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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres on pg 56😆

Chapter 15- Delightful read 😆
Din ki shuruat with Nibir ladai or should I say World war 😆😆
Ab world war hogi toh baaki duniya ko pata chalega hi 😆 Mr and Mrs Saxena witnessing Nibir romance😳 Kya timing hai inn donon ki😆

The living room looked at if the earthquake had just hit it, with the sofa turned, books scattered around, the pages of newspapers lying in all possible directions, a glass broken, sandals in two opposite directions, the cotton of pillows flying in the air and the covers of the cushions lying around.- Nibir lade aur bhoochal na aaye aisa ho hi nahin sakta hai 😆😉

His wife, who had followed her husband, also looked at the scenario. Suddenly they both turned embarrassed as they saw their tenant couple near the sofa. Nisha lay on the floor and Kabir on top of her. Both were lost in each other. Their hair was covered the cotton, but neither of them even had an idea of it. - Nibir romance☺️

Mr. Saxena cleared his throat. Kabir looked up and Nisha followed his eye movement. She was so embarrassed that she tried to stand up, but her head colloided with Kabir's.-

"Ouch!" Both screamed in pain and looked at each other awkwardly. Kabir stood up and helped Nisha up.- Adorable😳

NiBir looked at each other and started cleaning up. After an hour both sat on the sofa tired. After all you realise the impacts of a war after it ends- kya pate ki baat kahi hai Shibu👏😎👍🏼 Lagta hai tumhe iss cheez (war ke baad cleaning up) ka kaafi experience hai😆😆

He opened the door and his eyes widened in shock.-Yaar inke friends ne kya entry maari hai😆😆

Loved the scene with the friends and cousins😆😆

Aur subah Sukku ne mujhse kaha tha ki woh sab mere yahaan aayega, par mere landlord se mere neighbor ne complain ki hai, so I invited them here.- Saurav 😆😆 I can empathize and sympathize with Nibir 😆😆 I have a few friends who invite the whole group to my house without my knowledge 😆🤣 I will kill these friends ya trouble-makers some day😈🤣

Suddenly the door bell rang Nisha asked Kabir to open it, but he ignored her.

She kicked him out of the sofa and signalled him to open the door- Kabir Nisha ke jhaapad ya kicks ke bina koi kaam nahin karta 😆🤣 uska din toh usi se shuru hota hai😆😉

Nisha and the others were busy chatting while Kabir was in the kitchen making coffee. First milk, then coffee powder, the sugar and the stir. He memorized the easy coffee recipe and kept the milk to boil. When it was warm, he added coffee to it, but couldn't find the sugar- Cute and adorable Kabira😳 Kabira kitna kaam karta hai Perfect husband material😆

He poured the coffee in the cups, kept the cups on the tray and handed them to his or his "girlfriend's" guests.- Awesome😳 Hayee😳 kaash yeh sach ho jaayeCuteness overload😃

The cofee incident was hilarious🤣🤣

Bechara Kabir usne toh pura procedure kitni dilligence se follow kiya tha, magar usse kya pata tha ki woh sugar ke container se coffee mein 3 chamach namak daal raha hai 😆🤣

Galtiyan sabse hoti hai... par mujhe meri woh galtiyon pasand hai jo tumhe hasati hai...

Teri ek hasi ko dekhne ke liye yeh aankhein tarasti hai... aur dil tadapta hai...

Samjhau kaise main tumhe, khush hone ki wajah tum deti ho mujhe...- My favorite lines in the chapter❤️ Waah Shibu tum kya shayari likhti ho👏👏👏 Loved d shayari a lot😳🤗


Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shibu yaar u r just awesome
tum itne accha kaise likh leti ho
tumhara har update padhne ke baad mera reaction hota hai awww how cute
har din kuch alag and naya hota hai nibir Ki life mein jo unhe aur pass leke atta hai
iss update ka highlight toh ending scene hi tha
kabir finding solace in nisha😳
awesome update
thnks for the pm and sorry for the late reply
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated my comment on chapter 15😆 hopefully I would have completed my quota on pending comments before ur next update😆😆
Chapter 16- Truly Amazing chapter Shibu❤️

