Dil kyun ye mera shor kare||new|| nibir FF

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CHAPTER-1


Thuddd...'' came the sound, hearing which kirti , who was busy in her fashion magazine ,was startled..she almost jumped out of the bed due to fear. When two people closed her mouth with their hands.

Hooyyeee...miss.pixy...chilla mat...hum hain...said kabir and sauro.

What the hell...chodo mujhee...!!'shouted kirti.

Ohh...sorryyy...!!said kabir. Waise tune humee bulaaya kisliyee..?? nishuu theek to hain na...''said kabir walking towards nisha. He kept his hand on her forehead to check if she had fever.

Fever to nahi hain...phir kissliye bulaaya..?? asked kabir sitting beside nisha and caressing her hair.

Abhi abhi soyi hain...!!kitna ro rahi thi pata hain...??dadaji ne usko phone mein almost dhamka diya tha.''said kirti sitting on her bed.

Kyun...??kisliyee...??''asked kabir.

Wahiii puraanii baat kabirr...marriage...marriage...marriage...aur dadaji kahan kuch bolte hain...aur iss baar to hadd hi kardi daadu ne..!!''said kirti holding her head.

Yaar...singham ko nishuu se problem kya hain...??sirf usi ki shaadi karwaane pe kyun tulee hue hain wo..??aur koyi nahi hain kya puri family mein...?? aur singham ne iss baar kya kiya...??''asked kabir in frustration.

What do you mean...??hum sab shaadi ho jaani chahiye...?? Dekhoo nishuu mujhse poora ek week badi hain...so uss hisaab se to pehle usi ki honi chahiyee naa..!!'' n jahaan tak dolly di ki baat hain...unki to sauro ke saath fixed hain hi...jwalu ki tum baat hi mat karoo...to bacha kaun hain...nishu..!! so that's why daddu nishu ke peeche hain abhi..!!'' said kirti.

Kumbhkaran kahinkaa...dekhoo...apni shaadi dolly ke saath fix karaake kitnee chain se so raha hain..''he said pointing towards sauro who was sleeping leaning to dolly's bed.

Kabirr...thodaa dheere se bolo...warden aagayi naa...phir hum sab ki ekk hi saath shaadi karwa degii..!!''said kirti.

Warden ki to puch hi matt...abhi humaare hostel ke warden se almost pakdee gayee the hum...kaise bache hain sirf main aur sauro hi jaante hain. Achcha tu bataa rahi thi ki singham ne kya kiya...???''asked kabir.

Kabirr...bht badii problem ho gayi hain yaar...daddu us ladke ko kal yahan bhejne waale hain nishu se milne...koyi NRI hain...abhi abhi Newyork se waapas aaya hain... maybe wo bhi humaare saath humaare college mein join honee waala hain...bht badaa panga ho jaayega kabir..!!''said kirti biting her nails in fear.

Aane do uskoo ...hum bhi dekhtee hain...kaise tiktaa hain wo college mein...!!''said kabir.waise tunee uskaa naam kya bataya..??'

Something...kuchhh...r..se hain...rithwik...rishant...rahul...rohan...''kirti blabbered these names as she tried to remember the real one.

Aaaeee...miss.pixy...ye tu kyaa apnee boyfriends ke naam bataa rahi hain hain...uska kya name ho jo kal aane waala hain...??asked kabir.

r...r...Riteish ...haan yaad aaya...riteish...uska surname yaad nahi...!!''said kirti...n main apne boyfriends ko yaad nahi kar rahi samjhee...?? Aur na hi ye boyfriends hain..!!''continued she.

Okaayyy...whatever...uski to kal main band bajaunga...abhi main chalta hun...tu sojaa...n nishu ka dhyaan rakhnaa...he said kissing nisha's forehead.

Yeaahh...theek hain...agar tujhmee itnii hi himmat hain..??to tu gharwaalon ko sab kuch tere aur nishaa ke baare mein bata kyun nahi detaa..?? phir tum dono free ho jaaoge inn problems se..!!''said kirti.

Agar kar saktaa...to bht pehlee kar chukaa hotaa...lekin jo wahaan gangwal family aur rathore family ke beech sadiyon puraani war chal rahi hain na...usko roknaa na mere bas ki baat hain...na kisi aur ki...wo tab tak nahi rokaa jaa sakta jab tak hum koyi masterplan nahi banaate...''said kabir.

Yeahh...teen saal pehle tak to humaaree beech mein bhi kitni jung chidi hui rehti thi humeshaa...ekk hi college mein aaye phirr jaake kuch theek hua...waise maannna padegaa rishi uncle ko...dono families ke dost hone ki wajah se kitni buri tarah phase hain unhe hi pata hain...unke bte saurav ki shaadi gangwal family mein...n daughter kaira ki shaadi tere bhai ke saath. Tennis court ka net ban gayee hain wo, ekk wrong shot n ball jaake unhe hi lagti hain.' Said kirti n giggled.

Haannn...mere aur nishaa ko milwaane ke peeche bhi unhi ka to haath thaa...ab kuch hua na...rishi uncle ko latka denge dono families, said kabir and giggled. chaloo ab main jaata hun...sojaa aaram se tub hi.'said kabir.

As kabir got up...nishaa slowly opened her eyes, and looked at the person who stood before her...wearing his slippers.

