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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Lovely update👏

Nechara asr
Vo gaib ha😲
Update soon😳

thanchu...so much aimzzz😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
unresd sorry for late comment niju
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

unresd sorry for late comment niju

i already told u earlier vaissy dat dont be sorry i hate d word sorry yr😡 so just chill vaissy🤣 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

res 😆 unres
amazing update niju 👏
finally mystery solve ho rahi h par abhi bhi bohot question h ASR kaha h???
nisha kabir ko kaise dhundegi???
update agla part soon niju

thanchu...so much vaissy...😊...sare ques. k ans. pane kbliye thoda sabr kro...kyuki sabr ka fal mystery unfold hota h🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res kr di maine superlate hi sahi🤣

SUPERLATE UNRES😳

NiMissyy Sabse Pehle Yeh Jhappiss lee🤗🤗🤗 Thank U 4 Ur Patience in waiting 4 my comments😳 Actually Mujhe bura laga wen ur PM came isliye socha aaj kam se kam ek kahani padke UNRES karu...😳 So Here I m with My Superlate comments😳

Abt The Update...👏👏👏👏

Finally The Truth is out👍🏼

@BOLD isse mujhe Mere ASR feels aaye☺️ aur I loved Kasir's dialogue😳

agar is baar tumlogo ne apne muh nhi khole...to apne jawab apne sath yumlok le k jane k liye taiyaar ho jao...

ASR(Arjun Singh Rathore) tune iss update par har jagah ASR likha hai☺️🤣

Mujhe Kabira ke papa ke naam se zyada Mujhe Mere ASR yaad aayi...😳🤣 Toh confuse nahi karungi.. I wl say Mere ASR wen I want to mention Arjun🤣

Tere ASR ko kisne Kidnap kia phir???😲🤣

Yeh Industrlists bhi nah Bachom se drugs banwathe the???😲 Seriously yaar 😡😡😡 aur voh Gadha Inspector Flat ke naam sunke hi saari Josh khatam...😡😡😡😡 Idiotss...🤢 Kabhi Kabhi aisa lagtha hai ki agar Police ki poori system ko badnaam karwane wale aise koi chote soch wale keede hothe hai... 😡😡😡🤢

I was Rofl ng a t the names "Anna Anadi" & "Chote poppat"🤣🤣🤣🤣

Finally Vijay & Arun apne plan ke first step paar kar lia😆🤣

Kasir is soo intelligent nah.. directly ASR ka naam nahi bola taki shaq uspar na ayae...👏 Shmaart hai Kasir bhi MERE ASR ki tarah😎🤣 I m impressed again😈🤣

after hanging call kasir started crying her heart out...

@BOLD felt bad 4 Kasir...🤔 I hope Tere ASR usko jaldi mile😃 BTW NiMissy @RED waha HIS hona chahiye nah😉🤣 EDIT kar do jaldi.. Bechare Kasir ka Gender change math karwaao..😆🤣🤣🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Rain again started... KSEB abhi jaayegi..😡🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Res kr di maine superlate hi sahi🤣

is dard-e-dil ko aap hi k res ka wait tha😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres ed on pg 35🤣 missed nIshu in this update😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Res kr di maine superlate hi sahi🤣

SUPERLATE UNRES😳

NiMissyy Sabse Pehle Yeh Jhappiss lee🤗🤗🤗 Thank U 4 Ur Patience in waiting 4 my comments😳 Actually Mujhe bura laga wen ur PM came isliye socha aaj kam se kam ek kahani padke UNRES karu...😳 So Here I m with My Superlate comments😳

Abt The Update...👏

Finally The Truth is out👍🏼

@BOLD isse mujhe Mere ASR feels aaye☺️ aur I loved Kasir's dialogue😳

agar is baar tumlogo ne apne muh nhi khole...to apne jawab apne sath yumlok le k jane k liye taiyaar ho jao...

