~NiBir FF - Shandaar~ Teaser Updated *31/1* - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start yaar!! Continue soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

nice start krishi

Pm me when u update


Thanks.. I will 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

continue soon Krishi😃


I will Shibu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: itznimi003

interesting prologue😊

dosa wedding❤️
continue soon😊


Thanks... I will update as soon as possible 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Sabse Pehle Krish🤔 Lemme Complain🤣

Mujhe PM nahi mila...🥺 Nahi Mila...🥺 nahi Milaa...🥺 Tu mujhe bhool gayi nah?🤣

Aisa q kiya ???💔🤔🤣

Now coming to ur Intro part😉 I knw U well nah😉🤣 & I have Given U UNIQUE name also "KRISH"😆🤣 So Mere liye No Intro of U🤣 U r familiar🤗 Phir bhi tune mujhe PM nahi bheja🤣 Very Bad...🤣

Now coming to ur FF😉

My First Reaction when I saw ur post on Main Forum😲 Ailaa Is it Krish??? Den When I read ur Title I was like🥳 new NiBir FF A big Jhappi 4 Ur decision of starting new story🤗
Thank U 4 Giving us oppourtunity to read ur Work😳

Now abt Prologue😳

I like dur idea of nt giving CS👏👏👏

So DoSa Wedding😉 & NiBir meeting must happen there nahhh

Kabira Dont Believe in Destiny😛 Ahaa.. I m sure Destiny wl make him Fall in love with Nishu😳

Continue soon😃

DO PM ME WHENEVER U UPDATE😎 Samjhi... Ya Samjhavu???😈


Your complaint has been registered... It will reach our head office soon and you will be reverted within a few seconds 😆
Well Saru I wanted to PM you but I also wanted genuine readers for the FF... Iss liye maine PM nahi bheja... I will do that for the next update for sure 😃
And ofcourse you know me but not everyone does toh that was general intro post... Duniya ko pata hona chahiye kiska FF read kar rahe hain na...
Saru not you but I should thank you all for reading as well as commenting here 😳
Jahan tak NiBir meeting ki baat hai leave that to me... You will like it for sure par you will also have to wait a little 😆

I'll surely PM you.. Samajh gayi main 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naucfan

awesome prologue yaar n pls will u buddy me dear...


Thanks... 😳
I have sent the request... Now you have to accept it 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Awesome start yaar!! Continue soon!!


Thanks... I will 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

awsum prologue.continue soon


Thanks... I will update in some time 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys... I am so sorry... I wanted to update today but pura Chapter ready nahi hua isliye maine socha update 2 parts main kar lu... I am so sorry... Pakka kal next half mil jayega... Please bear with me... And yes Page 1 par PM List hai... If you want your name to be added/removed do tell me.. Now no more bakwaas and over to the update... Happy Reading 😊

Chapter 1 - Milenge Milenge (a)

Kabir was getting ready to go to his studio when his phone rang. It was Saurav's call.

"Hi" Kabir said while he plopped down on the bed.

"Ready?" Saurav asked him with excitement.

"Saurav abhi 3 hours hai flight ke liye. Itna excited mat ho... Teri shaadi hone waali hai" Kabir somewhere still was not happy with his friend getting married.

"Mujhe pata hai tu akela nahi rehna chahta, tu mujhse bohot pyaar karta hai na... Isliye mere paas ek idea hai."

"Kya?" Kabir jumped up in excitement from the bed.

"Oye... Kahin sach main tu mujhse..."

"Shut up Saurav... Main toh sirf teri shaadi avoid karna chahta hun... Mujhe studio se leave nahi lena.."

"Main shaadi nahi akelapan avoid karne ke idea ki baat kar raha tha..."

"Accha woh toh bata..."

"Teri aur meri shaadi ek hi din par kar lete hai" Saurav started laughing while Kabir shouted "Chup chap phone rakh... 1 ghante main studio ke bahar aa jana Isha aur Raj ko lekar..."

"Ok sorry sorry baba... Meet you after 1 hour..."

Saurav disconnected the call while Kabir left for the studio.

***

It had been decided that Saurav, Kabir, Raj (Saurav's brother) and Isha (Kabir's sister) will come 15 days prior to the wedding so that Saurav can know the family better and vice-versa.

Sukku was told by Daadaji to pick up the guests from the airport but at the last moment he ran down with high fever.

"Nishu Bro aap jao na Jiju aur baaki sab ko laane... " Jwala suggested.