Kabirrr...tu...itnii raat ko ...??? Yahan...??'' asked nisha. Teri tabiyat to theek hain na..??'

Kabir looked towards her..aree nishuu tu uthi kyun...??sojaa...main bas jaa hi raha hun...bas yuhin terese milne aaya tha..! he said and kissed her forehead again.

Nishaa just pulled him towards her holding his shirt ...and hugged him tight..and started sobbing.

Nisha: kabirr...daadu meri shaadi karaadenge kabirr...mujhe nahii karnii...please kuch kar na..!!''

Shhh...shhh...nishuu shaant hojaa...main jaanta hun ...main sab kuch jaanta hun...he said caressing her hair.

Saurav who was disturbed by the sobbing and talking noises...talked in between.

Abbeee oyyee ...kabirr...tunee mere bestfriend ko kaise se kaisa banaa diyaa hain yaar...achcha khaasa ladkaa thaa...kya tunee ladki banaa diya...khamakhaa..'' said saurav cribbing in his sleep until he got a hard blow on his face by nisha...nisha threw a book on him in anger.

Oyeee...nishaa ki bachchi...kyun maarti hain yaar itna... zara bhi mujhpee taras nahi aata..??'' said saurav. Wo dekh jo tere bagal mein baith ke daant phaad raha hain apnee...usko maar na...wo to ready baitha hain..!!' continued he.

Oyee...bas bas...mujhe kyun beechme phasa raha hain yaar...nishu mujhe bhi maarti hain...and bht maarti hain...and jitna tujhe padhte hain na use kayi gunaa zyaada mujhee padhte hain..'' said kabir.

Achcha to main tujhee maarti hun...??? Wo to main tujhe issliyee maarti hun kyunki tu apni k waali harkatee kahin pe bhi shuru kardetaa hain...gadhaa.'' Said nisha.

K waali harkatee...?? Maine kaunsi k waali harkatee ki..??'' asked kabir smirking.

Kabirr...tu...mujhse panga matlee samjhaa...mai...before she could complete, he pulled her into a passionate kiss. Nisha tried protesting...but later she too reciprocated with it. She just pushed kabir off. And checked here and there if anyone had seen them, sauro had already slept, and kirti was turning the other way.

Kya hain tu...paagal kahinka...!!''yelled nisha at him.

Achcha ...achhchaa...main jaata hun...kal subah miltee hain...uss kamine ki band bajaane keliye koyi plan banayenge...''said kabir running from there.

Abee rukk iss sauro ko to lejaa...!!??''asked nisha.

Woo ...kumbhkaran ka bhi chacha hain...wo abhi nahi uthegaa...tu usko bed ke neeche dhakeldee...kal subah wo uthke apne aap hi aajayega...''said kabir giggling.

Kabir directly jumped out of the window, in a hurry, he forgot about the pipes.

Ouuchhh...'shouted he as he fell on the ground.

Kabirr tu theek to hain na...?? asked nishaa.

Haan...haan ...nishaa...wo to kal subah hi pata chalegaa...he was about to run, when he heard the security guard scream at him.

Oyee rukk...'' stopped the security guard.

Gayee mere 500 phirse...he muttered under his breath.

Kya kar rahe ho tum yahan...itni raat ko...??phirse garden mein ghumne aaye ho..?? asked the guard smirking.

Kabir just pulled out a 500 rupees note and gave it to the guard.

Nahii chahiyee mujhee...pyaar ka dushman nahi hun main...ki humeshaa commission khaata rahun...''said the security guard and giggled.

Kabir whose head was down due to embarrassment , looked up at the security guard with a cheeky smile.

Sachchi...??

Haan sachchi..!!'said the guard. Chaloo jaao ab..!!

Kabir ran from there...not looking back. All this was witnessed by nisha...she laughed holding her stomach...and hoped good for the next day.

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if anyone has any problem, with my stories, please talk to me first and do not report them directly.

another new story, i know many are pending, but idea jab aaye tab usee use karlenaa chahiyee..!!😆

hope you like it...i am going on a sanyaas for a few days..TATA..!!

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Sudiksha10 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mast mast story Annie
Awsum start I was rofling
S- Daant phaad rhaa apne 🤣
Kumbhkaran kaa chachaaa lol
Waah kabir ne to security guard tk ko pata liyaaa🤣
Nishu se maar khataa h kabiraa heheheheheh

Update sooon and pm me



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou sudiksha...I sent you buddy request...accept that please...so that I am able to send you PMS.
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

Thankyou sudiksha...I sent you buddy request...accept that please...so that I am able to send you PMS.

Done
Call me sudi tym energy dono bach jaengee and baki stories k bhi pm bhej dena
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwee... Kitaaa cute hai
I am joining you in ypur sanyaas 😆
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kya start h baba... maza aa gya... par ye btao apne pt ko chhodke kha jaa rhe ho... mera kya hoga... 😔
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Awwee... Kitaaa cute hai

I am joining you in ypur sanyaas 😆

😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start...Annie..baba..
The dialogues were as usual very innovative and hilarious...
The best part was u gave the intro very nicely..with good pace...the story wasn't slowed down for the sake of intro...kudos to u for doing it so nicely...
Excited for the next part...
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start annie continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start Annie baba👍🏼
par aap sanyaas pe kyun jaa rahe ho?😒

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