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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start yaar
Don't be sad for writing long because we all loved it
Please update soon
Do pm me from next time please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow yaar...this is a really good story
and the first part was superb...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maniwood

Awesome start yaar

Don't be sad for writing long because we all loved it
Please update soon
Do pm me from next time please

thank you I m glad that u liked it n I vil surely pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Lachu-

wow yaar...this is a really good story

and the first part was superb...

thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update more w8ing for it and 0lz PM me when u updated it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update more w8ing for it and 0lz PM me when u updated it

i m really happy that u liked it...I vl try to update it when I get some time bt m nt sure when...n I vl surely pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tysm for your precious comments I m sry I won't b able to update it regularly but vl update it when I get some time n this part is especially for shanaya hope u all like it

[centre]CHAPTER 2-THE DANCE CHALLENGE [/center

it was a new morning with new challenges and opportunities for the fout people sleeping peacefully and were going to experience many feelings for the first time
The sun rays broke her peaceful sleep she woke up with new hopes and spirit a smile made it's way to her face when she saw her bestie sleeping like a little baby Vivansha was sleeping peacefully cuddling her pillow as if it was her teddy with her mouth open she really looks like a baby while sleeping nisha decided to let her bestie sleep a little more and when to get ready nisha got ready and Came t wake up Vivansha
Nisha - viyu uth
Vivansha-ky h nishu sone de na
Nisha -viyu late ho rha h yaar
Vivansha-bas 2 min aur plz
Nisha-mujhe pata h tera 2min kitne chote h uth jaldi
Vivansha-pakka 2 min plz
Nisha knew how to Handel her she took ka deep breath and shouted loudly in her ears VIVANSHA!!!!!!!
Vivansha woke up with a jerk breathing heavily
Vivansha-kya nishu tu bhi
Nisha-chal ab jaldi ready ho jaa
Vivansha-yes boss
Nisha-good aur h mana kal Princi se pucha rehearsal hall ke liya to unhone kaha h ki agar tujhe practice karni h to abhi hi jaana jayega cls hours ma booking karni padti h to tu ready hoke chali jaa
V-chali jaa matlab tu kyu nhi aa rhi
N-mera mood nhi h
V-agli baar mujse jhut bola to dekh lena ma tujse 3 ghante baat nhi karugi samjhi
N-viyu plz yaar
V-nishu Kyu kar rhi h aisa yeh tera dream h yaar plz kyu chodke rhi h dance
N-viyu mujhe sochne ke liya thoda time cahiye
V-ohkk teri marzi
N-ma walk jaa rhi hu
V-ohkk ma ready hoke aati hu phir saath ma niklege
N-ohkk
Vivansha left for the rehearsal hall when nisha went to take a walk she was very confused she sat on a bench watching the see
Nisha-(to herself) ma kya karu kuch samaj hi nhi aa rha h ek taraf mera dream h to dusri Tara reality bachpan se ek dancer banane ka dream dekh h usko aise hi chod du life itni galat kyu h
A lone tear escaped her eyes all this was seen by our kabira who had came there to have a flirty walk he didn't knew what was she sad and why was she crying bt his heart pained he wanted to make her feel happy at any cost he went towards her
Kabir-gm miss donkey
Nisha saw up at him she was in no mood to fight with him so she began to leave bt kabir holded her hand from behind
K-come on miss j don't be a spoilt sport
N-m nt in a mood plz mera baat chodo
K-ma aise to tumhe yaha se jaane nhi dunga
N-mera baat chod varna tera chamcho ki tarah tujhe bhi thapad padega
K-ohh
Saying this he caught her other hand as well
K-ab mujhe thapad nhi padega
N-what te hell
Nisha stamped on his feet and kabir started shouting
K-mss j langda karegi kya
N-ab mera haat chod
K-ab toh bilkul nhi jo karna h kar le
N -kabir chod na
Nisha was trying to free her hands and kabir caught them more tightly In this fight session nisha lost her balance and fell down with kabir on top of her they both just got lost in their own world and kept looking at each other nisha found all her stress disappearing in the intensity of his eyes )
Kabir-(to himself) beautiful iski aankho me aasu bilkul acche nhi aur ab me kabhi unhealthy aane bhi nhi dunga
