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Teogapi

@Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: Anagha.

IDK...i am confused😕

u are gonna update back to back parts??? ko nahi i wil enjoy it.. majja for the readers...😆

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@blah-blah

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

no...not 9

urghhh !someone help me😆

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Scenes Distribution😆

Scene 7 - Dadaji talking about OLXing, may be shows a boy's photo and Ramesh fights but Nisha agrees...Puneet

Scene 8 RL confronting Nisha...maybe she responds like i have done my mann ki and failed i dont wanna make more mistakes andbring more badnaami etc...Anu

Scene 9 Nightmare and RL comforting her, scared themselves. Anu

Scene 10 Something with the family? Viren or Rupan taunting? Can be nisha becoming the old tomboy nisha with a haircut and all and rupan viren taunting.. Rema

Scene 11 Cousins worried about Nisha and finds something off..Lachu

Scene 12 RL talking to Dadaji-Dadi that Nisha is under stress and is depressed? RL strongly tells Nisha won't be marrying...and Dadaji tells he would go ahead. Shwetha

Scene 13 Cousins planning to cheer up Nisha.

Scene 14 Planning executed...but Nisha gets panic attack? Blind fold game..Rema

Scene 15 Cousins confront Dadaji-Dadi and they tell the truth to the family. Cousins furious.

Scene 16 RL with Nisha. Putting her to sleep and discussing about the past incident and understanding she is haunted by Pilani incident and deciding they are taking her to counseling.Lekha

Scene 17 Next day, Cousins talk with Nisha and ask why she never told them about this. Lekha

Scene 18 RL tell Dadaji and others that Nisha won't get into marriage till she overcomes her past and they are taking her to counseling. Lachu

Scene 19 Cousins try persuading Nisha for counseling...Dadi enters (with RL) and convinces Nisha...Dadaji also comes in and apologises. Shwetha

Scene 20 Counseling...RLN together. Anu

Epilogue -

Edited by Shwets1502 - 10 years ago

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

@Rema Sure...So we have an epilogue part also..😆 I'll add that in the list.

@Anu...just see the list and tell what changes should be made..also which scene you want to swap with.

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Teogapi

@Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Anagha.

was planning to update it today...
but nahi hua😆

chot lg gayi na... rest for a while yaarr..

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gpuneet

@gpuneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
I am changing my scene order...because Puneet will have a long gap without scenes to write then...and can't give the first scene as it would be too soon for him to update.

Just logged in and wanted to tell what i just realised since i am going to hostel from 27 idk if i can come online leavealone writing so i guess you should not consider me 😭

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blah-blah

@blah-blah

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

lachu and lekha already decided their parts?

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Anagha.
lachu and lekha already decided their parts?

Nahi yaar...I have just put their names randomly so that we don't miss it...Just to avoid confusion.

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Teogapi

@Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
@Rema Sure...So we have an epilogue part also..😆 I'll add that in the list.

@Anu...just see the list and tell what changes should be made..also which scene you want to swap with.

i want part 14.. doosra u guys decide..😆

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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Posted: 10 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: gpuneet

Just logged in and wanted to tell what i just realised since i am going to hostel from 27 idk if i can come online leavealone writing so i guess you should not consider me 😭

Will you be able to do another scene say...for Thursday?