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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Piya1199

Great update Mansi

Nibir😳😳
Waiting for Ramesh's reaction..
update soon

thanks piya .. will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayy😆 I kept my promise😆
Beautiful chapter Mansi 👏👏
Nisha's excitement and her joy was cute😳 Ha bhot samaj gyi h tabhi to aadhe ghante m ye tera 25th call h" he said. - 😆🤣
Her getting angry on Ashish and not attending Ashish's and Kabir's calls was very cute😳😆 She is adorable😳
Magar hamare Kabira ko usse manana aata hai😆😉
Nice trick used by Kabir👍🏼😆

" Kyu muh fula k baithi h.. bilkul khushi nhi hui na tjhe mjhe dekhke" he said trying to annoy her more. "U... bander idiot monkey donkey... koi itna time lgata h kya..." nisha said. " Hmmm ur tu jo mera phone nhi utha rhi thi uska kya" kabir said. Nisha checked her phone. She saw his miss calls. She felt really bad for not picking up. " M sorry" she said with tears in her eyes. " ab rone ko to nhi bola h na maine... jab dekho roti rehti h.." he said. " chhipkali khi ki " he added. " Kya kha... mai chhipkali hu... to tu kuwa h" she said. " ha ha handsome kuwa... tabhi to tere jaisi chhipkali mjhe itna pyaar karti h" he smirked. " tu kitna k hai na kabir..." she said. " Ur tu kitni j hai nisha" he replied. She made an hawww expression. " Tu aa kabir mere samne fir dekh maine teri chatni na bnai na to mera naam badal dena" she hissed. " Thik h to kya bulau tjhe... bandariya chhipkali jungli billi ya mr.k ki mrs j" he smiled. She blushed at the last part. " k kahin ka " she said. " Achha chal bye... " kabir said. " Bye kabir... kab aaega tu yaar" nisha asked. " be patient mrs. J... we will meet very soon" kabir winked.- Loved the entire skype conversation between Nisha and Kabir ❤️ Nisha blushing😳 Mrs J😳 Haww expression by Nisha 😆😆

Loved the phone conversation also between Nibir 😃 Nisha apprehensive and Kabir reassuring her

" ae bandariya kya kar rhi h..." kabir asked her at phone. " tjhe maarne ki planning" she said. " Ohho... to kya plan kia h" kabir asked. " Surprise murder" she said. They giggled at it.- Cuteness overload 😳🤗😳

" nishu bol kabir kab aa rha h " kirti asked excitedly. " Tjhe kabir ka intzaar h ya kisi ur ka" nisha smirked. " Kya yaar nisha" kirti replied.- Lagta hai Nisha ke ilaava koi aur bhi bekaraara hai😆

Nisha-ramesh convo was nice😃 Glad to know Ramesh is such a great parent😃

kabir ki excitement was infectious😆 I was also as excited as kabir 😆Magar uski dhakkan ki excitement mein dekho kya hogaya !

Nisha realizing that Kabir was in danger reiterating the deep unspoken soulful connection between Nibir

U described Nisha's panic very well and Viraj and Ramesh's reactions to her state 👍🏼

The hospital scene of Nibir was just something that cannot be described. Adorable, heart rendering❤️👏 "Kabir was lying on the bed. His hand and head were bandaged. Nisha walked towards him and touched his forehead. He winced in pain and opened his eyes to look at her. " Nisha.." he said. She bursted in tears hearing her name from him. She hugged him tightly. " kitna dra dia tha tune mjhe... jaan nikal gae thi meri... tjhe kuch ho jta to mai kya karti kabir.." she said between her sobs.

Kabir smiled "kuch hua to nhi na... rona band kar nisha" he made her look into his eyes and wiped her tears. " m ok... look ekdum fit hu mai" kabir said and tried to lift his hand but winced in pain. Nisha hit him lightly "dikh rha h... ekdum fit" she said. " Achha thik h na... ro to mat... mar thodi na gya hu jo itna aansu bha rhi h" he said. Nisha pulled his collar with anger. " kabir... dubara esa bola h na... to mjhse bura koi nhi hoga samjha" he can see her pain, fear and anger. The intensity of her pain was this much that it immediately reflect in his eyes too. " Nishaaa..." only this is what came out before he choked on his own emotions. He just hugged her and let his tears fall."- Loved this part thoroughly ❤️The way u described their emotions is just brilliant 👏👏👏

The intensity of her pain was this much that it immediately reflect in his eyes too.- My favorite line in this chapter😳

There couldn't have been a better way for Ramesh to know about Nibir than him witnessing the love and the emotions Nibir have for each other

" Bade bhaiya kaise h aap" kabir asked.

