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amazing one... dadu rocked yar...
sab pehle se pata tha?? kya baat h!!! simgham u r great...
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last scene was awww ☺️ ☺️

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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
amazing one... dadu rocked yar...
sab pehle se pata tha?? kya baat h!!! simgham u r great...
love u...
last scene was awww ☺️ ☺️

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Epilogue- 1

Kabir had to go today... he is perfectly fine now and had to go back due to his professional commitments. Viraj came to meet kabir in his room while he was packing his stuff. " kabir packing ho gyi?" Viraj asked. " Ha bade bhaiya bus ho gya" he said. " Kabir kuch kehna tha aapse..." viraj said. " Ha bade bhaiya " kabir said. " Kabir thank you... thank you very much... hme apna dost bnane k lie... hmare lie itna kuch karne k lie... kaira ko hmari zindagi m waapas laane k lie... ur sabse badkar hme itni achhi tarah samajhne k lie..." viraj said. " Aap bhi na bade bhaiya... kaisi baatein kar rhe ho... ye sab maine aapke lie thodi na kia h... ye sab to maine khud k lie kiya h... mai sirf aapko bolne k lie bade bhaiya nhi kehta... maanta bhi hu... maine jo bhi kia h vo apne bade bhaiya k lie kia h... jo meri itni fikr karte h... mjhse itna pyaar karte h... aap ye sab bol k mjhe guilty kyu feel kara rhe h... " kabir said making a baby sad face. Viraj laughed seeing his face. " Kabir aap sach m paagal h" he shook his head. " bachpan se bde bhaiya... certificate bhi h..." kabir said. " Matlab aap certified paagal h" viraj said. " Vo bhi guarantee k sath..." kabir said and smiled cheekily. Viraj burst out laughing and gave him a tight hug. " kabir thank you sooo much... oh sorry no thank u... thik h " he said. " Ha bade bhaiya best h..." kabir said and reciprocated the hug. Nisha who was standing at the doorstep adored their relation, her respect for both of them has increased manifold in this short time span. She turned back and left.

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Ramesh called kabir in his room as he was about to go. " papa... " kabir said. " Kabir jaldi ander aa yaar... wha khada hoke kya kar rha h" ramesh said. " Papa..." kabir said and hugged him tightly. All this while in his life he had missed his father like anything and now when he had got one he wanted to pour all his love for him. Ramesh had always understood him and he never needed to tell him how much ramesh mattered to him. " Papa..." kabir said again and chocked on his emotions. " Kya hua kabir " ramesh said. " kuch nhi ese hi..." kabir said. Ramesh smiled at his innocence and said " tu sach m mera beta h kabir... ur ye thank u wala hug mat kar ese hi gale lg jaya kar... tne dekha h nishu sukku ya bunty ko thank u bolte hue... nhi na... phir... ur tu jaake jaldi waapas aana samjha... warna tjhe pta h na teri bandariya ko kitna gussa aata h". Kabir laughed and said " janta hu... aap sambhal lena ur jyada halla kare na to zoo bhej dena...". " Oe... meri beti ko zoo bhejega " ramesh said faking anger. " Nhi... papa ye ghar bhi to zoo hi h..." kabir said. Ramesh faked a slap for him and they both burst out laughing.

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Nisha was in her room sitting at the window. Kabir entered and smiled seeing his lady love lost in her own thoughts. He know she was upset. He goes to her and picked her in his arms. She was shocked at this sudden transition. " Kabirr... paagal kya kar rha h... " she said. He didn't listen to her and walked towards terrace. Here a few of the gangwal members were present in the corridor with their mouth wide open as they saw kabir carrying nisha in his arms. " Kabir dekh sab dekh rhe h hme... pls chhod de na..." nisha said. " dekh rhe h to dekhne de..." kabir said and tighten his grip on her as she tried to free herself. Unable to do anything nisha hid her face in his chest. His smile go wider at her act and he headed towards the terrace ignoring all those smirking looks on the gang's face.
" Haye... kitte cutes h na dno.." dolly said. " cutes nhi cute dolly di..." sukku said. " Ab chalo bhi ya yhi khade rehne ka iraada h " kirti said. " Kyu itna jealous ho rhi h kirti... tera wala bhi aa jaega... fikar kyu karti h" umesh said. " Khaaa... " she said and realised what she blurred out. She bite her tongue and ran away from there. " dekho jara ise..." saurav said and all of them bursted out laughing.