Love the start 👍🏼His happiness knew no bounds today. The reason for his happiness was that Nisha had decided to participate in a state level archery competition. -
Nisha's lips turned into a smile when Kabir's brown eyes stared at her in shock, happiness, surprise and excitement.- Love these lines❤️. Nibir's bond is so beautiful😳. The way they rejoice in each other's happiness is so touching😳

Nisha's hand rose to slap him, but he held it and by mistake pulled her close to himself. Nisha looked at him shock and Kabir was losing himself in her deep orbs. After an eyelock, he left her- So romantic

Shibu u described Nisha's state of mind so well while she was practicing 👏👏👏
Her heart was dancing in excitement. She calmed herself down and picked the arrow and bow. She missed many shots, but there was no frustration, all she felt was happiness in failure and when she hit first aim correctly, her happiness reached on cloud 100. The time passed and she didn't realize when 2 hours were over. She then went home, but there was no much work, so she was watching the television, when the door knocked. She felt happy when she opened the door and saw Kabir.- Love this part ❤️

Nisha started telling him about the practices. Kabir smiled as she talked animatedly about how she missed the aim or how she competed with a girl there.- The way Kabir is paying attention to everything Nisha is saying and the smile on his face conveys so much about his love for her😳The way Nisha wants to share every detail of her life with Kabir is also amazing 😳

Nisha looked at him with a baby face. Before he could speak further, she snatched it from him and ate some. Finally both shared the ice-cream. Nisha looked at Kabir. A little of the ice-cream was remaining on his lips. She signaled him to wipe the ice-cream. He confusingly ran his hand over his lips but was unsuccessful in wiping it. Nisha slowly wiped the ice-cream. That touch send sparks down their spine. Nisha and Kabir could not stir their eyes away from each other's eyes. I m in Nibir dreamland right now Romance and cuteness overload❤️
After cooking and having dinner, Nisha sat on the bed with her book. Kabir looked at her mesmerized- Cute😳

Nibir reading the book together was adorable and their thoughts while reading the story were penned down nicely Shibu👏 Nisha wondering why Kabir was reading the love story and the small thought that popped in her mind he might be in love with her was nice. Kabir realizing that his reason for reading the love story was that he was in love was lovely and his wish that he and Nisha also get to spend such amazing moments together was adorable😳

But suddenly, Kabir felt weight on his shoulder. He turned to see Nisha sleeping peacefully. He smiled. He helped her sleep on the bed properly, turned off the lights and went in the balcony.- Cute and adorable😳
The emotions Kabir felt while reading the diary were penned down beautifully Shibu👏👏 U gave a good background to Kabir's childhood 😊 Also the scene where Nisha comforts Kabir and the sense of completeness they feel in each other's presence was phenomenal

Nisha- How could I sleep when my so-called-hubby is outside, trying to hide his pain for a no particular reason- Hayye😳 Love this line❤️ Love Nisha's concern for Kabir and the way she is there to comfort him when he is unhappy😳

Kabir found solace in her arms. Nisha held him close to herself, not knowing the magic her presence did to him. The stars that blanketed the sky were watching all this. The night was blissful, not because the stars added their beauty to it, but because, Kabir found the solace he was searching for from so many years...- My favorite lines in this update❤️

Also loved the Shayari Shibu👍🏼 Please keep writing stories like this that make u smile always.So all in all a Mesmerizing chapter
And with this I have finished my quota of pending comments😆Yayy

Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for commenting late
read last two parts in a go and they were awesome
I loved NiBir's remote fight
Kabir's coffee disaster was funny
And I loved their hug
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres ed on pg 51, 56 & 60😆🤣 do read Shibu😆🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the parts together, so nibir are getting close. What i liked the best was that kabir was happy when nisha finally decided to take up archery and when he realises he is spending good moments with nisha after reading the book.
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for the late post shibu
this part was awesome
I loved it
can't wait what will happen next
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shibu I updated my comment on chapter 16 on pg 63 on account of ur birthday😆
Now I have no pending comments 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey NiBirians, Day 17 is updated... Happy Reading

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Day 17

Kabir was in the washroom washing his face when Nisha barged in. Both looked at each other in shock. Nisha was about to go but she slipped because of water and was about to fall. But Kabir's reflex kicked in and grabbed her wrist, without wasting time, pulled her towards him, wrapped his arm around her waist. He made sure she wasn't going to fall on the floor. In this whole thing the shower turned on.

