My Story of NAUC (chap 7 updated) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Grace

everyone is reading the story...its just that ppl dont get enough time to comment everytime...that soesnt mean that we r not following ur story.
i really like this story coz u handled thins in a unique way
i didnt comment co i didnt read 2-3 updates.
will read and comment surely!
discontinue only if u are finding it difficult to progress with the storyline...coz i knw its difficult
but if u have the storyline plz dont discontinue...we all write coz is our hobby...its not abt ppl treading/not reading...its mainly abt how we feel after writing!...and i will be really glad if u continue this as this is one of my fav as all characters get equal priority!
so pls dont discontinue...its a request...not when u knw what to write!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
please, please,please continue😊...
I love ur story and try to comment on all updates...
And evn if i dont, then I read the updates...
We love d story so please continue it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
thank u guys for ur support will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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At the terrace,

Cousins and sumit are having fun. Then cousins gave privacy to the newly engaged couples and left the place. The cousins were in another room and discussing what will the couples will talk secretly. Suddenly umesh gave a starry look as jwala and bunty were with them. They changed the topic.

While they were having fun, kirti got a call from NIFT that she got admission and need to join next week in Jodhpur. She was so excited and hugged saurav and kissed him.

Cousins were shocked to see the scene and nisha went and breaks the hug. Saurav felt embarrassed and felt shy. Kirti realized what she has done and felt shy and ran from there.

Cousins started to pull saurav's leg. Meanwhile when kirti crossed the terrace room she saw the love birds are about to kiss each other. She doesn't know what to do and she started screaming, before her voice comes out saurav closed her mouth and they have an eyelock.

Umesh and nisha came out to search for them they found them and before they could say something they saw the couples kissing each other and don't know what to do.

They just left the place. Suddenly dolly turns and sees kirti and saurav in a Trans state and shouted. Everybody came and asked dolly "what happened".

Dolly: nothing I just had a bad dream

Rupan: bad dream in the morning

Dolly; nothing chachi! I waass..

Every one left except the cousins, sumit and saurav.

Saurav was about to leave.,

Nisha (Angry Voice): saurav wait!

Dolly: what was happening??? When I turned and saw u both...

Kirti (to change the topic): dolly di., what were u doing??

Dolly: I dint do anything and by the way u don't change the topic.

Nisha: guys leave it I am going to say a good news..

Kirti: even I want to say..

Suku: nisha first and them kirti

Nisha: I got a admission in archery academy and they asked me to come tomorrow to join

Suku: wow nishu that's the good news

Sumit: kirti wat abt u??

Kirti: I got admission in NIFT and going to join next week.

Jwala: then we will have party..

Bunty: yes and this time sumit jeju will give us party

Sumit: ok then tomorrow we will meet..

Cousins came and informed the good news to the elders and everyone was happy.

Rupan: thank god very soon my daughter will design my costume and I need not to waste my money.

Everybody gave her a strange look.

Sumit and his family left GH house and in GH house cousins were so excited.

Next morning nisha gets ready for the academy and got blessings from her elders and along with cousins she went to the academy.

Nisha: hello mam, my name is nisha and I got admission here.

Receptionist: mam can u please wait for some time sir has not come yet.

Nisha went and having fun with her cousins.

Upcoming: every one introduces them self to each other.

thank u guys once again

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Good update. I'm glad u didn't discontinue. Plz post the next part soon😊

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