Ramesh/Vivek AT #5 |*The Super Cool Dad*| - Page 38

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Ok wait...😆 Mixing both...Will edit the same post...

Chapter one starts with a chori...(let's decide what it is after this) Chor/Nisha isn't revealed...And Nisha, after robbing, jumps from 2nd or 3rd floor...and as she crash lands...Ramesh wakes her with a nightmare...(Rema...Lakshmi is need ah yaar? I feel it would be great if Ramesh is alone...and Lakshmi is abroad...strained RL relationship wuld be different) Then he walks out to find Dadaji seeing nisha's pic...and flashes of kidnapping is written...

Then Kabir...may be he bangs into Shekhs also...

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

The only reason police will go to Dadu is because of history...which means...the choris have to be historically connected also...Research needed then.

Originally posted by: Teogapi

ok maybe lakshmi blames ramy for nisha's death or kidnap??? so they had a tiff and lakshmi is abroad... he can talk with nisha's pic and dara scene... nice idea...

Originally posted by: Anagha.

chap 2 can be police coming to dadu with chori details..

and one more thing...if we r planning to keep nisha the chor under wraps we should certainly show her other side...Nisha as a carefree girl leading a normal life should be there in first/2nd chap...

we should keep the secret that nisha is chor form the readers atleast for 1st/2nd chap...then we can introduce nisha as a thief to viewers and then after 4.5h chori,nisha the chor is revealed to aka

Originally posted by: Anagha.

chap 2 can be police coming to dadu with chori details..

and one more thing...if we r planning to keep nisha the chor under wraps we should certainly show her other side...Nisha as a carefree girl leading a normal life should be there in first/2nd chap...

we should keep the secret that nisha is chor form the readers atleast for 1st/2nd chap...then we can introduce nisha as a thief to viewers and then after 4.5h chori,nisha the chor is revealed to aka

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Lakshmi might not blame Ramesh...but his job may be? Or Ramesh feels his family isn't safe here and hence sends them away, and Lakshmi reluctantly goes away?

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Hmm...

Let's do one thing then...We have to make Ramesh being in service then...he works for the CBI even now...DaRa can be in one city..

While KN in some other cities...Kabir could have given exams or something...or under training for CBI...and he gets recruited..and his first case is under Ramy...

Nisha on the other side can come across as a history/researcher or something...

Does KN meet or not...you guys decide...BUT...remember we don't have time for KN I think..😆

Originally posted by: Teogapi

done... so are sunty there???

ramy can call lakshmi then... ya phir she comes for nisha's barsi?/😆

Originally posted by: Teogapi

so we can leave out mohan then?? ya phir we can make him the hawaldaar..🤣

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Hmm...

Let's do one thing then...We have to make Ramesh being in service then...he works for the CBI even now...DaRa can be in one city..

While KN in some other cities...Kabir could have given exams or something...or under training for CBI...and he gets recruited..and his first case is under Ramy...

Nisha on the other side can come across as a history/researcher or something...

Does KN meet or not...you guys decide...BUT...remember we don't have time for KN I think..😆