Both were getting wet in water. But who cares. They were lost in each other's eyes. After an eyelock of about 5 minutes, Nisha realised their position and flinched. Kabir helped her stand straight. She moved out from there.

Kabir came out from the washroom in sometime. Nisha was in the kitchen.

Kabir- Nisha, I am sorry... woh...

Nisha- Kabir, please, main pehle hi clear karti hoon that I am your friend that's it. Aur kuch nahi...

Kabir- I know Nisha...

Nisha- Don't try to get close...

Kabir- (trying to defend himself) I wasn't...

Nisha-(rudely) Please... don't test my patience... hato yahaan se... I don't want to talk with you

She pushed him gently. Kabir was confused with her behavior. He couldn't understand what she meant. He tried to talk with her after she came out of the washroom but she shrugged him off rudely. Now Kabir's anger took its toll on him. He rarely got angry, but when he did, his ego was the most important thing for him.

Kabir- (to himself) Fine, baat nahi karni toh naa kare...

That day, everyone on the sets noticed that Nisha and Kabir weren't talking to each other. Their moods were also off because of some reason.

Nisha moved in the store room to find some file that was needed. She stood on the ladder and was searching for the file but fell down as the ladder balanced. She screamed in pain. Riya and Kabir who were passing by went in. They looked at Nisha in shock. Her right leg was swollen a bit and she was holding it wincing lying on the floor. He picked her in his arms and made her sit on one of the chairs.

Kabir-(massaging Nisha's leg) Riya get the first aid box.

Riya was busy burning at the care Kabir was showering on Nisha. She avoided and acted as if she didn't hear him.

Kabir- (impatiently shouting) RIYA, I SAID, GET THE BLOODY FIRST AID BOX.

Riya and Nisha were scared out of their wits. Riya ran and got him the box. He opened the box, applied balm on her foot and a bandage. Nisha tried to stand up but couldn't. Her leg pained like hell.

Kabir- (rudely)Haan, haan, ab taang tod hi do apni...

Nisha- If you can't help, then shut up...

Kabir- Tumhe hi meri help lene se problem ho rahi thi naa?

Nisha looked down. She was ashamed of her behaviour. She wanted him to stay away from her. She wasn't perfect for him. He deserved and needed someone who would fill his lonely world with most beautiful colors, so she was behaving rude with him from morning.

But this guy. His concern made it difficult to be angry with him. She looked at him. He was still massaging her foot.

Kabir- (without looking up) Chalne ki koshish kar...

Nisha- (lost in him) Huh?

Kabir looked up. She was staring at him like there was no tomorrow. His eyes wanted to get lost in hers, but he remembered the morning fight and stood up.

Kabir- (sternly) Chalne ki koshish kar.

Nisha came out of the trance and stood up, but her leg was paining so much, that she couldn't even stand properly.

Kabir- Tujhse kuch nahi hoga...

He walked away annoyed. Somehow, Nisha couldn't tolerate his indifference. She stood up. Her leg was shooting pain but ignoring it, she limped towards him saying sorry. Kabir stopped after taking 5 steps and turned.

Kabir- What?

Nisha- (making a baby face) sorry.

Kabir smiled and said, "Dekh, tu apne pero pe khadi hai." Nisha looked at her legs and smiled. What felt difficult wasn't difficult. Hold on, she isn't talking about walking, she's talking about manaofying Kabir.

Kabir- Main tujhse abhi naraaz hoon.

Nisha- sorry na...

Kabir- Doctor ke paas chalegi, toh shaayad I can think of forgiving you.

Nisha- Thikh hai, teri maafi ke liye main jannat tak jaaungi.

She limped and Kabir held her shoulders so that she didn't fall. They left the studio. All watched them in awe. Nisha was side hugging Kabir and his arms were wrapped around her waist as she limped and he made sure that she didn't fall.

Doctor said that it was just a sprain but she should take care and a day's rest would be best. He prescribed a pain killer. They went to Saxena House. Nisha said she'll walk but Kabir didn't hear a thing and picked her in his arms. Nisha's arms automatically wrapped around his neck. Mr. Saxena opened the door,

Mr. Saxena- (teasing) Kya baat hai, aaj beewi pe bahut pyaar aa raha hai...