"Jwalu main..." Nisha tried declining but was interrupted by Dolly -
"Haan... Nishu hi jaegi Saurav aur sabko pick karne ke liye... Aur fir Umesh Bhaiya, Aman aur Shrey bhi toh tabhi aaenge... Please Nishu tu waise bhi saari shaadi ki arrangements kar rahi hai na toh dulhe ke aane ki arrangements bhi tujhe karni chahiye.."

"Di maine toh kar di par Sukku..."

"Jo ho gaya woh ho gaya... Abh jaa aur lekar aa unhe..."

"Ab Dolly Di itne excited hai toh main mana kaise karu..." Nisha teased Dolly while Dolly blushed.

Nisha got ready and left for the airport early as it was a four-hour drive.

***

Saurav, Isha and Raj were waiting for Kabir for the past few minutes...

"Kabir kitna late kar raha hai... Flight agar miss ho gayi toh main pakka uski shaadi karva dunga..." Saurav hissed as he continuously looked at his watch..

"Aa gaye bhai..." Isha exclaimed

Saurav rushed to him "Kahan tha tu?"

"Arey woh leave application sign karvana tha aur Ricky thoda busy tha isliye late ho gaya... Ab chal nahi toh flight miss ho jaegi..." Kabir rushed and sat in the car...

"Isse kya ho gaya?" Saurav wondered.

***

I hope the update was not very bad...
B part will be updated tomorrow... Sorry for that but kya karu thoda Homework extra mile hai 😆

Do Comment how the chapter was... Even criticism will be appreciated...
Edited by Black_Maniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1 - Milenge Milenge (b)

Kabir woke up when he heard Saurav's phone ring for almost the 50th time.

"Saurav you have a call... Phone utha..."

Saurav just moved a bit and slept again.

"Arey yaar.. Mujhe hi uthana padega..."

He reaches for the phone and sees the caller ID... "Unknown number hai... Kiska ho sakta hai?"

"Hello?"

"Hello Jiju!" A girl spoke on the other side.

The voice made Kabir brush off all the sleepiness he was feeling. It was a sweet as well as curtly voice. Another "Hello" from her made him come back to senses...
"Hey!"

"Saurav Jiju?"

"Saurav is sleeping... May I know who is it..." Kabir asked as politely he could but received no answer... He checked the phone and found its battery dead.

Kabir went all hyper... He wanted to talk to the girl... He did not know why but he felt some connection with her... He shook Saurav vigorously but he did not even open his eyes once.
Raj and Isha were travelling in the other class as they could not get tickets in the same one.

"Yaar... Kaise phone karu usse main firse... Wait a minute... Why am I even thinking of talking to a girl with such interest... Focus Kabira..."

***

Nisha was more than frustrated by now. Is it a way to treat people? Nisha had called so many times already till someone finally bothered to pick up and when they did the guy on the other side just cut it in the middle of the conversation. Nisha had tried the number for the gazillionth time and heard the same "The number you are trying to call is currently switch off" in form of answer.

"Is their flight late or something..." Nisha tried thinking of a way to find out. Maybe I can check where they have the information desk here. She started looking for anything that could help her understand where her guests were.

***

Kabir looked around the flight. There was no sign of any air hostess or stewards. Finally he spotted an air hostess coming put from the Economy Class.

"Excuse me!" Kabir called out to her..

"Yes sir... How may I help you?" The lady was very polite.

"Actually I think the flight is late... Isn't it?"

"It is sir... I guess you missed the announcement... Due to bad weather the flight will be late by almost 2 hours"

"Oh... I guess I slept through the announcement..." Kabir smiled sheepishly...

The air-hostess smiled back at him and left but Kabir was sure he heard her giggle.

"Uh... Guess Saurav has to waiit to meet his In-Laws.."

***

Finally after wandering around for a few minutes Nisha found the information desk.

"Excuse me... Umm... Can I know about the flight from Mumbai to Jaipur?"

"Yes Ma'am... The flight is delayed by 2 hours due to some bad weather conditions... We're sorry for the inconvenience caused by us..."

"It's ok... I ain't very excited to meet the guests..."

Nisha decided to get back in the car... Dolly Di had packed some snacks though they weren't for her but what can she do? The guests' mistake...

She munched some snacks and did not know when she drifted back to sleep...

***

Okie... So I am done with Chap 1 totally... Now I'll update the Chapter 2 where NiBir will finally meet... So isn't it going to be a Dussehra Special update? Wait for it... Sabr ka fal NiBir hota hai... 🤣 (Me and my not-so-funny jokes 😆 )

Anyways do tell how the update was...
Comment and likes required for encouragement...
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Edited by Black_Maniac - 10 years ago

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