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Episode 302
-By Niya
Outside Defence Academy(Scene 1)

Kabir was waiting for Nisha.. he smiled when he remembered what he told a few months ago..

"Agar main tere real wala pati hota toh tera wait karta "

And here he was.. waiting for her.. his smile grew wider as he started getting flashback of that day.. The smile on Nisha s face when she saw him waiting for her.. the way he made a lame excuse .. her excitement while having the Pani puri.. the innocence on her face while eating the ice cream..

Nisha and Alisha came out of the Academy and found Kabir leaning on the car and smiling loking at the ground.. While Alisha found this weird Nisha found him cute... she somewhere knew what Kabir was thinking about.. Alisha excused herself and left .. Nisha went to Kabir..

Kabir felt Nisha around and looked up.. he saw her smiling at him.. the same smile she had on her face that day.. he understood that even that day HE was the reason for her smile .. He hugged Nisha as soon as she came to him.. Nisha was confused still she reciprocated the hug.. Nisha broke the hug and gave him a confused look.. Kabir shook his head negatively and opened the door for he.. once he made Nisha sit in the car he himself got seated in the driver's seat.. Kabir was about to start the car when Nisha called him..he looked at her..

Nisha : Kabir.. Umesh bhaiya ke restaurant chal na please..

Kabir : Kyun??

Nisha: Vo aaj mera mood nahi hai cooking ka issliye.. aur Aman na Jelly custard banana wali hai.. please chal na.. she made a puppy face and Kabir chuckled at her cuteness and drove towards Umesh's Restaurant ...

At the restaurant (Scene 2)

Umesh was busy in attending a customer when Nisha called him.. she came to him and hugged him..

Umesh : Aaj yahan kaise aana hua ?

Kabir came from behind and said : Teri behan ka mood nahi hai cooking ka issliye yahan aagaye free ka kahan khane..

Umesh and Nisha gave him a stare and by that time Aman also joined the three..

Aman: Nishu acha hua tu aagai.. Maine Jelly custard banaya hai .. Tera favourite hai na..?

Nisha smiled and nodded her head in excitement the three smiled at her.. Umesha and Aman went to bring lunch for Nisha and Kabir .. while Nisha and Kabir got themselves seated..Nisha felt like someone was staring her.. she turned but found no one.. kabir saw this and asked her with his eyes what was the matter ? but she shook her head in a no ... But Kabir knew that something was wrong...the waiter bought their order..

Nisha was about to eat when Kabir signalled her that he will feed her.. Nisha was very touched by his gesture but she failed to notice the mischief in his eyes.. Kabir bought the spoon to her mouth but when she was about to eat he turned the sppon towards his mouth and he himself ate it.. Nisha was left shocked and Kabir was laughing.. they had their lunch and bid a bye to Umesh and Aman.. and left.. Nisha's doubts were not false.. Someone was actually watching them.. and was very angry seeing Nisha so happy.. he punched the wall next to him and left from there

Outside KNH ..(Scene 3)

Kabir and Nisha came home and found Sukku waiting outside their house.. He looked tensed.. Kabir signalled Nisha to go and talk to him.. Nisha went to Sukku.. she opened the door and took him inside..

As soon as they went Kabir came outside he got a call from Viraj

Kabir: Kya baat hai bade bhaiyaa.. aaj appne izz nacheez ko kaise yaad kiya ?

Viraj: Chote app kabhi serious nahi ho sakte an ?

Kabir : Bade bhaiyaa.. serious sirf vahi hote hai jo hospital main hote hai.. aur main ekdum fit and fine hun..but lagta hai ki app kafi serious hai batiye baat kya hai ?

Viraj: Vo darasal.. Maa ke pair main chot lag hai hai..

Kabir : Kaise? Vo theek toh hai na? Kuch serious toh nahi ?

Viraj : Haan abhi vo theek hai.. vo darasal humse baat karna chahti thi par hum unse naraz the issliye unki awaz ansuni karke ja rahe the aur jab vo hume rokhne aai toh unka pair mud gaya aur humari wajah se vo gir gai..

Kabir: Bade Bhaiya iss main aoppki koi galti nahi.. appko pura haq hai unse naraz hone ka.. unhone kaam hi aisa kaiya hai..

Viraj smiled when he heard Kabir say that.. his brother knew him very well..

Viraj: Kya baat hai Kabir app bohut samajhdaar hogaye hai..

Kabir: Arey main toh bachpan se hi smart hun.. bas beech main brain strike pe tha aur maine shadi kar li..

Viraj chuckled.. his brother will never change.. and he wished that he never changed..

Viraj: Lagta hai hume Nisha ko yeh batana padega jab hum wapas aayenge..

Kabir: Arey bade bhaiya.. kyun mere chote se pyaare se ghar main aag lagane pe tule ho ? Nisha ko pata chala na toh main pakka hospital pohunch jaunga..

Viraj laughed at his cuteness..

Viraj: Chaliye abh hum phone rakhte hai yahan raat bohut ho chuki hai.. Nisha aur appna dhyaan rakhna ..

Kabir: Jee bade bhaiyaa.. app bhi apna aur Maa dhyaan rakhna.. good night..

Inside KNH(Scene 4)

Nisha and Sukku sat on the sofa.. Nisha placed a hand on Sukku's shoulder and said

Nisha: Abh bata kya hua ? itna pareshaan kyun hai?

