nibir ss imperfectly perfect epilogue on page 147 - Page 111

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

m waiting 😳

Originally posted by: Itsmeriya

Awesome epilogue 👏
NiBir Ki shaadi 😳
I specially loved the last lines in red
Come back soon with another story 😉

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

I dont remember after how many days I m commenting on ur story but it feels great doing so 😆 U knw I had to check and recheck my posts so many times before commenting cz I had lost track of the last time I had commented which was really long ago 😆 (it feels like that 😆) and the chapter I had commented on 😆 ab toh mere dimag ne bhi kaam karna band kar diya hai and I have forgotten the adjectives I used to use to describe your story 😆😆 Again using the ghissa-pita words now😆😆

Chapter 27- Beautiful and truly mesmerizing chapter👏👏

Loved the cousins plan of sending the elders away for a trip. Their bond and their concern for Nibir is adorable. Cousins locking Nibir in their respective rooms so that party is special and Nibir get to spend time together was nice and funny😆 Nisha's and kabir's reactions when they were let free were adorable😳 Humari jungli billi toh gusse mein Sukku ka pakka khoon karne waali thi 😆

Kisi ka bday h kya" both asked in unison.- Nibir are soulmates yaar😳 Har cheez saath mein karte hain😳

While sitting kabir pulled nisha towards him and she landed straight on his chest. The magic appears again and a beautiful eyelock begin making them getting loat in each others love. Jwalu saw them and coughed nisha broke the trance, she started moving away when kabir pulled her again "kabir chhod na tjhe lag jaegi yaar... abhi thik nhi hua h tu.." "nhi... tu door rhti h to ur dard hota h nisha... bina tere mai thik kaise hounga" he made a cute baby face and tucked her stranded hairs behind her ear lovingly. She looked at him with love and quickly gave him a tight hug which go unnoticed by others " m always here for you kabir... ". Kabir pulled her and this time she seated against him resting her head on his shoulder.- Loved this chotu romantic scene 😳😳 Cuteness overload😳

Jwalu saw this and coughed again but this time kabir glared at her "jwalu tu cough syrup kyu nhi le leti"- Loved this line 😆😆Kabir is so besharam☺️. Total K🤣 Woh toh Nishu se kisi ke saamne bhi romance karle, uske koi farak nahin padta 🤣 But that's why we love him😆

Sukku's dance was nice and it was a lot of fun reading about the cousins enjoying so much😃 Woh toh sach mein superstar nikla 😉 Dolly signalled umesh to stop the music when cushion was in kabir's hand. - Cousins ne Nibir romance ke liye ka full fledged plan banaya hai 👏😆 Awesome😆

Kabir's singing for Nisha was nice😳 and Nibir dance on the song was like sone pe suhaaga😆☺️

Kabir started singing looking at nisha with an intense look. Nisha blushed hard and lowered her gaze. Kabir walked towards her and held his hand for her.- So romantic 😳

Kabir and nisha were dancing pouring their emotions. Nisha was matching his fast pace steps with perfection. Kabir pushed her and pulled her again spinning her throughout.Nibir were swiftly waving in each others arms when kabir pushed her again bending her with his arm support and pulled with such a force that nisha has to clutch his arm to stop falling on him. Nisha gave her hand to him and he pulled her onto himself. He started twirling her around him.He held her against himself and started his perfect moves having her with him.- Coming to the dance, I think there is no one who can describe a dance sequence so beautifully and exceptionally like u Mansi 👏👏👏 It feels like the entire dance is being performed in front of you From every dance move to every emotion felt, everything is always just perfect when u describe Nibir dancing 👏👏👍🏼

