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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mika17

Superb update

Loved mandir scene of nisha, laxmi n dadi

thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome update👍🏼

thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika4

Superb update

Dadi lakshmi and nisha scene was awesome
Viraj and kabir scene was nice
Loved it
Update soon

thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Res

unres
read both the parts naina amazing yaar
loved the talk between nibir
vj and viraj convo was also written nicely
Dadi and nisha luved them
dadaji trust kabir
Last scene suspense waiting for kabir reaction
thanks for pm
ritika


thank you ritika...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

awesome update nishi 👏
loved how laxmi dadi n nishu's convo
nibir scene was too cute
waiting for the next update
thank you for the pm


thanks vaishnavi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Lovely update yaar 😳

It wz emotional 😭
Loved dadai laxmi convo
And nibir 😳
Thnx for pm 😳

thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu4u

nishi superb update⭐️

sorry am late
so d truth is infront of GH ppl i luved dadu's reply👍🏼
vj viraj scene is good...VJ se aise hi pesh aana chahiye Viraj ko👍🏼
dadi nisha laxmi scene very nicely written..\👏
Nibir part was nice 😳
RajBir convo👍🏼
my fav line is sab k liye apse aur Miss...sorry Mrs. Nisha se maafi mangne aye hai...😉

Mrs. Nisha👍🏼


aree its ok...DADI JI 😆 😆
thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank you guys for likes and comments...


PART 8

Ho sake to hame bhi maaf kar dijie - vj (hath jodkar ghar k main door pe )

Viraj n kabir (angry)

Kabir - (age badhta hai ) (angry) ab kaunsa badla lene aai hai aap ??

Vj - (kabir k pas aake ) (with tears) koi rishta todne nhi aye hai...(viraj k taraf jake ) apne bte se maafi mangne aye hai...

Viraj - ( angry...faces bnate hue...Vj k pas se hat jata hai) plsss... Ye sab karne k koi jaroorat nhi hai...

Kabir - ( vj se muh modkar) itna aasan nhi hai mere liye aapko maaf kar pana... so plsss umeed mat rakhiye...

Vj - (rote hue) kyu par ?? hmne aisa kya kiya hai...

Viraj - (angry) abhi bhi aapko batana padega ki aapne kiya kya hai ?? aapki ek galti ho to maaf kiya jaye aapne to galtiya hi galtiya ki hai... jisme sabse badi galti apne hi bte aur bahu ko alag karne ki thi... fir bhi... jaisa maine ghar pe kha tha.. agar aapko nisha aur kabir ne maaf kar dia to hum bhi aapko maaf kar denge... kyu k asli gunahgar aap unki hai... (kabir k pas jake...kabir ko envelope dete hue...) kabir I know hum dono k liye bhai ki tarah milna , bat karna , behave karna bht mushkil hai... but itna vishwas hai time k sath hamare rishte bhi sudhar jayenge... (emotionally) apna khayal rakhiyega...hum chalete hai..(jane k liye mudta hai)

Kabir - (with tears) bade bhaiya...

Viraj - ( kabir k taraf mudta hai )

Kabir - ( hugs viraj ) shuruat bht buri thi but I will try ki apne iss rishte ko jald se jald sudhar sake...

Viraj - (happy ) humari bhi yhi koshish rahegi...

Vj - (viraj ka hath pakadkar ...rote hue) viraj pls beta ek bar to hamari bat sun lijie ...hme apni galati sudharane ka mauka dijiye...

Viraj - (gusse m...apna hath kheech leta hai...)

Vj - ( rote hue kabir k pas jake ...uska hath pakad k ...) jojo pls beta apni maa ko maaf kar dijiye...ap dono k bina hum kaise rahenge...pls beta pls.. (crying badly)

Kabir - ( apne tears control karte hue) wo apko chaale chalne se pahle sochna chahiye tha... (apna hath vj se chudakar bedroom m chala jata hai )

Vj - (viraj k taraf badhti hai...rote hue..) beta pls aap to ...(viraj bina unki taraf dekhe bahar chala jata hai)

Viraj - (ghar se nikalte waqt ... sees nisha on gate...viraj nisha ko dekhta hai ...fir chala jata hai)

Vj rote rote floor pe baith jati hai...

Nisha ghar k main door (has witnessed the convo between vj kabir n viraj)

Nisha - (eyes full of tears...vj ko dekhti h...vj k paas ja kar...unhe sofe pe bithati hai) maa...

Vj - (crying) humne bht bura kiya hai... Aur uski hi saza hme mil rhi hai...

Nisha - (hugs vj) maa aap se galti hui hai...aur aapko uss galti ka ehsas bhi hai...aap roiye mat sab theek ho jayega..

Vj - (crying) kuch theek nhi hoga hamare bacche hame dekhna tak nhi chahte...

Nisha - (vj ka face cupped kar k ) aisa kuch nhi hai maa... wo dono aapse thoda naraz h par aapse bht pyaar karte ..jald hi wo dono aapse bat karne lagenge..aur unka gussa bhi hamesha k liye khatm ho jayega...

Vj - (hugs nisha)

Nisha - ab aap rona band kariye aur aaram kariye...

