NiBir FF: It was REVENGE..till I fell in LOVE (Part 4 up!,pg-20 18/12)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Very nice concept. Continue soon.

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mika17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Thnku for the pm Lily

Dat was a interesting start to ur story

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Lily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: itznimi003
Hey lilly 😊
welcm back dear😉

i love d title of yr first ff it is amazing...😊 and something different😉

Now coming to ur update😊

love d beginning d way u gave description about station😊 it was superb👍🏼

kabir ki mom ki death ho gyi😔 kabir k nanu😈

koi itna rude kaise ho sakta h yr😈

par mujhe aisa kyu lag ra ki wo apne nanu ki khoi hui respect wapis lane k liye gangwals se revenge lega😉

update soon n plz unfold dis mystery😉

Thank you Nimo...😳

@bold - You need to wait for the rest of the story to verify that😆

updating shortly...😊

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Lily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ammu4u
very intrstng lily
eagerly waitng 4 d update

Thank you Ammu...Glad you liked it...😊

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Lily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98
Very nice concept. Continue soon.

Originally posted by: mika17
Thnku for the pm Lily
Dat was a interesting start to ur story

Thank you Roopsha and Mika...😊

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Lily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
update dedo pls 😳

Aww...😳

Updating shortly...😉

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Nimisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Thank you Nimo...😳
@bold - You need to wait for the rest of the story to verify that😆

updating shortly...😊

i will wait dear😉

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Lily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

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Saranya Senan M C

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Lissy👏👏👏 Superb update👍🏼

Kabir vo dhabe mein jo family ko dekha aur voh ghar wali baath socha nah mujhe vo part acha lga👍🏼 I liked the way U connected dat small scene with his present scenario😛

Rajbir's words towards Kabir too harsh🤔@BOLD well said👏👏👏

A person does not belong to a place, but to the people, his family...

Well Dolly-Kabir bonding

Rupan & Mohan still in their characters like dat in show.. 😊 Rupan thinking abt his daughter's future & Mohan standing like Statue🤢

Finally our Kabira smiled😃 aur vo bhi Nishu ki wajah se😳

Hehehe😆 I can guess Nishu hi hai voh Ladki jo destiny ki wajh se anjaan se takarayi taaki zindangi mein baar baar jaan boochkar takara sake🤣🤣🤣

Waiting 4 NiBir's meeting.. with proper Intro🤣 jo I m sure wll b filled with K & J nk jhoks 🤣

Thanks 4 PM 🤣

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago