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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u guys 😊😊
dont bash me if the story moves slowly as i want to express it fully😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Nice and interesting. Pls do continue. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good update...Do continue..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys this the chap 2

Chap -2

Ramesh noticed his dad was sad and understood that he is waiting for his grand children

Ramesh: papa, children will be coming soon

Before Ramesh could finish his lines a car stops in front of GH and dadaji was excited and he remembers how small his GC were when they leave the house

(Flashback)

Umesh was 12 yr old he dadaji's pet

Dolly was 10 yr old and always plays with dadaji

Nisha was 8 yr old and she dadaji's poti and always make dadaji angry

Kirti was 7 yr old dadaji always make fun of her since from childhood she will be very conscious in her dressing

Suketu was just 5 yr old who always sits in his dadaji's lap

Jwala was 3 yr old and bunty was 11 months old baby

(Dadu was not so much close with jwala and bunty like other cousins)

(Flashback ends)

Dadaji was so happy and he remembers the voice of his grandchildren calling him "dadajiii"

Cousins Enters as per their plan

First Umesh came and hugged his dadu and dadi and he carried dadi in his arms

Dadi: arey umesh leave me!!

Umesh puts her down

Umesh: how r u dadu and how r u my beauty (referring to his dadi)

Dadaji: I am fine u grown up so much and where are my other GC (in a curious voice)

Umesh: they will come

Dolly enters

Dolly: dadu!! Dadi!! How r u ??

Dadaji and dadi couldn't believe that their poti was grown up and was so beautiful. Dolly came and took blessings from them and hugged them.

Suddenly dadaji heard a loud voice saying "dadajiii"

Dadu recognized it must be Nisha but its not nisha its kirti and jwala.

Both came together and took blessing from dadu and dadi

Dadaji: jwala is it u have grown up so much and I heard from ur dad that ur r the first rank holder in ur class.. I am so much happy

While talking dadaji peeped the door and this time also its disappointment for him now suku and bunty enters and bunty was so scared to meet dadu because he he heard dadu is strict and every one will call him singam.

Suku and bunty hugged dadi and bunty was little nervous to hug his dadu

Dadaji: bunty don't worry I wont do anything

He hugged his pota and happy to see everyone back but still his heart is waiting for some one

Nisha: dadu, do u still have the album I have given u??

Dadaji was super excited and couldn't control his happiness and said "yes I do. Now come in front of me"

Dadu and dadi was amazed to see nisha and remembers all her naughtiness.

Nisha: dadu am here finally

Rupan: shall we all move from here I am really hungry

Every one laughs and they moved inside the hall

Rukma: dadu, breakfast ready

Suku: is this rukma

Dadi: yes do u remember her??

Umesh: how can we forget her.. we cousins used to pull her legs

Rukma: umesh bhaiya, how r u?? r they jwala and bunty??? They grown up so much..

(pointing towards jwala and bunty)

Cousins went to her and had a group hug.

Everyone is in their rooms and remembered each and every moment they spent.

At the dining hall

Ever one is enjoying the food except rupan

Dadi: wat happen rupan y ur not eating, u din't like it??

Rupan: no maji, I wont eat spicy and oily food else my face will get pimples.

Kirti: how blah! Mom our cook always makes spicy food and this is not that spicy

Dadu and dadi was shocked

Dadu: (in a hyper shock mode) wat ur making my son and GC to eat maid cooked food and ur not cooking (became angry)

Kirti: ha dadu! Its not new to us and mom'll go to kitty party and come late so our cook will do all the kitchen work

Rupan stared at kirti

Dadu: rupan tomorrow u should make food for every one of us and no one should help her.

Rupan: wat the hell!! Wat will happen to hands and my skin

Dadu: (with a weird look) nothing will happen do it!!

Rupan was angry with kirti and waiting for the right time to blast her.

Nisha: dadu we want to go out somewhere

Dadi: go beta, y ur asking dadu

Jwala: (in sad mode) but who will take us...

A guy voice: when I am here y to worry

Every turned and saw a handsome guy standing near the dining room door..

Kirti was amazed and could not take her eyes from him.

Upcoming: Nisha, umesh, suku and bunty went and hugged the guy and nisha saw kirti was in mesmerized state.

please do tell me ur idea also..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Lovely update
Wonder who is the guy they hugged
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update 👏
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
saurav aaya I think... do update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awesome update 👏
Really different and nice

Who is this mystery guy???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
nice upd8.
is the guy kabira?...or is it saurav?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry for late post..


After seeing the guy Nisha, umesh, suku and bunty went and hugged the guy and nisha remembered it was her childhood friend Saurav.

Nisha: hey saurav

Saurav: arey nisha, finally u guessed me correctly

Nisha: how can I forget my old best friend?

She turned to cousins and noticed kirti is still in mesmerized state and wakes her up.

Nisha: guys so tomorrow we are going to see full jaipur.

Everyone was happy.

Dadi: arey then wat ll u do today?

Suku: dadi we want to spend some time with u and dadu and nisha always tell us abt the album and we want to see it.

Rukma: wat can cook for todays lunch?

Dadi: today my 3 bahu's ll cook for us so u help them

Lakshmi and vimla was excited and happy but rupan was not happy and excuses herself and went to her room.

(At the terrace)

Umesh: nisha, wat r u doing here?

Nisha: umesh bhaiya do u remember how we used to play here..

Umesh: ya nishu, I still remember but now we cant do that

Dolly and kirti interrupted

Dolly: y umesh bhaiya we can play now..

Kirti: I am so excited let me call others

All the cousins and saurav were playing dumsharads cards and many more games..

At night saurav said good nite to the cousins and left GH

All the cousins are so excited to visit many places in jaipur.

Next day,

Everybody got ready for the tour and they left to Jaipur fort.

Dolly was so happy to see the fort and eagerly got down from car and ran towards it.

At GH,

Dadu: Viren, what is ur plan next?

Viren: nothing papa, we came here for a week and will be leaving to next week since we have important business meeting with our client.

Dadu and dadi became so sad and that was noticed by Ramesh

Ramesh: papa, Nisha will here with u forever.

Dadu became little happy but also in a sad tone

Dadu: wat abt my other GC.

Viren: they cannot stay here as its very hot.

Rupan: bhaiya is right they can't stay here and kirti and jwala will become dark and there will be no one to marry them.

Mohan asked her to shut her mouth.

Dadi: then wat abt dolly's marriage??

Vimla: that she has to decide..

Dadu was so sad and went to his room. Ramesh and Laksmi felt sorry for them and decided to make nisha to stay with them.

At Jaipur Fort

Saurav: guys go enjoy yourself and come back in an hour so that we can go and visit many place.

Dolly and Kirti ran immediately and suku and umesh went in another side as they saw some beautiful girls. Jwala and bunty went in another direction. Saurav saw nisha admiring the nature and went to her and ask wat she is thinking. Nisha explained how she misses the city and they both had some friendly talk.

While dolly and kirti were on their site-seeing dolly saw a stylish guy in her binocular and was eager to see his face. Dolly: kirti, see there is a handsome guy standing.

Dolly found silence around her and noticed its umesh standing next to her but not kirti and she ran from that place..

Upcoming: Dolly is about to fall but someone caught hold of her. At home, dadu showed a photo of a guy to viren for dolly.

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