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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1111

Originally posted by: do0dleR
Sorry for being late mansi...but I couldn't comment earlier...
But I read ur entire story...and honestly I loved every bit of it...😊...
Keep writing and doing good work...
Thnks for ur PMs...:):)

no problem buddy... I m happy u liked it... thank you

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1112

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

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mihu did u forget this story... 😭

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1113

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
mihu did u forget this story... 😭

How can I forget this story Mansi 😆
It's one of those stories which are the closest to my heart 😳 ❤️
Fact is ki iss story par main comments aaram se likhna chahti hun taaki I do full justice to it 😉
Chalo this time I will try and update my comments on this story 😳
Waise u knw I m always in this fixas to which story of yours should I unres my comments first 😆
Then I take the easy way out and comment on chotu chapters first 😆

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1114

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

How can I forget this story Mansi 😆
It's one of those stories which are the closest to my heart 😳 ❤️
Fact is ki iss story par main comments aaram se likhna chahti hun taaki I do full justice to it 😉
Chalo this time I will try and update my comments on this story 😳
Waise u knw I m always in this fixas to which story of yours should I unres my comments first 😆
Then I take the easy way out and comment on chotu chapters first 😆

m waiting as always mihu... n thanks for saying that it is close to ur heart... because it's my eber first story... it means a lot to me

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1115

Chapter 30- Amazing chapter Mansi❤️

A great read👏👏👏

Heart-rendering chapter❤️

" society to bhot kuch bolti h taiji... uski fikar ki to kabhi kuch achha nhi ho payega" came a voice from the door. Everybody turned to look at viraj who was standing at the entrance with kaira on her wheelchair. " Bade bhaiya" kabir said. Viraj walked towards them with kaira who was looking tensed but yet confident. " namaste dadaji " viraj said and turned towards kabir. Both of them shared a warm hug. Everyone looked amazed at them except ramesh, nisha, kaira and cousins. "Kaise h kabir..." he asked. " Ekdum fit bade bhaiya... " kabir replied. - aww😳 Love the RajBir bond ❤️ They are just too good😳

" Ur rahi baat kabir ki.. to kabir se achha ladka nisha ko khi nhi milega... jo apne baare m baad m dusro k baare m pehle sochta h... kaira ko bhi isine dhunda h... apne bade bhaiya k lie" viraj said his emotions reflecting in his voice. Kabir looked at him. " dadaji aap bhi maan jaye na... isi m hm sab ki khushi h" he said. - Sach kaha Viraj ne😉.Kabir laakhon mein ek hai like our Nishu😃 Love the respect and concern Viraj has for Kabir

Dadaji stood up and started " tum hamesha yhi sochte rhe ho ki mai tmse baat kyu nhi karta... kyuki mai pehle se hi janta tha tumhare ur nisha k baare m..." every one was shocked to hear it specially nibir. " kabir.. itna hairan hone ki koi baat nhi h... mai budha jaroor ho gya hu... par insan ki aankhe abhi bhi pad sakta hu... tmhe pta h jis din tum is ghar m aae the... us din nisha k chehre p jo khushi thi vo kabhi nhi dekhi maine...nisha ka tmhari har ek baat ki fikar karna.. ur tmhara uski har baat ka dhyaan rakhna... mjhse nhi chhupa... " he took a look at the people around him who were dumbstruck at his talks. " mai bhot gussa tha kabir... is baat se inkaar nhi karunga... ur hona bhi chahie... par tmhara swabhav... tmhara hm sab k sath is tarah ghul mil jana... tmhe alag bna gya kabir... tmhari sachai ne mera gussa bhi khatam kar dia..."- Loved this part😳 Loved how Kabir was able to win Dadu's heart due to his love and concern for Nishu😳🤗 Waise Dadji ki baat sunkar toh hum sab shocked ho gaye the 😆 But woh kehte hai na ki Buzurgon ko logon ke pehchaan hoti hai and they can make out the dynamics of a relationship in the first glance itself.