Kabir landed her on the floor once they reached the terrace. Nisha stand up and started beating him. " Kya the ye kabir... duffer... nalayak... ab sab mjhe tease karenge... " she said turned away. " Oe mai yha se jaa rha hu ur tjhe un sab ki padi h... bilkul pyaar nhi karti h na tu mjhse... bilkul yaad nhi aaegi na meri" kabir said. " Oe... har baar ye bolne ki jarurat h kya ki mai tjhse kitna pyaar karti hu... bina bole nhi samaj sakta kya tu..." she said pulling his collar. He smiled " nisha.. na tb bolne ki jarurat thi na ab h... " she looked at him and bite her lip. Kabir looked at her lip and freed it from her teeth through his thumb. He pulled her through her waist on himself. " Don't do that again " kabir said huskily. " kyu..." she asked in a slow timid voice. " kyuki only I can do that " he said and bite on her lower lip making her gasp out loud. He nibbled on her lower lip sucking it. Nisha closed her eyes firmly and was ready to kiss him back but he moved away leaving her startled. He smiled again as she frowned as if someone snatched away her candy. " kabir mat jaa na please... ur agar jna h to mjhe bhi leja na..." she said. " Nisha... dadu se promise kia h na... ki jab tk tujhe divorce nhi mil jata hm dno nhi milenge... to fir... tod du promise..." he said. " nhi kabir... par dadaji bhi na... ye koi promise hota h" she said. " tujhse to achhe hi h varna tune to do mahine mjhse baat hi nhi ki thi" he said faking anger. " Sorry na... but that was only for u na kabir... maaf nhi karega apni jungli billi ko" she said making a cute baby face. " chal maaf kia... but ab roj skype karegi samjhi... " he said. " Pakka promise " she said and hugged him. She wanted to cry but she didn't did that. Instead she smiled all the while they were together. She knew that they had to pass these remaining days with the memories of today. " achha nishu... ab mai jau... " he asked softly as she was embracing him. " Hmmm " she said and freed him. " Jaldi aaunga thik h... jis din tera divorce hoga na... usi din tjhe yha se le jaunga" he said cupping her face. She kissed his hand and nodded. He turned to leave but felt a pull and the very next second he was against the wall. "Kya kar rhi h Nisha" he said. " kuch reh gya.." she said and before kabir could ask anything else she placed her lips on his kissing him with love pouring through them. Kabir get shocked but soon started responding. He broke the kiss as he can't help but smile at his jungli billi. They rested their foreheads touching with each other out of breath. " I will wait for you to come and take me away with yourself" she said bidding him the final goodbye at least for now.

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Kabir was taking his leave when a car screeched outside the gangwal house. Everyone turned but the first one to ran towards the door was kirti. She waited for someone to come and her wait paid well as after a minute or so ashish walked towards her. She just couldn't control herself and hugged him tightly forgetting her surroundings. Ashish was too shocked but immediately embrace her in his arms. Nibir, viraj and cousins looked them in awe while all the elders were shell shocked at the scene before their eyes. " kitne din lga die aane m... " she said. " sorry yaar" ashish replied. Kabir looked at others and saw elder's faces. He coughed hard to bring the love birds out of their world. Kirti came out of the trance and broke apart from him. " dadaji vo... " she said feared to look at him. " Kirti... " rupan was out of her wits at the moment. " taiji... vo kirti ur ashish ek dusre se pyaar karte h " nisha said firmly. " ha maa... ye sach h... I luv him " kirti said gathering her courage. " Hmmm... lagta h ek nhi do-do shadio ki tyari karni padegi kyu ramesh..." said viren. " Ha bhaiya... " ramesh said happily. " to mohan tmhara kya vichaar h " dadaji asked him. Mohan was still in shock but soon composed himself and looked at his wife whose face was showing her anger and then at his daughter who was pleading him to understand her. Mohan took a time pause and said " viren bhaiya ur ramesh... chalo dno shadio ki tyari kare". Kirti was pleasantly surprised and ran towards her father. " sach papa..." she asked. " Sach beta " he replied. " Thank u thank u soo much papa " she said and hugged him. " Mohan tm..." rupan was cut off in the middle by mohan " roopan forget everything and just look at ur daughter's face... have u seen her this much happy and mature before... I m proud of my daughter to find a perfect match for herself " he said. " Maa please... " she said. Roopan looked at her and hugged her. Whatever she may say or do but afterall she is a mother and cannot deny her daughter of her happiness. She happily accepted them. Here ashish was standing rooted to his place. He didn't know wat to do. Finally kabir looked at him and shook him. " kya hua ashu shock m chala gya kya..." kabir said. " Ye koi joke maarne ka time h kabir " nisha said. " Ashu go and talk to mohan chachu yaar... yha statue kyu bn gya h " she said. They pushed him inside and he stand in front of mohan and rupan. " Uncle... vo... mai..." ashish started to fumble. " papa... he too loves me very much and will keep me happy always... ur ye sharmata thoda jyada h to mai hi aapko sab bta dungi " kirti said facepalming him. " Everybody bursted out laughing and ashish smiled sheepishly. " Lagta h tmhare hisse ka bhi kirti hi bol leti h " dadiji said. " koi baat nhi beta... its ok " mohan said hugging ashish. " Chale fir sabka muh meetha kia jae " laxmi said and everyone agreed happily. " So its decided ki jaise hi saari legal formalities katam hongi dno jodio ki shadi ki rasme start ho jaengi. " viren said. " do nhi teen tauji... " nisha said. " kiara ur viraj bhi to h na... vo bhi to hmari family ka hi part h" nisha completed. " ha nisha beta tum thik kh rhi ho... " dadaji said. Viraj looked at nisha and kabir with thanking them for this while kabir felt proud of her and embrace her in a side hug. Everyone was happy and fed each other sweet. After some time kabir ashish and viraj took every one's blessing and started of for their journey.