Sukku : Nisha ... yaar mujhe kuch karna hai.. matalb apni life.. apne Career main kuch karna hai.. main nahi chahta ki koi Maa Papa se kahe ki unka beta kisi kaam ka nahi..

Nisha got worried.. : Kya hua Sukku.. kisine kuch kaha kya..? Tujhse ya Maa Papa se..?

Sukku: Nahi yaar.. abhi nahi kaha but main kisi ko kuch kehne ka mauka bhi nahi dena chahta ..

Nisha smiled.. her brother was becoming mature.. she ruffled his hair and said

Nisha : Toh tu yahan kya kar raha hai..? Tujhe Papa se iss bare main baat karni chahiye.. Jab main confused thi tab Papa ne hi meri help kit hi.. aur teri help bhi vahi kar sakte hai.. but mujhe pata hai tu jo bhi karega uss main success payega..

Sukku gave her a smile and hugged her.. Kabir was entering the house.. he saw the two and went to the room smiling at the love these two shared.. he wished that he would share the same bond with Viraj..

Sukku thanked Nisha and left.. Nisha accompanied him to the door and then went to the kitchen

__________ Please ignore the mistakes.. its not proof read 😆
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Episode 303

-By Niya

KNH (Scene 1)

Nisha was in the kitchen having water when something striked her.. she went to the room and started calling for Kabir.. Kabir came out the washroom in his tracks and wipping his wet hair.. he was shirtless.. Nisha started to blush when she saw him like that .. Kabir smirked and walked towards her.. Nisha came out of her dreamland and looked at him angrily.. Kabir understood that he is going to be bashed so he became ready for it..

Nisha : Tune mujhe sctooy se drop kiya than a ?

Kabir : Haan..

Nisha : And tu wahan mera wait karne wala tha ?

Kabir: Haan... toh wait kiya than na... Wahin toh tha jab tu aai thi bahar...

Nisha : Par tabhi meri sctooy wahan nahi thi.. teri car thi wahan .. Car kya apne app chalke aai wahan ?

Kabir understood.. He muttered under his breath : Kabire.. abh tu gaya... an idea struck him..

Kabir : Haan toh main sctooy pe baith tha .. phir maine socha ki chai peke aata hun.. toh jab main chai pene gaya tabhi kisi learner ne peeche se aake sctooy ko takkar mar di.. usspe dent pad gaya toh main sctooy servicing ke liye chod ke ghar aake car leke wapas aaya..

Nisha who was so possessive about her sctooy almost got a mini heart attack when she came tob know about her scooty ..

Nisha : Kya ? aur tu mujhe abh yeh baat bata raha hai.. mujhe use gadi ka number de jiske wajah se meri sctooy ki yeh halat hui.. uss insaan ko toh main chodungi nahi..jab gadi chalani aati nahi toh chalane ki koshish hi kyun karte hai..

Kabir: shaant Nisha.. shayad ko learner hoga.. and maine number plate pe dhyaan nahi diya .. main thoda door tha na scooty se issliye.. tension mat le kal suabh tak aayegi sctooy..

Nisha : Acha theek hai.. chal tu ready ho ja... Kirti ka message aaya tha cousins.. aa rahe hai..

Saying so she left the room and went to the kitchen to make some snacks ..as soon as she left Kabir fell on the bed...

Kabir : Aaj toh tu bach gaya beta.. agar Nisha ko pata chalta na ki scooty park karte time tune sctooy dash kar di thi.. tu iss waqt hospital main hota... abh ready ho ja warna phir se daante aayegi.. sach main dimaag strike pet ha jab shadi kit hi..

He went to change and get ready..

Gangwal House (Scene 2)

Jwala was in her room reading a book when Rupmavati came inside ..

Rupma : Jwalu tumse milne koi aaya hai andar bhej dun..

Jwala was busy in her book without reading she said yes.. Her book fell from her hand when she heard someone call her name.. she looked up and got shocked... he was there.. she totally forgot that he was supposed to come to return her book she some how composed herself and wished him..

Jwala: Hi Rishi.. tum yahan kaise.. I am tumhe koi problem nahi hu na ghar dhundne main ?

Rishi : No.. no... Gangwals are having a well known image in the society who doesn't know about them .. It was quiet easy to kind it.. He smiled and returned her the notes.. Thanks.. they were really helpful..

Jwala smiled and took the book: No need to say thanks.. its my pleasure..

Rishi was about to leave when he noticed the book that Jwala was reading.. He went to her and bent to pick the book.. Jwala's heart was beating really fast.. she was numb and got rooted to the spot she clutched her book tightly..

Rishi : Shakespeare .. You like reading Shakespeare ?

Jwala : Haan he is my favourite .. she said with a cheeky smile on her face..

Rishsi: Wow.. mine too.. Infact I love this story .. Have you read it completely ?

Jwala: Nahi.. but aaj kal main puri ho jayegi..

Rishi : Great then main baad main tumhe dusri book suggest karunga.. I am sure you will love it.. See you tomorrow in the school bye..

Jwala: Bye...

Jwala kept waving her hand even after Rishi left.. Kirti came there and saw her .. she went and shook her.. Jwala adjusted her specs and went form there to avoid Kirti's questions..Kriti looked at her in amusement

Kirti : How Blah !..

She shrugged her shoulders and went to get ready..

Umesh's restaurant (Scene 3)

Umesh was busy checking the day's accounts when someone came to him.. he turned around and found the owner of the land standing with a smile on his face

Umesh : Mr. Malhotra.. app yahan kaise ? Kuch chaiye tha appko..

Neel: Call me Neel..Mujhe kuch nahi chaiye.. Main toh bas yun hi yahan se guzar raha that toh socha ki yahan aajaun.. Waise tume yahan koi problem toh nahi ho rahi na. ? I mean you feel comfortable here right /

Umesh : Jee... Hum bilkul comfortable hai.. He noticed a bandage on Neel's hand and asked out of concern.. Arey yeh kya hua ?

Neel : Nothing just a small accident anyways I'll leave.. all the best ...

Neel came out and had a wicked smile on his face..

Neel : Problems toh tumhe hongi Umesh.. and jitni problem tumhe hogi utna hi maza mujhe milega.. Mrs. Nisha Kumar .. I am back ...

KNH (Scene 4)

The cousins came and ringed the door bell.. Kabir opned the door and wished them..

They came inside .. Nisha placed the snacks on the table.. all of them got seated and then they started their meeting..

Nisha : Arey Jwala aur Bunty kahan hai ?

Sukku : Bunty ka kal test hai

Kirti : And Jwala ke bare main tu kuch puch himat Nishu.. use toh aaj kal time hi nahi hai humare liye.. usne kaha ki use koi important assignment complete karna hai..

Sukku: Aaj kal Jwala bohut weird behave karne lagi hai.

Kriti : Hai na.. aaj vo kisi ko wave kar rahi thi .. jab ki wahan koi tha bhi nahi...I mean how Blah !

Sukku : Haan aur uss din usse deewaron ka rang acha lag raha tha ?

Dolly : Oy My Gods... !! Kahin Jwalu ko pyaar toh nahi ho gaya ? She said with a dreamy smile on her face..

Kabir and Nisha looked at Dolly with confused face and then at each other...Sukku and Kirti just bursted out laughing

Sukku : Jwala aur pyaar ? Usse sirf apni books se pyaar hai..

Kirti : Haan Sukku is right.. Jwala ko pyaar ho hi nahi sakta ..Dolly di app bhi na kuch bhi bolte ho..

Dolly: Arey.. kyun nahi.. Tum sab ne Jwala main changes notice kiye hai na.. Uss din Dadi ne kaha ki vo unse apne looks ke bare main baat kar rahi thi..

Nisha : Haan.. mujh se bhi ussne iss bare main baat kit hi.. but mujhe laga ki shayad koi aur baat hai..

Kabir : That means ki shayad Jwala sach main kisi ko like karti hai ..

Sukku and Kirti were too shocked to react .. they still couldn't believe that Jwala could fall in love or like someone.. But din't they feel the same for Nisha and now.. she is infront of them madly in love with her husband then why can't Jwala fall or someone..

They decided that they will keep a check on Jwala and the cousins went home and Nisha and Kabir went to have their dinner

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NAUC-TSC EPI-304
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Episode - 304

Scene-1

GH house

Sukku was sitting by the side of his window lost in his own thoughts when ramesh entered in his room.

Ramesh- ( patting sukku'S head) kya soch rha h sukku... koi pareshani h kya (what are u thinking... is there any problem)

Sukku - nhi papa... bus yuhi... (no papa.)

Ramesh - sukku... m ur father u can share it with me... u can trust me

Sukku - (smiled at him ) papa... I want to become something... so that u can be proud of me papa... I truly want to make u feel proud...

Ramesh looked at him with love.

Ramesh - u today itself made me proud beta...

They both share a warm hug.

Ramesh - ok now tell me what u want to do... what have u dreamt of

Sukku - anything papa... I just want to do something.

Ramesh- sukku... hme hamesha vo hi karna chahie jisse hme khushi mile... tu abhi to kuch bhi kar lega par thode time baad tjhe bhot afsos hoga ki tu jo kar sakta tha vo nhi kar paya... mai chahta hu mera beta vo kare jisme vo best ho...
( we should always do that which gives us happiness... u can do anything right now but after some time u will feel guilty of not doing what u r capable of... I want you to do what u r best in..)

Sukku just stared at his father he didn't knew how to react.

Ramesh - oe ese kya dekh rha h... tjhe actor bnna h na... to vohi kar... ( why r u looking at me like this... u wanted to be an actor na... than do that)

Sukku - but papa... if I didn't get success then... won't u feel shame because of me

Ramesh - why won't u be successful... if u will work hard it will pay u back... and why I will feel shame... u will not do anything wrong... and I know that.

Sukku felt lucky to have him as his father he just hugged him again.

Sukku- I will surely become a good actor papa... for u I will give my best.

Ramesh - m pretty sure about that beta... but u have to start from somewhere na... why don't u groom urself for auditions.

Sukku - but how papa... m totally confused about it

Ramesh - hmmm... why don't u join kabir's dance academy... it will help u and that academy also had an acting course na... join that...

Sukku - oh yes papa how could I forget it.. thank u papa... thank you sooo much... I will go there today only.

Ramesh - I know u will be successful... I have full faith in u...
( he said patting his head lovingly)

Scene - 2
Uman's restaurant

Neel was in the restaurant and dialled a no.
Neel - hello vish... sabko lke apne adde p pahuch jaldi... ( ask everyone to meet at our place soon)

Neel reached a deserted fort ruins where no one was present except him.
Suddenly some voices came from behind. He turned to see his gang coming vishwajeet, naveen, manav and karan. His besties and partner in crime.

Manav- are bhai... kaise ho... kitte din baad dikh rhe ho ( hi bro... hows u... its so long after we met)

Naveen - ha neel yaar... its been such a long time

Karan - are our bro has gone for higher education yaar... vo bhi America...

Vish - ha yaar neel tell us na... bta kitti ladkia patai tne... (how many girls u dated)

Neel - oe... neel ladkia nhi patata.. ladkia khud neel k pass aati h samjha..( girls come behond neel )

Manav - ha bhai... baat to sahi h...( yes true that)

Neel - achha vo chhodo... mjhe tm lgo ko kuch btana h... tmhe yaad h miss nisha gangwal... ( leave it... do u remeber nisha gangwal)

( he said with an evil smile )

Vish - kaun nisha yaar... itti nisha aae gae... yaad kha rehti h... ( who nisha)

Karan - abe tu us nisha ki baat to nhi kar rha... vo pilani wali ladki...( r u talking about that pilani girl)

Naveen - vo... vo kha se aae yha...( she... how come she is here)

Neel - ha vhi... nisha gangwal jo ab mrs. Nisha kabir kumar hai... uske bhai ne hi meri jagah p restaurant khola h...( yes she only... now she is mrs nisha kabir kumar. .. her brother has taken up my place on rent)

Manav - bhai aapko kaise pta ki vo uski behen h... ( how do u know)

Neel - abe dhakkan... aae thi vha ur baat kar rhi thi usse tab pta chala... ur uska pati bhi aaya tha kal to... ( u idiot... she had came n was talking to him... her husband was also there)

Karan - to??? Hme kya( so what)

Naveen - jarur kuch chal rha h iske khatarnak dimaag m... dekh tu jo bhi soch rha h na jra dimag lga kar dekhna... ab na to vo bachhi h ur na hi utni bholi hogi... (is something going on in your mind... u should be cautious about it she is not a child now)

Vish - ha upar se ab to shadishuda bhi h... (that too married)

Neel smiled evily and looked at them.

Neel - vo tab bhi mere lie ek khilona thi ur aaj bhi h... par ese achanak kuch nhi karunga... dherre dheere sabak sikhaunga use ur uske bhai ko bhi... (she was and is still my toy... but I won't do anything in hurry... she will pay and her brother too)

He laughed while others look at him.

Scene - 3
Kn house

Kabir was trying to find something in his almirah

Kabir - (monologue ) - he bhagwan ye ladki h ki aafat... dekho jra is cupboard ko esa lag rha h abhi yha cyclone aaya tha... ab kha rakh dia isne mera headphone... kuch bolunga to naaraz ho jaegi... ha ye rha... ( oh god... she is a nightmare yaar... see this cupboard it looked like a cyclone has came here)

Kabir tried to pull it out but instead of headphone he took out his camera and all the other things scattered on the floor.

Kabir - are dhakkan kya kar dia... abhi agar ye washroom se bahar aa gyi ur ye sab dekh lia na to tjhe kachha chaba jaegi... pakane ki jarurat nhi padegi...

He stuffed the things back in the cupboard.

Kabir - hush... ab thik h... are ye camera... ye to nishu ne mjhe gift kia tha...

He smiled looking at it and remembered his best birthday ever, how his nishu was looking the prettiest that day.

He walked towards bed and sat there with the camera and started clicking random pics of his bedroom. Just then nisha came out of the washroom after a long bath. Kabir looked at her through his camera lens she looked ethereal. Her wet hairs falling on her face were giving her an angelic look. He started clicking her pics. Nisha was busy in her wardrobe trying to take out her clothes when she hear the clicking sound.

Nisha - kya kar rha h kabir yaar..

She said pulling her clothes from the piles of them when something fall in front of her. She picked it up. Kabir focused at her face and saw her turning pale. He immediately rushed to her.

Kabir - kya hua nishu... ye kya h

Nisha - ( showing him the box ) mere bachpan ki sabse buri yaad...

Kabir understood what she meant and turned her around.

Kabir - nisha...

Nisha - ( sensing the pain in his voice ) chhod na kabir... mai bus khud ko rok nhi paati... phek de ise...

Kabir - nhi nisha... tu kyu khud ko rokegi... tu ladegi... is sab se... kabhi bhi ise khud p bhaari mat padne dena nishu... u r my brave girl... we will fight with this together... ur hm ise nhi phekenge... ye tjhe hmesha yaad dilaega ki tujhe iss sabse ladna h...

Nisha looked at kabir with so much of luv and respect.

Nisha - ha kabir... ladungi mai... apne lie... apne us pyaare se bachpan k lie jo tabaah ho gya... tere lie... kabhi haar nhi manungi mai...

Kabir smiled and embraced her in his arms.



Scene - 4
Gh house

Jwalu was in her room smiling at looking some thing. Kirti saw her through window and entered her room. She looked at what jwalu was staring at. She saw her smiling dreamily seeing a novel's cover page.

