NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 74

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Posted: 10 years ago
Shibu...im shaackeddd
How u manage to write so well 👏
Loved each nd every part...i will comment later on in detail but don't forget to pm me 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx fr d pm 😃
Uff harsh 😡 😡 kabab me haddi 😡 😡
Nisha j
Kabir j 😉
Aww white tumpe suit karta hai 😳 😳
Zip 😳 😳
I hope saurav and dolly ka plan work rahe 😃
Amazing. Luved it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks a lot fr ur lyks and comments. Day 28 is updated. Happy reading😃

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Day 28

The day was a relaxing one as it was a holiday. Nisha woke up at 10. She prepared herself coffee when Kirti called her.

Kirti-(cheerfully)Good morning...

Nisha- Good morning...

Kirti- You remember Harsh ne hume uske ghar invite kiya tha?

Nisha- Hmm... Listen, main nahi aa paaungi... feeling a bit tired... You guys carry on...

Kirti- Aa naa Nishu, Harsh ne kitne pyaar se bulaya hai...

Nisha- Kirti, mujhe sach mein nahi aana...

Kirti-(pleading) Please...

Nisha- (giving up) Thikh hai...

She changed and left for Harsh's house.

Kabir hadn't even slept a wink last night, so he woke up at 8 and left for the Rehearsal Hall. Only dance could calm him down and he knew that...

After rehearsing for 2 hours, he was doing warm up when he got Saurav's call.

Saurav- Hey Kabir, subah-subah kahan chale gaye?

Kabir- Rehearsals...

Saurav- Par aaj toh holiday hai..

Kabir- Just wanted to spend some time dancing... Tu bata, kyun call kiya?

Saurav- Arrey, woh Harsh ne hume apne ghar pe invite kiya tha, remember?

Kabir- (angrily) Harsh?

Saurav- I know, but I promised him ki hum dono aayenge... isiliye, chal na...

Kabir- Thikh hai... Main tumhe uske ghar par milta hoon...

In 15 minutes, the bike stopped near a bungalow. Kabir went to the door and was surprised to see Nisha standing there, waiting for the door to open. He stood next to her. She looked at him, but didn't smile. Neither did he have the courage and strength to look in her eyes.

To decrease the awkwardness, both touched the door-bell-button. Their hands touched and they looked at each other. Their eyes couldn't look away, and both were lost in a deep eyelock, which usually conveyed love, but today, conveyed insecurity, hurt and possessiveness.

"Sorry to keep you waiting" They suddenly heard a guy speak and looked at the door. Harsh stood there with a smile on his face. They entered the house.

Umesh and Aman were already there. So Nisha and Kabir were chatting with them. In 1 hour, Dolly, Saurav, Kirti and Sukku too came.

Harsh- Vrinda nahi aayi?

Kabir- No, she had some urgent work...

Harsh- Ok...

Then they started with their usual chats, movies, games, matches.

*In evening*

Kabir- Guys, main chalta hoon...

Dolly- ya, even I'll leave...

Saurav- I'll drop you...

Dolly- Ok...

Nisha- Saurav, main bhi tumhare saath chalti hoon...

They all left the house. Kabir went outside the house and remembered that he had forgotten the bike keys. He rushed in the house and what he saw made him boil in anger.

Kirti was standing with a grumpy face and Harsh was hugging her from behind.

Kabir's anger knew no limits. He himself didn't realize when he screamed.

Kabir-(loudly with anger) Harsh? Kirti?

Harsh looked up in shock. Kirti pushed him away.

Kabir-(angrily)Yeh sab kya chal raha hai?

Kirti looked down, her head hung. Harsh was speechless.

Kabir-(loudly) Answer me!

Kirti-(trying to explain) Look Kabir, tum jaisa soch rahe ho...

Kabir- Waisa nahi hai, yahin kehna chahte ho na... But phir jis position mein tum dono the, it just makes me think one thing...

Harsh- and you are right...

Kirti was shocked and scared. Kabir had fury in his eyes while Harsh was determined.

Kabir-(angrily) Aur yeh kab hua?

Harsh- We are together since last 2 years. Kirti ke dad aur mere dad ki business meets ke wajah se hum bhi do-teen bar mile, friends hue and when the friendship turned into love, hume khud realize nahi hua...

Kabir was shocked. He couldn't think of a reaction. All he was worried was about Nisha and her family.

Harsh- (understanding his thoughts) Mom ne Nisha aur mera rishta 2 hafte pehle hi tod diya tha Kabir... par Laxmi aunty ne Nisha ko nahi bataya...

