NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago
ashvik ka baby?🤣🤣🤣
nice one yaar!
really cute!
update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok.So this is the comment I tried posting yesterday
Shibu meri jaan ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I m so happy right now😃😆🤗
Technically I was supposed to comment on ur ff later because I was following this order by commenting on one chapter after another but with this update u messed up my resolve😆😆
This update was Phenomenal, Superb, Mindblowing and much more 👏🤗
The moment I read Rithvik's name in the story I was jumping with joy
I cant express the feeling I got when I read Ashvik's name in the story 🥳
I was in the seventh heaven
It has been my dream to see Ashvik with Nibir in the show
And u fulfilled it🥳
And the way u incorporated Ashvik's part in the story is just Superb👏
Asha Dhanjani ❤️🤪 Ashvik's baby 🤗
Coming to the story, I loved every bit of this update thoroughly ❤️
Rithvik meeting Nibir😳, Nisha clarifying to him that she is not his girlfriend😆, Nibir meeting Asha, Nibir with the baby😳, the lullaby😳 and Nibir in the cafe- everything was just perfect 🤗
He was looking at the baby as if it was the world's 8th wonder. He picked her in his arm, but his face showed excitement mixed with fear.He was talking to the baby, who was staring at him with her eyes wide. Kabir nodded in a no and continued playing with the baby's tiny fingers - Loved how Kabir was handling the baby😳. He is just too adorable😳😆
The trick Nisha used to get the baby from Kabir' hands was funny😆 We should now have a book on "Benefits of Chipkalis"😆🤣
She held the baby protectively and caressing its cheek while telling her something.The way Nisha held the baby was also so cute😳
Kabir was sure, that if he had never loved her then he would fall in love with her today because the baby brought out her innocent side.- My favorite line in this chapter🤗
The baby scene also foreshadows the future when Nibir would be wonderful parents😳
I was also singing the lullaby when I was reading it😃
The cafetaria scene was also very nice😳 Nisha accidently telling Kabir how cute she finds him😆 and Kabir advising Nisha to follow her dreams😳
All in all a wonderful update for me🤗👏
I m sorry if my comment has been very disjointed and more of an Ashvik rant😆 but kya karoon I love Ashvik so much and this is the effect they have on me😆😆
I lose all sense when I read their name or see their glimpse somewhere 🤪
Plus mere Ashvik ki toh engagement nahin huyi hai aur tune unke future bacche☺️ ko story mein daalkar mujhe khushi se paagal hone par majboor kar diya 🤪😆😆

P.s I will comment on ur earlier chapters too😆 😉
Continue soon 🤗 but not very soon kyunki agar teri story khatam ho jaayegi toh hum kaise jeeyenge😆😆
Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ritvik n kabir r bff's
N asha is a mother now😆
Loved mr n mrs dhanjani😉
Nibir's fight ober baby n the world fhamous lizard🤣
Nibir ki love story ho aur usme lizard ka role na ho yeh kaise ho sakta hai🤣
Loved their convo...n kabir was right dreama r important n we should chase them...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres😉

11th Post I m unres ng after My Comeback😆🤣
Sorry 4 late comments yaar..😳

Shibu.. I read Both parts Day 9 & Day 10 in a row & I loved it both...👏 4 U yaar..😃

Day 9:😉

I never knew A single word can Make some one blush so hard yaar.. 🤣
& That word is "YESTERDAY"😉 U knw wat Not only NiBir😳 I was also Blushing😲🤣🤣
Patha nahi Day 9 Poora ka poora I was smiling & Blushing...🤣
My fav part was Necklace Scene(Reminded me Dadi-NiBir Ladies Chain Scene in show😳)☺️👏
Gud one Shibu ... Their Eyelock thru Bike's Rear-View Mirror..☺️😳Awww☺️

Mrs. Saxena is the Cupid b/w NiBir..😆🤣
Lage raho Aunty Hum sab aapke Peeche hai 😉🤣
Dakkans ko ek karna hai by hook or by crook😆🤣🤣

Kabir Australia jaa raha hai..Aww Nishu Ka kya hogaa??😭😕

Waise Kabir's "Nisha tune meri life ban di" & hug reminded me NiBir dance +Almost kiss n show

When Kabir tuk her to the gateway of India mujhe patha tha proposal nahi hoga q ki FF ka title is "One month to fall in love" nahh.. so abhi 9 days hi huye hai nah???😉 (I m intelligent😆🤣)
But Like Nisha I was also surprised to hear Kabir's Story(again reminded me Kabir's past n the show) poor Kabira... n I liked Hw Nisha held His shoulder..😳

They both didn't say anything for some time. Those unspoken words could be heard in the beautiful silence. And this silence added beauty to their weird relation...