Vj - (sees nisha)

Nisha viraj ka room khol k vj ko whi araam karne k liye kehti h...

Vj - thank you beta...

Nisha - (smiles) maa iski koi jaroorat nhi... maa kabir ghar pe hi hai...jb tak main na aaun aap yaha se bahar mat jaiyega.. mai thodi der m ati hoon...

Vj - (worried) beta lekin agar kabir ko pta lag gya k m yaha hoon to wo aur gussa ho jayega...

Nisha - relax maa ...wo idhar nhi ayega...aur abhi use bat karne ka koi fayada nhi... gusse m hai...mai aake use bat karungi...aap chinta mat karo...aapke dono bte aapko jald hi maaf kar denge... (smiles)

Vj - ( smiles lightly) thank you beta...

Nisha - (smiles) mai thodi der m ati hoon..(nisha leaves)

Viraj House

Viraj's bedroom

Ram singh - hukum koi nisha madam aai hai

Viraj - (confused) nisha yha ??... unhe baithao hum aa rhe hai...

Ram singh - ji hukum

Living room

Ram singh - madam aap baithye hokum bs aa rhe hai...

Nisha - (sits) thank you

Viraj - Miss...sorry Mrs nisha aap yha ??

Nisha - ha...kuch bat karni thi

Viraj - boliye ??

Nisha - aap hamare ghar kyu gye the ??

Viraj - aapse aur kabir se maafi mangne...

Nisha - kis liye ??

Viraj - (confused) anjanne m jo galtiyaan humse hui hai uske liye

Nisha - ( apne hath ko cross kar k bandhte hue) hum aapko maafi kyu de ?

Viraj - (confused...n lil surprised) kyu k hme apni galti ka ehsas hai...aur hum apni galti k liye sharminda bhi h

Nisha - aaa...iska matlab agar koi insane apni galti k liye sharminda hai , use apni galti ka ehsas hai to use maafi milni chahiye...

Viraj - (confused) maafi dena na dena uss insaan ka faisla hota hai jiske sath galt hua ho... par agar aapse koi apni galti k liye maafi mang rha ho aur use apni galti ka ehsas h to use maafi milne ka haq hai...

Nisha - r u sure ??

Viraj - ( confused) yes... I m..

Nisha - (viraj k saamne ake) tab aap maa ko kyu maaf nhi kar paa rhe ??

Viraj - ( shocked) aap ye kya kah rhi h...

Nisha - whi jo shi hai... maa ne aapke sath to kuch bhi galat nhi kiya... balki jb unhe pta lga k aap unke viraj ho to unhone apni galti k liye maafi mangi chahi... to unhone kya galt kiya...agar unhone aapka dil dukhaya bhi h to wo anjane m kyu k unhe nhi pta tha ki aap hi viraaj ho unke bte wo to mujhe aur kabir ko alag karna chahti thi... Uske liye unhone mujhe aur hamare makaan malik ko kareeb lane k koshish ki... Jb unhe ye tak nhi pta tha ki aap unke viraj ho to wo aapko dukh kaise de sakti hai...Sir kabir unse gussa hai...kyu k ye uska haq hai...par aap unhe itni saza kyu de rhe ho.. (sad...with tears) barso tak aap ne unko yaad kiya hai , unka intzaar kiya hai...to aaj jab wo samne hai to unse itni berukhi...aur wo bhi kis bat ke liye...?? Sir mai yaha aapko bas yhi samjhane aai hu ki bht ho gya... ab unhe aur dukh mat dijie... unhe maaf kar dijie... jab unhone bachpan m aapki kai galtiya maaf ki hai to kya aap unki ek galti maaf nhi kar sakte ??

Viraj - (lost )

Nisha - sir ek bar shant dimaag se sochiye...ki kya aap apni maa k sath shi kar rhe hai ??

Viraj - (sees nisha with eyes full of tears)

Nisha - (leaves...i hope k viraj sir maa ko maaf kar denge...)(tensed)

chotu update k liye...sorry 😉

hope you guys like it..

waiting for likes n comments😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome👏
Loved nisha nd virajs convo
Hope everything gets fine soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nishi Excellent Update👏👏👏

Har baar U make me say "KAASH...KAASH... Aisa hotha show mein..."

RajBir ka Hug.. Awieee... Kinna Pyaara tha.. ❤️Dil bhar aaya..🤗 When Kabira said "Shrurwat buri huyi lekin main iss riste ko jaldi sudharunga"👏👏👏👏

VJ ki maafi maangna & Betom ka tukarana... 👍🏼Jayis tha👏👏👏

I loved How Nishu Behaved Wisely😃

Usne Pehle VJ ko sambhala...😃

Den Viraj ke ghar gayi 😛 & Ek Ek baath Jo Nishu ne Viraj ko samjaya was nice move👍🏼 IMPRESSIVE😎 Dialogue Writing Nishiii👏👏👏👏

I hope Viraj ko ehsaa hua hoga Jo Nishu usse samjana chahthi hai😊 Aur I think Now Viraj & Nisha milkar Kabira ko manayegaa VJ ko maaf karne ke liye😃

Thanks 4 PM😳(JO Link tune PM kia Vo Link Wrk nahi kar raha hai Nishi🤔)

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

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