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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Nice prologue...plz continue soon...

thanks 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter-1

Nisha was in her balcony reading a novel and listening to radio. This is her daily routine since her marriage. Sleep has evaded her since then. She used to lie in bed for hours but now she always sneak out of her bed when viraj goes in a deep sleep and sit in balcony admiring the night and thinking about herself. Life has changed suddenly for her after marriage. Theirs was an arrange marriage. She didn't wanted to get married but singham err.. her dadaji has ordered her to do so and her cries, pleas and protest nothing worked in front of him. Her father was her only support but dadaji never stopped insulting him and that's when nisha decided to get married. She was fed up with dadaji more over she didn't wanted to be a reason for her father's insults.

Its not that viraj is not a good person. He is a very good son, a very good human and a very good husband but there is such a huge difference of mindset between them that she can't bridge this gap. She always feels alienated with him. He is a big star, always surrounded with people and always presentable. Here she hates going to parties that too formal ones, she never ever in her life tried to look so presentable but now almost everyday she has to go to a party with viraj. It's just so suffocating. "zindgi jab mushkil lagne lage to bhag jana chahie.." a voice from radio said. This sentence attracts nisha, she raised the volume little bit and tried to listen. "kyuki bhag kar bhi aap usi k pass hi jaenge bus khud ko dhundne k baad..." the voice said. "ur jab aap khud ko dhund lenge to saari mushkilo ka hal apne aap hi mil jaega... simple sa fanda h". nisha begin to ponder on this thought. Suddenly she saw day breaking. She switched off the radio, hiding it behind the armchair, rushed to her bedroom where viraj is fast asleep on the bed and sneaked in her quilt pretending to sleep. After 5 min or so, alarm clock start ringing, waking up viraj for his daily routine. He got up from the bed, kissed nisha's forehead and walked towards his personal gym. Nisha snapped open her eyes to look viraj who wasn't there for her relief. "lets start with ur daily routine nisha". Saying this to herself , she begin her work of supervising each and every servant. She always fulfil her duties but nothing is giving her any happiness. She returned to her room after taking a bath and started thinking about that bhaag jao wala thought of radio incidence. Suddenly a voice said "tu bhi bhaag ja nisha,.. bhaag ja yha se door". She shuddered at the thought.. no she can't runaway like this... what will happen to her family, her father.. "arey hamesha k lie nhi bevkuf, kuch din k lie hi sahi yha se door rahegi to saans le paegi.. kam se kam aage ye sab jhelne ki himmat to aa jaegi.." nisha keep staring at her diary and declared "thik hai... kuch din k lie chali jaungi mai yha se door.."

She started searching for something... yes here it is her college backpack. She threw some imp stuff in it, wrote a letter for viraj and was eagerly wating for night to come. Once viraj was out for another party tonight, she quickly changed her clothes from this anarkali suit to her usual self i.e. a faded jeans and a simple tee. She was so happy after wearing them that she hugged herself trying to engulf the feel. She quickly took her bag, her piggy bank which contains enough money to survive and switched off her phone because she knew viraj can find her through it so isn't taking it along. She sneaked out of the backdoor closing it behind and ran as fast as she could.

Here kabir is tensed. Tensed because his engagement has been fixed and he was totally confused what to do what not to. He can't break his mom's heart but he didn't wanted this at least not so soon. He grabbed his phone and dialled a no. " hello, ashish... just come over here as fast as u could I wanted to talk to u right now.. " saying this he cut the call and sat on his bean bag. " kya hua yaar itti raat ko kyu bulaya hai mjhe.." ashish said panting. Ashish is kabir's manager, his guide and his only friend who he can trust blindly. " mera dum ghut rha h yaar ashu... kya karu mai... mjhe nhi karni ye engagement.. m so confused yaar." Kabir started his ranting. " offo kabir duffer dra hi dia tha tne to mjhe.." ashish said. "nhi karni hai engagement to mna kar de..." "nhi kar sakta maa ka dil nhi tod sakta mai.. ur payal vo b to kitti khush hai ur pyaar b karti hai mujhse..."kabir said. "ur tu... Tu karta hai usse pyaar.." ashish asked . " ha.. matlab nhi matlab pta nhi... achhi ladki hai vo.. achhi lagti hai mjhe but shadi..." kabir said. " tu kabhi nhi sudhrega... hamesha confuse, to bol tjhe kya karna hai" "yhi to meri samaj nhi aa rha" kabir said. " hmmm... tjhe yaad hai kabir kal jo radio p interview dia tha tne to kya kha tha..." ashish asked. "kya kha tha.." kabir asked him. " yhi ki jab zindgi mushkil lagne lage to bhaag jaana chahie ur..." " are yaar tu great hai, tu mera sabse achha dost h.. hae meri jaan I luv u yaar... sochta hu payal ki jagah tjhse hi shadi kar lu.." saying this kabir tried to kiss ashish. " oe paagal... dur hat duffer..." ashish rebuked him. They both started laughing. "achha sun par tu jaega kha ur mai aunty se kya kahunga..." ashish asked a little worried. "yaar kha jna h vo to pta nhi par maa ko to tu sambhal hi lega mjhe pta hai.." ur sun mai jaa rha hu kal raat ko taaki aaj saara kaam katam kar du" kabir said. "par tu engagement se pehle aa jana warna aunty mjhe faansi de dengi.." ashish said a little scared. " arre.. when kabir is here no need to fear... aa jaunga waise bhi time hai abhi.ur sun mjhe dusra phone laake dio samjha ye wla le gya to maa emotional blackmail karke bula legi ur bolna unhe ki mai phone bhool gya yha samjha.." " are samajh gya mere baap.. ab jaa packing kar.." ashish said. " hayee.. I luv you meri jaan.. tu mjhe miss to karega na janeman.." kabir said naughtily. "he bhagwan kab sudhrega ye..." ashish pleaded.

hi guys... here's ur update... i know nisha's part was longer than kabira's. but that was needed.. i hope u all like it.. ur feedback is heartly welcomed😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Finally unreserving it 😆 Really sorry for d late comments 😊

Amazing Mansi !
Loved d first update ! U hv developed Nibir's background story very well !
Now eagerly waiting for Nibir's meeting😳
It surely is going to be an interesting read !
Now I understand why u chose this title 😊 It is perfect 😳
Pls continue soon😊😃😆😳🤗
Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Res 😆 CZ I wanna be d first to comment 😉

😆 m waiting for ur comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awesome update dear
Soch rha hu payal ki jagah tujhse hi shadi kar loon🤣 kabira is such a k
Now waiting 4 nibir's first meet😉
Thanks 4 the pm n continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

😆 m waiting for ur comment


My house on a mess and can't find my laptop right now so can't comment properly. I think I will make a record when I post my comment on ur story without reserving a post 🤣
Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome update yaaraa...!!!😊
Do update the next part soon..!!
Edited by sam_premc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
That was a great start mansi ! 👏
update part 2soon
i will be the first one to read it 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Very nice.
Different concept..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Update soon love
Thanks for the pm buddy😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Super awesome plsss update soon thanks for pm😊

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