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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

i understood that...but shweta said other truth n the only truth I know about is pilani...which is the other one😕

When did I say about another truth? I said...what other truth is there to tell...There is only Pilani.

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Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

i understood that...but shweta said other truth n the only truth I know about is pilani...which is the other one😕

she was telling the same..😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Haha...I can do precis writing for ya...😆😆

i more doubt

i it like convo ya just like chap?

i mean we are writing like the last SS,buut concentrating on 1 scene at a time ya like thi:

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Posted: 10 years ago

#404

@shwets...when exactly do all cousins know about pilani?!?!

after blindfold?

as of now only dolly n jwalu know right?

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Teogapi
@bold wahi toh...dadaji accepting can be done in the 18th scene na??
wahi full fledged and complete... it can be short too..😆

Scene 18...I want it to be full on blasting type ya...😆 Make Dadaji feel guilty and the rest also. May be once RL leaves...we can have Vimla telling the other lot how much RLN have been going through and they had no clue and have been troubling them always which makes Dadaji even more guilty?

And then he accepts his mistake in Scene 19 na...Acha..let's make him apologise also.

No short...Let the scenes take the length they want...but not too short...😆

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anagha.

i more doubt
i it like convo ya just like chap?
i mean we are writing like the last SS,buut concentrating on 1 scene at a time ya like thi:

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What do you guys feel like writing? Shall we try dialogue structure?

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Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Haha...I can do precis writing for ya...😆😆

and i cant write long ones... i have to think a lot...😆

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@shwets...when exactly do all cousins know about pilani?!?!

after blindfold?

as of now only dolly n jwalu know right?

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Yes...After blindfold...Dadaji-dadi tells the family.

Yes...and of course RL and Dadaji-Dadi.

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Lekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anagha.

i more doubt
i it like convo ya just like chap?
i mean we are writing like the last SS,buut concentrating on 1 scene at a time ya like thi:

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not like...

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i feel somewhat like a screen writer who has no1 to enact the scene😆

can we have the normal way with quotes

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Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Scene 18...I want it to be full on blasting type ya...😆 Make Dadaji feel guilty and the rest also. May be once RL leaves...we can have Vimla telling the other lot how much RLN have been going through and they had no clue and have been troubling them always which makes Dadaji even more guilty?

And then he accepts his mistake in Scene 19 na...Acha..let's make him apologise also.

No short...Let the scenes take the length they want...but not too short...😆

too short nahi like the rn scene of that group ss??/ is that length fine...