Kirti - jwalu... jwalu... ( she shaked her)

Jwalu - hmmm... haa... haa kirti di bolo

Kirti - kyu muskura rhi h tu... hmmm

Jwalu - kuch..kuch... bhi to nhi... vo to mai book padke has rhi thi...

Kirti - achha band book kaun padta h ye bta... tu kya ye Shakespeare ki shakal dekh k has rhi h...

Jwalu - vo... vo...

Kirti - jwalu... tu thik h na... kuch h to bol de yaar... tu... tu kisi ko like karti h kya..

Jwalu - ha... hai... nhi... nhi... nhi... to... kaisi baatein kar rhi ho aap... jao mjhe padna h...

She turned her face and pick a book to read while kirti walked away from her.

Kirti - dolly di sahi hi kh rhi h lagta h... kuch to hua hi h ise

Scene - 5
Dolly's office

Dolly was again in AR's cabin.

Dolly - (monologue ) bhagwan aaj is khadoos ka mood achha hona chahiye... warna fir chhuti cancel kar dega.

AR - to miss gangwal aapko maine pehle bhi bola tha ki ese hi kisi ko leave nhi milti... phir bhi aap yha aa gyi ye application lke...

Dolly - sir its really very urgent... ur ye application nhi h... mere divorce ki hearing notice h... mjhe uske lie leave chahiye... n thats really important for me.

AR - (read the notice with an unbelievable look) divorce?... oh...ohk... aapne pehle kyu nhi btaya miss gangwal... u can take the leave.

Dolly - (surprised) thank you sir.

AR - ho gya aapka... ab aap jaa sakti h

Dolly give her " u r unbelievable" look.

Dolly ( monologue ) - he bhagwan ye aadmi to meri samaj k bahar h... abhi to itni aasani se chhuti de di ur fir room se bahar nikaal dia... iske chakkar m mai kisi din paagal ho jaungi.

AR - miss dolly ka divorce... fir vo ladka... vo unka pati nhi h?... fir ye dno ek sath... ufff adhiraj... tm kyu us ladki k baare m itna sochte ho...

AR rebuked himself and focused on his file.
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NAUC - TSC

EPISODE 305

-By Niya

KNH (scene 1)

Nisha and Kabir were watching Tv.. Kabir was busying hanging the channels when he noticed that Nisha was in a deep thought.. He moved her a bit

Kabir : Kahan kho gai ??

Nisha : Kuch nahi bas Jwalu ke bare main soch rahi thi..

Kabir : Jwala ke bare main kya ?

Nisha : Kabir tujhe kya lagta hai Jwala sach main kisi ko like karti hai kya ?

Kabir turned to her and made her face him..

Kabir : Nisha.. main Jwala ko sirf kuch mahino se janta hun aur tu usse bachpan se janti hai.. toh obviously tu usse mujh se better janti hai.. but Nisha .. Jis tarah Sukku aur Kirti ne usske behaviour ke bare main bataya hai main itna keh sakta hun ki kuch toh hai.. Ya toh vo sach main kisi ko like karti hai yak uh aur hai jo vo hum se chipa rahi hai..

Nisha became tensed listening to the latter part.. Kabir could see tension lines being formed on her forehead..

Kabir : But tu tension mat le..Tujhe pata hai mujhe na bachpan se hi na mujhe CID bohut pasand hai.. Tu chinta mat kar Jwala ka case hum dono milke solve kar lenge.. aur waise bhi teri Varnaron ki sena bhi toh hai.. He winked at her.. Nisha smiled weakly...

Kabir was right.. Her cousins were there to solve this mystery..

She excused herself and went to serve the dinner

Viraj's house in Dubai (scene 2 )

Vasundra was feeling thirsty she tried to get up and have a galss of water but failed to do so as her leg was paining really badly.. she leaned a bit to get hold of the jug kept on the side table but instead the jug fell down..

Viraj who was passing by heard the noise of glass falling from Vasundra's room.. He rushed towards her room.. He saw glass shattered all over the floor carefully he went to the other side of the bed and sat next to Vasundra

Viraj : Maa.. app theek hai na.. appko chot toh nahi aai.. ?

Vasundra couldn't help but smile.. Viraj cared so much for her..

Viraj : Maa.. kuch boliye na..

He saw her eyes were teary but she had a smile on her face.. she cupped his face with one hand

Vasundra : Acha laga yeh dekh ke ki tumhe aaj bhi humari fikar hai..

Viraj removed her hand and turned his face to the other side

Viraj: Humara farz hai yeh.. Hum nahi chahte ki baad main app humse kahe ki hum appka khayal nahi rakh sake.. Hum appkeliye pani leke aate hai.. agar aur kuch chahiye hoga toh hume aawaz de dijiyega

Viraj left from there without making any eye contact with Vasundra

Vasundra sat on the bed smiling with tears in her eyes..

Vasundra : Tum jitna chaho hum se jhut keh lo Viraj.. Hum Maa hai tumhari.. Tumhari aankhon main humare liye concern aur pyaar saaf dikhta hai.. Nisha sahi keh rahi thi.. hum jaldi apne dono beton ka pyaar wapas pa lenge..

GH (Scene 3)

Laxmi was in the kitchen when Ramesh came there to have some water.. he looked at Laxmi she was looking lost.. He went to her and shook her a bit..