ASR(Arjun Singh Rathore) tune iss update par har jagah ASR likha hai☺️🤣

Mujhe Kabira ke papa ke naam se zyada Mujhe Mere ASR yaad aayi...😳🤣 Toh confuse nahi karungi.. I wl say Mere ASR wen I want to mention Arjun🤣

Tere ASR ko kisne Kidnap kia phir???😲🤣

Yeh Industrlists bhi nah Bachom se drugs banwathe the???😲 Seriously yaar 😡😡😡 aur voh Gadha Inspector Flat ke naam sunke hi saari Josh khatam...😡 Idiotss...🤢 Kabhi Kabhi aisa lagtha hai ki agar Police ki poori system ko badnaam karwane wale aise koi chote soch wale keede hothe hai... 🤢

I was Rofl ng a t the names "Anna Anadi" & "Chote poppat"🤣

Finally Vijay & Arun apne plan ke first step paar kar lia😆🤣

Kasir is soo intelligent nah.. directly ASR ka naam nahi bola taki shaq uspar na ayae...👏 Shmaart hai Kasir bhi MERE ASR ki tarah😎🤣 I m impressed again😈🤣

after hanging call kasir started crying <font color="#FF0000">her</font> heart out...

@BOLD felt bad 4 Kasir...🤔 I hope Tere ASR usko jaldi mile😃 BTW NiMissy @RED waha HIS hona chahiye nah😉🤣 EDIT kar do jaldi.. Bechare Kasir ka Gender change math karwaao..🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Rain again started... KSEB abhi jaayegi..😡🤣

thanchu...so much sarussy😊 for dis wonderful surprise❤️...maine aaj tera unres expect nhi kia tha becoz tomorrow is yr exam na😊...but fir b tune time manage kr k unres kuaa uske liye bada wala magical hug🤗 😎...now comin...g to yr comment...thnx for dis lovely❤️...comment...mera ASR tera ASR kya idea tha confusion dur krne ka🤣🤣
her wala error yup abhi thk krti hu...tere alawa kisi ne ye notice hi nhi kia...😉

PS: ATB for yr exams👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guyzzz thanx a lot for yr love and support...n so sorry for dis super late update...here is d next part...

PART 9

WO BEETE DIN



At Afternoon
Nisha reached orphanage...
as soon as she reached orphanage...unknowingly her heart started beating verry fast..like...indirectly her heart signalling her dat aaj kuch to hone wala h...

Outside orphanage...
Nisha- kabir Tere jane k baad akele yha aane ka dil hi nhi krta...ye dusri baar h ki mai yha akele aa rhi...ya yu kahu ki teri yaad fir mujhe yhaa khich laayi...but i hope ki jab agli baar mai yha aau to fir se tere hi sath aau...
She den takes a long breathe n enter d orphanage...
It was an old house wid 3 halls 1 living room 1 kitchen 1 office room and a small garden full of greenery...

As soon as she entered her eyes falls on the greenery and peace of garden...aur...wo garden ki ore apni hi dhun me aise badhte ja rhi thi ki mano use koi...apni ore khich rha ho...
her trance was den broken by a melodious voice...

Nisha idhar aana yha...baithte h...dekh na...kitni acchi hwa chal rhi

Kabir She said and happily ran towards him but jaise hi wo usko chhune k liye apna hath badhati h wo vanish ho jata h...

She den became sad n wo sadly aage badhti h to fir ek awaaz use sunaai deti h...

Nisha aaj to apne sath sath mai teri bhi icecream kha jaunga..
Wid dat voice she also hears...a female voice...
oye meri icecream ko hath bhi lagaya na...to tera hath tod k kisi doggy ko gift kr dungi
She den roll her eyes towards d directn of dat voice n usne khud ko n kabir ko grass me baith k icecream khate dekha...on seeing dat scene she smiles painfully while her eyes n heart were filled wid tears... n widin a few sec. Dat scene was also vanished...
She den again moves ahead n goes towards a bench she comfortably sits in it... n widout realizing she again lost in her golden memories...

FLASHBACK

After dat valentines night...nibir became gud frnds dey started liking each other secretly...dey were each other's secret crush...saurav knows abt der feelings...so he always teases dem...wenever saurav teases dem nibir blushes n steal glances of each other...in dis way 8 months hv been passed...

After 8 month at orphanage...