" Viren tauji.. won't u forgive me..." kabir asked to him innocently. Nisha too looked at him hopefully. Viren take a look at their faces and said "thik hai... par ek shart p... tere jokes bhot bore karte h yaar... mat sunaya kar" he laughed. Kabir smiled widely and hugged him. - 😆😆 Adorable😆 Loved Viren Tauji's comment😆😆

" Kabir ur nisha idhar aao tm dno..." dadaji said. They came forward, dadaji put his hands on their heads and blessed them " mai chahta hu tm dno ese hi ek dusre k sath raho.. ur khush rho...". Nibir were on cloud nine at the moment. Nisha hugged her dadu " u r the best dadu in the world" she said crying out of happiness. " n u r the best granddaughter my child" he said patting her head lovingly. - love nishu and dadu's bond

Kabir smiled and folded his hand in front of him. " I promise u dadu... I will keep nisha happy... always" kabir said. " That I know beta.. are u still afraid of me" he asked. " No... I mean a little" kabir said in a small voice. " Don't be" he said and hugged kabir. Kabir was taken aback with a surprise but he was overwhelmed by the warmth of his hug. - love dadu❤️ This part was cute, funny and adorable😳

Kabir looked at nisha and pulled her into his tight embrace. Nisha too reciprocated with equal intensity. " Maine kha tha na sab thik ho jaega... dekh sab thik ho gya... ab tu kabhi mjhse door nhi jaegi... hmesha mere sath rhegi... mere pass..." he said tears of happiness forming in his eyes. Nisha doesn't said anything. She didn't need to. She felt happiest today... a feeling of being with him filled her with unbound joy. She tighten her grip on him. " Kabir... I luv u" she whispered. Kabir smiled despite the tears " I luv u the most jaan". She looked at him and wiped his tears. She kissed his eyes " u r mine now... n m yours" she said and crashed her lips on his. He kissed her back with an unmatched passion pouring the happiness they just have experienced.- Hayyee😳 Nibir romance❤️ My favorite part as always😳 So beautiful and romantic ❤️🤗

So all in all, a great chapter👍🏼😃😉

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1116

awww... mihu... I luv u sooo much 🤗 u know it's always been such a pleasure yo read ur comments on my work giving me a whole new putlook of my own story... couldn't reply on ur comment as it exceed the limit... but I luv it so much... reading ur comment help me relive all those emotions again... which I go through while writing... and this will be best thing before I leave this forum for five days... because m gonna miss u all so much... 🤗

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1117

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Chapter 30- Amazing chapter Mansi❤️
A great read👏👏👏
Heart-rendering chapter❤️
" society to bhot kuch bolti h taiji... uski fikar ki to kabhi kuch achha nhi ho payega" came a voice from the door. Everybody turned to look at viraj who was standing at the entrance with kaira on her wheelchair. " Bade bhaiya" kabir said. Viraj walked towards them with kaira who was looking tensed but yet confident. " namaste dadaji " viraj said and turned towards kabir. Both of them shared a warm hug. Everyone looked amazed at them except ramesh, nisha, kaira and cousins. "Kaise h kabir..." he asked. " Ekdum fit bade bhaiya... " kabir replied.- aww😳Love the RajBir bond❤️They are just too good😳
" Ur rahi baat kabir ki.. to kabir se achha ladka nisha ko khi nhi milega... jo apne baare m baad m dusro k baare m pehle sochta h... kaira ko bhi isine dhunda h... apne bade bhaiya k lie" viraj said his emotions reflecting in his voice. Kabir looked at him. " dadaji aap bhi maan jaye na... isi m hm sab ki khushi h" he said. - Sach kaha Viraj ne😉.Kabir laakhon mein ek hai like our Nishu😃 Love the respect and concern Viraj has for Kabir
Dadaji stood up and started " tum hamesha yhi sochte rhe ho ki mai tmse baat kyu nhi karta... kyuki mai pehle se hi janta tha tumhare ur nisha k baare m..." every one was shocked to hear it specially nibir. " kabir.. itna hairan hone ki koi baat nhi h... mai budha jaroor ho gya hu... par insan ki aankhe abhi bhi pad sakta hu... tmhe pta h jis din tum is ghar m aae the... us din nisha k chehre p jo khushi thi vo kabhi nhi dekhi maine...nisha ka tmhari har ek baat ki fikar karna.. ur tmhara uski har baat ka dhyaan rakhna... mjhse nhi chhupa... " he took a look at the people around him who were dumbstruck at his talks. " mai bhot gussa tha kabir... is baat se inkaar nhi karunga... ur hona bhi chahie... par tmhara swabhav... tmhara hm sab k sath is tarah ghul mil jana... tmhe alag bna gya kabir... tmhari sachai ne mera gussa bhi khatam kar dia..."- Loved this part😳Loved how Kabir was able to win Dadu's heart due to his love and concern for Nishu😳🤗Waise Dadji ki baat sunkar toh hum sab shocked ho gaye the😆But woh kehte hai na ki Buzurgon ko logon ke pehchaan hoti hai and they can make out the dynamics of a relationship in the first glance itself.
" Viren tauji.. won't u forgive me..." kabir asked to him innocently. Nisha too looked at him hopefully. Viren take a look at their faces and said "thik hai... par ek shart p... tere jokes bhot bore karte h yaar... mat sunaya kar" he laughed. Kabir smiled widely and hugged him. -😆😆Adorable😆Loved Viren Tauji's comment😆😆
" Kabir ur nisha idhar aao tm dno..." dadaji said. They came forward, dadaji put his hands on their heads and blessed them " mai chahta hu tm dno ese hi ek dusre k sath raho.. ur khush rho...". Nibir were on cloud nine at the moment. Nisha hugged her dadu " u r the best dadu in the world" she said crying out of happiness. " n u r the best granddaughter my child" he said patting her head lovingly. - love nishu and dadu's bond
Kabir smiled and folded his hand in front of him. " I promise u dadu... I will keep nisha happy... always" kabir said. " That I know beta.. are u still afraid of me" he asked. " No... I mean a little" kabir said in a small voice. " Don't be" he said and hugged kabir. Kabir was taken aback with a surprise but he was overwhelmed by the warmth of his hug. - love dadu❤️This part was cute, funny and adorable😳
Kabir looked at nisha and pulled her into his tight embrace. Nisha too reciprocated with equal intensity. " Maine kha tha na sab thik ho jaega... dekh sab thik ho gya... ab tu kabhi mjhse door nhi jaegi... hmesha mere sath rhegi... mere pass..." he said tears of happiness forming in his eyes. Nisha doesn't said anything. She didn't need to. She felt happiest today... a feeling of being with him filled her with unbound joy. She tighten her grip on him. " Kabir... I luv u" she whispered. Kabir smiled despite the tears " I luv u the most jaan". She looked at him and wiped his tears. She kissed his eyes " u r mine now... n m yours" she said and crashed her lips on his. He kissed her back with an unmatched passion pouring the happiness they just have experienced.- Hayyee😳Nibir romance❤️My favorite part as always😳So beautiful and romantic❤️🤗
So all in all, a great chapter👍🏼😃😉