They stopped dancing and were standing still in each others embrace lost in their own world when nisha suddenly felt something hot and sticky trickling through her hand. She broke the eyelock to see what was it. Soon her vision got blurred from her tears and her heart squeezed in pain as she saw blood oozing out from kabir's wound. She had clutched on it so hard that it opened up again. Kabir's eye followed her gaze and he hit himself mentally for making her cry once again. " Nisha... its just a wound... rone ki kya baat h yaar" he said. She looked at him with pain in her eyes and hugged him tightly. All her helplessness which was stabbing her till now is now out in open. She tried hard to control her tears from falling and left him immediately baffling kabir. She returned in a second with a first aid box placed in dolly's room. " Idhar baith jaldi se..." she made him sit and knelt down in front of him. Nisha started tending his wound with utmost care. Kabir was smiling throughout the procedure. Whenever he flinched, a pain gripped her heart.she tried her best to soothe his pain. " m so sorry kabir... meri wajah se tjhe itna dard hua... mjhe bhi dhyaan rkhna chahie tha ki tu abhi tk thik nhi hua h poori tarah.." she said. He smiled at her and made her look into his eyes " tune choo lia na ab dekhna kitni jaldi thik ho jaega... ur agar tu ese hi mera khayal rakhegi na... to mai roj apne hath pair tudwa k aaunga..." kabir said. She smiled at him " Oe... tu uski fikar mat kar... ek baar sabko sab kuch pta chal gya... to kya pta tera ye sapna yhi poora ho jae " she giggled. " Tu dra rhi h mjhe... thik h mai ja rha hu phir" kabir said and try to stand. " Oe mjhe chhodke chala jaega " she said with sad face. " he! I was just joking yaar... tujhe chhodke ja sakta hu mai kabhi... tu to meri parrot ban gyi h" he said hugging her. " mai tjhe parrot jaisi dikhti hu.." she said looking up at him frowning. " Are gussa mat ho baat to sun le... jaise purani kahanio m har kisi ki jaan ek tote m hoti thi na... waise hi meri jaan tjhme hai nisha.." he said. She looked at him in awe. " tjhse door to mai kabhi ja hi nhi sakta na... warna zinda kaise rahunga... kuch bhi ho jae nisha I will never leave you... I will take u away with me for forever." He said. She just hugged him again without leaving a bit of space between them. He too closed his eyes and reciprocated with same intensity.- Absolutely loved this part ❤️ Main toh Nibir ke pyaar mein kho gayi Nisha's concern for Kabir and her feeling of guilt that his wound started bleeding again because of her is so touching😳 Kabir being gulity that because of him, Nishu started crying was adorable too😳 As a couple they are just surreal 😳

The utmost care with which Nishu tended his wound and the pain she experienced whenever Kabir flinched due to the wound was heart-rendering😳 Kabir smiling through the entire process and just admiring her was too cute and romantic😳

Kabir saying that he was ready to get injured everyday if Nishu tended to him with such love and care was cute😳 And Nisha replying that she would help him in breaking his bones was hilarious😆

Kabir calling Nisha a parrot was cute and funny 😆 And his reasoning behind it was so romantic😳

Kabir assuring Nisha that he would always be at her side was indeed romantic😳 Love the way they comfort each other

Soon her vision got blurred from her tears and her heart squeezed in pain as she saw blood oozing out from kabir's wound- Loved this line❤️
She just hugged him again without leaving a bit of space between them. He too closed his eyes and reciprocated with same intensity- I m in Nibir dreamland right now

Sach kahoon toh loved every bit of the Nibir scene at the end ❤️ beautiful and Surreal

Also loved the last few lines 😃 A pair of eyes were watching them with disbelief. Those eyes had witnessed their love from their longing for each other to the care and concern they have for each other. An expression of confusion, hurt and happiness arises in them. Suddenly someone put a hand on the figure's shoulder making it turn and held it's hand.- loved ur description 👏

toh all in all, a great chapter 😉

Originally posted by: picadally

Mansi read all the parts together. Loveddd the epilogue three weddings together wow. The last lines in red were the best thing in the epilogue. Also loved hw kabir hooked nisha's magalsutra.

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Res😆

Chapter 29

Waise i hv updated my comments on pg 139😆have a look when u get time😉

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Chapter 28- Another amazing chapter Mansi👍🏼Fabulous👏

" waise tu bhi parrot jaisi hi dikhti h... teri naak h na bilkul uske jaisi hi h" kabir said bursting in a laugh. " Kya... kya bola tune... meri naak parrot jaisi h... to tere kaan bhi na gadhe ki tarah h.. samjha" she said hitting him. " Oe... mere to kaan hi gadhe jaise h na tu to puri bandariya ki tarah dikhti h... " kabir said running. " Tu... ruk ja kabir abhi btati hu... cockroach ki tarah masal na dia na to bolna..." she ran behind him. They were running in the whole room throwing stuff at each other. - Love their nok-jhoks and their cat and mouse chases😆😆😆

