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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing update. 👏
Nishu ka dance to awesome tha 😉
NIBIR hug 😳
Waiting for the nxt perfomance jo sayad NIBIR ka hai 😉 😳
Update nxt part soon & thanx for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Dancing Soul



Dance is the hidden language
of the soul of the body - Martha Graham

Part 6:


The event was successful. Everyone was elated. Mrs. Kumar organised a small get together for the success of the event. Everyone talked about the event, how they felt, about people's response and many more things. Nisha told how she was so afraid before her performance and everything turned out to be the perfect. Kabir was quiet. It appeared he was physically present there but his mind was somewhere else. After everyone was done, Kabir offered to drop Nisha home. Nisha agreed.

Kabir took Nisha out in a park.It was night so noone was there.The breeze had made it a bit cold.Nisha and Kabir were walking.Noone was saying anything.Nisha looked around, she observered the moon,the stars everything but not Kabir.

Nisha: (thinking)Hey Bappa...ab ye kuch bolega bhi ya hum dono bs park mein ghumte reh jayenge. Kuch to kijiye na...Bappa...please...

Kabir: (thinking)Yaar ab to bol de.Aise ghumte ghumte hi kahin waqt na nikal jae aur pata chala
ek din Nisha apne boyfriend se milane tujhe yahan bulaye.Nhi...
Nisha: Kabir,hum yahan iss waqt kya kr rahe hain?

Kabir: Walk...

Nisha: Walk??? Pr hume to abhi sabke sath hona chahiye tha na?

Kabir: Haan...hona to chahiye tha...pr mujhe bheer pasand nhi isliye...(nervously)

Nisha: Sab thik hai na...you seem to be a bit nervous. Programme to ho gaya ab kyun nervous ho?

Kabir: Programme hi to hai jo mujhe nervous kr raha hai.

Nisha: Kya??

Kabir: Wo kuch nhi...bs aise hi...

Nisha: Mujhe neend aa rahi hai and i am tired.Mujhe ghar jana hai.

Kabir: Ghar...itni jaldi...

Nisha: Kya jaldi...kitni tired hun.Chalo...

With this Nisha starts walking out of the park.
Kabir: Jaldi kuch kr...nhi to wo chali jayegi.

Suddenly Nisha hears...

'Lafzon mein keh naa sakoon,
Bin keh bhi reh naa sakoon'

She turns back to find Kabir singing.She smiles quite surprised.

Nisha: To the great K can sing also...I never knew...Continue na...

Nasha hi nasha raat din hai
Na pooncho yeh kaisa pyar hai

Kabir takes a pause. Nisha smiles looking towards him. He feels awkward.
He continues...

Lafzon mein keh naa sakoon
Bin keh bhi reh naa sakoon

It starts drizzling. Nisha looks towards the sky,opening her arms.
Kabir continues...

Halki si barsaat mein
Pehli mulakat mein
Pehli baar mein

He remembers the first meeting.He smiles.

Dil ko mere le gayi
Chaahat ke iqraar mein
Anjaana ghum de gayi

He remembers when he turned her around and had seen her face for the first time.

Aayee jab saamne
Jaane kya woh kar gayi
Paagal mujhko kar gayi
Jaaneman Jaanejaan

Nisha moves her hand infront of him and gestures asking him,where he is lost.
Kabir nods in negative smiling and continues..

'Na jaane kya baat hai
Lage ke din mein raat hai'
Nayee hai subah to nayee shaam
Ajab haal mera yaar hai
Lafzon mein keh naa sakoon
Bin keh bhi reh naa sakoon

Kabir looks towards her.He smiles seeing how she is enjoying the rain.Nisha teases Kabir asking him about his love.He smiles and continues...

Mera dil,meri jaan
Main yahaan,tu hai kahaan
Main dekhu mudke jidhar
Aaye mujhe tu nazar

Nisha laughs and gestures that Kabir has gone mad in love.

Kehti hai chaahate
Deewana main ho gaya
Teri chaahat mein sanam
Naa jaane kab kho gaya
Yeh kaisa hai asar
Mujhko naa itni khabar
Kab jaaga kab so gaya
Jaaneman Jaanejaan

Nisha and Kabir smile together.

'Lafzon mein keh naa sakoon,
Bin keh bhi reh naa sakoon'
Nasha hi nasha raat din hai
Na pooncho yeh kaisa pyar hai
'Lafzon mein keh naa sakoon
Bin keh bhi reh naa sakoon'

Nisha: So...

Kabir: So what???

Nisha: Kaun hai wo?

Kabir: Kaun...

Nisha: Kaun kya...batao na...

Kabir: uff Nisha...tum bhi na...

Nisha: Ab batao bhi na...please

Kabir: Aisa kuch nhi hai.

Nisha: You are blushing Kabir...ab to batana hi padega...please na...pleaseee...

Kabir: Nisha tum...

Nisha:Tum kya...batao na...

Kabir:(smiles) nhi bataonga...dikhaunga...

Nisha: Photo...wowww...jaldi...

Kabir takes Nisha's wallet from her hand and opens it.He shows her the mirror.Nisha surprisingly
holds the wallet and sees her own face.She starts blushing.As she raises her head to see Kabir,she finds him on his knees...

Kabir: I love you,Nisha. Will you be mine...(he forwards his hand)

Nisha blushed and nodded her head in agreement.Kabir happily screamed I love You...I love you so much...
He hugged her.After some time,they sat on a bench...
Kabir took out a band from his pocket and tied it on Nisha's wrist.Nisha saw it...It was beautifully written "NIBIR". She smiled and thanked him for everything and for being with her everytime.




The END...

P.S.

The words in italic are from the song Lafzon Mein.

Index will be updated by Black_Angel later.

~ANJALI~
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Please leave your Precious comments .
Sorry for typo errors.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello everyone😊

Thanks to all those who liked and commented. 🤗
It was supposed to be a college story but it turned out to be a dance story.😆
Sorry if it was disappointing.
This was my first story on this forum.The idea was planted by Meera aka Black_Angel.There were issues regarding pm. We are sorry for that.
At last something from Black_Angel 😊





Thank you 🤗
Edited by Angel_Arya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
a beautiful story n a beautiful end.
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Posted: 9 years ago
a beautiful ending to the story
loved it
plz write more 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome👍🏼
just love the way he confessed his love😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow yaar anjali such a cuite proposal
read part 4 to 6 together
luved all d parts
superb song selections
luved d way u described d performnce
and that Band with Nibir written👍🏼
do write more
thnx 4 d pm and sorry 4 d late comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
Soory guys 4 being inactive 😭
And not sending pm's & updating Index 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read part 5C & 6 together 😊


Luved both the parts 😳


NIBIR dance in 5C was mindblowing 😳


NIBIR confession was so romantic 😳


Beautiful end 😊


Will miss the story 😭


Thanx for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

a beautiful story n a beautiful end.
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Thanks Shruti 😊

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