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Kabir and ashish were about to reach home. " yaar maa ko bhi sab btana h abhi... " kabir sounds a little worried. " mjhe pta h vo maan to jaengi but jyada gussa to nhi karengi na". " Mjhe kya pta.. ab ye to pehle sochna chahie tha... " ashu replied. Kabir looked out of the window while ashish smiled mischievously.

" Aa gye aap kabir..." vasu said. " Ha maa... vo aapko kuch btana h..." kabir said. " Boliye hm sun rhe h " vasu said a little angry. " Vo maa vo nisha... vo uske ghar wale h na maan gye... " kabir said. " Achha... to fir.." vasu said. " Vo.. jaise hi legal formalities poori ho jaengi...to..." kabir was cut off between by vasu " kaisi legal formalities kabir..." Now kabir was nervous about it. He closed his eyes and said " nisha k divorce ki" kabir said. He was sweating and was expecting some thrashing or scolding from her mother but nothing comes in his way. He opened his eyes and saw vasu and ashish looking at him. " vo maa..." he couldn't complete his words because vasu and ashish started laughing like maniacs seeing his face. He got shocked " aap log has kyu rhe ho " kabir said. " Chehra dekhie aap apna kabir... kitna dare hue h " she said laughing. " hme sab pta h kabir... nisha viraj kaira sab kuch... aapka ye dost h na vo hmara beta bhi h... to aap hme kuch btae ya na btae ye hme sab kuch bta deta h samjhe..." she said. " tune sab bta hi fia tha to mjhe nta nhi sakta tha.. " kabir said angrily. " Bta deta to tera ye cartoon jaisa chehra kaise dekhta " ashu was still laughing. Kabir glared at him. " Achha maa... aap naaraj to nhi h na " kabir asked. " Hm bhot naraj h kabir... tmhara accident ho gya ur tmne hme btaya bhi nhi... vi to achha hua ashu ne hme sab bta dia tha varna hm to vhi aane wale the" vasu said. " Sorry maa... " he said. She smiled and ruffled his hair. " Achha ab ye btaie ki aap hme nisha se kb milane le jaenge.." vasu said. " Kewal nisha se kyu maa aapko aapke jaasus ne ur kuch nhi btaya..." now it was kabir's turn to grin. " Kya nhi btaya... bolo kabir" vasu asked confused. " Yehi ki bhaisaab meri hone wali sali ko apni hone wali biwi bnake aae hai..." kabir said clutching ashish's neck in his arm. " sach m kabir..." she asked. " Ha maa... kirti h uska naam " kabir said. " Ashu ye bhot galat baat h... koi itni imp baat chhupata h kya... waise aaj sach m hmare lie sabse achha din h... hmare dno bete hmare lie itni achhi news lke aae h..." she said and hugged ashish. " Tmne hme kyu nhi btaya ashu... kya hm tmhare apne nhi h" vasu asked. " Nhi aunty esa mat kahie... aapke ur kabir k alwa mera h hi kaun... vo to bus..." he said. " Vo to bus inhe thodi sharam aa rhi thi..." kabir said. " Kabir... " ashu said and started running behind him. Vasu laughed her heart out seeing the two best friends fighting like tom and jerry.

