] yeh ff hai dt means yeh continue zaroor hoga 😳
Amazing start sam
😳
Dialogues specially saurav and kabir waala 🤣 hilarious 😆
Ritesh 🤔 I hope jaldi kabir uski band bajade 😆
BTW kabir and ritesh saath me dekhne me oh sorry sorry parne me maza aayega 😆
Loved it 😉
Update soon 😉

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arshiss

@arshiss

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Annie👍🏼

I am waiting fr ritesh's entry😆

Do update soon..

Ps:update tmwy😊

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Nishtha

@naina.majik

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

mast story Annie

superb start

nibir 😳

Update sooon

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

annie extremly cute yaar

gangwals and rathores ki war and rishi uncle beech ke net

saurav khubhkaran

nibir talks and kiss

kabir forgot pipes

the gaurd was nice

waiting to see ki ritesh ka kya hota hai

thanks for the pm

come back soon

ritika

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Itsmeriya

@Itsmeriya

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Nice start 👍🏼
Loved Kabir and Saurav's dialogues 🤣
Continue soon 😊

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Awwee... Kitaaa cute hai
I am joining you in ypur sanyaas 😆

thankyou so much niyu.😃

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
kya start h baba... maza aa gya... par ye btao apne pt ko chhodke kha jaa rhe ho... mera kya hoga... 😔

thankyou so much mansi.😃

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
Superb start...Annie..baba..
The dialogues were as usual very innovative and hilarious...
The best part was u gave the intro very nicely..with good pace...the story wasn't slowed down for the sake of intro...kudos to u for doing it so nicely...
Excited for the next part...
Thanks for pm..

thankyou so much bhacha😃