Soon they came out of their trance and felt a little embarrassed and got up quickly kabir moved a step away from her as he didn't wanted to make her feel more shy
N-sorry
K-kya?????
N-I said sorry
K-wow miss j ne mujhe sorry bola yeh to newspaper me aana cahiye na?
N-u r such a k
K-n u r such a j ...vaise mana abhi tak tumhara sorry accepte nhi kiya h ha agar thoda pyaar se bolo to ma sochuga
N-(with a mischievous smile) sure
She came towards him kabir was startled she was just inches apart kabir's heart skipped a beat and the next moment she stamped his feet and k started shouting
N-next time mujse mat ulajna
K-karlo jo karna h ma bhi haar manane walo me se nhi hu cahe baat mare dream ki ho ya ek challenge ki
Saying thiamin he left
N-(to herself) liya mane apne dreams pe boot jaldi give up kar diya? Kya mujhe dance continue karna cahiye
Here Vivansha was heading towards the RH but was worried about nisha she was so lost that she didn't even realized that she had entered the rehearsal hall and the music was already playing raghav who was already practicing saw her coming inside lost in her thoughts she was so lost that she bumped into a pillar and was about fall but again raghav caught her this time her eyes were open as heart knew she won't fall
R-(to himself) wow her eyes they are really angelic they look beautiful oh come on raghav what are u thinking
V-(to herself) mrs sadu looks handsome and impressive oh come on Vivansha what are u thinking
She stood up and was about to say something but was cut off by raghav
R-u love to fall na
V-of course not I was thinking something and just didn't realized
R-haa dekhna mana miss chik pick
V-argh subha subha mujhe tumse hi takrana tha
R-hello miss chik pick mana tumhe bachaya h u must thank me
V-mana kaha tha mujhe mujhe bacaho
R-u r seriously unbelievable
V-u tooo mrs sadu
R-you...what the hell are u doing here
V-tumse shaadi karne aayi hu karoge???
R-what???
V-rehearsal hall ma dance karne h aaugi na idiot
R-tum aur dance
V-kyu kisi book me likha h ma dance nhi kar sakti
R-likha hota to better rehta ...jo ladki aise itni baar girti h vo dance karte time kitni baar giregi
V-you ...what's your prblm
R-u
V-same here
R- really?
V-yes and by the way...
R-listen u ...just cut the crap I don't want to spoil my day
V-me too
R-good enough
And he left
v-how rude and viyu tujhe yeh handsome laga kya hogaya h tare choice ko aaj to dance karne ka mood bhi nhi h hostel vapas chalti hu
Vivansha met nisha in her room the anger on Vivansha's face faded as she saw that her friend is a little less stressed she felt relived nisha knew what Vivansha was thinking
N-ma sure nhi hu bt tab tak me rehearsal to kar hi sakti hu na
V-chalo atleast thoda improvement to aaya
N-hmmm n vaise room me aate waqt tu itne gusse me kyu thi
V-nthng phir se Mrs sadu mil gaya
N-phir se
V-haa chod na mujhe uss sadu ke bare me baat nhi karni h hum chalte h
N-hmmm chal
in kumar brother's room
Raghav was as usual busy with his laptop when kabir entered
K-yaar bhai tu itna kaam kaise kar leta h
R-jaise tu itni ladkiya pata leta h
K-ohh lagta h kisi se ladai hui h...let me guess miss chik pick right?????
R-haa
K-bhai yeh tujse bohot jyada hi nhi takrati h
R-mujhe uske bare me koi baat nhi karni h
K-ohkk as u say
R-accha sun meri thodi help kar de na
K-(shocked)tujhe meri help cahiye???
R-haa to itna shock kyu ho rha
k-nhi vo tujhe help cahiye or vo bhi meri
R-toh????
K-nhi tu bol
R-is baar ki fresher's party ki arrangement mujhe karni h n gaya mam incharge h n she wants ki is baar ka theme couples ho
K-toh tare liya date dhundu
Raghav glared at kabir angrily
K-ohkk no more masti
R-ma cahta hu ki yeh party tu plan kare bcoz mujhe yeh theme ke bare ma kuch samaj nhi h
K-ohkk ma kar duga
R-tysm
Nisha and Vivansha went to their classes and found both the kumar brothers were absent they were really happy as they didn't wanted to face those idiots after the class got over both the girls were passing through the corridor gossiping within themselves when the saw a long line of girls nisha decided to avoid it bt vivansha was excited to know what was happening so she dragged nisha also
Vivansha-(to a girl standing in the line) excuse me kya ho rha h
Girl-tumhe nhi pata Kabir apni date chun rha h freshers party ke liya jo bhi ladki looks aur dance me best hogi vo uske saath jayega
Vivansha-ty
Nisha-ho gaya ab chale
Vivansha-aiseyaarN-matlab
V-matlab chal na dekhte h
N-kya tu bhi viyu
V-plz pl plz plz

