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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tanya119

Awesome yaaar

Kaash yeh sab show mein hota
But koi nahi hmare paas itni achi story h yahi kaafi h to fulfill our expectation
Nibir convo was nice ๐Ÿ˜Š
Waiting for vasu 's truth revelation๐Ÿ˜ก
Thnks fr d pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome Maasi๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ (mujhe bhi nahi pata, ki tu meri maasi kaise hai, bas itna jaanti hoon ki since i am Nimi's bhanji, m ur bhanji๐Ÿ˜†)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Lovely update ๐Ÿ‘

Finally SBB theek ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww dat was a lovely update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello guys...
i m back swith next part after a long time ..
hope ki kisine to miss kiya hoga ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
ab batein band karti hoon aur update kar deti hoon..
boring day ko thoda sa shi karne k liye ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
hope k mai wo kar paun ๐Ÿ˜•



PART 5


Nisha- (confused) kabir... (Clutching kabir's arm) dekh mujhe lagta h tujhe koi bht badi galatfehmi ho rhi h... Maa aisa kyu karengi ?? Balki maa aisa kar hi nhi sakti...

Kabir- (still thinking) nisha...(nisha stops him in middle)

Nisha- (trying to explain kabir) dekh mai nhi manti k maa ne ye kiya h... Wo to hamesha hum dono k beech m sab theek karna chahti thi... Tujhe had h jb viraj k ghar ane k wajah se hum dono k behas hui thi tb maa ne hi mujhe phone kar k tujhe surprise dinner pe le jane ka idea diya tha...

Kabir-(shocked... Wo dinner mere lie tha aur maa ko ye pta tha fir bhi maa ne mujhe nisha k khilaaf bhadkaya...)

Nisha- aur jb tu chala gya tha tb bhi maa mujhe yaha leke aai jbki papa nhi chahte the...

Kabir-(tb maa ne mujhse jhoot kyu bola k tu GH m rehne chali gyi) (eyes full of tears)

Nisha- aur maa to hamare sath station bhi gyi thi tujhe doodhne...

Kabir- tu mujhe dhoodhne station ayi thi ??

Nisha- ha kabir... Mai , papa , maa , sukku aur saurav bhi...

Kabir-(a drop falls from his eyes... Apne head ko pakad k bed pe baith jata h)...

Nisha-kabir...

Kabir-(thinking abt vasu's word in train... Maa apne mujhse kha k nisha nhi ayi mujhe rokne jabki meri nisha ayi thi...)

Nisha- (worried) tu theek to h kabir...

Kabir-(apne aansu pochte hue khada hota h...) Nisha chal...

Nisha- kabir ... Par kahan...

Kabir- mai tujhe sab samjhaunga...bs abhi k liye tu bs itna samjh k tujhe waha chal k bs itna kehna h ki kabir wapas aa gya h... Aur hamare beech m sari batein clear ho chuki h...

Nisha- par kabir...

Kabir- tujhe mujhe trust h na...

Nisha- ha...

Kabir- to chal...

Kabir nisha car m...

Nisha - kabir ek bat bta to shi k tu karne kya wala h...

Kabir - Nisha... Tu bs ye samjh k ye jaroori hai...

Nisha- parrr...(kabir stops in middle)

Kabir- mere upar trust h ki nhi ??

Nisha - khud se jayada.

Kabir caresses her cheeks...

Kabir n nisha reaches KN house

KN house Scene

Kabir- (car stop kar k) tu chal m bs 10 min m aya..

Nisha- OK..

Kabir GH k bahar se Ramesh ko phone karta h..

Ramesh - (phone pe kabir ka nam dekh k ... Eyes full of tears n happy...phone pick karta hai ) kabir beta kha h tu... Tujhe pta h hum Sab kitna pareshan ho gye the... Nisha ka ro ro k bura hal h... Tu aise kyu... (Kabir stops in middle )

Kabir - papa... Relax.. I m sorry... Mai aapke har sawal ka jawab dunga... Bs uske liye aapko aur maa ko mere sath chalna hoga...

Ramesh - tu jaipur m h...??

Kabir - ha Papa aur filhal m apke ghar k bahar hu... Ma ko leke jaldi aaiye...

KN house scene

Nisha KN house ati h..

Nisha - maa(happy hoke) (VJ ka ashirwad leti h aur unhe hug kar leti h)

VJ- (shocked) nisha kya hua ?? (Trying to smile but in tensed tone)

Nisha - ha maa Sab theek h... Kabir wapas aa gya maa..