🤗 mihu... essshhh... do now need words to thank u... I don't have any... I just couldn't find them... 🤗 just a big heartly and overwhelming hug... to u

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1118

Epilogue 1- Superb yaaar Mansi👏👏👏

Sach kahoon toh there have been innumerable times when I had resolved to unres this post, where I would open d link of the epilogue and start reading it all over again and then end up not writing anything cz everytime I would end up with a loss of words😳

And by innumerable I mean, more than 25 times at least😆

Usually I always fall short of adjectives/ words to describe ur work but for the epilogues of this chapter, it really has been a daunting task Mansi😆😆

Plus this chapter is really long (not that I m complaining😆😃) but then picking out lines/ parts that I love is quite difficult😆. So I m just going to give u a gist of the parts I loved and my thoughts with it kyunki agar main highlight karne baithi toh my comment will not fit in even 3 posts🤣

Truly a marvelous epilogue Mansi👏

The beginning of the chapter with the conversation between the Rajbir brothers was adorable😳

Love the bond they share That line about Kabir being a certified paagal was hilarious🤣 Good one👍🏼 Nishu admiring them was cute😳 and her reactions mirrored the readers's reactions on seeing Rajbir😳

The Raka scene was adorable and heart-rendering😳 Love their masti😆

The gang teasing Kirti was cute😳😃 Bechari Kirti Ashu se milne ko kitni bechain thi🤣

The Nibir scene at the terrace was beautiful👏👏👏 Surreal yaar

I know maine kaha tha ki highlight nahin karungi but it was so difficult for me to summarize my feelings about my favorite part without highlighting it so😆

