Those Moments With You.||nibir FF | chap 8- PAGE 37||index-page 1| - Page 21

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Sanjana 😊

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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Superb update 👏
Nibir hospital scene was lovely
But kabir why he always tell lie 😡
Nisha felt tension for kabir
Nibir 😳
At first i was scared from that stalker but then 😆 yeh toh nisha ka Buddy nikala
Nibir chat on dining hall was awesome
And in the night
That scene baba ji you make me ☺️
Loved the update
Every scene was beautifully written 👏
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sam_premc

thankyou so much ritika!😃

@BOLD you want a heart attack?next time pakka!😆😆

Originally posted by: mishrialways

heart attack nhi chahiye plz happy ending chahiye😉

haan par ek nyi horror story mein heart attack de sakti hai😉

Originally posted by: Niha0606

loved it pothi👏👏👏

Originally posted by: mishrialways

heart attack nhi chahiye plz happy ending chahiye😉

haan par ek nyi horror story mein heart attack de sakti hai😉

Originally posted by: Sinha_m

Surpb update dear waiting for next part

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Finally u updated atleast one of your stories! 😆 and am so glad that you chose to update this first! This is one of my fav stories!😳

Coming to the update, that was one hella cute and interesting update Annie!

The starting was lovely! The way you described Kabir's pain and how worried he was for Nisha despite his pain, their both's relief on seeing the other safe and sound, Kabir trying to lie about his injuries and Nisha's concern for him was very nice! 👍🏼

I too wanted them to continue this trip! Happy that they chose to continue it! 😆

Coming to that stalking part, damn u wrote it so well! 👏

Right from Nisha seeing the guy staring at her to those messages and she thinking its Kabir's prank but then realising it isn't him was absolutely fabulous! 👏

The KN moment at the dining table, those naughty texts was too good!😆

Following scene where u have shown that shadow and that message before it was again a very interesting moment. And the next scene ☺️ ☺️ no comments on that ☺️☺️

Nisha's fear when she realised it was actually not Kabir sending those messages and Kabir reassuring her of him being there with her was very well penned and portrayed ! 👍🏼

Kabir getting jealous on seeing Nisha and Karan's closeness 😆 and Nisha teasing him about the same, he becoming all gloomy after listening to her story and that ending kiss! Perfect! Very well written! 👏

Overall a very nice update with a good pace!

Do continue soon please 😆 and thanks for pm 😊

P.S: wish u had continued that stalker part for a little longer. Was waiting to see how Kabir would deal with it 😉

Also, sorry for the late comment 😔