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Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago

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Epilogue - 2

" ye gadha ab tk aaya kyu nhi... aaj to last hearing thi... duffer khi ka... " she was mumbling in herself. It has been 7 months since they had seen each other. She and viraj has legally seperated today and viraj and kaira were off to chennai for kaira's treatment. She was waiting for his call since morning but neither he called nor attend hers. She was hell angry on him. It was darkening outside and she felt like crying. A no. Of stupids thought were crossing her mind. "Koi baat nhi ye nhi aaega na... to mai hi milne jaungi... ab ur mai ese yha nhi baith sakti " she thought to herself. She sneaked in the dark and begin to climb down through the pipe outside her room. " He bhagwaan bachale na mjhe... pta nhi kya kya karna pad rha h is duffer k pyaar m" she mumbled. She was in her midway when she felt her hand slipping. " he bhagwan aaj to sach m mar jaungi lagta h.." she said but couldn't complete her sentence as her hand slipped and she falls. She closed her eyes and was ready to scream out of pain but instead of a hard surface she landed on a muscular body. Nisha opened her eyes to look at her surroundings. " abe nisha... ab uth bhi jaa ki mjhe dba k maar daalegi..." kabir said. Nisha quickly rolled down and looked at kabir "kabir tu... tu yha kya kar rha h..." she asked. " Tera mattress bnne aaya tha duffer" he said "tjhse milne aa rha tha ur kya... par jaise hi upar chadne wala tha tu mere upar gir gyi..." he said. She giggled. " Oe has mat kamar tod di... itna dikhta to nhi h par poora 100 kg weight h tera." kabir said. She laughed at him. " Tjhe lgi to nhi na kabir... chal uth... ur ye bta tu pipe se chadke kyu aa rha tha... gate se nhi aa sakta tha..." she said. " oe... yaad h na kal maa ur ashish dno k sath aana tha mjhe par tere bina rha hi nhi ja rha tha so socha aaj tjhse baatein kar lunga ur kal subah maa k sath front door se entry" kabir said winking at nisha. " Tu kitta k h kabir " nisha said. " Achha ji... ur jra aap btaengi madam ki aap yha kya kar rhi thi... amrud todne jaa rhi thi..." kabir said. " vo mai... huh... kya karu ye bhi sab teri wajah se... tune subah se call bhi nhi kiya mjhe... pta h kitni fikar ho rhi thi..." nisha said concerned. " Nisha yaar surprise karna tha tjhe... ur mjhe kya pta tha surprise k chhakar m kamar hi toot jaegi meri..." he said. " Jyada lg gyi kya kabir chal ander mai dwa lga du..." she said. " Oe paagal kuch nhi hua samjhi... ab tu baahar aa hi gyi h to chal tjhe khi lke jna h" he said dragging her. " Are par kha..." nisha said. " Tu chal na kha wah sab pta chal jaega" he said and took her with him. Kabir drove his car. "Hm kha ja rhe h kabir..." she asked. " Yha " he said and parked his car in front of jaipur fort. " Kabir itni raat ko hm ander kaise jaenge..." she said. " ese..." he said showing her a rope. " Tracking " she exclaimed in joy. He smiled at her and they started climing. After an hour or so they reached at the top. Kabir helped nisha in standing on the boundary and they both hugged each other in the moon light. They sat on the boundary with nisha's head on Kabir's chest. " hm ese kyu nhi rh sakte hmesha" nisha asked. " Hm ese hi rhenge hmesha" kabir said pulling her into himself more. They spent the whole night in each others arms talking their heart out and enjoying the beauty of the moon light.

"Kabir... ghar chale... din hone wala h" she said still in his arms. " Nhi nisha... mjhe kahin nhi jana" kabir said tightening his grip on her. " mjhe lke jaane k lie tjhe aana padega vo bhi front door se samjha... ab uth ur mjhe ghar chhod k maa k pass ja" she said pulling him. " Ok chal chalte h..." he said.
Kabir dropped nisha off in front of gangwal house and drive to his hotel. Nisha sneaked in her house and closed her rooms door. " Kha thi nishu" she heard kirti's voice. " vo mai. " she blushed at her question. " chal kuch mat bol pta h mjhe... ab jaldi se ready hoja... teri saasu ma aane wali h..." kirti said teasingly. " Ur teri bhi" nisha mimicked her and they both laughed.