N-thik cha
lAnd they went forward to see how all were dancing Kabir with his two chamchas was conducting auditions and raghav was sitting there getting bored bt watching his brother rejecting everyone suddenly a girl name amaira enteredAmaira-hiiee kabir m amaira
K-well u look beautiful lets see ur dance
The music started n she was dancing like whatever it was he'll funny
Both the girls tried hard to control their laughter but couldn't n kabir rejectes her directly she was hell angry with the girls n took it as her insult and started to shouting at both of themAmaira-what do u guyz think u can easily impress kabirV-we don't even need toN-n dance is not done to impress someone it's done to express our feelingsA-yaar right u must have expressed your feelings to to your friend to get admission in this cls u middle cls bi..
.V-SHUT THE HELL UP...n don't even dare to speak further otherwise u won't b able to speak in your whole life she is not here due to my money she ia here due to her own talent she deserves to b here she had got the scholarship due to hee hard work not like u a spoiled brat...n yaa I doubt that u should b here or notA-whatever(n she left)Nisha could see a pride in her friend's eyes when she spoke about her she didn't even felt a bit of shame in having her instead she as happy n proud to have her nisha really felt happy that she have earned this respect for her on her ownR-(to himself) wow this girl really ha've something in her unlike others girls she ia not only proud to have nisha bt can also fight for her...ohkk miss chik pick you r nt that badKabir who was watching all this had something cooking in his mindK-(to abhi and krish) nisha kaise rahegi???
Abhi -(keeping their hands on theor cheeks) bhai mat uljho bohot jor se maarti hK-shut upK-to Vivansha) cool ...I want to challenge u n your frnd for dance competition
V-mujhe nhi lagta ki hume khudko saabit karne ki jarurat hK-of course not...but mujhe lagta h Hume challenges ko kabhi naa nhi bolne cahiyeV-(to herself) ye accha moka h ek baar nisha dance kar le phir vo khudko nhi rok payegi
N-apni advice apne pass rakhV-hum taiyaar jN-whatV-tu mare liye itna nhi kar skatiN-are parV-plz nishu
N-thik h
K-cool then abhi Krish 6 boys aur 6 girls ko ikhatha karo all must b best in danceA, Kr-ji bhaiK-raghav ready ho jaa dance ke liya
R-ma kyu
K-yaar vo do h ma akela kya karuga
R-abhi ya krish ko lele
K-vo log nisha ke naam se bhi darte h auto shaayad Vivansha se bhi
R-par Kabir
K-plz bhai
R-accha chal thik hAs kabir said 6 boys and 6girls were selected
K-ohkk ye 6 ladkiya hamare saath 2-2 Ke group banakar dance karegi agar inmese kisi ne bhi hamare 3steps bhi match kar liya to hum haar man lenge bt agar nhi kar payi to end me him tumhare saath dance karege aur agar tumne hamare moves match kar liye toh u win simple aur same ful tum logo ke liye done?
V-done
The music started no one of the 12were able to match even a single step with them they were perfect with each beat of that fast music the students shocked to see the scene they knew about kabir bt the other the were also amazing and the one shocked the most was raghav he was a brilliant dancer bt no one knew it from a yearFinally the music changed and the four came across each other they began to dance their heart told them that they were dancing with the best partners they can ever get they felt as if it ws the best dance of their life they didn't wanted the music to stop they wished they could dance like this forever it felt like eternity to them bt they knew it has to end the music stopped and the four of them were greated with a huge round of applause
Nisha now knew what she wanted to do she wanted to dance and now she will she won't let go her dreams so easily Vivansha gave her winning smile she knew her friend had decided to follow her heart only a look of nisha's face told her everything she was happy for her bestieRaghav and kabir were impresed with the girls
Kabir-(to himself) mujhe meri partner mil gayi
Raghav-(to himself) amazing yeh ladki really bohot alag h...bt ma uske baar me kyu such rha hu
Vivansha-(to herself) yeh Mrs sadu dance to accha kar leta h hmmm let's see aage kya hoga h
Nisha-(to herself)vaise yeh flirt dancer accha h hmm
Whole day was normal for everyone except kabir bcoz he was thinking ways to convince nisha to come with him to the party it wad night nisha told her mom about the decision regarding dance ahead wad happy for her daughter this was great day of their life they all slept peacefully while thinking about their day and the best dance they have ever done

everyone have some untold stories of pain and sadness that make them love and live a little different than all do these four people also had prblms some with past or some with present bt they had got the key to solve their prblms they just need to realize it
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay first to comment
Awesome update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...excited for fresher's party 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow ... Awesome update ... 👏
Waiting for the next part ... Continue soon 😊
Edited by A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A - 10 years ago

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