These Last Lines Was the most Touchy lines & I loved it..👏👏👏

Now.. Day 10..😉

It was an awesome day for both as along with them We also witnessed INNOCENT BABY SIDE of NiBir👏 Well Written Shibu👏👏👏

The way NiBir were caressing Baby clearly indicates they both will be the Bestest Parents in the world.. Awieee

Chipkalis & NiBir r always together nahh..😉😆🤣🤣🤣
(Imaginary hi sahi par NiBir is always followed by chipkalis
🤣🤣🤣)

My fav line was this..😳☺️

Kabir was sure, that if he had never loved her then he would fall in love with her today because the baby brought out her innocent side.

The Coffee Scene was also nice..😃 I liked how Kabir made Nisha realise the fact dat "DREAMS R IMPORTANT & WE SHOULD MAKE OUR DREAMS COME TRUE"

Apne sapnom se bhagkar nahi apne sapnom ko hatheli main sanjokar aage badhke usse pura karna chahiye...!!!!!
(Hayee Maine kya dialogue bola..*Self Proud*😎🤣)

Loved The updates Shibu..👏👏👏
Thnzz yaar 4 the PM's...😳
Do write more..🤗Q ki DMM😳☺️😆
🤣



Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update shibu
luved the ashvik part coz even i am their fan
update soon
thanks for pm
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kabir was cho sweet. Nisha has experience with bunty and jwala 😆 kabir did raise a good point for nisha at the end.
Good one shibu
Posted: 10 years ago
waiting waiting...
day 11???
kab karogi???
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey NiBirians😃, Day 11 is updated. Happy reading...

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Day 11

The day wasn't so hectic, but she was damn irritated. She was having hiccups. From morning, Kabir had only heard, "hic-hic" from her. Both were annoyed now. Nisha had drank 10 glasses of water from morning, ate sugar 5 times, Kabir gave her lemon juice 3 times, had icy cold water 2 times, had 2 sips of vinegar(which were followed by Nisha screaming in disgust) yet the hiccups didn't stop.

Kabir-(annoyed) Yaar, kabse teri hichkiya sun raha hoon...

Nisha-(trying to speak in between her hiccups) Main kya hic, hick, hic...

Kabir face palmed.

Riya-(interrupting) Kabir, tumne mujhe bola tha ki aaj dance sequence ka formation change karte hai...

Kabir- Haan thikh hai, main aata hoon...

She nodded and Kabir sighed as Nisha's hiccups interrupted him again.

Kabir- Paani, piyo, thikh hai?

Nisha nodded and he walked away. He was passing from Vrushika's cabin when he heard her talking to Kirti.

Vrushika- Why are you looking shocked? Is there a problem?

Kabir's eyes lit up and he rushed back in the canteen. Nisha sat there with her mobile but her hiccups hadn't left her till now.

He ran to her, kissed her on her cheek and whispered in her ear, "I Love You"

Nisha's eyes were wide in shock. She looked at him as her jaw fell down. Kabir smirked and counted from 10 to 1. When he finished counting he closed his ears, still he could hear Nisha's "WHAT????"

Everyone there looked at them confusingly. Nisha looked at them embarrassed.

Nisha-(shouting) Kabir, yeh tum kya bakwaas kar rahe ho?

Kabir- Dekho, tumhare hiccups band ho gaye... Shock is a treatment on hiccups.

Nisha-(speechless) par tum...I mean...

Kabir- Chill jaan, Main sirf mazaak kar raha tha...

Nisha sighed in relief as Kabir walked away from there. But she didn't realize that pink hues had made their appearance on her cheeks.

Her mind replayed Kabir's "I LOVE YOU" again and again. Each time she remembered it she blushed.

*In half hour*

Kabir was passing Viraj's cabin, but his footsteps stopped when his eyes fell on Nisha. She was sitting with the script, playing with her heart necklace and listening to Viraj. What made Kabir smile was that he knew she wasn't actually paying attention to Viraj.