Kabir landed her on the floor once they reached the terrace. Nisha stand up and started beating him. " Kya the ye kabir... duffer... nalayak... ab sab mjhe tease karenge... " she said turned away. " Oe mai yha se jaa rha hu ur tjhe un sab ki padi h... bilkul pyaar nhi karti h na tu mjhse... bilkul yaad nhi aaegi na meri" kabir said. " Oe... har baar ye bolne ki jarurat h kya ki mai tjhse kitna pyaar karti hu... bina bole nhi samaj sakta kya tu..." she said pulling his collar. He smiled " nisha.. na tb bolne ki jarurat thi na ab h... " she looked at him and bite her lip. Kabir looked at her lip and freed it from her teeth through his thumb. He pulled her through her waist on himself. " Don't do that again " kabir said huskily. " kyu..." she asked in a slow timid voice. " kyuki only I can do that " he said and bite on her lower lip making her gasp out loud. He nibbled on her lower lip sucking it. Nisha closed her eyes firmly and was ready to kiss him back but he moved away leaving her startled. He smiled again as she frowned as if someone snatched away her candy.- Mansi👏👏👏This part was cute, romantic, adorable and Nibirilicious 😳

She wanted to cry but she didn't do that. Instead she smiled all the while they were together. She knew that they had to pass these remaining days with the memories of today. " achha nishu... ab mai jau... " he asked softly as she was embracing him. " Hmmm " she said and freed him. " Jaldi aaunga thik h... jis din tera divorce hoga na... usi din tjhe yha se le jaunga" he said cupping her face. She kissed his hand and nodded. He turned to leave but felt a pull and the very next second he was against the wall. "Kya kar rhi h Nisha" he said. " kuch reh gya.." she said and before kabir could ask anything else she placed her lips on his kissing him with love pouring through them. Kabir get shocked but soon started responding. He broke the kiss as he can't help but smile at his jungli billi. They rested their foreheads touching with each other out of breath. " I will wait for you to come and take me away with yourself" she said bidding him the final goodbye at least for now.-Their love, respect and understanding continues to amaze me me I m in Nibir heaven right now☺️ Again a wonderfully penned down part Mansi👏

Ashish's entry was nice and Kirti doing khullam khula romance in d courtyard was awesome😆😎 Kabir teasing them was funny😆 and that scene where she introduces Ashish to dadaji was hilarious🤣

Glad to see Mohan supporting Kirti and Rupan letting go of her apprehensions for her daughter's happiness😃

" do nhi teen tauji... " nisha said. " kiara ur viraj bhi to h na... vo bhi to hmari family ka hi part h" nisha completed. " ha nisha beta tum thik kh rhi ho... " dadaji said. Viraj looked at nisha and kabir with thanking them for this while kabir felt proud of her and embrace her in a side hug.- Nibir r perfect yaar

That scene where Kabir and Ashish reach home and they both take turns to pull each other's leg is awesome😆 Kabir being so nervous in front of Vasu and Vasu and Ashish having fun watching Kabir was a delightful read😆😆

Also I love the bond Ashu and Vasu share and the way Ashish treats Kabir and Vasu as family is adorable😳

Then the role reversal happening and Kabir having fun at Ashish's expense was hilarious🤣🤣🤣

Loved to see Vasu's caring nature for Ashish😳

Ab saare favorite parts highlight toh nahin kar sakti magar bahut mushkil se kuch lines choose ki hain which I loved😆

" Kabir aap sach m paagal h" he shook his head. " bachpan se bde bhaiya... certificate bhi h..." kabir said. " Matlab aap certified paagal h" viraj said. " Vo bhi guarantee k sath...

Yehi ki bhaisaab meri hone wali sali ko apni hone wali biwi bnake aae hai..." kabir said clutching ashish's neck in his arm.-

" papa... he too loves me very much and will keep me happy always... ur ye sharmata thoda jyada h to mai hi aapko sab bta dungi

Lagta h tmhare hisse ka bhi kirti hi bol leti h "

" Oe... meri beti ko zoo bhejega " ramesh said faking anger. " Nhi... papa ye ghar bhi to zoo hi h..." kabir said. "

Don't do that again " kabir said huskily. " kyu..." she asked in a slow timid voice. " kyuki only I can do that

All in all, a Wonderul Epilogue👍🏼👏 Every scene was so beautifully described be it the Rajbir one, the Raka scene, Nibir at terrace, Gangwals agreeing to Ashkir wedding or the last one at Kabir's home. U were able to capture everyone's emotions and thoughts so well 👏👏👏

Loved it thoroughly ❤️ and a perfect read😉

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1119

Res

Epilogue 2😆

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AnjaliPunia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1120

I need to finish reading this ..
An toh yaad bhi nahin kahan choda tha.
Getting to see computer only for 10 minutes a day yaar yeah mere saath hi kyun hota hai

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