Kabir- jab beewi per tudawaa de toh pati bichaara aur kya karega?

Mr. Saxena let them in. Kabir told Nisha to freshen up and rest. He went to buy the medicines. Later when he entered the house, he saw that Nisha was in the kitchen. Nisha saw him and smiled. Kabir went and picked her in his arms, laid her on the bed, tied her hands and legs with duppatas and smiled happily as Nisha frowned.

Nisha- Yaar, main ek jagah pe nahi beth sakti...

Kabir- Toh so jaa...

Nisha- Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai...

Kabir- I don't care, but I don't want you to even think of stepping out of the bed.

He went out the room, giving Nisha her laptop, headphones and snacks, in case she wasn't feeling sleeping. Nisha couldn't help but smile seeing the concern in his eyes.

She was listening to music when she heard a loud thud.

Nisha- (screaming) Kabir, kya hua?

Kabir- (from outside) Kuch nahi...

She couldn't stop herself from opening the knots of the duppatas with her fingers. Being a scout guide it wasn't so difficult for her. She then untied her legs and rushed in the kitchen. The whole kitchen as covered with a white powder and Kabir?

Well, his hair, face and clothes were covered with flour. Nisha burst out laughing looking at him.

Nisha- (shocked) Yeh sab kya hai?

Kabir- Tu bahar kya kar rahi hai?

Nisha- Woh awaaz suni, toh aa gayi, par yeh sab hai kya?

Kabir- Woh maine socha roti banaunga, isiliye upar ke compartment se aata nikal raha tha, par the container loved my face and fell on me, main kya karu?

Nisha started laughing like anything. She offered to cook the food and poured herself a glass of water. While she was drinking water

Kabir-(closing his eyes) main khana bana lunga.

Nisha spat the water in her mouth on Kabir in reflex and started coughing. Was she becoming deaf or Mad? KABIR KUMAR and cooking?

Nisha-(in shock) call the doctor.

Kabir-(recovering for the shock he endured because of Nisha's water shower and getting scared for her) Kya hua? Is your leg paining?

Nisha- I don't know. Did you fall somewhere? KABIR KUMAR and cooking?

Kabir- ummm... haa... tumhe bhook lagi hogi, medicines lene hai aur Bahar ka kuch order nahi kar sakte, so...

She started removing the ingredients she required to make Vegetable Soup.

Kabir- Nisha, I swear, main banaloonga.

Nisha- Kabir, I know hum yahan kuch dino ke liye hai, but still I love this kitchen and don't want you to spoil it with your amazing cooking skills. (stressing on amazing)

Kabir- thikh hai, you sit at the dining table and help me with vegetables and give me instructions.

Nisha- ok.

Kabir wore the apron and handed the cutting board and vegetables to her. But when he realized that she'll use the knife, He himself started cutting the vegetables. Nisha looked at him awe. She was staring at him with a feeling she couldn't explain, when she heard "Ahhh" from his mouth. He had cut his finger. Without thinking she put it in her mouth and started sucking the blood.

Nisha- (without thinking) Dekho kya ho gaya, Maharaja cooking karne chale the. Kabir, hum har cheez mein perfect nahi hota. Dekho, how much its bleeding.

Kabir looked at her in adoration as she removed the first aid kit from one of the compartments and bandaged his finger.

Kabir- (in trance) Tumhe meri itni fiqar hai?

Nisha looked at him and their eyes locked. Suddenly Nisha came out of the trance and looked away .

Nisha- Tum jaao, main kar lungi.

Kabir, being Kabir stayed adamant in 1 hour served her the food. She looked at it and then at Kabir. He signalled to start eating it with his eyes, but she fed him. Kabir smiled at her caring attitude and fed her. After feeding each other, Nisha went in the bedroom with a smile, while Kabir got a call from Vrinda so sat in the living room.

Here Nisha was listening to "Sun Saathiya" but her mind was somewhere else. She closed her eyes and was surprised when Kabir's smiling face came infront of her. Her eyes snapped open.

Nisha-(to herself, in confusion) Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe, baar-baar main sirf Kabir ke baare mein kyun soch rahi hoon... uski har baat kyun affect kar rahi hai? Jab woh smile karta hai I feel super happy and when he is upset, I can't bear to see him sad... I can't see him with another girl and want his attention... What's happening?