Nisha yawned and Viraj looked at her in anger. Nisha made a baby face. Kabir giggled and left from there.

She and the crew then were out for an outdoor shoot which was very long. Later when she entered the Saxena house, she saw that Kabir watching T.V.

Kabir- Hiccups band ho gaye?

Nisha- haan...

She freshened up and went in the kitchen. She squealed in delight as she saw her favorite pizza lying on the counter with coke bottles. Kabir came and stood beside her with a cute smile plastered on his face.

Nisha-(happily) PIZZA? Tum laaye?

Kabir- nahi toh, Harsh ne post se bheje the...

Nisha-(irritated) yaar, why do you keep reminding me of that American monkey?

Kabir- Accha baba, sorry... Ab pizza pe attack kare?

Nisha nodded and both finished the pizza in 10 minutes.

Nisha- (drinking coke) I so needed a pizza...

Kabir- Isiliye toh leke aaya tha...

Nisha- Kabir, Dadaaji ka call aaya tha...

Kabir- Kab?

Nisha- Set pe, I was busy isiliye receive nahi kiya... Par I know he wants to talk about Harsh...

Kabir felt disheartened at the mention of Harsh, but he knew that at present, he had to listen to Nisha.

Kabir- You like Harsh? Sach-sach bata... soch ki teri usse kabhi shaadi hi nahi hogi...

Nisha- Well, Harsh aur uski family humare neighbors the... He was my first friend... Jwalu tab bahut choti thi, isiliye I couldn't play cricket with her, so Harsh used to be the bowler for me... He was great, par then, They went to Delhi aur Saurav's family shifted in their house.. Saurav was just fun, so he filled the void Harsh had created...

Kabir- That means you don't like him...

Nisha- I may still care for him, par shaadi with him, isn't something I want...

Kabir- Toh yahin baat apne Daadu ko samjhao...

Nisha-(sadly) You think I didn't try... bahut koshish ki maine, but I failed...

Kabir kept quiet, so did Nisha. They then watched Chennai Express on the television.

*After the Deepika Padukone's chudial avatar*

Kabir- pata hai, there is one girl I know who looks like a chudail...

Nisha- (confused) Kaun?

Kabir- You...

Nisha first didn't realize what he said, but when she did, she looked at him angrily and started gifting him with slaps.

Kabir- (trying to avoid her slaps) Ouch, ouch... Nisha dard ho raha hai...

Nisha- You deserve it...

She stopped hitting him after he pleaded a lot. She received Laxmi's call so went in the gallery to speak to her. When she entered the bedroom in some 15 minutes, she saw that Kabir was already asleep. She too fell asleep not before remembering the 3 magic words which Kabir had said to her in the morning and the kiss.

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I know d update was small, was busy with banner. 😊 Aaj ke liye adjust kar lo😊

A big thank u to Niya (my Naniji) for the awesome Shayari...😃

Do comment and tell how is d update and banner. 😊

Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cuteness ki dukaan
Nisha ko hichkiyaan aa rahi hai.. And Kabir worried for her... *_*
I LOVE YOU and kissieee ☺️
Chill Jaan ☺️
Kabira.. Propose kar de.. Sachi wala.. Bina propose kiye itna frank hogaya hai... Propose karne ka baad Nisha bhi frank ho jayegi 😳
Ya atleast sab ke samne embarrassed nahi hogi 😆
Awww.. He was admiring her...
A smile on his face because of her cute baby face
Pizza.. I also want Pizza 😛
Harsh.. 🤔
Chalo atleast Kabir ko itni toh shanti hogi ki Harsh ke liye Nisha ke maan main koi feelings nahi hai 😆
Why do I feel that Harsh ki jaldi entry hone wali hai.. ?? 😆
Hogi toh Kabir J hoga aur Nisha will try to show Harsh that she loves Kabira .. Dono cases main its good for me .. I'll enjoy reading both the cases 😆
Cheena Mudial ho gai.. Meena Chudail ho gai... 🤣
He compared her to Deepika Padukone 😉 Mish ki fav actress😉😆
Maar toh padni hi chaiye.. He deserves it😆
And Never thank me for any shayari get that.. 😡

As promised .. Your Dairy milk silk 😉


Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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