NIBIR SS - Milenge Milenge (21/02) (PAGE - 64) COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👏
continue soon😊

thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
🤣 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ammu4u

nishi 🤗

thnk u so much 4 writing dis yaar
its too good..just loved d starting ab waitng 4 d nxt update
update soon

thanks ammu 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
res
unres
sorry for late comment nishi
yay u started a new story
awesome start to the story
loved the way u described nibir's pain
I hope vo jaldi hi mile
update soon
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

res
unres
sorry for late comment nishi
yay u started a new story
awesome start to the story
loved the way u described nibir's pain
I hope vo jaldi hi mile
update soon

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
(Assume - vasu ne kabir ko ye bataya hai ki nisha uske jate hi KNH chod k GN chali gyi hai )

PART 2

Gangwal house scene

Nisha n cousins terrace pe...


Umesh - Nishu tujhe London jana hi hoga...(order karte hue)


Sukku - Ek bar kabir se milke bat kar k to dekh...


Dolly- Nishu hum sab ne jo faisla kiya h tujhe wo manna hi hoga..hum sab jante h ki kabir tujhse pyaar karta hai..


Saurav-ha nishu tum dono m koi to misunderstanding hui h.


Umesh-nishu hum sab tera accha hi chahte hai..tu hamari bat manle...

Hotel scene


Kabir hotel room m

Kabir-(apne phone m nisha k pictures dekhte hue) tujhe mere sath rehna itna kharab lagta tha ... K mere jate hi tu hamara ghar chod k apne ghar chali gyi... (sad)

Gangwal house


Terrace scene..

Nisha ka phone ring karta hai...


Dolly- kiska phone h ??


Nisha- (apna mobile dolly ko dikhate hue)(irritated)


Dolly- viraj ?? (annoyed)


Nisha-ye mujhe akela kyu nhi chod dete(angrily)


Suketu-tu mujhe phone de (angrily...irritated)


Nisha- nhi... Mai bat karti hu.. Hello... Phone kyu kiya h ?? (angrily)


Viraj- Miss Nisha aap theek to hai ?? (concerned)


Nisha- (irritated) Ha.. Mai theek hu... Mai phone rakkhu..


Viraj-(miss nisha hum aapki khushi chahte h.. Par khi us khushi k chakkar m hamse kuch galati to nhi ho gyi) ok miss nisha.


Nisha -(phone cut kar deti hai)


Nisha- tum logo ko jo theek lage wo karo..(tensed...confused)


Saurav- nishu hum sab tere sath h hamesha... (Group hug)

Nisha- chalo ab mai chalti hu...


Saurav- aa yhi ruk ja ...


Nisha- nhi saurav..mujhe mere ghar m kabir pas hone ka ehsas hota h .(sad)

Kabir gangwal house k bahar ek pillar k piche chip k..

Kabir-(Nisha ek bar balcony m aja.. Dekhna chahta hu tujhe.. Tu kaisi h.. Khush h ki nhi..pls ek bar )

Nisha gangwal house se bahar nikalte hue..

Kabir-(nisha... Itni raat ko kahan ja rhi h..?)

Nisha dheere dheere chalte hue age badhati hai...


Saurav-(piche se nisha ko aawaz deta hai) Nishu...


Nisha-(piche mud k) kya hua ??


Saurav- tera jacket..


Nisha-(jhat se saurav k hath se jacket lete hue) thanks.. Iske alava mere pas aur h hi kya (sad)


Saurav- don't worry sab theek ho jayega.


Nisha- chal m chalti hu.


Saurav- mai bhi chal rha hu... Waise accha rehta agar tu yaha hi ruk jati..


Nisha- nhi saurav.. Mujhe mere ghar m hi accha lagta h.

Kabir-(saurav aur nisha k sari batein sun leta h) ye to mera jacket h... Aur nisha to hamare ghar pe hi rah rhi h to fir maa ne ye kyu kha k nisha mere jate hi gangwal house chali gyi ?? (Confused)



hope you guys like it

waiting for ur likes n comments...😊

Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Nishi🤗 I ❤️ U yaaraa😛

Congo Shongo 4 ur 501th Post🥳

Waise Main Surprised nahi hu iss new stry ko dekhakr😛 U knw nah y 😉🤣

I love ur CVSCD 😆🤣 jiski wajah se humein har track ka logical end mil rahe hai..🥳

Thank U 4 writing NiBir story dat too in My fav HINDI mein I told U b4 I love U extra 4 this😳

Thank U 4 RES ng 4 ME🤗

Sorry 4 late comments😳 Thank u 4 ur patience😳

Read Both Parts in a row😳

Part 1:😳

First Spl clap 4 the title👏👏👏 PERFECT 4 the Track👍🏼

Superb ly penned down...👏👏👏 NiBir's state of mind Well said...👏👏👏

Dakkan Kabira🤣 Bade aaye Nishu ko khushi dene😡 aree daffar uski khushi tu hai😆

Kab Samjhega tu yeh???😡🤣

Part 2:😳

Felt Sad 4 Nishu🤔

Finally Kabira ko VJ ka jhoot samaj mein aa gay...Ab toh aankhein Khol Kabire🤓

Kash CV's bhi aisa kuch dikha detha vo BEWAJAH dragging ke place par😡🤢

Thank U Nishi🤗

Loved this update tooo😳

Thanks 4 PMs😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
ahhaannn saru ne bazi maar li...
first update pe tere naam ne res kiya hai 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice update nd thnx for pm
Nxt part bhi jldi se pm krna waiting for it eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
bhy ittu sa update nishi... awesome one... nect time bda wala chahie

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