Ramesh : Kahan khoi hui ho..?

Laxmi: Kahi nahi..

Ramesh : Acha toh yeh kya hai ?/

He pointed out towards her hand.. she then realised that was whipping the same plate for the past 5 mins..she gave at him an apologetic look..Ramesh placed his hands on her shoulders and turned her to face him..

Ramesh: Laxmi.. Relax me... abh bato baat kya hai...?

Laxmi : Kuch nahi Ramesh vo bas main Bunty ko leke thodi chitnti hun.. Yeh ladka bilkul dhyaan nahi deta apni padhai main..

Ramesh : Ohoo Laxmi.. Vo abhi bhi bacha hai,, samay aane pe appne app samajhdar ho jayega jaise ki Sukku..

Laxmi : Sukku ?

Ramesh : Haan .. tumhe pata hai.. aaj Sukku ne mujh se kaha ki vo kuch karna chahta hai.. apna hud ka naam bana chahta hai... Apni zimedari khud uthana chahta hai

Laxmi smiled hearing this.. she closed her eyes and thanked the almighty..

Ramesh : Jis tarah Sukku ko apni zimedari ka ehsaas hua hai ussi tarah Bunty ko bhi ho jayega.. Tum tension mat lo.. aur agar tum chahao toh main baad main Bunty se baat karunga...

Laxmi smiled weakly.. Ramesh pulled her in a hug.. an assuring hug that everything will be alright..

KNH (scene 4)

Nisha was cleaning the dishes when Kabir came to her.. he hugged her from behind..

Nisha : Kabir kya kar raha hai main kaam kar rahi hun ..

Kabir nuzzed in her hair and said : Main bhi toh mera kaam hi kar raha hun na wifey..

He said in a husky voice .. Shivers ran through Nisha's spine..

Nisha : Kabir chod na.. kaam karne de.. ek kaam kar jake bed theek kar de.. main bohut thak gai hun..

Kabir left her and cribbed..

Kabir : Kya yaar main yahan romantic ho raha hun aur tujhe neend aa rahi hai..

Nisha : Aww.. tujhe romance karna hai ?

Kabir nodded his head in yes like a small kid nods when you ask him if he wants to eat a chocolate

Nisha : Theek hai.. apni eyes close kar..

Kabir gave her a big smile and did as she told him.. Nisha went to Kabir.. he slowly moved to his ear... Kabir could feel her breath near his ear..

Nisha screamed in his ears and ran from ther laughing.. Kabir opened his eyes and ran behind her..

Kabir : Nisha ki bacchji rukh tu...

He started chasing her in the entire house.. Nisha went to the terrace... Kabir followed.. Finally he caught hold of her.. he pinned her to the nearest wall.. both were breathing heavily.. they stood there trying to catch hold of their breath..

Kabir kept looking at Nisha the moon light made her face look more angelic... Nisha blushed when she saw Kabir.. His eyes were full of desire..

Nisha tried to moved but Kabir's hold was too strong for her.. suddenly he let go of her.. Nisha was abut to go down when Kabir pulled her.. he pulled her in such force that she crashed into his body making his loose his balance..

Kabir fell with Nisha on top of him.. Nisha's face was covered by her hair.. He moved her hair strand and tugged it behind her ear..

He flipped positions and now Nisha was under him.. he looked at her.. Nisha closed her eyes.. he looked at her and smiled.. He got off her and lay besides her..

Nisha opened her eyes and saw Kabir lying besides her with a smile on his face.. she kept her head on his chest.. Kabir wrapped his arms around her ..they both kept looking at the moon and the sky full of stars.. They din't realise when sleep came over and both slept in eachothers arms cuddling each other.. the stars and moon were shinning over them.. adoring the cute couple...

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sorry for a small episode please ignore all the errors ith has not been proof read

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Episode - 306

Scene - 1
Dolly's office

AR was in his office holding that notice which dolly has forgot in his cabin yesterday.
AR was sitting with his eyes closed.

*flashback*
AR - maya... wat the hell yaar... aaj hm dinner p jane wale the ur tm ho ki... tmhare lie ye modelling hi jaruri h na... mai nhi..
Maya - raj... why u r overreacting... hm kabhi bhi dinner p ja sakte h... u know how imp this assignment is..
AR - maya... I will be waiting for u in the restaurant... if mai tumhare lie thoda sa bhi imp hu... to tm aa jana..

*present*
AR - ( monologue ) huh... mai bhi kitna paagal tha... kisse umeed ki maine mere pyaar ko samjhne ki... use nhi aana tha ur vo nhi aae... saari raat intzaar kia maine...

*flashback *
AR and maya in their room.
AR - maya u know we should start planning for kids... u know na how much I luv kids... I want a cute baby girl.. my princess.. what do u think
Maya - raj how many times I have to tell u... I don't want kids... m a model... this pregnancy and all will have a bad effect on my career moreover we aren't that strong financially.
AR - jitna bhi h kaafi h maya... we can go with it.
Maya got irritated and leaves the room.