Her trance was broken when her cell started vibrating. Reading the name she smiled. It is said that "Moms are the best ladies in our lives and help us in all confusing times." Same happened with Nisha. Her light in darkness was usually her dad, but today she decided to speak out her confusion to her Laxmi.

Nisha received the call and was not so surprised to be bombarded with questions.

Laxmi-(worried) Nishu, tu thikh hai? Kya ho gaya? Kaise gir gayi tu? Dhyaan kahan rehta hai tera? Jyaada dard ho raha hai?

Nisha-(interrupting her) Laxmi, Relax me...

Laxmi sighed.

Nisha- main bilkul thikh hoon... Don't you worry, par its just that... Mom, you and dad, I mean, aapko kab realize hua ki you love him...

Laxmi- Kaun hai woh...

Nisha-(faking ignorance) Kaun woh?

Laxmi- Nishu, I know you have fallen for someone, just tell na baccha ,whose it?

Nisha-(giving up) Mom, I like him, but main sure nahi hoon, whether its love...

Laxmi- Do you feel happy when he is happy?

Nisha- haan... I feel as if I have won the world...

Laxmi- Do you feel sad when he is sad?

Nisha- Hmmm...

Laxmi- You care for him?

Nisha- Yup...

Laxmi- You are insecure about him?

Nisha- Todha-bahut...

Laxmi- (sternly) Nishu, no lies...

Nisha-(sighing) Fine, I can't see Kabir with Vrinda or that stupid Riya...

Laxmi-(teasing) Oh, so its Kabir huh?

Nisha-(blushing) Maa?

Laxmi- Ok, no teasing... so, You like to be his center of attention?

Nisha- haan... Par kabhi-kabhi woh jyaada hi aatetion deta hai, then it annoys me...

Laxmi- You love the time you spent with him?

Nisha- Haan... its amazing to be with him...

Laxmi- There you go, I made it easy for you... Finally, Miss. Nisha Gangwal ko pyaar ho gaya hai...

Nisha- aapko kaise pata chala?

Laxmi- Your voice told me... Nisha, you were blushing like anything. Love is beautiful, pata hai kyun?

Nisha- Kyun?

Laxmi- It brings out the innocent side of you... and tumne innocently mere saare sawaalon ka jawaab diya, I found my innocent Nishu...

Nisha- Bas, sirf itne mein hi aapko pata chala?

Laxmi- Nishu, you can't explain love... just feel it...

Nisha closed her eyes and was recalling those laughters they shared...those Tom and Jerry fights... those cute lovely and adorable moments...those mere things he always used to do to make her smile... Their eye-locks... These memories were so beautiful that she was lost in them... So lost in them that she didn't realize that Laxmi had cut the call.

Nisha- (opening her eyes, with a relaxed smile) I love you Kabir, I love you very much...

She happily went in the living room. She heard noises from the kitchen and saw that Kabir had cleaned it. She smiled. He looked up.

Kabir- Kya hua, Harsh ki yaad aa gayi kya?

Nisha came out of her trance and looked at him angrily. Here she was staring at him and he reminded her of that monkey. She wiped his cheeks which were covered with flour. Kabir looked at her with love. They spent some time watching TV and then went to sleep

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Ek ajeeb sa ehsaas tha... Jisse samjhana mushkil tha..

Woh ehsaas khoobsurat tha... mujhe tanhaiyon se door le jaata tha...

Tere sang samjh paayi ki yeh iss ehsaas ko kya kehte hai... Iss ehsaas ko pyaar kehte hai...

Meaning: It was a weird feeling, I couldn't understand it, but the feeling was beautiful and it was the reason why I wasn't lonely. With you by my side, I have realized that this feeling is called "LOVE"

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Nishu ne toh apne pyaar ke ehsaas ko samajh liya, ab aap bhi jaldise like/comment kar dena, so that I fall in love with your amazing comments.

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res unres...wow...sooo cute...nibir taking care of each other aawwee...kabir sayi agar biwi apna per tudwa le toh bechara pati kya kare🤣..nisha and laxmi convo was amazing...tysm for the pm😊
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