NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...


Yes, I am a D3 fan, but my elder sis, is more crazy 4 VruShan. And this was a surprise fr her😃

awww ^_^ surprise for sis??😳
so sweet...
and a very good idea!! Mein v apni story me aisa kuch karungi!!! To make my elder sis happy... 😃
behan khush to hum chain se reh payenge 😆
warna toh pura din pareshan karti rehti hai 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

awww ^_^ surprise for sis??😳
so sweet...
and a very good idea!! Mein v apni story me aisa kuch karungi!!! To make my elder sis happy... 😃
behan khush to hum chain se reh payenge 😆
warna toh pura din pareshan karti rehti hai 😆


And be careful of the way ur sis reacts, my sis literally started dancing😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shibu read both the parts together i liked the filmy dance between nibir i am sure there is more romance on its way 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vrushan?D3?😆
nice one dear...
short and sweet
update soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Hey NiBirians , thanks a lot for your likes and comments. The third part is up😊.

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Day 3

*Morning*

They got ready and left for the studio. The day was normal with shoots and other work. Kabir had gone out for some work. He entered the studio and went to his locker. He saw Nisha standing a little away from him and talking with Sumeet.

Sumeet was Viraj's friend and visited the set often. He had tried to hit on Nisha, who avoided him. Kabir saw that Nisha turned and was about to go but Sumeet pulled her arm and pulled her very close to himself. Kabir's blood boiled in anger. Sumeet tried to kiss Nisha who was pushing him away from herslef, but failed as he turned too strong for her.

Kabir's anger reached its peak. He went and pushed Sumeet away from Nisha and punched him in his face. Sumeet was taken aback. He was about to punch Kabir but Kabir kicked him in stomach. He fell on the ground. Nisha was shocked. Her eyes couldn't stop shedding tears of fear. She hugged Kabir.

Kabir ran his hand on her back to calm her. Sumeet looked at the 2 in disgust. As it was pack up time, most of the crew were entering the locker room. He couldn't tolerate his insult and shouted.

Sumeet- oh toh tum isiliye mujhe khud se dur rakh rahi thi, because you are interested in this Kabir, huh? Waise he too is interested in you... Both make a great pair...Don't you? Waise kya rishte hai tum dono ka? Itna care ur corncern, kaafi gehra rishte hoga nahi...Dosti, bhai- behen yaa girlfriend-boyfriend? Otherwise Nisha just wants guys' attention

Nisha was unable to speak, but something pricked Kabir's heart, when that disgusting monster took Nisha's name.

Kabir- (still hugging Nisha) Haan hoon main Nisha ka boyfriend.

All gasped in shock. Kabir himself was shocked when he realised what he said. Nisha broke the hug and looked at him in shock.

Sumeet- (smirking) Aur yeh kab hua?

Kabir- (angrily) Sumeet, get the hell out of here...

Sumeet- Itni akad mat dikhao... yeh tumhara production house nahi hai...

Everyone turned when they heard someone say, "Correct, yeh uska production house nahi hai, mera hai..." It was Viraj Singh Rathore. All others scattered to do their own work.

Viraj- (holding Sumeet's collar) isiliye, get out of here. GUARDS!

Two guards came running.

Viraj- take this guy away from my eyesight.

The guards nodded and pulled Sumeet out of there.

Viraj- (to Nisha) Are you fine?

Nisha nodded in a yes. Viraj signalled Kabir to take her away. Kabir nodded and they left the studio. Kabir stopped his bike infront of the Gateway of India. Nisha got down and sat on one of the benches. Kabir chose to stay away from her, so turned to go near the sea, but felt soft fingers holding his wrist.

Nisha- Please don't go...

Kabir looked at her. She was still scared. He sat down.

Nisha: (still scared,) Kabir, Sumeet tried to...

Kabir- Nisha, calm down...

Nisha- (lost in a trance) Main locker mein se apna cell ka charger nikalne locker room gayi thi. Tabhi Sumeet wahaan aaya, to attend a call maybe. I heard him cut the call but chose to avoid because I couldn't find my charger. Finally giving up, I turned and found Sumeet standing behind me. Not knowing what to speak, I excused myself and was about to walk away when he called me. Mujhe ignore karna thikh nahi laga so I turned. He started a random conversation, but then my uncomfortable side wanted to walk away, so I finally made an excuse and turned but he pulled me... (She couldn't continue because fresh tears of pain and fear started trickling down her cheeks.)

She hugged him and he hugged her back.

Kabir- (still hugging her) I am sorry Nisha, I landed you in a great mess...

Nisha- (breaking the hug) It's ok...

Kabir- No it isn't... He raised a question on your character and I couldn't tolerate that...

Nisha- (holding his hand)I know Kabir ki tumne mere baare mein soch kar hi yeh sab kiya... I should be greatful to you...

Kabir- Ok thikh hai, main sirf guilty tha, but if you aren't angry, toh hum aage kya karenge?

Nisha- (confused) Aage?

Kabir- Hmm... Studio mein we never spoke a word to each other and we have lied.

Nisha-Kuch sochte hai...

Both thought for a while and then Nisha spoke.

Nisha- idea, hum yeh bata dete hai ki hum dono pichle week se hi are together, so didn't think it was so important to tell anyone... Aur tumhare jaane ke 2-3 hafton baad I'll say that we broke up.

Kabir- (hesitant) but are we supposed to lie to our friends too?

Nisha- I think so... I mean, Kirti ki woh gang hai na, the so called "beauty and gossip queens of the studio," aur Kirti ke pet mein kuch nahi rehta, so its risky and Umesh, Kirti aur Sukku se kuch nahi chupata...

Kabir- Right...

They spent another hour there. Maybe preparing themselves for the confusion they were about to face.

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Day 3 ends. Hope you liked it. Please share your comments or hit like.

Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Shibu meri jaan ❤️Really sorry for making u wait sooo long for my comments😒 Hope my comments dont let u down😊🤗
All the chapters were lovely👏👏
Loved the concept ❤️ Very original👍🏼 Nibir working in a production house😃 Vrushika and Shantanu's mention was surprising 😆
Miss Touch me not and Mr Flirt 😆
Nibir got thrown out of their houses on the same day 😆
Nibir renting a house together as a married couple 😆😆
Their dance was superb😳 U have described their dance so beautifully👏😳
Coming to the third chapter, Kabir rescuing Nisha was just so cute
He is so protective of her and cares so much about her 😳
Kabir said that he is Nisha's boyfriend
Kabir trying to calm Nisha was adorable😳
Their hugs were just❤️
Love the emotions and small nuances u r able to capture through ur writing. That soft fingers waala line was so cute😳
So Nibir hv decided to go ahead with this lie that they r dating😆 They think they will just be pretending but they dont knw that soon they will fall deeply in love with each other😉
Really excited and eager to know how the story progresses
Continue soon😉
Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
wow..protective kabir comes to nisha's rescue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Enjoyed reading, I wish NAUC writers would gave done something like this...lol...please continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
read all 3 parts!!

loving the story so far 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part 👏
Thanx for PM
Continue soon

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