* present *
AR - ( monologue ) kitna galat tha mai... mjhe lga k ek bachha hmari shadi bacha lega... kya chahta tha mai... apni ek chhoti si family... but that too was too much to ask for

*flashback *
AR - ( a report in his hand and in a very angry tone) maya... maya... bahar aao abhi...
Maya - what is it raj... why r u shouting
AR - why m I shouting... u r unbelievable maya... tmne mjhe bina btae abortion karwa lia... ur tm mjhse ye puch rhi ho ki mai chilla kyu rha hu... tmhe jra si bhi is baat ki fikar h ki mjpe kya beet rhi h... tmhe pta h na ki ye bachha mere lie kitna imp tha... tm esa kaise kar sakti ho... maa thi tum uski... tmhare andar pal rhi jaan ko tm kaise maar sakti ho... mere bachhe ko mjhse bina puche tm... ( he started shaking and crying)
Maya - raj bhot bol lia tmne... maine tmhe pehle bhi kha tha ki mjhe ye bachha nhi chahie... ur tm kya mjhe dosh de rhe ho... pehle apne aap ko dekho... ek middle class ghar m mai apne bachhe ko kabhi bda nhi karungi... tm de hi kya sakte ho mjhe ur mere bachhe ko... mai apne dum p itni badi model hu... kitne log mere peeche h... tm ho hi kya...
AR - tm ye kya kh rhi ho...
Maya - sach kh rhi hu raj... vo sach jo tm kabhi nhi dekh sakte... mai jaa rhi hu tmhe chhodkar... ye rha divorce notice... maine sign kar die h... esi life se achha h ki mai tmhe chhod du...
Maya walked away throwing a letter in front of AR.

* present *
AR - ( monologue / a lone tear escaped from his eyes) mera bus ek sapna tha... apni chhoti si family ka... vo bhi poora nhi ho saka... ye divorce... shayad meri hi galati thi... mai hi use kabhi khush nhi rkh saka... ek vo aurat thi jiske lie uska career hi sab kuch tha... ur ek miss gangwal h... jo apne career k sath apne bachhe ki bhi care kar rhi h... infact uske lie hi kaam kar rhi h...


Scene - 2
Kabir's academy

Kabir was teaching his students some dance steps when a peon called him.

Peon - sir kuch naya log ka joining hua h aaj... vo kya hota h vo... aacting wala course ha usme...
Kabir - are bhaiya aacting nhi acting... ha to usme kya...
Peon - vo un bachha log ko bhi aapko ye uchhal kud wala nach sikhana padega...
Kabir - uchhal kud wala nach? Achha... ye hip hop ur contemporary... he bhagwan bhaiya aap na kamaal ho... le aao un bachha log ko... (he started laughing)

Some boys and girls entered in his hall.

Kabir was back facing them.
Kabir - (turning towards them ) hello... sukkuuu (he shouted in disbelief)
Everyone - sukku ?????
Kabir - oh m sorry guys... u all be here I will be right back...
( he signalled him to come outside)

Kabir - sukku tu yha kaise...
Sukku - abe duffer... in lgo k sath aaya hu to course m admission hi.lia hoga... ye koi park h jo ghumne aaunga...
Kabir - ha yaar... tune admission le lia vo aacting wale course m...
Sukku - kabir nisha ne kal tere sir p koi bartan to nhi maara na... kaisi baatein kar rha h... tu thik h na bhai
Kabir - oe m totally fine... tu ye sab chhod ur ye bta ki tu sure h na is sab k lie...
Sukku - ha kabir... m confident enough ab chale ya yha bhi pitne ka iraada h... guruji...
Kabir - yha bhi matlab... shishy..
Sukku - ghar p to tu maar hi khata h na...
( he ran laughing)
Kabir - abe sirf suketu... tu beta kha jaega... btaunga tjhe bhi...
(Kabir returned to the rehearsal hall)

Scene - 3
Kn house

Nisha - ( on phone) kya baat kar rhe ho maa... viraj sir ne aapko maa bola... sachhiii...
Vj - ha nisha... u know hm kitne khush h aaj... hmara viraj hmara kitna khayal rkh rha h...bus jojo bhi hme maaf kar deta to hmare dil ko tassali ho jati..
Nisha - maa... kabir aapko maaf kar chuka h...
Vj - rehne do nisha... hm jante h tb usne bus ese kehne k lie hme maaf kar dia tha... itne din ho gye... hmare jojo ne hmse baat tk nhi ki h... kya vo hme bilkul yaad nhi karta..
Nisha - nhi maa... vo aapko bhot miss karta h... bus kuch kehta nhi h...
Vj - hme usse baat karni h nisha... pls bus ek baar hmari usse baat kara dijie
Nisha - maa... lagta h jojo... matlab kabir aa gya... mai speaker p phone kar rhi hu... aap usse baat kar lijie...

Nisha put the phone on speaker and hide behind the sofa.

Kabir entered the room

Kabir - nisha... nisha...
Vj - (on phone ) jojo... kaise h aap... hme bilkul yaad nhi karte na...

Kabir got freezed at his mother's voice he looked for its source and found nisha's phone on the table.

Vj - jojo... please hme maaf kar do please... beta hm sach m bhot sharminda h apne kie p... (she started crying and kabir can hear that) hm har din har pal yhi prarthna karte h ki aap dno hme maaf kar de... pta h kal itne saalo m pehli baar hmne viraj k muh se maa suna... par hm jante h usne abhi tk hme maaf nhi kiya h ur aapne bhi... par hm koshish karte rhenge aap dno ko mnane ki... hm haar nhi manenge beta... (she cried bitterly)

Kabir was hearing all this, his heart was squeezing in pain listening to his mother's cries.

