NAUC Poems collection - Part 2 on page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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1) This one is kabir's pov after he came to meet Nisha in

Got to see in my eyes,

The love for you that flies,

Sparks that you create,

Load me with the freight,

Go on read me open as a book.

Finding it tough to see

Good for you that we are not one

After reading your thoughts

I can see light dawn upon me

Your eyes have the spark

I always failed to ignite.

May you be happy,

Under no illusion,

Having no confusion,

Reading your confession.

As it's a must win situation,

Might help in some love creation,

Glad you'll be happy,

I must leave you,

Leave you with your thoughts,

Leave you with your memories,

To help me on this journey.



2) This one is Lakshmi scolding Ramesh after he came back to the house with Kabir

Don't you wonder

Far from us yonder,

Living like a fakir,

Made me a kinggg,

Or something

Don't worry,

Keep moving hurry,

Might the evening namaz,

Get over and done with,

Where will you sing out your fury.

Don't ask, don't tell, just know

Just going to and fro,

Leave the house, leave the shop,

But why hell bent on,

Letting your flowers drop.

Don't you tell,

You needed a break,

But why can't you,

Know my take.

Your daughter, your sons,

Having worried of you right through the suns.

Come home and see us,

Cried we day and right,

Cried oceans of water,

Just like a fury of rain gods might.

Don't ask don't tell,

Just let me yell,

Cause you won't like the strange,

Silence fore the storm.


3) This one is again the same scene but Lakshmi asking Ramesh why he left (As Shwetha had asked)


See here if you got the guts,

See here if wanna know the cuts,

You gave me, you gave us,

Don't you know, don't we show

We do care for you.

If you wonder,

I must say I lost my life,

Living without my kids, my wife,

I must say I lost my life,

When my kids, my wife

Wonder bout my love.

Than tell me one thing,

What did you yonder,

When your life lives under,

This roof this home,

How did that place

Ask you to pay a visit at your pace.

To tell you I went to find,

Only why my life's bound,

By these walls, this roof,

To get the answer,

Why my own father,

Hates me as some another.

Must I say I found the reason,

Whatever the season,

You all love me, you all want me,

I got to know myself, who's me,

Now I know this bind I have with place

Basically I must say it's the word we.



4) Nisha

You got to take some bull shit,

Or do you wanna make me hit,

Yo-Yo my father's so cool,

N I N I I am a bloody fool,

I don wanna get him to trouble,

But get him trapped in my created rouble.

Yo I got to get some plan,

Don't dare do shit with my clan,

So be it if you need,

Bring in some blah,

And some community keeda,

You missed mister duffer,

Yo My elder brothers such buffer,

So shopping would do,

And reading Hoo hoo,

Don't you dare touch my scooty,

Cause it's on my duty,

Just to let you know,

When you gotta go you gotta go,

I don't like lehenga,

Blah it's so mehenga,

I wouldn't like to die,

Wanna see my arrows fly,

Ya that's my dream,

I am not girly,

So my hair's not so curly,

Don't take panga,

Even f you are gunda or mavali,

I won't take time to make you remember diwali

If wanna marry,

go for some matrimony

Cause if want to engage,

I'll get enrage,

My mister right doesn't show his face,

Helmet gets stuck refusing to come out at pace,

My dadi's so dreamy,

Her dreams so creamy,

Yo I am not girly,

You wanna take some bullshit



5) Ramesh's Misery


Oh I hate this trap,

Yes I mean this crap,

Tieing in the knots

For sacrificing me just like the goats,

Oh how hate it,

But don't how,

They create it.

My fun, this sun I fail see,

I am drowning in this rdr sea,

Oceans of questions I must ask,

But these brothers always upto the task.

Some ring gets lost,

I get taken for the taunts,

Everynow and then,

Ok leave it they my brethren.

But wait a moment,

My children also get the same treatment,

These are brothers, god don't give such enemies,

But stop as said GKI,

Is important as I know.

Let it be they re brother's of mine,

After all they don't make me struggle to dine,

Let them be happy,

At my life's price,

But make sure god,

My kids don't give each other such surprise



Lachmi😆 not poem but dozen songs bigadoed into one🤣

Teri meri kahani,
Aye beech mein Bauji ki Jawani,
Banke jo aag barse meri devrani,
Leela teri mujhe hi tadpai,
Yeh marji teri tu bachai na bachai,

Raat mori aah bhi ja, aa bhi ja,

teri shaadi ke liye ladka bata ja,
Bin tension ab yeh Lachmi nahi,
Tension hai jahan Lachmi hai wahi,
Oh Acting aise piche padi hai,
Koi bhoot bachan ka jaise aa gaya,
Mumbai bulaye tujhe chal rahi,
acting bulaye sipahi,

Beta mera sukku din sara chilaye,

Bin mere yeh chai ab nahi,
Tu banaye toh chai piye hum wahi,
Tu hain toh Bahu meri, Maji Kahe

Warna main kissi ko saas lagti nahe,

Bunty nu Teri Ma, Teri Ma, Kehndi rahan,
Tera HW karwaye bina main ek pal na sahan
Jeth mere ekhai darde dill,
dusre ko chahiye constipation pill
Jethaniyon meri ke bari hai bill,
Ek Cake dusri taunt aati hai for the kill,
Mora piya kuch bolat nahi,
Bhanje Bhanjiya hume savings account samjhe,
Jab musibat aye toh dil khol ke kharche

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Shwets1502 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great work Puneet, as usual..😊
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OMGGG. Okay, firstly confession: I actually SUCK at reading poetry. Most stuff just flies right over my head and I sit there in confusion wondering what the poem means.

But Puneet!! I actually understand these poems! They're so good! I esp love that Kabir one! Dude so wonderful! These specific lines were absolutely magnificent at conveying Kabir's sadness!

Your eyes have the spark

I always failed to ignite.

Amazing Puneet! You really have a talent!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for the thread
do update it often
u are an amazing poet!
keep up the good work!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved your work puneet..!!!
Keep updating this thread with your work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pretty good job Puneet
you can write very well

hope to see more of your poems
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb puneet... Nice job...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣
the nisha one is so good!
continue writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anulovessarun

🤣🤣🤣

the nisha one is so good!
continue writing!

Hope my description of your original biwi didn't disappoint you 🤣 🤣🤣🤣
Will continue if the thread crosses 200 views (if ever) otherwise ☢️ this thread
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gagp

Hope my description of your original biwi didn't disappoint you 🤣 🤣🤣🤣
Will continue if the thread crosses 200 views (if ever) otherwise ☢️ this thread

yaar dont discontinue!
its good😊

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