Next morning kabir, vasu and ashish entered the gangwal house and was greeted by the family warmly. " vasu ji... so which date will be suitable for the marriage. " dadaji asked. " the nearest one uncle... hm ur intzaar nhi kar sakte... ur na hi ye log kar sakte honge" she said chuckling. All the four blushed hard at it. " par maa... viraj ur kiara..." kabir said. " kabir fikar mat karo... viraj se baat ho gyi h... vo log parso waapas aa jaenge... tab tk hm baaki ki rasme shuru karte h... kyu vasu ji..." dadaji said. " Bilkul uncle kal se hi... ur tyaari to ho hi jaegi... " she said.

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" nishu... ab to saari rasme katam ho gyi na... ab to tu khush h" dolly asked. All the traditions were over and the next morning was the wedding day. " m happy dolly di... m very happy.." she said. " Chal fir rest kar... kal is ur big day" she said and left her alone. Nisha lie down in her bed thinking about this strange year of her life in which she almost had experienced every emotion. She didn't knew when she slept thinking about her own life.

Next morning was a blessing for the gangwal house. There were three weddings in the house. Nisha, kirti and kiara were getting ready. Here kabir, ashish and viraj were about to leave from viraj's home to gangwal house. Vasu was doing their aarti. " Ab chale... bechare kabir ki to haalat hi kharab h... kitna bechain h " vasu said laughing to which kabir made a baby face. " awww kabir... chal rhe h beta... tm itna impatient mat ho... " she said still laughing. " Ab chalo bhi na maa... itni der se bus kh hi rhe ho... warna aap log yhi rho mai jaa rha hu" he said. " Are kabir... ye ladka bhi na... " vasu said as kabir get settled himself in the car. Others were still laughing but sat in the car too.

The wedding was not a grand affair as neither of the family wanted it to became a issue. They just wanted a simple yet elegant wedding for the love birds. Kabir drove his car like a racer and reached his destination in no time. " Kabir u r mad... who drive like this..." vasu scolded him but he was out of the car till then. "Maa aap mjhe baad m daant lena pehle pls jaldi chalo... I can't wait to..." kabir said but looked at the smirking looks of the three and left it hanging. " baat poori kijie kabir..." viraj said laughing. " Kya bade bhaiya... jaldi chalo na pls " kabir said. Everyone shook their head on Kabir's eagerness. " Chalie... " vj said ruffling his hair.

Nisha was ready and was waiting for kabir. " nishu bro... kabir jiju aa gye..." jwalu come and hugged her loving sister. Nisha hugged her back. " are behno ka pyaar baad m jhalka lena... ab neeche chalo" sukku said.

Kabir was waiting for nisha when he saw someone coming downstairs but to his dismay it was kirti. Again he looked at the stairs and was wondering where she is when kiara came in her bridal attire from adjacent room and he looked at her. All were looking at the two brides when kabir felt nisha. He immediately looked towards the stairs when his heart just stopped looking at the ethereal beauty coming downstairs. kabir went to the stairs and held her hand in his " kitni der lga di wifey..." he said whispering " u look like my princess jaan..." kabir said. She blushed. " Ahmmm... ab saari baatien whi kar loge kabir ki yha bhi lke aaoge use" dolly said.

Finally the auspicious time came and the two hearts became one in front of their families. Nisha was dazed and was just looking at kabir as he put sindoor in her hair parting and tied mangalsutra around her neck. The happiness at their faces was something never seen before. The constant smile that was playing on their lips was adoring them. The beautiful glow on their faces told everybody about the joy they have had.

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Warm sunlight and chirping of birds made nisha woke up from her dreamland. A beautiful scenery was waiting in front of her but she frowned and turned another side to bump in a hard masculine chest. She looked up to see her life's face. She saw marks of their love making session on his neck and flushed in remembrance of last night. A pink hue crept on her face and she felt an urge to hid herself in him. She nuzzled at his bare chest and kissed him. His hand grip tightened around her waist and thats when she remembered that she was in his tee. She flushed crimson red and remembered the incidences of past two days.