VJ- (shocked) kya ?? Ye kaise ho sakta h...(ise kaise pta chala k kabir jaipur m h... Khi...)

Aap khush nhi hui kya maa - kabir (ghar m enter karte hue )

VJ- (shocked) (seeing kabir with ramesh n laxmi ) (trying to smile) nhi beta hum kyu khush nhi honge...

Kabir- really mom... Par apke expression se to nhi lag rha k aap khush h...

VJ- (hesitantly) nhi aisa kuch nhi h beta.. Kabir nisha k kareeb jake uska hath pakadta h...

Kabir- mom humari sari misunderstanding clear ho gai h...

VJ-( shocked)

Kabir- balki mai to GH house gya tha nisha ka samaan lane...taki humlog apne ghar m sath rah sake..

Ramesh n laxmi shocked

Ramesh- ek min kabir .. Beta nisha ka samaan GH m...?? Kuch samjha nhi..

VJ- (tensed) (lagta h kabir ko sab pta chal chuka h )

Kabir - ha papa... Nisha ka saaman.. Kyu k nisha mere jate hi yaha se chali gyi thi na...(angrily seeing Vj) kyu mom..?

Ramesh- (confused) see Vj

Kabir - papa nisha station bhi nhi gyi thi mujhe rokne ?? (Angrily ) mom aap bhi to thi na papa k sath...

Nisha-(eyes full of tears n questions seeing Vj silent)

Kabir-(shouts) kuch bolengi aap..

Nisha-(putting her hand on kabir's shoulder) kabir plsss calm down..

Ramesh age aake kabir se

Ramesh- beta (confused) humlogo ko kuch samjh nhi aa rha... Kya kah rhe ho tum...

Laxmi- (tensed) aur vasu ji se kaise bat kar rhe ho tum ??

Nisha-(apne tears ko control karte hue) maa relax.. Papa aap dono shant ho jaiye plss... Tension mat lijiye...

Kabir- (angrily looking at vasu) ha papa tension mat lijiye kyu k ab tension lene ka time khatam ho gya hai...

VJ- (trying to cope up the situation) beta wo...(kabir shouts n stops her in middle )

Kabir- bs maa bs... Kitna natak karengi aap..?? Aur kyu ?? Ramesh k taraf dekhte hue

Kabir- Papa mere aur nisha k bich Jo kuch bhi hua h wo inhone kiya h...(angrily pointing his finger towards VJ)

Ramesh n laxmi shocked

Kabir - ha papa... Inhone mujhe sari jhooti batein batai hai jisse ye sari misunderstanding hui h... Vj ko dekhte hue... Kyu mom nisha GH gyi thi kya ?? (Eyes full of tears)

VJ-(crying)

Nisha-(crying)

Kabir- papa aap to aye the na station mujhe lene... Mom bhi aapke sath thi par kya aapko ye pta h ki inhone mujhse train m mulakat ki thi... (Angrily seeing vj) aur mujhse kha k nisha mujhe rokne nhi ayi... (Seeing nisha with eyes full of tears) jabki nisha mujhe rokne ayi thi... Itna hi nhi papa inhone mujhe aapki aur inki jhooti kahani bhi sunai taki m aapse aur nisha se nafrat kar saku...

Suddenly piche se ek awaaj ati h...

Aur inhone ne divorce paper bhi bheja aap dono ko - viraj

Sare log shocked seeing viraj with divorce paper...





hope you guys like it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I lub U yaarrr๐Ÿค—

Kitna Logically U co ordinated everything...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Wow... Wow... Wow...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Words kam pad gaye mere tere tareef ke liyeee

Yaar.. Tune toh VJ ko aisa trap kia aisa trap kia ki she just cant escape frm her own deeds๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Kabira ka Gusaa... RLN ki shackss... Viraj ki rt time Entry... SUPERB...!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Wah.. Mindblowingly writteeennn๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

U rackedd with ur PEN girll...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿฅณ

Kash... Kash... Aisa LOGICAL TRACK humko miltha

CV's kuch seekho...๐Ÿ˜ก

Thanks 4 PM๐Ÿ˜ณ

Do write More๐Ÿค— Q ki DMM๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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aree wa wa finally updated awesome...
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Mindblowing update ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Loved it ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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