" Baat mat kijie hmse... itne irresponsible kaise ho sakte h aap... kya haalat bna li h apni... socha h kya kuch ho sakta tha" viraj was hell angry on him while nisha was standing and watching them. " sorry bade bhaiya..." kabir said in a small voice. " Hmmm.. thats better... now nisha aap yhi rhiye kabir k pass.. he need u... I will handle everything...alright?" He said to which nisha nodded. " Ur aap kabir... bilkul manmani nhi karenge samjhe" he glared at him. Kabir smiled and nodded.- Rajbir scene was very nice😳😳 Viraj angry and Kabir manaofying Viraj😳 too cute😳

Kirti ashish scene was also nice😊

All the cousins meet kabir. They all had a good time. All the while nisha was standing in corner and one can clearly see the tears she was trying to hide everytime they threaten to fall. Kabir was noticing her but he didn't said anything.- Kabir understands and knows Nisha so well😳

Nisha was feeding kabir while he was constantly watching him. She was trying hard to control the tears. She touched his forehead and he winced hard in pain. Her tears breakthrough in no time. The second he saw them falling he forgot his pain, he catched the first tear and wiped away others. " nisha... don't waste these precious tears of yours... they made me realise how much pain I give to you... they stab my heart" kabir said. Nisha holded his hand and kissed it. " these tears are not of pain kabir... u can never give me pain.. not even unknowingly... that I know... but the fear of losing you isn't going away kabir... m scared... scared of what could have happened to you... I can't see u in pain kabir... I would have died without you" she couldn't control herself anymore and poured her heart out in front of him. " I promise u nisha I would never leave you... if I ever had too u will bring me back... hai na jaan" kabir said. Nisha nodded in a yes and wiped her tears away. She kissed his forehead and his eyes, wiping all the tears. " no more rona dhona..ok" she said. " aansu ki factory se esi baate achhi nhi lagti" he smirked. " Achha bachho mai aansu ki factory hu..." she hit him on his hand. " Ouch...ouch... nishaa... ab tod hi degi kya" he said as his hand pained. " I m so sorry kabir... m really sorry" she said and soothe his hand. " Offo nisha I was joking yaar..." kabir said. " but u r hurt" she said. He smiled because he knew she know him inside out. - Heart rendering, surreal Nibir scene ❤️ Loved it thoroughly 🤗

Aansu ki factory😆😆

He smiled because he knew she know him inside out. -I loved this line. It describes Nibir relation so well 😳

Brilliant chapter in all👏



Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 22
Beautiful update
I really liked nisha's restlessness...she was missing kabir
N kabir is so caring cousins ko bula le🤣
Cousins were teasing nisha n kirti☺️
Viraj-kaira convo was so heart touching😊
Kaira has gone through a very tough phase but m happy that now she is with viraj
N nibir r so cute ek jaise dialogues
Thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res for next reply
Will unres later😊
N m feeling 🥺 u dint pm me na😭
Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Res for next reply

Will unres later😊
N m feeling🥺u dint pm me na😭

are I did... how come u didn't get... stupid if...
Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Chapter 22

Beautiful update
I really liked nisha's restlessness...she was missing kabir
N kabir is so caring cousins ko bula le🤣
Cousins were teasing nisha n kirti☺️
Viraj-kaira convo was so heart touching😊
Kaira has gone through a very tough phase but m happy that now she is with viraj
N nibir r so cute ek jaise dialogues
Thanks 4 the pm

awww thanks sonu
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Yayy😆I kept my promise😆

Beautiful chapter Mansi👏👏
Nisha's excitement and her joy was cute😳Ha bhot samaj gyi h tabhi to aadhe ghante m ye tera 25th call h" he said.-😆🤣
Her getting angry on Ashish and not attending Ashish's and Kabir's calls was very cute😳😆She is adorable😳
Magar hamare Kabira ko usse manana aata hai😆😉
Nice trick used by Kabir👍🏼😆

<font size="2">" Kyu muh fula k baithi h.. bilkul khushi nhi hui na tjhe mjhe dekhke" he said trying to annoy her more. "U... bander idiot monkey donkey... koi itna time lgata h kya..." nisha said. " Hmmm ur tu jo mera phone nhi utha rhi thi uska kya" kabir said. Nisha checked her phone. She saw his miss calls. She felt really bad for not picking up. " M sorry" she said with tears in her eyes. " ab rone ko to nhi bola h na maine... jab dekho roti rehti h.." he said. " chhipkali khi ki " he added. " Kya kha... mai chhipkali hu... to tu kuwa h" she said. " ha ha handsome kuwa... tabhi to tere jaisi chhipkali mjhe itna pyaar karti h" he smirked. " tu kitna k hai na kabir..." she said. " Ur tu kitni j hai nisha" he replied. She made an hawww expression. " Tu aa kabir mere samne fir dekh maine teri chatni na bnai na to mera naam badal dena" she hissed. " Thik h to kya bulau tjhe... bandariya chhipkali jungli billi ya mr.k ki mrs j" he smiled. She blushed at the last part. " k kahin ka " she said. " Achha chal bye... " kabir said. " Bye kabir... kab aaega tu yaar" nisha asked. " be patient mrs. J... we will meet very soon" kabir winked</font><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">.</font>-Loved the entire skype conversation between Nisha and Kabir❤️Nisha blushing😳Mrs J😳Haww expression by Nisha😆😆

Loved the phone conversation also between Nibir😃Nisha apprehensive and Kabir reassuring her

" ae bandariya kya kar rhi h..." kabir asked her at phone. " tjhe maarne ki planning" she said. " Ohho... to kya plan kia h" kabir asked. " Surprise murder" she said. They giggled at it.- Cuteness overload😳🤗😳

tbc😉


thanks mihika... luv your comments so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
next update kab hain mansi mauti...???🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

are I did... how come u didn't get... stupid if...


ab to unres kar do
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sam_premc

next update kab hain mansi mauti...???🤣

aaj k epi k baad... 😆

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