Nisha was entering orphanage wid many things...she was trying to balance herself...wid dose things...but unfortunately wo kisi se takra gyi...n she lost her balance jiska result nisha n jisse wo takraai dono floor pe gir pade...
Nisha was about to loose her temper on dat person wen she sees dat ki wo person jisse wo takraai wo aur koi nhi balki kabir h...
N den Both in unison shouted- wat r u doing here???
After den Both smiles on asking same type of question at same time...
Nisha den broke d silence n said
Nisha- Actually aaj dolly di ka Birthday h na to wo har saal in baccho k sath yha apna bday mnati h but aaj unki tabiyat kharaab h na...to wo to yha nhi aa paai isliye mai baccho k liye ye sab le k aa gyi...
Kabir- oh...mai yha apne dad k kaam ki wajah se aaya tha...
Nisha- ohk...waise tere dad kya krte h??
To ignore her question intentionally kabir asked her another question...
Kabir- to tu bhi yha aati h hmesha apni dolly di k sath...
Nisha- nhi..yr...mai yha first time aayi hu...
Kabir- wat a coincidence mai b yha first time hi aaya hu...
Nisha- to chale baccho ko ye sare gifts dene...
Kabir noded n helps her in holding gifts...den dey went towards hall...
Nisha- baccho ...dolly di ne dekho tum sab k liye kya bheja h...
Pihu(small girl)- dolly di nhi aai...
Nisha- nhi beta unki na thodi tabiyat kharab ho gyi isiliye unhone mujhe bheja h aapko giffy dene k liye...
Pihu- i will play(pray) ki dolly di daldi (jaldi) theek ho jaye...waichhe aapdono ka kya naam h...
Kabir- mera naam kabir h aur ye aapki nisha di h...waise...aapka kya naam h princess...
Pihu- mela naam piu h...
Nisha- aweee chho chhweet name...n she kissed in pihu's cheek...
Den nibir un baccho ko sare gifts dete h...bacche gifts le k bhut khush ho jate h...fir nibir khub der un baccho k sath khelte h...n khelte khelte 8:00 baj jati h...den dey bid bye to all kids n wo orphanage k bahar aa jate h...
At road
Nisha kya mai tujhe drop krdu...nisha noded yes...
Kabir- ruk mai riksha rokta hu...
Nisha- kabir lets walk...
Kabir(happily+ shockingly) - okkieee...
Dey started walking...while walking...
Nisha- kabir kitna accha laga na aaj in baccho k sath...
Kabir- ha nisha...ye meri life ka one of d best moment tha...
Nisha- is orphanage ki vibes kitni positive and inspiring h na...
Kabir- hmm...nisha in bachho ke paas kya h na hmari jaise acchi life na luxury...fir bhi har situation me muskurana har situation ko happy bnana koi inse sikhe...
Nisha smiles hearing dis...
Den suddenly kabir said...
Kabir- nisha wo dekh tootta tara...
Nisha sees n says excitedly chal jaldi eyes close kr wish mangte h
Kabir- tu aise wish mangti h???
Nisha(sarcastically)- kabir sab aise hi wish mangte h...kyu tu aise wish nhi maangta...
Kabir- Nope...kabir ka style thoda alag h...
He den spread his both arms...n shouted wid all his strength...
"WELCOME TO MY HEART"
Nisha(confusingly)- ye kya tha...aur tune aisa kyu kia...
Kabir - nisha tujhe pta h...jab b koi taara toot kr aasaman se juda ho
k jaata h na to wo jaate jaate hme
ek nyi umeed ek nyi roshni ki kiran
de k jata h...aur hme use aise hi baahein faila kr dil se welcm krna chahiye...
Nisha was mesmerized by seeing dis cute side of kabir...
Nisha- chal aaj mai bhi teri hi tarah wish maangti hu...n wo waise hi wish mangti h jaise kabir ne manga tha...(guyzz plz imagine ki wo tootta tara nibir k liye 5 min. tak aasman me hi ruka hua tha lolzzz)
Nisha- kabir kyu na hum apna agla project...is orphanage k upar bnaye i mean yha k baccho ki life k upar...
Kabir- great idea yr...
Aise hi baat krte krte nisha ka ghar aa jata h n kabir usko drop krke apne ghar chala jata h...after dat wo dono project k silsile me aksar us orphanage me jate h...in dis way der bonding wid dat kids becomes more strong...

