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Posted: 10 years ago
Mansi dekh tera intezaar khatam ho gaya🤣
unres ed on pg 91😆🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res😆

UNRES🤣
Sorry 4 late comments..😆🤣

Mindblowing Update...👏
(Mujhe shuru se lag raha tha ki kuch toh bura hone wala hai..😕 dekho Kabir ka acci ho gaya)

Loved the waiting sessions of Nisha 25 MC in half an hour..???🤣OMG bechara Ashu..🤣
Loved Kabira's way of MANAVOFYING his JB Awieee🤣

" Kyu muh fula k baithi h.. bilkul
khushi nhi hui na tjhe mjhe dekhke" he said trying to annoy her more.
"U... bander idiot monkey donkey... koi itna time lgata h kya..."
nisha said. " Hmmm ur tu jo mera phone nhi utha rhi thi uska kya"
kabir said. Nisha checked her phone. She
saw his miss calls. She felt really bad for not picking up. " M sorry"
she said with tears in her eyes. " ab rone ko to nhi bola h na maine...
jab dekho roti rehti h.." he said. " chhipkali khi ki " he
added. " Kya kha... mai chhipkali hu... to tu kuwa h" she said.
" ha ha handsome kuwa... tabhi to tere jaisi chhipkali mjhe itna pyaar
karti h" he smirked. " tu kitna k hai na kabir..." she said.
" Ur tu kitni j hai nisha" he replied. She made an hawww
expression. " Tu aa kabir mere
samne fir dekh maine teri chatni na bnai na to mera naam badal dena" she
hissed. " Thik h to kya bulau tjhe... bandariya chhipkali jungli billi ya
<font color="#FF0000">mr.k ki mrs j</font>" he smiled. She blushed at the last part. " k kahin ka " she said. "
Achha chal bye... " kabir said. " Bye kabir... kab aaega tu
yaar" nisha asked. " <font color="#FF0000">be patient mrs. J... </font>we will meet very
soon" kabir winked.


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<b>
" ae bandariya kya kar rhi h..."
kabir asked her at phone. " tjhe maarne ki planning" she said. "
Ohho... to kya plan kia h" kabir asked. " Surprise murder" she
said. They giggled at it.

@Bold Loved it to the core... Their Nok-jhoks r the building blocks of their cute & sweet relationship😆🤣
@Red Along with Nisha I was too Blushing🤣

Kabir's Accident...😭 Sensed by Nishu..😭 Bahut hi Dukh hua Nisha ki haalath dekhke..😭

Acha hua Mansi ki tune zyada nahi rulaya hamein warna😡😡😡 teri khair nahi thi😈😆🤣

Nisha walked towards him
and touched his forehead. He winced in
pain and opened his eyes to look at her. " Nisha.." he said. She
bursted in tears hearing her name from him. She hugged him tightly. "
<font color="#6600FF">kitna dra dia tha tune mjhe... jaan nikal gae thi meri... tjhe kuch ho jta to
mai kya karti kabir.." she said between her sobs.
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Kabir smiled "kuch hua to nhi na... rona
band kar nisha" he made her look into his eyes and wiped her tears. "
m ok... look ekdum fit hu mai" kabir said and tried to lift his hand but
winced in pain. Nisha hit him lightly "dikh rha h... ekdum fit" she
said. <font color="#6600CC">" Achha thik h na... ro to mat... mar thodi na gya hu jo itna aansu
bha rhi h" he said. Nisha pulled
his collar with anger. " kabir... dubara esa bola h na... to mjhse
bura koi nhi hoga samjha" he can see her pain, fear and anger.</font> <font color="#FF0000">The
intensity of her pain was this much that it immediately reflect in his eyes
too.</font> " <font color="#FF0000">Nishaaa..." only this is what came out before he choked on his
own emotions. He just hugged her and let his tears fall.
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@Bold Was too Emotional Yaar... 😭😭😭 Had Felt the pain NiBir were going thru..😭 Excellently written👏 gud use of words to portray emotions..👏