Kabir - mom...
Vj - jojo... beta hm sun rhe h... pls hme maaf kar dijie... pls hmse baat kijie.
Kabir - ( picking up the phone) mom... m sorry m sooo sorry mom... I hurted u again... par mai... (he choked on his emotions)
Vj - don't be sorry beta... galati to hmari h... please don't feel bad...
Kabir - mom I love you... I luv u mom... I promise aage se aapko kabhi hurt nhi karunga.
Vj - I know jojo... stop crying beta aapne hme maaf kar diya isse achhi ur koi baat nhi ho sakti hmare lie... ab aap dekhiyega hm viraj ko bhi mna lenge...
Kabir - I know mom bade bhaiya will forgive u soon..
Vj - achha jojo... m hanging up... viraj aane wale honge... bye beta
Kabir - bye mom... luv u

Kabir hunged up and wiped his tears. He searched nisha and found her sitting behid the sofa with her eyes closed and tears flowing through them. He thanked god for giving him her and sat beside her hugging her tightly.

Kabir - thank u nisha... thank you sooo much...
Nisha silenced him by her finger and hugged him ever so tightly.

Scene - 4
Gh house

Uman was in courtyard and asked rukmavati to call all the members of the family while umesh himself called dadaji and dadiji.

Umesh - dadaji papa chachu... mai aap sab ko kuch btana chahta hu

He looked at aman and cousins who assured him and he smiled

Umesh - maine ur aman ne milke ek restaurant khola h... ur... ur use aaj ek hafta ho gya h...

Umesh looked at them with a bated breath.

Viren - kya... kya kha tune... tune restaurant khol lia... ur ab bta rha h... tabhi mai sochu ki is ladke ka dukaan m man kyu nhi lg rha tha itne din se... ur ek hafte se to ye aaya hi nhi... tu... nalayak tjhe mna kia tha na ki gangwals m koi bawarchi nhi hota... tjhe akal h ki nhi... apne dadaji ki izzat ka koi khayal nhi h... koi maan nhi h unki baato ka kyun... sab k sab bigde hue h... ur mjhe pta h ye sab saare cousin jaante honge is baare m kyu...

Umesh - ha papa... inhi lgo ne hmari itni madad ki h... infact kabir ur nisha ne to...

Ramesh - ha bhaiya... kabir ur nisha bhi sab jante h... ( he signalled umesh to not say about kn house mortgage)

Viren - dekha pta tha mjhe... yeh sab inhi ki harkatein h...

Dadaji - bus... viren bhot ho gya... umesh... agar tmhe restaurant kholna hi tha to tm hme bta sakte the ye baat... ha mai manta hu ki mjhe yeh sab pasand nhi... par beta... ese chhupa k tumne ye sab kia... tm in sab m sabse bade ur samajhdar ho... mjhe tmse ye umeed nhi thi...

Umesh looked guiltly at him

Dadaji - par mjhe khushi h ki tmne apne dum p kuch kia umesh... ur mai sochta hu ki tm ise achhe se aage badaoge ur safal hoge...

Dadaji came forward and put his hand on his head. Umesh looked at him and hugged his dadaji while viren looked at his father in disbelief.

Scene - 5
Kn house

Kabir came out of the washroom after freshening up. He saw nisha sitting on the bed with her arms crossed and looking at him intently.

Kabir - ese kya ghoor rhi h... pta h mjhe mai bhot hot n handsome hu...

He walked towards bed and sat on it.

Nisha - mere scooter ko kya hua tha kabir...

Kabir - (monologue ) mar gya beta... pta to nhi chal gya ise.. ( to nisha ) btaya to tha nisha... vo kisi ne...

Nisha - kisine takkar maar di hmmm... abhi btati hu...

She picked up the pillow and begin hitting him.

Nisha - jhoot bola tne... tne meri scooter thok di kabir... teri to mai jaan le lungi... ( she kept hitting him) vo garage wala aaya tha usne btaya mjhe... tu kitna k h... tune mere scooter ka kya haal kar dia...

Kabir tried to ditch her hits but she was still angry and hitting him.

Kabir - he bhagwan bachale mjhe... are... nishu... sorry yaar...

Kabir pulled pillow from her and trapped her under himself.

Nisha - chhod mjhe... kabir... bhot gusse m hu mai samjha...

Kabir entangled his legs with her and trapped her hands.

Kabir - Shhh... ab to possible nhi h...

Kabir started inhaling her smell sending sparkes through her spine. He started placing feathery kisses across her nape.

Nisha - ka..kabirrr... chhod na yaar
(She closed her eyes)

Kabir - koi crime thodi na kar rha hu...apni biwi ko pyaar kar rha hu... so no hinderance...romance time wifey...

Kabir kept teasing her senses through his fingers travelling all over her body. She finally gave up to the desire which aroused and encircled her arms around him. He smiled and closes in to kiss her deeply. She very well knew their yearning for each other that reflected in that deep passionate kiss. Kabir too know where it is leading to but there was no going back neither he wanted to. They kept loving each other till they fall asleep. The night experienced another magical union of the two love birds.


AN- hi guys i know ye lambaaa ho gya.. but u know me well na... i can't write chhotu... par mjhe comment chahie😭

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