Kabir- (confused) Par kyun?

Kirti- Woh hum bhi nahi jaante... Pehle I also felt guilty ki I am dating my best friends future fianc, par jab mujhe pata chala ki Nisha doesn't want to get married to Harsh, the guilt wasn't there anymore...

Kabir couldn't think of a better reaction. He just mumbled a sorry and left from there. He went to the Gateway of India and sat there. His eyes were lost in the beauty of the waves of the sea, but his mind was confused thinking of the situation Nisha was going through...

Nisha freshened and sat with her laptop.Her mobile rang, it was her mom.

Laxmi- Nishu? Tu thikh hai?

Nisha- Ofcourse Laxmi...

Laxmi- Kya tu Harsh se shaadi karna chahti hai?

Nisha- Maa, aap yeh puch rahe ho? Knowing that I love Kabir?

Laxmi- Nishu, Mrs. Rajput ne tumhara aur Harsh ka rishta tod diya...

Nsiha-(happily) Kya?

Laxmi- Hmmm... Harsh wants to marry someone else...

Nsiha- Toh yeh toh khushi ki baat hai naa?

Laxmi- Par baauji?

Nisha- Laxmi, relax me... sab thikh ho jaayega...

Laxmi- Ramesh aur main Baauji se baat karne jaa rahe hai... Main unhe tere archery comeption ke baar mein batau?

Nisha- Bata do...

Laxmi- I am very happy for you...

She hanged the call and Nisha smiled happily. Finally, something good had happened.

~~~~~~~

Kismat ne yeh ajeeb sa khel khela... Jo bhi sach lag raha tha, woh kabhi na hua...

Kya kabhi yeh uljhaan suljhegi... Kya kabhi yeh kismat hum dono ko milvaegi?

~~~~~~~

Hope the update was good😊

Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res abhi tak 27 ka bhi unres nhi hua h 😕
unres
bhanju I am shaacked 😲 😲
harsh and kirti 😲
accha h ab nibir ke bich koi nhi aayega 😊
loved the door bell wala scene the most
grand bhaacchi ek request h plz sp ke jaise proposal last ma mat do thoda sa hi par nibir romance cahiye mujhe plzz
awesome update
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ek aur res

unres

awsm update shibhanzzz👍🏼

kirti ne nishu ko harsh k yha aane k liye mna lia😊

kabir bechara raat bhr nhi soya😔...rehersal krne chla gya subah to keep himself calm...😊

saurav ne kabir ko harsh k yhaa aane k liye mna lia😊

nibir harsh k ghar k bahr pahuch gye❤️

To decrease the awkwardness, both
touched the door-bell-button. Their
hands touched and they looked at
each other. Their eyes couldn't look
away, and both were lost in a deep
eyelock, which usually conveyed
love, but today, conveyed insecurity,
hurt and possessiveness.


@blue superbly written👍🏼

dey all done chit chat n time pass...😎

kabir ne harsh n kirti ko dekh lia😊

ailla harsh n kirti couple h????😲

loved angry kabir❤️

nisha n harsh ka rishta tut chuka h...🤣

chalo ab kabir chain ki saas lega...

nisha ki mom ne nisha ko bta dia uska n harsh ka rishta toot gya😊

ab archery k bare me btane ja rhe h😊

loved shayari❤️

update nxt day fast😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
shibu...awesome update...
kirti and harsh mujhe doubt tha...
but ye kabir ke saamne kuch iss tarah aayega ye nahi socha...
dil khush kar diya tune sissy🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arrey wah!! Harsh and Kirti..😲..Little unexpected...😆
Ab yeh dono buddhu propose kab karenge??!!🤔
Waise mjhe kyu lag rha h ki m jaise soch rhi hu waise proposal hoga...😆..(m abi nhi bataungi..😆. guess verify bhi to karna h...😉)
Awesome update...👍🏼
Posted: 10 years ago
wah ji wah harsh de ghar di party toh badi changi si... 😉
inna wadda confusion solve kitta aj ... 😆
kirti aur us amerikan bandar vhich toh mennu pehle se hi shak tha!!! 😲
nisha aur harsh da rishta tod diya? 😕
inni waddi khush khabri... 😃
badhyan ji badhayan...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dil garden garden Hogaya love it sisSy rock on
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing update...
Loved it...
Kirti harsh was unexpected...
But ..feeling happy...that kabir now knows the truth...
Waiting for confession...

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