@Violet See.. Her Pain.. 😭The Intensity.. The Love... All were literally felt.. ❤️Touched..😭😭 Well Written Again Claps 4 U..👏

@Red The Bestest Lines & The words U used were just Perfect..👏👏👏 Felt it to the core❤️

Last Part was suprbly written...👍🏼 I want to give u a Hug + a Clap🤗👏

Nisha was feeding kabir while he was constantly watching him. She was trying
hard to control the tears. She touched his forehead and he winced hard in pain.
Her tears breakthrough in no time. <font color="#FF0000">The second he saw them falling he forgot his
pain, he catched the first tear and wiped away others. " nisha... don't
waste these precious tears of yours... they made me realise how much pain I
give to you... they stab my heart" kabir said. Nisha holded his hand and kissed it. "
these tears are not of pain kabir... u can never give me pain.. not even
unknowingly... that I know... but the fear of losing you isn't going away
kabir... m scared... scared of what could have happened to you... I can't see
u in pain kabir... I would have died without you" she couldn't control
herself anymore and poured her heart out in front of him. " I promise u
nisha I would never leave you... if I ever had too u will bring me back... hai
na jaan" kabir said. Nisha nodded
in a yes and wiped her tears away. She kissed his forehead and his eyes, wiping
all the tears.</font> <font color="#6600CC">" no more rona dhona..ok" she said. " aansu ki factory se esi baate achhi
nhi lagti" he smirked. " Achha bachho mai aansu ki factory
hu..."</font> <font color="#FF0000">she hit him on his hand. " Ouch...ouch... nishaa... ab tod hi
degi kya" he said as his hand pained. " I m so sorry kabir... m
really sorry" she said and soothe his hand. " Offo nisha I was joking
yaar..." kabir said. " but u r hurt" she said. He smiled because he knew she know him inside
out.
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<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">@Red I juss love.. juss love this purity in NiBir relationship...❤️ Juss Loved it Mansi.. Every Words were sooo Suprbbb👏
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<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">@Violet.. Made the scene a lighter one..😆 K Panti is with Kabira even in hospital bed😲🤣</font></font>

<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">☯️</font></font><font color="#000000">☯️</font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">☯️</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">☯️</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">☯️(Never used this emoticon in my posts.. using it first time as "KAALA TEEKA" to My NiBir's Relationship.. taaki sab Musibatein unse door rahe..😆 aur NiBir hamesha ek saath khush rahein...!!!!! </font></font><font color="#000000">🤣</font>*touchwood*😳☺️)

<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">Loved The way Viraj said everything to Ramesh..👏
</font></font>

Waiting 4 Ramy's Response..

Mansi Aise hi long & Suprb Updates dethi raho with lots of NiBir ROMANCE ☺️(Happy wala ROMANCE😉)<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font>

Thanks 4 the Pm yaar😳<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font>

Do Write More..🤗Q ki DMM☺️😆<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font><font color="#FF0000"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font>




are saru... tu mere wait ka gift achha hi deti h... thank u... a big hug
Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Mansi dekh tera intezaar khatam ho gaya🤣
unres ed on pg 91😆🤣

😆 😛
SaruSenan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
🤗🤗🤗 tereliye bhi hugss le lo...😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Loved the way Nisha was worried for Kabir 😳
Hope Ramesh understand their relationship n support them ...
Continue soon n thanks for the pm .. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

🤗🤗🤗 tereliye bhi hugss le lo...😉😆

awww thanks 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Awesome update 👏
Loved the way Nisha was worried for Kabir 😳
Hope Ramesh understand their relationship n support them ...
Continue soon n thanks for the pm .. 😃

😃 thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
I am loving viraj in your story too much
Nibir scenes were so cute
Waiting for ramy reaction
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing am glad Ramesh comes to know
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update Mansi
Nibir 😳😳
Waiting for Ramesh's reaction..
update soon

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