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" kabir yaar btana hm kha jaa rhe h..." she said. " Vhi jha tu mjhe mili thi... " kabir said. " lachong... " she exclaimed in joy. " Ha meri bandariya " he said pinching her nose adorably.
They reached lachong and as soon as they were out of the train kabir blindfolded her. " Kabir... kya h yaar ye... " she said. " blindfold nishu... tjhe itna bhi nhi pta..." kabir said innocently. " Huh... very funny " nisha said faking a smile. " Achha chal... mera haath pakad k" kabir said holding her hand firmly. Nisha smiled . She followed him like an obedient kid. They sat in car and nisha rested her head on Kabir's shoulder as he drove past. There was silence in the car only a soft song can be heared playing on the stereo. " nisha... hm pahuch gye... " kabir said. " To mai hatau ise..." nisha asked eagerly. " Nhi nishu just wait " he said and lifted her in his arms. She enclosed her arms around his neck. She heared a beep sound and the next moment they were in an elevator. " Kabir hm kha ja rhe h yaar..." she asked still in his arms. " Pahuch gye..." kabir said and placed her on the floor swiftly. He opened a door and they entered. Kabir opened her blindfold. Nishu saw her surroundings in disbelief and then looked at kabir. " kabir... ye..." she said. Kabir back hugged her and said " ha ye... vohi honeymoon suit jha tne mjhe bhot peeta h... " she made an hawww expression. " Achha ur tu jo mjhe pareshan karta h uska kya " nisha said. " uska... " he said and twirled her around " uska ye..." he said and kissed her cheeks. She flushed. " hm yha hi mile the nisha... ek dusre se... khud se.. ur aaj jab ek honge to bhi yhi... isi jagah... " kabir said huskily. Nisha blushed pink but felt blessed with him. Kabir once again picked up her in his arms.

Like a drugged person she stared up into his dark mesmerizing eyes...Unable to look away,unable to blink,and unable to think or feel about anything other than him only... His hand tightened round her waist,and the friction created by their cloth made her shiver involuntarily.His eyes were so hot now,that she could literally feel the heat coming off them.Her heart raced,and her pulse throbbed echoing in her own ears.

He took in a sharp breath,as his dark eyes moved to her lips,studying their soft swollen contours with such intensity,that nisha felt them start to tingle.. Finally when his dark eyes moved back to look into hers,she hitched in a sharp breath seeing the fire and need clearly displayed in them..Her nails dug sharply into his chest through his tee,where she still held onto him..A slow fire starting up within her heart too..The only sound in that big room was their mingled ragged breathing... But the two souls in the room was lost to everything but each other. Kabir let her down slowly,holding her close as her body slid down his with a sexy whoosh..nisha felt her insides light up just as she saw a reflection of her own raging need in his eyes,as they glowed darker,and his expression hardened.

He hissed in a sharp breath just then,as one of his hands moved up the small of her back,along her vertebral column,plastering her closer to his hardened body,as he lowered his face to hers..His eyes darker than the stormy night sky,his breath ragged,his lips only inches from her slightly parted ones.

She bit her lower lip in anticipation when he groaned out against her mouth,and hungrily his lips started moving over hers.An avalanche of emotions burst within nisha,as she closed her eyes,and let him kiss her to oblivion.

Nisha moved her hands round his neck,holding onto him for support as well as need,as her knees were almost going to give away beneath her..The time and space had stopped for her and nothing existed except the hot hard man holding her so close to himself and kissing her senseless..And yet nisha felt she wanted more..And more ..And more..kabir heard whispering for more,and his desire increased by thousand folds..His tongue dueled with hers,as his lips went on sucking and tasting her sweetness..She tasted so good even better than the previous time. She tasted better than heaven.

He wanted more too..So suddenly without a further thought,he picked her up..And with his lips still locked with hers,he laid her down on the bed..His hands clenched both hers in his,as he lay down half on top of her,and went on tasting and ravaging her soft swollen lips,unable to stop himself or his throbbing body,or his racing heart..He felt her nails dig into his neck,while her other hand pulled at his hair with force,and this aroused him even more..How he had yearned for this moment,when she would be here under him,wanting him just as he wanted her..He wanted to taste every inch of her soft sweet smelling skin..Nibble on every inch of those creamy skin,and claim her as his completely.

"Kabir..Please.."She moaned against his lips,and he forgot to think at all as he kissed her with more need and passion..After a few more minutes,he dragged his lips from hers,and breathed harshly,as he looked down at her crimson flushed face,and swollen rosy parted lips.

His heart squeezed painfully,as he could not believe he had kept himself away from her for such a long long time..How had he done it..?

Kabir kissed her all over her rosy face,and then moved to nibble and suckle on the soft skin of her neck,making her moan,and clench him tighter..His hand moved to her hair,as he wanted to feel those silky locks against his fingers,as kissed and caressed her until she begged for him to stop..He moved his hand to caress the soft skin of her exposed back,and held her tight as she shivered..kabir felt jolts after jolts of need pass through his body,but he tried calm himself and not to rush.But the woman in his arms seemed to have a completely different intention,as suddenly she bit onto his earlobe and suckled on it,making a wave of desire cloud his senses completely.