Suddenly kabir slipped on something and nisha in a process of holding him landed on floor with kabir trapped under her. She again get drowned in those beautiful brown eyes of his. The time stop as they get lost in each other again. Their faces were inches apart and one can feel each others breath on their faces. A desire to taste those lips arise in kabir and his eyes traced their way to her soft juicy rosy lips. Her eyes mimicked his and her breath hitched. kabir's intense look set her lips on fire. She can feel the scorching heat of his body under herself. His eyes were still on his lips as if tasting them. He so wanted to explore the hidden heaven. His look at her lips was now unbearable for her. She wanted to crash them against his. He looked in her eyes and again gave a scorching look at her lips. She felt being kissed with that mere look. She blushed pink at her own thought. Kabir saw her cheeks turning pink and rolled over trapping her this time. Her eyes widened in shock at his act. " ka..." she was silenced by him as his finger rub against her soft lower lip. Kabir lowered his head to kiss her and she closed her eyes.- My favorite part ❤️Nibir romance☺️Love your description😳☺️<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">
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Suddenly she felt a hand on her lips and opened her eyes. What she saw melted her heart, kabir put his hand on her lips and kissed her. She smiled as kabir removed his hand. " kabir... tu mjhe ese bhi kiss kar sakta h... rokungi nhi tjhe " she said. " Abhi nhi nisha... jab sahi waqt hoga to khud ko tjhse door nhi rakhunga " he said smiling and kissed her forehead instead. - Hayee KabirIn this moment I can fall in love with his character all over again😳He is so sensible and adorable kya kahoon😳

Loved the way Ramesh explained everything to Laxmi and supported Nisha. The way he tried to convince her about Nibir and the way he made Laxmi realize that they should think about their daughter and not the society is commendable👏

Kabir steadied himself and pulled her up. " Kabir... tu kabhi kabhi mere lie paheli bn jata h... " she said. " nisha... ye tu bhi samajhti h ur mai bhi ki abhi hmare lie kya imp h.. hai na... " kabir said. " idhar aa... yha baith mere sath" kabir said and they both sat in the balcony. " Kabir... tu bolega kuch... " she said. " Nhi... aaj baat karne ka mood nhi h... bus ese hi rh mere sath... please" he said. She smiled and put her head on his chest. They both closed their eyes and felt lucky to have each other- Cuteness overlaod😳

He smiled and walked towards her. Kabir made laxmi sit on the sofa and knelt down before her. He holded her hand in his " laxmi maa mai aapki beti se bhot pyaar karta hu... itna ki shayad mai khud nhi janta... kab mai use itna pyaar karne laga ye mjhe bhi nhi pta... vo meri zindagi h maa... mera sabse sunder sapna jo sach ho gya... mai janta hu ki vo married h... janta hu ki ye society ye log bhot kuch bolenge... par isse bhi bda ek sach h... meri zindgi ka sach... vo ye hai ki mai nisha k bina nhi jee sakta... shayad zinda rahu par jeeunga nhi... mai janta hu vo mjhse kitna pyaar karti h... ur ye aap bhi janti h ki bina pyaar k rehna... usse door rehna kitna tadpata h " he looked in her eyes " isilie yha aaya hu aap sab ki permission lene... apni zindgi ko apne sath le jane... dengi na mujhe permission.? Mjhe is society se koi lena dena nhi h.. mere lie sirf ur sirf nisha important h ur important h uski khushi" He asked hopefully. - Hayee😳Kabira agar aise kahega aur aise samjhaayega toh saamne waala usse apni jaan tak dene ko tayyar ho jaayega😆😉

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Viren and the elder's entry into the situation was perfect especially the way Kabir was so calm in explaining to them that he loved Nisha😃</font>

" Tauji... mai pyaar karta hu nisha se ur yehi sach h" kabir said. Viren was out of control now. All the others were confused at what was happening. " how dare u..." viren said raising his hand on him. Nisha came between them " tauji..." nisha screamed with all her might. " mai bhi kabir se pyaar karti hu... " she said tears rolling through her eyes. - The courage with which Nibir face the world and are proud of their relationship proves that their relation gives them so much strength and why this relation is so important in their life. The way Nibir did not feel ashamed in confessing their love to the family and the way Nisha stood for Kabir is amazing 😳It isjust surreal

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">So loved this chapter also thoroughly😆🤗</font>

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

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