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Lekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#821

anu...r u talking about VJ revelation?

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Lekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
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Posted: 10 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

I think that won't be needed? I mean what difference would that make at that moment? And if he mentions..wouldn't VJ hear it?

ok thanks

one more doubt..where should i end?with kabir leaving?ya thinking that he should come back to GH?

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: Anagha.

ok thanks
one more doubt..where should i end?with kabir leaving?ya thinking that he should come back to GH?

No..you can end with Ramesh looking sadly or VJ seeing victoriously...

But you have to write something that would make Kabir think and come back...Like Ramesh telling something which makes him come back. You have written in Chap 2 na...that Kabir comes back after giving it a thought over? So that has to be mentioned.

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#825

@Lekha VJ realisation is done by you na...

Anu is discussion first chapter...RaKa fight.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

No..you can end with Ramesh looking sadly or VJ seeing victoriously...

But you have to write something that would make Kabir think and come back...Like Ramesh telling something which makes him come back. You have written in Chap 2 na...that Kabir comes back after giving it a thought over? So that has to be mentioned.

where i btw?

that doent make sense na?