Before kabir could understand what was she about,he was pushed onto the bed,and she was removing his tee,while she kissed every inch of his exposed skin..Soon she had pulled his tee off his body,and was kissing all over his chest,making his muscles coil up with raging need. As she kissed him again he groaned out loud and rolled over her.He kissed her lips until they were nearly bruised now. Then he moved downward to explore the hidden treasure and went on tasting every inch of her soft creamy skin eradicating every offending piece of cloth between them. his dark eyes darkened further,as she flushed slightly...Her creamy skin now glowing with a reddish hue..She looked nothing less than a freshly plucked rose at that moment,as kabir shamelessly looked at her.

She wanted him,he knew,and he wanted her too. Every inch of her..But first he had to taste her some more..His mouth closed over the hardened nubs of her arousal,making her moan and gasp in delight,but of course he was far from done with her. By the time he had kissed his way to her cute belly button,and was teasing at it with his tongue,nisha was nothing but a puddle of need under him,and kabir could barely hold himself back too.

"Kabir please.." nisha moaned out helplessly,and finally kabir had to give in..As his body was protesting now too.

His lips closed over hers and his body entered hers with a swift and sure thrust..Her gasped pain was lost against his mouth,as he whispered tender sweet nothings against her lips,and suckled on it soothingly,while his body started moving within hers,in the age old method of man's union,as her nails dug deeper into his naked back.

Soon she was lost in some other world as something explode within her and he joined her there too with a final thrust and loud groan.

And the world seemed to be finally back on its axis..Tears came to her eyes,as she hugged him tight to herself,both breathing heavily,as he lay down beside her,looking down at her with such tenderness that nisha felt her insides glow with it..she placed a shaky hand on his clean shaven cheek,and a soft wobbly smile came to her lips,as she looked into his beautiful dark eyes.."I love you kabira.."She said softly,as tears started falling from her eyes..A few seconds passed after which he hitched in a sharp breath,and pulled her face tightly into his hair roughened chest .and nisha felt she was home finally.

* present *

Nisha was smiling in his arms as he whispered in her ears " kal k baare m soch rhi h" .she turned red at that mention. Kabir kissed her eyes again and moved towards her lips when she pushed him. " mr. Hubby bhot ho gya romance... ab chalo tyar ho jao" she said and went towards the washroom. " Hae... meri biwi kotni hot hai..." kabir said as she rushed towards the washroom and banged the door while kabir started laughing.

After some time Kabir goes to the washroom. He comes back and sees nisha standing infront of the mirror, putting on sindoor. He walks up behind her and looks at her lovingly through the mirror. She looks at him and blushed, lowering her gaze. Nisha picks up the mangal sutra off the dresser and puts it on. She's closing the hook in the back when she feels his hands on hers. She looks up into the mirror and is scorched by his gaze and feels hypnotized, unable to look away. He looks down at their hands and she lowers her hands, he closes the hook. He then wraps his arms around her waist, making her back collide with his chest. She closes her eyes and puts her hands over his, he rests his chin on her left shoulder and closes his eyes as he nuzzles her hair making her melt in his hold. They stand together, the world forgotten.

Falling in love was a beautiful feeling,but the best feeling was falling in love with the right man,and having him making such torrid and tender love to you..Having his arms round you to protect you. having him by ur side whenever u need him, u ask or not. making u feel like a queen and loving u like there is no tomorrow. the love that showed them the most insensible feelings and the same love that showed how mature they are.

finally m done with it... 😳

Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#1055

Mansi👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I m happy dat I m the first one to Res on the EPILOGUES
😆🤣🤣🤣 Q ki iske baad iss story main RES nahi hogaa nahhh🤔🤣🤣🤣

Epilogue 1: Superb.. Superb.. Superb...👏👏👏👏

Bade Bhaiya Chote Bhaiya Relations, RaKa Bond All very well written..!!!👏👏👏

NiBir scene in terrace☺️ Nishu kitni Bold ban gayi😆🤣🤣🤣

Ashu-Kirti scene was Hilariousss🤣🤣🤣

Kabir-VJ-Aashu Scenes was also Funny🤣🤣🤣

Epilogue 2: I was Rofl ng at start🤣🤣🤣 & Blushing after Wedding☺️☺️☺️

NiBir & their Craziness (I mean Pipe par chad gaye Donom ek saath😆)🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Nisha 100 kg ka??😲😆🤣🤣🤣 Kabir & His Funny Jokes..🤣🤣🤣

