NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED*

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Posted: 10 years ago

#811

Hello shibhu. I am roopsha. 1st time commenting in ur story. Really a very cute n wonderful ff. Lekin meri kismaat dekho...pehli baar comment kar bhi rahi hu to day 30 pe. But never mind. D update was just mindblowing. NIBIR bike ride, sea-beach n then their 1st date!! How romantic!! But story khatam hone ko hai...:-(:-( I hope k iye story khatam karke aap new story suru karo:-) p.s= Thank u sooo much for the pm. Mera pehla pm!! Once again thanx.

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Chapter 30- Lovely chapter Shibu😳

Again a delightful read👏👍🏼

Nisha hadn't slept last night, because it was the best night. Finally she had confessed her love to Kabir.- Pyaar mein logon ki neend-chain sab udd jaata hai😆

Kabir had gone to Saurav late night. She knew he wasn't awake, so was surprised to see his message,

I LOVE YOU NISHA...- Romance overload😳

Nisha blushed. She typed "ILU too" and sent him the message.- awww😳

Kabir- wat's ILU?- kabir 😆😆 k kahin ka😆

Nisha- dnt act as if u dnt knw...

Kabir- tell naa wifey...- wifey 😳❤️

Nisha- tu kitn bada K hai... fine, main hi bol deti hoon...I love you too

Kabir smiled at her innocence.- Cuteness overload 😳😳😳

The kids who had punctured his bike stood there, with guilt on their face. Kabir smiled at them wholeheartedly. After all, they were the reason for Nisha and his night walk.- True 😳 Bacche sach min bhagwaan ka rrop hote hain😳

The whole evening, it was just them, with no one disturbing them. They enjoyed at the beach, playing with the kids there, having bhel-puri and ice-cream, and not to forget, enjoying the beauty of the moment.- Cuteness and adorableness overload😳 I m in Nibir dreamland right now

They then went to Saxena House and were surprise not to find the elderly couple. They went upstairs and gasped in shock. The living room was decorated like a romantic set, with a table and two chairs. Soft music was being played in the background.- wow So romantic❤️

They saw a note on the table.

"Aaj ki shaam, tum dufferon ke naam. Enjoy guys.- So sweet 😃 I love the Saxenas yaar 🤗 Hamare Nibir ko itne acche cupid nahin mil sakte the😆 Loved the note😆😉

P.S. pehli date ke liye tum dono ke liye bed room mein surprise hai"- Socho Saxenas Nibir ki date plan kar rahe hain😆😆

Kabir sat on the bike and Nisha sat behind him. He started the bike. Nisha was feeling awkward to hug him, so placed her hands on his shoulders. This didn't go well with Kabir, so he applied brakes and Nisha hugged him. She looked at Kabir through the rear view mirror. His eyes told her that he wants her to hold him like that so rested her head on his back. A little drizzle added coolness to the warmth of the moment.- Loved the initial hesitation and awkward reaction of Nishu😳Romance, cuteness and adorableness overload ❤️😳 Loved ur description Shibu especially the last line of this paragraph

They entered the bedroom and saw a white dress for Nisha and three piece suit for Kabir. They changed and entered the living room. They had dinner and then danced. They celebrated their love in a very romantic way. They then went to the terrace and gazed at the stars. Kabir hugged Nisha and kissed her forehead, whispering, "I love you till the eternity...- I m in Nibir dreamland right now So romantic❤️

@purple- My favorite lines in this chapter

Sach kahoon toh Shibu, tumhari khaasiyat hai ki tum simple si cheezon ko bhi likhti ho toh bhi they become magical and special for the reader

Ur writing style is such that it is not characterized by grandiosity or elaborate descriptions but you convey everything in a short sweet precise manner and this is what makes ur stories so lovable and extraordinary 😉

love u ❤️

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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@nut-kut-86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Main toh blush karna chod hi nahin sakti.tera gify kabir k saaath bike ride.

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maniwood

@maniwood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#814

Awesome update bhanji

Loved it totally

It was so cute such a beautiful ending to this beautiful journey

You are superb yaar itne fast updates deti thi wo bhi itne badhiya

Please start a new story soon

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picadally

@picadally

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Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Aww cho sweet shibi.

The update was simple and sweet. Njoyed the entire month. Keep going.

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Piya

@Piya1199

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Posted: 10 years ago

#816

awww this was the best and sweetest update Shibu😉

NIbir bike ride😳😳😳

Hum dono aise bike pe humare 12 baccho ke saath...🤣🤣

Juhu beach, Bhelpuri, icecream, splashing water, playing with children...everything was just perfect and very Nibiriculous😆😆😆

Nibir's first date

But pls 30 days ko 31 kar do 😔

i just love this story..

and yes if you plan to write a new one then only you can end it😉

also do give a sweet epilogue😊😊

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poo10

@poo10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#817

Shibu isko 31 days ka story banao nd fir uske 365 epilogues do ...Rofl
Plz yaar end mat karo na...isme unki engagement, marriage, bacche, baccho k bacche, baccho k baccho k bacche lao ...rofl
But plz don't end it