Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Aaj toh tumhari lottery lag gayi Lily😆😆
Do do comment ek hi din mein woh bhi res queen se😆🤣
Chapter 2- Fabulous update yaar👏👏👏
I absolutely love ur writing style😳
Tumhare updates zyaada lambe nahin hote magar tum bade hi crisp tareeke se har cheez bayaan kar deti hun through ur writing👏👏👍🏼
The evening had already covered the starry city in its dark starry blanket. Kabir had been walking the roads of Mumbai since his arrival in the morning, carrying his green-black backpack around. He could not find any place to stay. Either they were too expensive or too uncomfortable. Nobody had extra time to negotiate with pure strangers. Indeed a busy city Mumbai was! Well, at least he had a nice wholesome lunch at a dhaba.- Your description was so on point 👍🏼👏👏Loved the way u conveyed the vibe the city gave !
The telephonic conversation with Dolly, his cousin, took him into a nostalgic stride. For him, she was like a second mother since childhood. Whenever his mom was busy in earning their livelihood, she took care of Kabir like her own kid, even though she was only two years elder. Rajbir never supported them financially and also charged them 50% room rent for staying at his place.- I love it how in just 4 lines u r able to explain Kabir's relation with Rajbir and Dolly so well👍🏼😆
Loved the bond shared by Dolly-Kabir😳 M happy atleast someone in that family cares for our Kabir😳
Kabir was enraged at the mention of his dead mother from Rajbir as if she was something to bet on. But instead of losing his head and to make Rajbir lose his for a change, he continued the cold war of words and replied calmly.- loved this part😆 Kabir is smart😆😉
The old man bursted, like a safety valve of a pressure cooker bursts when it gets blocked. Dolly intervened while her parents - Mohan and Rupan - came out at the entrance. Kabir was still drenched; his clothes, his eyes and his thoughts- Loved this part especially the last line👍🏼👏 U have penned down Kabir's state so well👍🏼
His chain of thoughts got interrupted when a slim, petite girl in her early twenties came running from a distance by his side and pushed him accidentally. He looked at her side. She was wearing a white ladies shirt and a jeans blue waistcoat, teamed with black jeggings. She was carrying a purple gift wrapped box. She glanced backwards at him, mouthed a sorry and left like a gust of wind. Her shiny open hair, black eyes and warm innocent smile made Kabir smile for the first time in two days.- Aaye hayye 😳 Nibir meeting😃 Loved it ❤️ Especially the last line
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