NiBir on Jaipur Fort.. Aww...🤣🤣🤣

Kabir kitna impatient tha apne Dulhan ko dekhne ke liyeee😆🤣🤣🤣

Finally NiBir Wedding...❤️🥳

After That I was just Blushing..☺️Blushing.. ☺️& Blushing...!!!!! ☺️*No Words* to explain😳 Mere Blush ko Comments ke roop main sweekaar kar lo...!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Last Sentence written In Red👏👏👏👏👏 Exactly True👍🏼 I m quoating dat lines..😳

Falling in love was a beautiful feeling,but the best feeling was falling in love with the right man,and having him making such torrid and tender love to you..Having his arms round you to protect you. having him by ur side whenever u need him, u ask or not. making u feel like a queen and loving u like there is no tomorrow. the love that showed them the most insensible feelings and the same love that showed how mature they are.

Mansi Wonderful Story👏👏👏 & The Wonderful Epilogues Added More Beauty to It...!!!!👏👏👏

Wud Definitely MISS MY "RES-UNRES POST" here...😆🤣🤣🤣

As I said earlier...😊 I wnt say Its The END😃🤣🤣🤣 bcz I knw My Mansi wl be back with a BANG with her NiBir Stories again.. 😆with new Plots..😃 With New Magic..!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

Will Wait 4 Ur Next PM 4 New NiBir Story & I wl be waiting 4 My RES-UNRES posts dere🤣🤣🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳(I knw I res ed my comments B4 PM🤣🤣🤣)

Do Write More...🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣🤣🤣

Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago

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Itsmeriya

@Itsmeriya

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1056

Awesome epilogue 👏
NiBir Ki shaadi 😳
I specially loved the last lines in red
Come back soon with another story 😉

Edited by Itsmeriya - 10 years ago

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1057

Res

Unres
What an epilogue yaar ... it was amazing ... mindblowing ... superb 👏👏👏
Loved all the scenes ... either RajBir , NiBir or the family ... all were very beautifully written ... mindblowing 👏👏👏
And the last NiBir scenes ... no words ... just ☺️☺️☺️
Thanks for such a beautiful epilogue 😊😳😊

Edited by Amina... - 10 years ago

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1058

unres
mansi what was this 😲
I always love your story each n every part was out of the world bt this epilogue was it made me speechless 👏
you guyz always do this again m nt able to find words to appreciate this 👍🏼
each and every scene was perfect
it was funny sweet romantic everything at a same time
m gonna miss this story a lot 😔...plz be back with a new story soon 🤗
I m eagerly waiting
n the last lines in red were aawweee I loved them ❤️

Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1059

res
unres

Firstly I want to thankyou mansi... 😊
for such a beautifull epilogue...👏...

Each and every moment of your epilogue was described so amazingly dat i hv loss of words to explain it... 😳...

epilogue 1

Loved Rajbir bonding...der sweet nokjhok...der brotherly love...awww👏👏

Raka bonding was portrayed so beautifully & emotionally...😊😊

awww...kabir nisha ko cousins k samne arms me utha k terrace legya😳😳...🤣🤣

loved d way saurav teased kirti...😳😳

loved overall nibir scene...it was super se bhi upar out of d world🤣

also loved bold nishu 😉

awww kirti ashish ko dekhte hi bawli ho gyi bhul gyi ki uske ghar wale b h😆😆...
bechara ashish...but finally gangwals maan gye...
loved ashish kirti scene...👏👏

Ashish kitna J hai yr...kabire ko usne dara hi dia...🤣🤣
but he is rock star too...usne already vasu ko mna lia nibir k liye...awww...aisa frnd sab ka hona chahiye yr...😊

Epilogue 2

Haaye nishu...pipe se niche utar ri thi...giri to wo b kabira k upar😆...Bechara kabira...nishu 100kg...🤣🤣haha...
loved der tracking...scene in fort...d way dey came back to GH...

Finally shaadi ka din aa hi gyaaa...
kabira kinna impatient thaa...nishu ko dekhne k liye👏👏...
loved d way vasu ashish and viraj teased kabir...🤣🤣...
kabira nishu ko dekh ke full flat ho gyaaa...🤣🤣...kya kre apni nishu h hi...princess👏👏...

der lachong scene was ...blush blush blush blush...m speechless see now also m blushing😳...

Mansi dis story is very close to my heart...& i will miss dis story verry much...😊...
come back soon dear wid new story...wid new plot...i know u will come back soon...👏😊

Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1060

Loved it mansi.. I don't have words for praising...I could only say that only u could have done this job so beautifully and..u were simply awesome...plzz return soon with another nibir story

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