FLASHBACK ENDS

A small girl comes towards nisha n shook her...den she finally comes back in reality...
Nisha- hie mela pihu baccha kaicchi ho??
Pihu- mai acchi hu nishu di...aap kaicche ho...aur kabil bhaiyaa kaha h...
On hearing d name of kabir tears again started forming in her eyes but she somehow controlled it in her eyes n said
Nisha- mai acchi hu baccha...tumale kabil bhaiyya na kisi kaam se bahr gye h ...isiliye nhi aa paye...
Pihu- aapne pichhli baal bhi yhi kaha tha...aur aap bhi bhut kam aati ho yha...aap to apni pihu ko bhul hi gayi...
Nisha- Aicchi baat nhi h baccha tumali nishu di tumko kabhi bhul sakti h kya...aur...agli baar aaungi na to tumale kabil bhaiyaa ka kaan khichke unko b yha apne sath leke aaungi...ok..
Pihu(jumping n clapping)- ha fil to khub mjaa aayega...
Nisha den give gifts to all d kids n spent quality time wid all d kids...after dat she bid bye to dem n comes out orphanage...

Outside orphanage
Nisha was walking suddenly a person sees her
Raj - arey ye to nisha di h...
n wo nisha ko awaaz dene hi wala tha ki use koi khich k dusri ore le jata h...
Nisha achanak se chalte chalte ruk jati h...n palat kr dekhti h...
Nisha- mujhe aisa kyu lag rha h ki kabir abhi yhi tha...yhi mere aas paas...kahin ye mera vehem to nhi...par jab bhi kabir mere aas paas hota h tabhi mujhe aisi strong feeling hoti h...
Nisha kuch der wha rukti h idhar udhar dekhti h but jab usko kabir ki presence nhi dikhti to wo chali jati h...
At other side of road...
Kabir- raj tu hosh me to h... tujhe pta bhi h ki tu ye kya karne ja rha tha...
Raj- ha bhaai mai pure hosh me hu...aur...nisha di ko aapka sach janne ka pura haq...h...
Kabir- ha raj tu sach keh rha h mai bhi nisha ko sab kuch btana chahta hu...but tujhe yaad h na ki dad ne mujhe kya kaha tha...

FLASHBACK

After dropping nisha on dat night kabir reached his home...he den rang d bell of his house...A person opens d door ...on seeing dat person kabir cant controlled himself n immediately hug dat person wid all his emotions...
Kabir(happily)- dad aap kab aaye i miss uh so much...
ASR- i miss u too...my jojo...
Kabir- dad plz dont call me jojo...
ASR- ok jojo...🤣
Kirti- ha dad aap jojo bro ko jojo mat bulaiye unhe bilkul accha nhi lagta jab aap unhe jojo bulate h
Kabir(hell irritated)- kirti...ki bacchi...
Kirti- sorry jojo bro i mean kabir bro...kaan pakad k sorry...
On seeing dis cute antics of kirti kabir started laughing...
While laughing kabir saw a person n said...
Kabir- dad ye kaun h???
ASR- ye raj h mera student n mera new assistant...(ASR social worker h n raj uska aasistant)
Kabir noded...
Den ASR kabir ko ek corner me le jata h n btata h ki...raj k mom n dad ka kuch dino pehle accident ho gya tha n abse wo yhi rahega...becoz for ASR raj was like his son
Kabir - ok dad...i dont mind...n mai aapse ek aur baat puchu???
ASR- ha puccho???
Kabir- dad aapne hme apne baare me chhupane ko kyu kaha???hum kisi ko kyu nhi bta sakte yha ki hum ASR k childrens h???
ASR- beta waqt aane pe tumhe iska jawaab zarur mil jayega par jab tak mai jaisa kehta hu waisa kro...
Kabir den noded positively...n went towards raj...
Kabir- hie raj m kabir
Raj- hello sir
Kabir- hey dont call me sir call me kabir...
Raj- no i cant call u kabir mmm...can i call u bhai???
Kabir- offcourse raj n he hugs raj...
Kirti(happily)- chalo mujhe ek... aur bhai mil gya...yipieee n she started jumping...wid joy
Seeing kirti like dis everyone started laughing...

FLASHBACK ENDS

Guyzzz plz leave yr feedback...



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Posted: 9 years ago
atlast updated phew n it was just awesome...

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